Finshie wrote:
hi m4m
[General]
Artist is 安田レイ
[Snowy]
00:14:533 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - too close compare to the rest of your spacings. might wanna adjust this alittle and lower the volume. maybe at 50s? it is intentional, since music slows down
00:26:336 (2) - ctrl+g i like the current way
00:32:238 (2,3,4,5) - this flow look better and smoother imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7285506 like my way better ;;
00:44:533 (3) - x368 y79 that way 00:44:533 (3,4) - centered 00:44:287 (2) - and not that close to 00:43:549 (1) - 's sliderend fixed
00:50:926 (6) - might wanna change this slider's direction to the next slider rather than pointer at the corner because 00:50:680 (5,6) - flow feels really weird. you could also stack it to 00:50:926 (6) - then rotate 10 clockwise tried
00:52:893 (3,1,2) - adjust spacing a little more. ok
00:55:107 (1) - normal sample set intentional on sliderhead? oops
01:04:451 (4) - more this further away from 01:03:713 (2) - . looks cleaner when moved. ok
01:51:910 (3,1) - kinda big jump for a very calm part. its ok imo
02:18:467 (2) - ctrl+g
02:19:205 (4,5) - ^
02:29:779 (1,2) - ^ no need imo, like the current way
02:26:336 (2) - stack to 02:25:107 (6) - ? cant do that
03:15:762 - awkward pause. the vocals got ignored too similar with the other moments, should be ok
03:37:893 (4,1,2,3) - weird flow. its fine
05:14:533 (1,2) - i dont this this is necessary. if you removed this might as well removed the previous spinner will gather more opinions
a little bit confused about the usage of sliders on red tick sometimes even though they all sound the same. Might wanna check it out or i just suck at rhythms which is true but still learning xd
gl~
Thanks for mod guys! :3Hikan wrote:
m4m returngeneral
- disable countdown? ok
- the combo colors doesn't accord with theme song imo, try add some colors lighter?
snowy
- 00:02:238 (1,3) - prefer fixing this overlap even this is intentional i like it ;;
- 00:16:500 (2,3,4) - this flow is a bit weird because of the difference between those distance, try Ctrl H (3,4) for a better flow? https://puu.sh/tYwU1/9239048f6f.png like mine ;;;
- 01:04:697 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - seems like it is overmapped a bit here. I think this rhythm will be more correct https://puu.sh/tYwG6/00c6cec548.png , too much circles just make that part feel awkward while playing cant agree with you, imo it works perfectly
- 01:35:926 (6) - try putting it at 377;29, for better move xd wtf
- 02:28:795 (3,4,1) - idk if this is better flow
- 02:36:664 (1,2,3,4) - ye both fine imo
- 02:39:369 (1,2,3) - this and 02:23:631 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - idk but there is inconsistent af if they are same, it will be completely boring
- 02:56:090 (4,5) - ye why don't you do this one just like the 02:52:156 (2,3,1) - , this is better different rhytms
- 03:09:123 (1,3) - blanket xd its not xP
- 03:11:582 - the gap is changed so abrupt imo, I don't think the players will realize this while playing ( I didn't). If you can, just change 03:10:598 (5) - into a circle, by that way they will be able to detect the gap and easier to continue to play well, i asked for some testplays and everyone said that its fine so idk..
- 03:20:434 (5,1) - improve blanket hue . 03:20:926 (1,2) - also fix this overlap fixed blanket, overlap is intentional
- 03:28:549 (5,1) - merge it into a slider will emphasis the vocal harder no need imo
- 04:07:648 (5,1,2) - you can make a perfect triangle here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7303704 spacing will be way too much
- 01:24:369 (6,1,2) - another triangle you can do seems like you love triangles hue
- 04:57:443 (1,1) - Isn't the spinnet should be like this https://puu.sh/tZYRZ/f5e4fd05ad.png no, to fit the vocals better
- 05:14:533 (1,2) - wtf why does this even exist here xD idk either
the song is hard to map imo, since the vocal and the rhythm are out of joint. the map is good overall, nice work
that's my mod, good luck