hi m4m
[General]
Artist is 安田レイ
[Snowy]
00:14:533 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - too close compare to the rest of your spacings. might wanna adjust this alittle and lower the volume. maybe at 50s?
00:26:336 (2) - ctrl+g
00:32:238 (2,3,4,5) - this flow look better and smoother imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7285506
00:44:533 (3) - x368 y79 that way 00:44:533 (3,4) - centered 00:44:287 (2) - and not that close to 00:43:549 (1) - 's sliderend
00:50:926 (6) - might wanna change this slider's direction to the next slider rather than pointer at the corner because 00:50:680 (5,6) - flow feels really weird. you could also stack it to 00:50:926 (6) - then rotate 10 clockwise
00:52:893 (3,1,2) - adjust spacing a little more.
00:55:107 (1) - normal sample set intentional on sliderhead?
01:04:451 (4) - more this further away from 01:03:713 (2) - . looks cleaner when moved.
01:51:910 (3,1) - kinda big jump for a very calm part.
02:18:467 (2) - ctrl+g
02:19:205 (4,5) - ^
02:29:779 (1,2) - ^
02:26:336 (2) - stack to 02:25:107 (6) - ?
03:15:762 - awkward pause. the vocals got ignored too
03:37:893 (4,1,2,3) - weird flow.
05:14:533 (1,2) - i dont this this is necessary. if you removed this might as well removed the previous spinner
a little bit confused about the usage of sliders on red tick sometimes even though they all sound the same. Might wanna check it out or i just suck at rhythms which is true but still learning xd
gl~
[General]
Artist is 安田レイ
[Snowy]
00:14:533 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - too close compare to the rest of your spacings. might wanna adjust this alittle and lower the volume. maybe at 50s?
00:26:336 (2) - ctrl+g
00:32:238 (2,3,4,5) - this flow look better and smoother imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7285506
00:44:533 (3) - x368 y79 that way 00:44:533 (3,4) - centered 00:44:287 (2) - and not that close to 00:43:549 (1) - 's sliderend
00:50:926 (6) - might wanna change this slider's direction to the next slider rather than pointer at the corner because 00:50:680 (5,6) - flow feels really weird. you could also stack it to 00:50:926 (6) - then rotate 10 clockwise
00:52:893 (3,1,2) - adjust spacing a little more.
00:55:107 (1) - normal sample set intentional on sliderhead?
01:04:451 (4) - more this further away from 01:03:713 (2) - . looks cleaner when moved.
01:51:910 (3,1) - kinda big jump for a very calm part.
02:18:467 (2) - ctrl+g
02:19:205 (4,5) - ^
02:29:779 (1,2) - ^
02:26:336 (2) - stack to 02:25:107 (6) - ?
03:15:762 - awkward pause. the vocals got ignored too
03:37:893 (4,1,2,3) - weird flow.
05:14:533 (1,2) - i dont this this is necessary. if you removed this might as well removed the previous spinner
a little bit confused about the usage of sliders on red tick sometimes even though they all sound the same. Might wanna check it out or i just suck at rhythms which is true but still learning xd
gl~