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Pokemon Move: Ohsu Regional Games

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Look at page 5 for an update with a question.

Thanks! I posted my answer.
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ddrXero64
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ddrXero64
I just got some inspiration in writing a story based on my time here at osu! It is early, so I want to point out that personalities and traits will probably be generic and inaccurate. The more I stay here, and the more people I meet and talk to, the better it'll get. I'm confident that I can be a part of this community, and I really hope to support osu! as it gains popularity. Stories like this will recognize those that come and go for better or worse.

I have a short character list already, and it'll keep on growing. One thing I note is that if you're marked but not yet introduced, don't worry about your image. I've never written negatively about a person in these stories, even if I don't like them. Unless you're obviously someone the entire forum can't stand (and probably banned) yet still had some impact on my experience in this community, you won't be introduced negatively.

Here is the premiere chapter for this (currently) long running and maybe never ending story. The first part is technically the prologue, and the story will continue onwards from there.

Edit: This is the story I posted before that inspired me to do this. It was wastelanded for having been separated into another thread, so in respect to that I'll post it here. It's titled:

Pokemon Ultima: Stepmania League

Without further ado,

Pokemon Move: Ohsu Regional Games

by ddrXero64

Character Cast

Pokemon Trainer (Protagonist) - Xero
SPOILER
Pokemon Gym Leader (Dark Type) - Omega
SPOILER
Security Guard - aevv
SPOILER
Mysterious Scientist - peppy
SPOILER
Pokemon Breeder - Medi-Chan
SPOILER
Pokemon Trainer - Vash
SPOILER
Pokemon Tamer - numot123
SPOILER
Pokemon Dancer - Rantai
SPOILER
Pokemon Coordinator - Starrodkirby86
SPOILER
Gar Trainer (Protagonist) - Quaraezha
SPOILER
Regional Manager - ztrot
SPOILER
Pokemon Cosplayer - Pokebis
SPOILER
Euro Raver - Danzai
SPOILER
Biker Chick - E-Hooker
SPOILER
Lodge Janitor - Vext
SPOILER
SPOILER
Pokemon Ranger - animask
SPOILER
Pokemon Musician - BakaloidSky
SPOILER
Pokemon Trainer (Protagonist) - Kitsunemimi
SPOILER

Seems like I went past the 60,000 character limit by trying to add my previous Stepmania League story. I'll be hosting my stories on my old fan fiction account, just click the story title and it'll link you to a an easy to use site where you can read my stories neatly by chapter.
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Cuddlebun
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Cuddlebun
hnnnnuuurrrrghhhhhhh









no
DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami
Pumping out posts like this nnnnnrrrrrrrgggghhhhh


GOD DAMMIT WHY AM I INCLUDED
Pokebis
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Joined April 2008
Pokebis
Make Cuddlebun a Jynx.
Claudia_old
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Claudia_old
Why am I a dude? Otherwise, i'm down with this.
ddrXero64
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ddrXero64

E-Hooker wrote:

Why am I a dude? Otherwise, i'm down with this.
I don't know genders on the forum, I can't seem to check out chicks over the internet, at least not on forums. I'll change that for you.

Cuddlebun is the Old Geezer, I just came back from the Pokemon Stepmania post.

I wrote this right after I edited my post in the other story thread, I wrote this in about 40 minutes without stopping or going back. Then I went back and fixed any minor spelling errors, and capitalized stuff I may have forgotten. This is stuff I do when I'm bored, when I actually become committed I pump out a lot more.

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Pumping out posts like this nnnnnrrrrrrrgggghhhhh


GOD DAMMIT WHY AM I INCLUDED
Because you're opinionated and loud on these forums. The loudest people are the people I get to know first, so it only makes sense. Don't worry, I won't be making any negative references.
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Sinistro
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Sinistro
Cuddlebun is a girl as well- her signature offers some clues, I guess.
ddrXero64
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ddrXero64

Sinistro wrote:

Cuddlebun is a girl as well- her signature offers some clues, I guess.
Fixed. I also changed her to Second Rate Daycare Lady. I have no clue how quick I'll get to people, and I have no idea what the next chapter is. I just write what comes off the top of the head, which is why this story will literally represent forum activity on a day to day basis. Whatever the forum is doing, you'll see it in this story. I don't even know myself what Second Rate Daycare Lady is, but I'll find a way to include her.

Edit: Everyone is a human, and they'll have at least one pokemon who represents them. First off, don't ask for your pokemon if you're on the list. I won't make anyone look bad, but I usually write on how I view people. So if your name is there, but you're not introduced yet, you won't have a pokemon. When the time comes I'll think of one.

Yes, Cuddlebun will have a Jynx. That is confirmed.
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DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami
No seriously take me out. I don't like someone using my forum name without permission. And I am not giving you my permission.
ddrXero64
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ddrXero64

DeathxShinigami wrote:

No seriously take me out. I don't like someone using my forum name without permission. And I am not giving you my permission.
No problem. You're out of the story.
Danzai_old
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Danzai_old
Well, change him with me. I'm more than happy to join this :D
ddrXero64
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ddrXero64
No problem, added you.

Holy crap I postwhored the hell out of this page. From now on, I'll be posting significant updates, I really don't want to whore this thread more than I already did, wow.
Cuddlebun
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Cuddlebun
do not want to be in this shitfest of a failure
Loginer
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Could someone please derail this thread or something? I desperately want a reason to wasteland it.
Sinistro
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Sinistro
Maybe Forum Games is more appropriate for it...?

Some people seem to be legitimately interested in this right now, so I guess it stays.
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
I want to be a Pokemon Ranger~

They own soooo bad. They could destroy a pokemon if they wanted to. They can break boulders and just tear up shiz.
Pokebis
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Pokebis
Requesting E-Hooker and Cuddlebun to be put back in.
I'll be offended if you don't.
Kitsunemimi
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Kitsunemimi
Oh wow I totally didn't expect that when I clicked the spoiler box xD

Would finish if it weren't so late, I'll just read it tomorrow.
Kokizi
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Kokizi

ddrXero64 wrote:

Cool Trainer - Quaraezha
it should be Gar Trainer, believe me
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Oh, neato ~

What really gives me some minor cringes is how sometimes the dialogue gives some sort of inconsistency with its punctuation, or lack thereof in this case. I guess that's the same bit with the other fan fiction, but regardless!

Whenever I'm included in there, Xero, feel free to call me Kirby, SRK, or Starrod to make things easier on you. ;)
Quaraezha
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Quaraezha

ddrXero64 wrote:

Cool Trainer - Quaraezha
It's funny 'cause my name was derived from the Pokemon "Rayquaza"

Also, this

BakaloidSky wrote:

it should be Gar Trainer, believe me
ddrXero64
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Chapter 1 is up. I like to put chapters into sections, and sometimes mini trilogies. But these sections have no set amount of chapters, so I'll just label them as parts. Each part has a common theme, or something to build towards. I have an idea for now, so it's going to be called the Ohsu Thrashers.

Sinistro wrote:

Maybe Forum Games is more appropriate for it...
To be honest, it really isn't a game. But since it's here, I might as well make it more community involved. This is going to restrict my writing a lot, but I think I'll try it out. My first time doing this, so I'll think of some ways to involve people more. Mini polls, etc. Remember though, this story revolves around the community. Just post like you usually do, and be yourself. I tend to pull random stuff out of what's happening and sneak it into the story.

There a lot of hidden references, which is the fun part for me. Muziek is Dutch for music, so it's safe to assume this region is in Europe. Because of this, I mentioned a passport in Chapter 1. That's why I would need one. Ohsu is self explanatory. Another reference was the clock on the boat. If you guys remember the Kanto region, you'll remember how sleeping on the cruise ship would make the ship arrive at its destination in the game. I poked fun at this by going to sleep and waking up two minutes later at the region. 4chan Foods was an obvious reference, and the name of the city (Vocarock City) gives a hint that the region has a lot of musical foundation. Furret is my favorite pokemon, just so you know. The point is if you spot something that you wonder was put there intentionally, ask. It most likely was, the point of these stories is to put the community in it.

animask wrote:

I want to be a Pokemon Ranger~

They own soooo bad. They could destroy a pokemon if they wanted to. They can break boulders and just tear up shiz.
Done, but don't expect to jump into the story quickly. I'm trying to introduce people quickly, but I'm used to introducing 1-2 people at a time. But yea, good stuff.

Pokebis wrote:

Requesting E-Hooker and Cuddlebun to be put back in.
I'll be offended if you don't.
They seem to be getting more offended than you. I don't need any other drama here, so I took them out. If they really are bothered, they don't need to be in it. I'm not here to start some forum drama.

Edit: E-Hooker is fine, I think it was DeathxShinigami that had a problem. Cuddlebun was taken out too, and won't be put in by request. E-Hooker is in though, can't wait to introduce her. :P

BakaloidSky wrote:

ddrXero64 wrote:

Cool Trainer - Quaraezha
it should be Gar Trainer, believe me
...fine lol. I'll go back and fix it. Don't even know what Gar means..? Sense of humor, psh. :P

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Oh, neato ~

What really gives me some minor cringes is how sometimes the dialogue gives some sort of inconsistency with its punctuation, or lack thereof in this case. I guess that's the same bit with the other fan fiction, but regardless!

Whenever I'm included in there, Xero, feel free to call me Kirby, SRK, or Starrod to make things easier on you. ;)
Perfect, it's hard using usernames with a lowercase letter too. I think I'll be capitalizing names like that only if they're at the beginning of the sentence, like numot. Every other time it will be lowercase to keep it consistent with the forum. If you want a nickname or prefer me to call you something else, let me know. Genders would be nice to know as well, because I don't know many people. I'll assume a male gender for anyone I don't really know in that sense.

As for the grammar, I type these in notepad. That being said, it's hard for me to proofread there. But when I post the story I read it over and over. I read the prologue 3 times already, and edited it 10+ times to fix minor mistakes. I just edited it an hour ago because I saw that Chapter 1 inside the spoiler box wasn't bold. If you see any mistakes, let me know. I'll fix it, I'm a bit of a grammar and spelling nazi, so I don't take offense at all.

Wow...I think that's it. Gotta go to work soon, but enjoy Chapter 1. I wrote it just now because I was bored :P

Quaraezha wrote:

It's funny 'cause my name was derived from the Pokemon "Rayquaza"
lol good thing I read this before I made the first chapter XD
Pokebis
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Pokebis

ddrXero64 wrote:

I type these in notepad
But why?
ddrXero64
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ddrXero64

Pokebis wrote:

ddrXero64 wrote:

I type these in notepad
But why?
Something I've done for a long time. I have access to a lot of info easily that way. When I was handling money at my old site, I had like 10 different secure sites with account info and things like that. I have so much info and documents I write it keeps me organized. I have work schedules, video links I need, image links for my stories, to do lists, and a lot more. Let me get a pic...

(5 minutes later)

SPOILER

There you go. This is only the "pkmn story" portion of my notepad documents. But I have a LOT of other stuff, some confidential, some for my personal life, others that I could probably delete. I've been keeping records of things for a long time, it's a habit I picked up from a friend I made on SMO a long time ago.
Mashley
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Mashley
You type too much
ddrXero64
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ddrXero64

Mashley wrote:

You type too much
We've covered that. I could easily say you guys type too little, but the majority of people type less than me. I'm proactive unlike a lot of people.
maal
maal

ddrXero64 wrote:

Mashley wrote:

You type too much
We've covered that. I could easily say you guys type too little, but the majority of people type less than me. I'm proactive unlike a lot of people.
I am starting to love you already. no homo.
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder

ddrXero64 wrote:

Mashley wrote:

You type too much
We've covered that. I could easily say you guys type too little, but the majority of people type less than me. I'm proactive unlike a lot of people.
Title: Social Norms of osu! Forums

Also, thanks for adding me :)
Vext_old
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Vext_old
Vext needs to be a naughty nurse real bad.

Haneii
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Haneii
Good story so far :)

Looking forward to the next chapter >w<
ddrXero64
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Emaal wrote:

I am starting to love you already. no homo.
Not that there's anything wrong with being gay, I don't give gay members a hard time...no homo. :P

Vext wrote:

Vext needs to be a naughty nurse real bad.

You're not a female...are you? You can be a cross dresser if that's what you mean...but no crossing the gender barrier sorry.

Haneii wrote:

Good story so far :)

Looking forward to the next chapter >w<
Hm, maybe I can type one up in the morning before work. I've never busted out so much fiction this fast though, I'm usually not very motivated. The stress from the other forum was probably the reason, I've been writing a lot more lately. But yea, I'll let you know when it comes out! If I could write what was on my head magically, the story would be on its 20th chapter by now haha.

Edit: I replaced the fiction in my signature with a link to this thread since it seems I'll be doing a lot of writing here.

Edit 2: I deleted this post and reposted it to avoid double posting, but it's a significant update.

I typed up Chapter 2 now, it's just to provide me a bridge from Chapter 1 to the (hopefully) small climax in Chapter 3. As fun as it is to write this it's still a story, and it needs some depth. So many references I'm encouraging you guys to find by the way. The thing is, when I type these I have ideas for future chapters already, and I tend to put subtle foreshadows in early chapters to foreshadow a chapter up to 6-7 chapters away. I work with what I have, so cliffhangers and weird clues are what I like to leave behind.

Numot has Camerupt because it's the evolve form of Numel. Not that I had to, but I'll say now that he will have a second pokemon later on. It'll be Swalot. You can see it's a play on his username. Every pokemon is usually chosen for a good reason, even if it's not obvious now. I put a lot more thought to these stories than it seems.

Also, I'm stuck. I need another person to play one of the antagonists. I say antagonist because they're not the "bad" guys, like shown in Chapter 2. But they might have a negative attitude. I was going to use DeathXShinigami or Cuddlebun but they got mad about being in the story it seems. Who should I use to fill this spot that hasn't already requested to not be in the story?
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
Cuddlebun. Antagonist. NOW! jk
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Haneii
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Haneii
Moi o/
Pokebis
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Pokebis
Pasonia is antagonist, gogogo!
ddrXero64
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First off, I don't know anyone really. The only people I see fit for it are the two people who got sensitive over being in it, it has to be someone I talked to at least once. I don't think Vext has been added yet, as long as he's a male I'll add him then. Unless Vext is a female, but at this point it's fine. I just don't want to include someone that I haven't seen post or talked to.

Did anyone read Chapter 2 yet? Two main people that should be reading it are E-Hooker and Quaraezha, though I tried to add a lot of humor. It's mostly a filler/bridge, so I had a lot of leg room for that one haha.
Vext_old
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Vext_old

ddrXero64 wrote:

Vext wrote:

Vext needs to be a naughty nurse real bad.

You're not a female...are you? You can be a cross dresser if that's what you mean...but no crossing the gender barrier sorry.
From a fictional story? Am I the only one that sees the irony in this? Fine I'll be an evil antagonist janitor then.

ddrXero64
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Vext wrote:

From a fictional story? Am I the only one that sees the irony in this?

ddrXero64 wrote:

Edit: Everyone is a human, and they'll have at least one pokemon who represents them.

ddrXero64 wrote:

Remember though, this story revolves around the community. Just post like you usually do, and be yourself. I tend to pull random stuff out of what's happening and sneak it into the story.

It's not too ironic when you think about it. And I found a good way to put you in, I'm tired now, but I might be able to type it up in the morning...
Kitsunemimi
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Kitsunemimi
Oh man I so totally feel like getting involved in this. It's been so long since I last participated in a Pokémon-related fanfic... Except my previous ones involved partaking in our own individual roles directly AS Pokémon... but, close enough. Although, I haven't really talked to you enough in chat Xero, so I don't want you to misinterpret my behaviour... so maybe later.
ddrXero64
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Kitsunemimi wrote:

Oh man I so totally feel like getting involved in this. It's been so long since I last participated in a Pokémon-related fanfic... Except my previous ones involved partaking in our own individual roles directly AS Pokémon... but, close enough. Although, I haven't really talked to you enough in chat Xero, so I don't want you to misinterpret my behaviour... so maybe later.
My last one which consisted of longer chapters (I took my time, it had a lot more imagery too, it took place in a forest) was describing the community as pokemon themselves. It went up to ten chapters, with a mini event (a special chapter that was off the side from the main story). I need to finish it soon, but this is the first time I try something different. Other than my special Elite Four story which was done in one go (3 hours) I've never attempted to use people themselves. It's different for me, but fun. The imagery is lessened, symbolism is twisted into more obvious allusions and the humor is a little more straightforward. I enjoy trying new styles, this is strictly a hobby and not what I do on a regular basis.

It's hard to find me, I'm literally unpredictable. I've been on the vent sometimes, and I can go on chat if you want me too. But I'm still getting into the groove of things, so I always space out on chat.

I tend to look at what's happening in the forum, which is why I like to look at some of the popular threads. If you're a common forum member, I'll notice it. The more I post, the more replies I get, and the more threads I find, the more I'll get to know people by personality.

For the tl;dr people:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=68&t=53059
Cuddlebun
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Cuddlebun
does anyone else see the irony in some new person who doesn't know the community writing a community-based fic




like at all
Vext_old
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Vext_old

Cuddlebun wrote:

does anyone else see the irony in some new person who doesn't know the community writing a community-based fic




like at all
It's so bold, even I see it!
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
I agree with Tode for once.

You have been here only a short time.

I just hope you figure out all of our genders first.


posting after Vext~ yay
Rantai
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Rantai
Ahh I do love stuff like this, seeing how one perceives others in a community.

Actually, if possible, I wouldn't mind being added in somewhere down the track. That aside keep up the writing, it's entertaining :)

SPOILER
Also I thought Medi-chan is female, but I've never talked to her/him so I don't know for sure.
Kokizi
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Kokizi
can I be gar trainer's anti-hero?
ddrXero64
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ddrXero64

Cuddlebun wrote:

does anyone else see the irony in some new person who doesn't know the community writing a community-based fic

like at all
I would've agreed, but it seems you'll say anything to try and take down this story. I was kinda encouraged to do this by others, and I knew I didn't know many people. But I never really heard of someone getting mad that they were in a story. C'mon Cuddlebun, many people want you in it. Even E-Hooker got to bitchslap someone, you sure you don't wanna join? I haven't written Chapter 3 yet, I need a REAL antagonist, the forum depends on you. :P

SPOILER

BakaloidSky wrote:

can I be gar trainer's anti-hero?
I don't think anyone can save or destroy him as much as he can himself. But tell me, what's your favorite kind of music?

Rantai wrote:

Actually, if possible, I wouldn't mind being added in somewhere down the track. That aside keep up the writing, it's entertaining :)
Just to make sure...male right? Oh wait, I saw the pictures, never mind I got it. Hm....

Pokemon Dancer, done.

Edit: Wow, Danzai is a Euro Raver and Rantai is Pokemon Dancer, that worked out well! Didn't even plan it haha, you guys have a part together in Chapter 4, I can already see it.
Cuddlebun
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Cuddlebun
No.

If you really knew the community you would easily be able to come up with another antagonist. But you don't. Hence the irony. Being said by someone who doesn't like the subject doesn't make a statement less true.
Wojjan
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Wojjan
This is terribly written.

Testing Tode's theory
Kokizi
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Kokizi

ddrXero64 wrote:

I don't think anyone can save or destroy him as much as he can himself. But tell me, what's your favorite kind of music?
Classical, could care less if it's Sonata, Solo Concerto and what not. as long as it's classical music
Claudia_old
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Claudia_old
I make such a good bitch.
Vext_old
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Vext_old

Wojjan wrote:

This is terribly written.

Testing Tode's theory
I shall board the troll train for 5 seconds.

I see your terribly written and raise you a "How conceited do you have to be to make yourself the main character."
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