2018-05-20 15:07 Kawawa: just a feedback it is
2018-05-20 15:07 Kawawa: 00:07:792 (7792|2,7792|3,7792|6) - uncomfortable for you?
2018-05-20 15:07 Critical_Star: 'w' sure
2018-05-20 15:07 Critical_Star: 00:07:792 (7792|6) - ah i thought i deleted this, maybe i forgot
2018-05-20 15:07 Critical_Star: yea
2018-05-20 15:08 Critical_Star: 00:07:667 (7667|0,7708|1,7750|2,7792|3,9042|6,9292|5) - i think i wanted to delete all these LN
2018-05-20 15:08 Kawawa: why?
2018-05-20 15:08 Kawawa: It is fine
2018-05-20 15:08 Kawawa: 00:07:750 (7750|2,7792|3) - just this
2018-05-20 15:09 Critical_Star: is it good to play?
2018-05-20 15:09 Kawawa: made them till 00:09:667 - 00:09:042 - 00:09:292 -
2018-05-20 15:09 Kawawa: both
2018-05-20 15:09 Kawawa: 00:07:750 (7750|2,7792|3) -
2018-05-20 15:09 Kawawa: same length
2018-05-20 15:09 Critical_Star:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10991036 u mean like this?
2018-05-20 15:10 Kawawa:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109910402018-05-20 15:10 Kawawa: or like this
2018-05-20 15:10 Critical_Star: ok
2018-05-20 15:12 Kawawa: 00:27:812 - from this, don't wanna use 1/3th main melody?
2018-05-20 15:13 Critical_Star: let me see
2018-05-20 15:14 Critical_Star: 1/3 seems a better choice to do
2018-05-20 15:14 Critical_Star: let me try arrange it
2018-05-20 15:17 Critical_Star:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109910672018-05-20 15:18 Kawawa: oh and when you delete a note or moving some note
2018-05-20 15:18 Kawawa: should see the hitsound name 'w'
2018-05-20 15:19 Kawawa: for not missing or
2018-05-20 15:19 Kawawa: something else
2018-05-20 15:19 Kawawa:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109910822018-05-20 15:19 Kawawa: what do you think about?
2018-05-20 15:19 Kawawa: arranged a bit from your style
2018-05-20 15:19 Critical_Star: yep i know 'w'
2018-05-20 15:20 Critical_Star:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109910832018-05-20 15:20 Kawawa: col 67 kick repeated
2018-05-20 15:20 Kawawa: since
2018-05-20 15:20 Critical_Star: oh that is good
2018-05-20 15:20 Critical_Star: nice one
2018-05-20 15:20 Critical_Star: 'x'
2018-05-20 15:21 Kawawa: 00:28:941 - and here is 12567
2018-05-20 15:21 Kawawa: 00:29:131 - 357
2018-05-20 15:21 Kawawa: 00:29:321 - 1246
2018-05-20 15:21 Kawawa: will be fine
2018-05-20 15:23 Critical_Star:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109910912018-05-20 15:23 Kawawa: space column not too empty?
2018-05-20 15:24 Kawawa:
http://puu.sh/ApuA7/5b605ad5a6.jpg2018-05-20 15:24 Critical_Star: ;w;
2018-05-20 15:25 Critical_Star: ok i arrange that
2018-05-20 15:25 Critical_Star: fixed
2018-05-20 15:25 Critical_Star: 'w'
2018-05-20 15:25 Kawawa: 00:38:722 - feel too empty
2018-05-20 15:25 Critical_Star: 'W'
2018-05-20 15:25 Kawawa:
https://puu.sh/ApuxN/97cfebd7c0.jpg sample
2018-05-20 15:26 Critical_Star: okay
2018-05-20 15:26 Kawawa: 00:44:769 (44769|2,44769|4,44860|3,44860|1) - should be ctrl+G as follow 00:46:224 (46224|1,46224|3,46315|0,46315|2,46497|2,46497|0) -
2018-05-20 15:26 Kawawa: 00:47:678 (47678|4,47678|2,47769|3,47769|5,47951|3,47951|5) -
2018-05-20 15:27 Critical_Star: nice catch
2018-05-20 15:27 Kawawa: 00:44:588 - and here space empty
2018-05-20 15:27 Critical_Star: 00:49:860 - 00:50:224 - should i continue the snare note here?
2018-05-20 15:27 Kawawa: you can add at space column
2018-05-20 15:27 Critical_Star: added at 4
2018-05-20 15:28 Kawawa: umm
2018-05-20 15:28 Kawawa: wait
2018-05-20 15:28 Kawawa: 00:45:951 (45951|2,45951|5) -
2018-05-20 15:28 Kawawa: what is this?
2018-05-20 15:29 Critical_Star: idk how to describe that sound
2018-05-20 15:29 Critical_Star: but surely there is sound there
2018-05-20 15:29 Kawawa: wanna keep?
2018-05-20 15:29 Critical_Star: 00:47:406 - 00:48:860 - oh i didn't add here for consistency u mean?
2018-05-20 15:29 Kawawa: yeah so
2018-05-20 15:29 Kawawa: and could not catch any sound
2018-05-20 15:29 Kawawa: from x1.0 rate speed
2018-05-20 15:30 Critical_Star: guess i will delete it then
2018-05-20 15:30 Kawawa: 00:49:497 - ~ 00:49:678 - should be 1/6. 00:49:860 - 00:50:224 - and add a note?
2018-05-20 15:31 Critical_Star: yep
2018-05-20 15:31 Critical_Star: fixed both
2018-05-20 15:32 Kawawa: LN length is how about?
2018-05-20 15:32 Critical_Star: added at 4 for that
2018-05-20 15:32 Critical_Star: LN?
2018-05-20 15:32 Kawawa: yeah
2018-05-20 15:32 Critical_Star: which part?
2018-05-20 15:32 Critical_Star: u mean the 1/6 u suggested?
2018-05-20 15:33 Kawawa: and when you add 1/6th, please add chamber hitsound too 'w'
2018-05-20 15:33 Kawawa: 00:48:951 (48951|4,48951|2,49678|2) -
2018-05-20 15:33 Critical_Star: yep already added haha
2018-05-20 15:33 Critical_Star: hmmm not good?
2018-05-20 15:34 Kawawa: not good for me
2018-05-20 15:34 Kawawa: but dunno to others
2018-05-20 15:34 Kawawa: feedback?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109911342018-05-20 15:35 Critical_Star: ok!
2018-05-20 15:36 Kawawa: 00:54:769 - too empty. feedback
http://puu.sh/ApuPq/2f5ace5529.jpg2018-05-20 15:38 Critical_Star: feel good
2018-05-20 15:38 Critical_Star: 00:54:678 - i added a kick hs here, maybe i forgot to readd back when i give u the update
2018-05-20 15:39 Kawawa: sure
2018-05-20 15:39 Kawawa: :3
2018-05-20 15:39 Critical_Star: :3
2018-05-20 15:39 Kawawa: 01:28:195 - 01:28:371 - don't want to use 1/4th main rhythm? and 01:28:460 - to 01:28:813 - empty?
2018-05-20 15:39 Critical_Star: 01:01:075 (61075|6,61075|0,61136|1,61136|5,61197|2,61197|4,61257|0,61257|6,61318|1,61318|5,61378|4,61378|2,61439|3,61500|4,61560|5,61621|2,61621|6,61621|0) -
2018-05-20 15:39 Critical_Star: wanted to ask about this
2018-05-20 15:39 Kawawa: it's good for me
2018-05-20 15:39 Kawawa: imo
2018-05-20 15:40 Critical_Star:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10991168 about 1/4 i make like this then
2018-05-20 15:40 Critical_Star: alright!
2018-05-20 15:41 Kawawa: 01:28:460 - here is an intention?
2018-05-20 15:42 Critical_Star: 5 note for the crash but maybe seems too much
2018-05-20 15:42 Critical_Star: i could reduce one here
2018-05-20 15:43 Kawawa: I mean 01:28:460 - ~ 01:28:813 - space
2018-05-20 15:43 Critical_Star: ah yes
2018-05-20 15:43 Critical_Star: it was my intend to give a break here
2018-05-20 15:44 Kawawa: I'm so weird about it
2018-05-20 15:44 Kawawa:
https://puu.sh/ApuXT/0d4c17c57b.jpg try it first
2018-05-20 15:44 Kawawa: feedback
2018-05-20 15:47 Critical_Star: how can u edit my pattern so perfect 'x'
2018-05-20 15:47 Critical_Star: yea feels better
2018-05-20 15:47 Kawawa: haha
2018-05-20 15:47 Critical_Star: really great haha
2018-05-20 15:47 Kawawa: 01:35:871 (95871|6,95871|0,96577|0,96577|6) -
2018-05-20 15:47 Critical_Star: is like the space are exactly fit
2018-05-20 15:47 Kawawa: what do you think about?
2018-05-20 15:48 Kawawa: snap end of LN
2018-05-20 15:48 Kawawa: it's too neat? or fine you think?
2018-05-20 15:48 Kawawa: but it related with 1/6 rice snap
2018-05-20 15:48 Critical_Star: actually quite close if i had to say
2018-05-20 15:48 Kawawa: yeah.
2018-05-20 15:48 Kawawa: when DT play
2018-05-20 15:48 Kawawa: almost can't read it
2018-05-20 15:49 Critical_Star: should i remove the LN?
2018-05-20 15:49 Kawawa: nope
2018-05-20 15:49 Kawawa:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109912042018-05-20 15:49 Kawawa: just a simple thing?
2018-05-20 15:49 Kawawa: last one is ctrl+H
http://puu.sh/Apv4t/0cb3bda727.jpg2018-05-20 15:49 Critical_Star: u move my pattern just like a puzzle lol
2018-05-20 15:50 Kawawa: LOL
2018-05-20 15:50 Critical_Star: 01:38:695 (98695|5,98695|1,98754|2,98812|4,98871|3,98930|1,98989|2,99048|5,99107|4,99165|2,99224|3,99283|5,99342|4,99401|3) -
2018-05-20 15:50 Critical_Star: ah yea this part
2018-05-20 15:50 Critical_Star: should i just mirror again the same pattern>
2018-05-20 15:50 Critical_Star: ?
2018-05-20 15:50 Critical_Star: maybe this 1/6 is quite sudden to play
2018-05-20 15:51 Kawawa: it's fine
2018-05-20 15:51 Critical_Star: ok
2018-05-20 15:51 Critical_Star: i fixed the pattern
2018-05-20 15:51 Kawawa: 01:40:104 (100104|2,100104|0,100191|1,100278|2,100365|3,100365|5) -
2018-05-20 15:52 Kawawa: something tricky
2018-05-20 15:52 Kawawa: do you have an idea?
2018-05-20 15:53 Critical_Star: i wanted to make an ascending stair here
2018-05-20 15:53 Kawawa:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109912162018-05-20 15:53 Kawawa: like this?
2018-05-20 15:53 Kawawa: 01:40:452 - oops here should not be 3LN
2018-05-20 15:53 Kawawa: mistake in screeneshot
2018-05-20 15:53 Kawawa: col7
2018-05-20 15:54 Critical_Star: ya i was wondering that haha
2018-05-20 15:54 Critical_Star: ok
2018-05-20 15:54 Kawawa: 01:53:616 (113616|1,113698|2,113698|5,113698|0,113806|4,113806|6,113915|0,113915|2,114024|1) -
2018-05-20 15:54 Kawawa: 01:54:994 (114994|1,115102|0,115102|2) - 01:55:209 (115209|6,115209|4,115317|5) - 01:55:530 (115530|2,115530|0,115637|1,115798|2,115798|1) -
2018-05-20 15:54 Kawawa: too uncomfortable
2018-05-20 15:54 Kawawa: I cound not pass it
2018-05-20 15:55 Critical_Star: wait ah
2018-05-20 15:55 Critical_Star: 01:40:191 - before that, add chamber hs?
2018-05-20 15:56 Critical_Star: for all the diff i don't see u have a note here
2018-05-20 15:56 Kawawa: i did not added there
2018-05-20 15:56 Kawawa: no need guess
2018-05-20 15:56 Kawawa: but you can add
2018-05-20 15:56 Critical_Star: ok
2018-05-20 15:57 Critical_Star: 01:53:698 (113698|5,114024|1) - remove to make easier?
2018-05-20 15:58 Critical_Star: since i think they have the same impact here
2018-05-20 15:58 Kawawa: feedback
2018-05-20 15:59 Kawawa: 1page
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10991241 2018-05-20 15:59 Kawawa: 2page
http://puu.sh/Apvh1/9f71aeb5ac.jpg2018-05-20 16:00 Kawawa: 01:53:535 - 01:54:833 - this two stair you can change as your taste and anything
2018-05-20 16:00 Critical_Star: space jack at 1st one will it be hard>
2018-05-20 16:00 Critical_Star: ?
2018-05-20 16:00 Kawawa: but i think fair a bit
2018-05-20 16:00 Kawawa: 01:53:698 -
2018-05-20 16:00 Kawawa: 01:54:994 - both
2018-05-20 16:00 Kawawa: 2times.
2018-05-20 16:00 Kawawa: up to you owo
2018-05-20 16:01 Kawawa: 01:55:958 - from this and to end part it's fine for you?
2018-05-20 16:01 Kawawa: oh I have to go out now ;w;
2018-05-20 16:01 Critical_Star: ;w;
2018-05-20 16:01 Kawawa: cya tomorrow!
2018-05-20 16:01 Kawawa: will give you some time