Hello wawa and cs 'w' 'w'updated till beginner, normal. will post soon about Hyper to Extra and checking all the Hitsound too!!
00:17:875 - Should be 2 LN i think considering the sound getting stronger here.
I was planning to keep but added at 7 and arranged around notes
00:38:340 - might add one more note here to mapping the drum roll in similar way as how you did 01:07:697 (67697|6,67874|4) -
It(from 1:07) focused on the main synth sound as regular snap
00:55:069 (55069|3) - I felt this one is better at col 6, at col 4 i don't feel the structure as good.
moved 00:55:569 (55569|6) - to 6. instead of this one.
01:15:277 (75277|4,75277|6,75629|0,75992|2,76367|4) - The LN has weird structure in my eyes, because the music is getting intense here, so the pattern should express the intensity of the louder atmosphere. But instead, the LN getting lighter according from structure, which is not really suits the music imo. If i do this section, it will probably become like: http://puu.sh/Aljwj/5bf11d6fcc.png
I considered the thing that 01:16:367 - 1 note only and hand balance here with end of LNs.
Therefore there is no big change here I arranged them. will be better https://puu.sh/AloKu/3a277c21af.jpg
01:30:224 (90224|4,90577|2) - I would switch column between these notes here, it flows more nicely to the LN section compared than if you doing the reversal pattern. done. also arranged here too 01:21:367 - to 01:25:636 - will be better than previous one.
01:52:798 (112798|3,112798|5) - Wrongly snapped, should be at 01:52:716 -
Fixed! I don't get it why It snapped like this, something accident when I updated.
01:52:963 (112963|1) - This one too, should be at 01:52:880 -
01:57:230 - You may also use the same structure as the one that i did mod at 01:15:277 (75277|4,75277|6,75629|0,75992|2,76367|4) -
I am thinking about maintaining this. but changed above notes.
00:43:088 - I will do something like http://puu.sh/AljIz/bc475e017f.png instead, since 00:43:838 - is really strong sound, i think having 2 LN is needed to accentuate that. Good. done like this http://puu.sh/Alpo2/ef08b793fd.jpg
01:07:521 - Not sure, felt a bit awkward you layered the 1/4 as LN here, but at 01:07:697 - you layered the drum roll with pure 1/4 stream.
It have the same mechanism with around LN. They are expressed as melody.
01:48:546 - Not sure if this should be double note, since at 01:46:512 - you only using 1 note.
It related with Hyper and Extra There is an intense part of synth.
+ I deleted all the 1/4 short LNs(made them standard note). thought it was uncomfortable for beginners.