Lady Gaga - Alejandro

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NotShinta
General:
- In the intro, the metronome doesn't seem to actually fit the spoken word/instrumental thing. Therefore, it could be argued that 24333 is a better offset to start at.
01:11:000 - Nice typo. (Loose/lose, SB)
01:52:212 - Perhaps drag 'break' to here, instead.
- Might as well edit the capitalisation of the topic title to match the beatmap.

Collab:
- It's recommended to have at least one spinner to prevent ties in scores.
02:16:152 (2,3,4) - Personally, I'd make this either consistently a little stream or consistently a stack, rather than alternating like you do here. It's slightly less awkward that way. (HellDawn)
02:34:333 (1,2,3,4) - I think I may have pointed this out before, but this spacing increase is far too much compared to the previous combo. Plus, this spacing decrease at 02:39:182 (1,2) equally unexpected. Of course, you could either remap the offending parts or make it more natural by working the rest of the map towards it. (Debbiee)
02:42:515 (4,5,6) - You might want to move this whole thing down a few grids for spacing consistency. Yeah, starting to get nitpicky. (Debbiee)

Hard:
00:24:333 (1,2,3,4) - To be honest, I think these would look much better if the redpoints were at the same place as the ticks.
00:32:212 (1) - This spacing is inconsistent compared to the previous combo; you could start by making each slider more 'level' (i.e. aligned start and end) and fix spacing from there.
00:57:364 (2) - Move this a couple of grids right and up, so that it looks more like a perfect diamond.
01:00:394 (2) - This big jump could easily be read as 1/1 from the previous slider, and there is nothing else like it in the rest of the difficulty. I'd suggest spacing this normally.

Normal:
- Please set tick rate 2 for consistency with the other difficulties.
- Many of your overlaps could be avoided by moving objects by a simple grid, occasionally breaking spacing, yet readably.
00:53:424 (3) - This spacing/anti-jump is very strange. Please space this normally within the context of the map.
01:25:242 - It feels strange to suddenly miss out on mapping to vocals when that's what you've done for the previous combo. One would expect a hitcircle here, despite difficulty.
01:51:606 (3) - Add a whistle, or even a finish, to end this section nicely? (Likewise with 03:09:182 (4)_
02:11:000 (2) - I think a finish works well here.
02:37:667 (3) - Once again, a finish would be nice.
02:43:727 (6) - Whistle?
02:51:000 (3) - Finish? (Actually, same for the start of 02:54:637 (1) and 02:55:849 (3))

CDFAlejandro, as he would like it
- Such short repeat sliders may be difficult to read for an Easy difficulty. Most of the time there is enough "recovery time" though, but they could be done better, still.
01:17:667 (1) - Consider adding a finish on the start of this. I expected one. Likewise with 01:37:061 (1), and other similar chorus moments.
02:43:121 (2) - Maybe move a grid left for symmetry. As much as you can get with your silly grids.
- ٩(̾●̮̮̃̾•̃̾)۶

Cool work.
Topic Starter
HellDawn

NotShinta wrote:

General:
- In the intro, the metronome doesn't seem to actually fit the spoken word/instrumental thing. Therefore, it could be argued that 24333 is a better offset to start at. Fix'd
01:11:000 - Nice typo. (Loose/lose, SB)
01:52:212 - Perhaps drag 'break' to here, instead.ok
- Might as well edit the capitalisation of the topic title to match the beatmap. Fix'd
Collab:
- It's recommended to have at least one spinner to prevent ties in scores.
02:16:152 (2,3,4) - Personally, I'd make this either consistently a little stream or consistently a stack, rather than alternating like you do here. It's slightly less awkward that way. (HellDawn) Fix'd

Hard:
00:24:333 (1,2,3,4) - To be honest, I think these would look much better if the redpoints were at the same place as the ticks. no
00:32:212 (1) - This spacing is inconsistent compared to the previous combo; you could start by making each slider more 'level' (i.e. aligned start and end) and fix spacing from there. no
00:57:364 (2) - Move this a couple of grids right and up, so that it looks more like a perfect diamond. Fix'd
01:00:394 (2) - This big jump could easily be read as 1/1 from the previous slider, and there is nothing else like it in the rest of the difficulty. I'd suggest spacing this normally. Fix'd

Normal:
- Please set tick rate 2 for consistency with the other difficulties. Fix'd
- Many of your overlaps could be avoided by moving objects by a simple grid, occasionally breaking spacing, yet readably.
00:53:424 (3) - This spacing/anti-jump is very strange. Please space this normally within the context of the map.Fix'd
01:25:242 - It feels strange to suddenly miss out on mapping to vocals when that's what you've done for the previous combo. One would expect a hitcircle here, despite difficulty. no
01:51:606 (3) - Add a whistle, or even a finish, to end this section nicely? (Likewise with 03:09:182 (4)_ no
02:11:000 (2) - I think a finish works well here. Fix'd
02:37:667 (3) - Once again, a finish would be nice. Fix'd
02:43:727 (6) - Whistle? no
02:51:000 (3) - Finish? (Actually, same for the start of 02:54:637 (1) and 02:55:849 (3)) Fix'd

Cool work.
Thank you
abalee
[collab]
still haver unsnapped notes.
01:46:758 (1,2) - spacing?

normal:
02:30:697 (2) - ,02:31:909 (4) - are they missed claps?

Easy:
need renapped.
Topic Starter
HellDawn

abalee wrote:

[collab]
still haver unsnapped notes.
01:46:758 (1,2) - spacing?

normal:
02:30:697 (2) - ,02:31:909 (4) - are they missed claps?
All fixed
Breeze
well, this time it's pink and yellow

This time it's pink and white

Download: sliderb.7z
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Breeze wrote:

well, this time it's pink and yellow

This time it's pink and white
Thanx a lot
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi~~

CDFA's Easy
looks fine~

Normal
  1. Circle Size +1?

00:39:182 (2) - overlap at 00:38:879 (1) - ?
01:06:152 (2) - down 2 grid?
other looks fine~

Hard
00:59:182 (2,3) - down 1 grid?
01:17:970 (5) - add a New Combo?
01:24:030 (5) - ^
01:44:333 (3) - this slider looks very strange = =

Collab
looks Good!

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Good Luck~ ;)
abalee
/me facepain.

unsnapped notes in collab and CDFA's easy.
DNR
Protip: You don't need me to re-snap the notes in my diff for you o-o. You can just just pres the "resnap" button and snap that ish.
DNR
In other news.

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Topic Starter
HellDawn
Done!

You cannot make another post so soon after your last.
abalee
that's the real snapped diff.
i start to think that ask ppy to remove the limint for bats

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [CDFA's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
HellDawn

abalee wrote:

that's the real snapped diff.
i start to think that ask ppy to remove the limint for bats
OMG thanks abalee -.-
CDFA's sliders were really good :p
abalee
Finally.
bubbled.
i think it really need tp remove the limit for bats
Topic Starter
HellDawn

abalee wrote:

Finally.
bubbled.
Thanx Abalee <3
[Au]-[Revoir]
8-)
I know that we are young.
And I know you may love me.
But I just can't be with you like this anymore.
Alejandro.
8-)
narakucrimson
Hi HellDawn!

I didn't do a full mod because I have to go now, but I will when I get back home. I probably won't have much to say anyway.

For instance, you should force a custom sliderborder.

It looks way better. Seriously.

I suggest using either this:
SliderBorder : 60,60,60


or this:
SliderBorder : 210,210,210


Any of those looks better than the default one.
Remember to add the code under [Colours] on each .osu file!

Oh, and something I saw in the Collab:
  1. 02:32:817 (1) - Place the end of that slider in a way that it isn't overlapping the slider track. Not only does that look bad, but it's also a point in the upcoming new rules that states that you can't do that. For real.


Well, good luck and sorry if you have to pop for this!
narakucrimson
I checked everything else and it all seems fine to me. I just think you should fix what I mentioned in my previous post. Bye!
Sakura
I was going to mod this, and i see you kudosu'd narakucrimson's post so if you make any changes, you could ask abalee to rebubble it and then i can mod it.
DarkDunskin
Just fixed the Timing things arien666 mentioned ingame.

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
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