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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年3月16日 at 12:48:21

Artist: Mikoi Sasaki
Title: Bokura no Seiza
Source: 星恋*ティンクル
Tags: eroge opening Akitoshi Corinn Yohanes yaldo_27 Nanashima Asami Left
BPM: 200
Filesize: 22045kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.44 stars, 188 notes)
  2. Akitoshi's Normal (1.85 stars, 129 notes)
  3. Asami's Insane (4.92 stars, 296 notes)
  4. Hard (3.31 stars, 244 notes)
  5. Left's Sparkle (5.66 stars, 317 notes)
  6. Yohanes' Insane (4.38 stars, 303 notes)
Download: Mikoi Sasaki - Bokura no Seiza
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Hard - Done by me
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Asami's Insane - Done by Nanashima Asami
Left's Sparkle - Done by Left

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AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56475
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Bokura no Seiza
TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
Creator:joker-
Version:Left's Sparkle
Source:星恋*ティンクル
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.8
ApproachRate:9.5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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192,117,59205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,263,59355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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344,208,59955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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145,152,60855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,324,64005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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274,140,72405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,316,72555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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87,272,74505,2,0,P|135:276|176:250,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,355,74805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,329,74955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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301,275,75255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,82,76605,2,0,B|170:59|170:59|219:74,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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149,171,78030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
149,171,78105,2,0,P|172:223|144:284,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,202,78555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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396,333,82905,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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250,302,83955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,84630,12,8,85755,0:0:0:0:
40,164,85905,6,0,B|109:92|109:92|204:137,1,198.000006042481,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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407,214,86805,2,0,P|364:236|317:226,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,96,87105,6,0,B|123:161|123:161|95:222|95:222|111:315,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,225,87555,2,0,P|272:202|225:213,1,99.0000030212403,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,314,87855,5,0,0:0:0:0:
225,213,88005,2,0,P|272:202|315:224,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,285,88305,6,0,P|35:222|75:119,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,176,88755,2,0,B|246:158|246:158|162:179,1,99.0000030212403,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,122,89505,5,2,0:0:0:0:
263,343,89655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,122,89805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,246,89955,6,0,B|302:269|249:234|249:234|195:196|129:239,1,198.000006042481,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,191,90405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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164,324,90630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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321,46,91155,2,0,B|347:87|347:87|332:151,1,99.0000030212403,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,108,91455,5,0,0:0:0:0:
335,136,91605,2,0,B|347:87|347:87|321:46,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,231,91905,6,0,P|241:204|328:284,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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168,231,92655,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,159,93705,2,0,P|256:111|264:62,1,99.0000030212403,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,31,94005,2,0,P|456:79|448:128,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Help from Doyak, kudos when he posts log pls :)
IRC mod
2016-11-30 22:06 Left: 도약님
2016-11-30 22:07 Left: 맵 아주 짤막하게 봐주실수 있나여
2016-11-30 22:07 Left: 엑라 찍는데 괜찮은지 모르겠음
2016-11-30 22:08 Doyak: 네
2016-11-30 22:09 Left: http://puu.sh/szqcQ/53e831ca7e.osz
2016-11-30 22:13 Doyak: 00:09:105 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이게 계속 어색하게 느껴지는데
2016-11-30 22:13 Doyak: 00:09:105 (1) - 에는 확실한 소리가 있어서 1,2 패턴이 어울리지만
2016-11-30 22:14 Doyak: 00:09:555 (1) - 이나 00:10:005 (1) - 는 사라지는 소리에 불과해서
2016-11-30 22:14 Doyak: 똑같이 클릭을 유도하는 게 과연 좋은 선택인가 의문이네요
2016-11-30 22:14 Left: 흠..
2016-11-30 22:14 Doyak: 각 소리들이 00:09:405 - 00:09:855 - 에서 사라지지도 않는데 슬라이더가 딱 끊겨버려서 아쉬운 점도 있고
2016-11-30 22:15 Left: 이부분은 다른 표현법을 고민해보겠습니다
2016-11-30 22:15 Doyak: 00:10:605 (1,2) - 이렇게 가까이 있는 게 리딩에 문제를 일으키지 않을지 모르겠네요
2016-11-30 22:15 Left: 리딩은 음..
2016-11-30 22:16 Left: 엑라니까..
2016-11-30 22:17 Doyak: 00:13:755 (1) - 아무리 이 소리가 강하다고 해도 음악이 바뀌는 곳은 00:13:905 (2) - 여기인데 콤보를 이렇게 끊은 것이 과연 적절할까요
2016-11-30 22:18 Left: 고쳤습니당
2016-11-30 22:19 Doyak: 00:16:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 소리의 강도가 1들과 나머지들에 차이가 큰데, 디스턴스적으로 거의 구분이 없어서 좀 아쉬웠어요
2016-11-30 22:19 Doyak: 그리고 00:16:905 (2) - 에는 그 드럼소리마저 거의 안 들리네요
2016-11-30 22:21 Left: 좀더 변화를 줬습니닷
2016-11-30 22:21 Doyak: 00:38:505 (1) - 00:40:905 (3,4) - 같은 소리인데 표현이 다르네요
2016-11-30 22:23 Left: 높은 보컬 좀더 어렵게 할라고 해본것이지만
2016-11-30 22:23 Left: 수정 고려해볼게요
2016-11-30 22:23 Doyak: 00:49:455 (1) - 00:49:905 (3) - 00:51:930 (1) - 패턴에 맞추어서 뉴콤을 짠 것은 좋은데, 음악과 너무 동떨어진 느낌이 들어요
2016-11-30 22:23 Doyak: 처음부터 패턴이 음악이 끊어지는 곳에 맞추어 만들어졌더라면 이렇게 하지 않아도 됐을텐데 하는 아쉬움이 남네요
2016-11-30 22:23 Doyak: 그리고 00:51:930 (1) - 스냅 잘못됐습니다
2016-11-30 22:24 Left: 엑..
2016-11-30 22:24 Doyak: 00:53:205 (1,2) - 왜 여기가 넓직한 1/4 슬라들인지 여쭤봐도 될까요?
2016-11-30 22:26 Left: 뒷노트 강조랑 약간 끄는 베이스?
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 그런데 2번 노트를 제외하고
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 00:52:305 - 00:52:755 - 00:53:205 - 00:53:505 - 는 전부
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 강한 음들이 있는데
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 이것들과 똑같은 정도의 강조를
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 매우 약한 소리에 하는 것이
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 과연 진짜 강한 소리들을 강조하는 데에
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 도움이 될까요?
2016-11-30 22:28 Doyak: 저는 오히려 00:53:205 - 00:53:355 - 00:53:505 - 00:53:655 - 00:53:805 - 가 모두 똑같은 클릭에 ,비슷한 움직임을 요구하고 있어서
2016-11-30 22:28 Doyak: 어느 쪽이 더 강한 소리이고 어느 쪽이 약한 소리인지 맵상으로는 구분이 가지 않네요
2016-11-30 22:29 Doyak: 흐름이 변화하는 곳이 뭐랄까, 노래가 변화하는 곳에 있지 않고 한 발 앞서서 시작해버린 느낌
2016-11-30 22:30 Left: 음..
2016-11-30 22:30 Left: 뭔가 의도한 움직임이 있는데
2016-11-30 22:30 Left: 설명을 잘 못하겠네요
2016-11-30 22:30 Left: 아마 제가 잘못 사용한걸지도 모르겠네요
2016-11-30 22:30 Left: 검토해보겟슴다
2016-11-30 22:31 Doyak: 00:53:205 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 아마 그다지 동의하진 않으시겠지만, 이렇게 갑작스럽게 움직임에 큰 변화를 줘야 할 정도로 노래가 많이 변화했나 좀 의문이네요
2016-11-30 22:32 Doyak: 00:47:505 - 에 비해서 리듬 패턴이 조금 바뀌었을 뿐, 분위기상으로는 크게 차이를 못 느끼겠거든요
2016-11-30 22:32 Left: 음..
2016-11-30 22:32 Doyak: 물론 약간 텐션이 증가하는 감이 없지는 않은데, 앞에서는 슬라들로 주로 리듬을 짜서
2016-11-30 22:33 Doyak: 실질적으로 플레이어에게 주어지는 부담감이 거의 없었는데
2016-11-30 22:33 Doyak: 여기서의 껑충 뛰는 연속 삼각점프는 조금 과다한 감이 있네요
2016-11-30 22:34 Left: 정도는 고민해봐야겠지만, 앞과의 차이는 분명히 의도한 바이므로..
2016-11-30 22:34 Left: 그리고 개인적으로 00:54:705 (1,2,3) - 와 극단적인 차이도 약간 중요해서
2016-11-30 22:35 Doyak: 3~4배 차이면 굉장히 크기는 하죠
2016-11-30 22:37 Doyak: 01:09:705 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 여기도 패턴이 걸쳐진 게 좀 애매하네요
2016-11-30 22:38 Doyak: 01:09:705 (1,2,1,2) - 에서의 패턴을 굳이 01:10:305 (1,2) - 여기까지 확장해야 하는 의미를 잘 모르겠어요
2016-11-30 22:38 Left: 그렇네요
2016-11-30 22:39 Left: 아 님이 캎에 올리신
2016-11-30 22:39 Left: 리맵vs부분수정이 떠올라버렸슴니다..
2016-11-30 22:39 Doyak: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2016-11-30 22:39 Doyak: 사실 그건 그 드립을 치고 싶었던 것 뿐...
2016-11-30 22:40 Left: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2016-11-30 22:40 Left: 컴공 미워
2016-11-30 22:40 Doyak: 01:13:005 (3,4) - 음 이건 왜 1/4이죠
2016-11-30 22:40 Doyak: 특별히 다른 부분들과 음악적으로 다른 것도 안 보이고
2016-11-30 22:41 Doyak: 슬라 끝에 뭔가 특별한 게 있을 거라고 기대하게 만드는데 말이죠
2016-11-30 22:41 Left: 서클로 바꿨습니다
2016-11-30 22:42 Doyak: 그것도 그렇지만 저는
2016-11-30 22:42 Doyak: 01:11:805 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 여기에 왜 서클이 이렇게 많이 몰려야 하는지도 잘 모르겠어요
2016-11-30 22:42 Doyak: 아주 평범한 드럼 패턴 + 피아노들인데
2016-11-30 22:42 Doyak: 강조를 해줄 소리가 있는 곳들보다도 더 많이 클릭시켜야 하는 이유가?
2016-11-30 22:43 Left: (설명할 수 없는 이유가 있어 그냥 고치기로 합니다)
2016-11-30 22:43 Doyak: ㄷㄷ
2016-11-30 22:44 Left: 앞쪽 노트는 좀더 자연스럽게 변속을 이을려고 했는데
2016-11-30 22:44 Left: 사실 그 뒤는 pp죠
2016-11-30 22:44 Left: ㅋㅋㅋ
2016-11-30 22:45 Doyak: 이젠 뭐 누가 pp를 노려 찍든 별로 신경 안 쓰지만
2016-11-30 22:45 Doyak: (어차피 다들 하고 있으니)
2016-11-30 22:45 Doyak: 일단 이 정도? 면 된 것 같네요
2016-11-30 22:46 Left: 헉 이것은
2016-11-30 22:46 Left: 쿠도스 안받으면 억울한 각..
2016-11-30 22:46 Doyak: 지금 포스트 쓰는 건 좀 그런가
2016-11-30 22:46 Left: 상관없을듯
2016-11-30 22:47 Doyak: 아직 업로드도 안 된 맵을 ㄷㄷ
2016-11-30 22:47 Doyak: 업로드 되면 그 때 올릴게요
2016-11-30 22:47 Left: 넵
2016-11-30 22:47 Left: 모딩 감사합니다!
2016-11-30 22:47 Left: 숏슬 좀더 고민해봐야될듯
kayu77
音取りもがんばってぇ!
irc
2016-12-07 20:42 joker-: お
2016-12-07 20:42 joker-: modしてくれる??うぇ
2016-12-07 20:42 joker-: w
2016-12-07 20:43 kayu77: ぇw
2016-12-07 20:43 kayu77: やり方教えてくだしゃいww
2016-12-07 20:43 joker-: www
2016-12-07 20:43 kayu77: いちお ちょっと気になったとこが
2016-12-07 20:43 joker-: うん
2016-12-07 20:43 joker-: どこ?
2016-12-07 20:44 kayu77: あの~
2016-12-07 20:44 kayu77: ちょっとお恥ずかしいんですけど
2016-12-07 20:44 kayu77: 時間指定どうやってやるんです...?
2016-12-07 20:44 joker-: オブジェクトクリックしてコントロールCでここに張り付ける
2016-12-07 20:44 kayu77: あいい!
2016-12-07 20:45 kayu77: 01:18:555 (6) -
2016-12-07 20:45 kayu77: ここの3連を
2016-12-07 20:45 joker-: うん
2016-12-07 20:46 kayu77: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6748122
2016-12-07 20:46 joker-: あぁ
2016-12-07 20:46 kayu77: こんな感じにちょっと曲げるとやりやすい? かもしれないですー
2016-12-07 20:46 joker-: いいね~
2016-12-07 20:46 joker-: 直した
2016-12-07 20:46 kayu77: 後は
2016-12-07 20:47 kayu77: 01:25:905 (1) -
2016-12-07 20:47 kayu77: ここと
2016-12-07 20:47 kayu77: 01:27:105 (1) -
2016-12-07 20:47 joker-: いやこれは故意だね
2016-12-07 20:47 kayu77: ほむほむ
2016-12-07 20:47 joker-: 01:25:905 (1) - 01:30:705 (1) -
2016-12-07 20:47 joker-: これが対応してる
2016-12-07 20:47 joker-: それぼれの場所からは同じ音取りになってると思う
2016-12-07 20:48 kayu77: あー んと
2016-12-07 20:48 joker-: うん
2016-12-07 20:48 kayu77: 01:27:105 (1) - 01:31:905 (1) -
2016-12-07 20:48 joker-: うん
2016-12-07 20:48 kayu77: ピアノの音量下がってるから
2016-12-07 20:49 kayu77: 最初のほうは 1/1スライダーでいいいかなー って思っただけだけど
2016-12-07 20:49 kayu77: 故意ならいっかなw
2016-12-07 20:49 joker-: Exだしあんまり1/1スライダー使いたくないってのがあるかなぁ
2016-12-07 20:49 joker-: bpm200のsv1.8だし
2016-12-07 20:50 joker-: じゃまw
2016-12-07 20:50 kayu77: まぁたしかにw
2016-12-07 20:51 joker-: ほかにある?
2016-12-07 20:51 kayu77: これちょっと自分のあれになっちゃうけど
2016-12-07 20:51 kayu77: 00:54:555 (7) -
2016-12-07 20:51 kayu77: ここのやつを
2016-12-07 20:52 kayu77: あれ.. アップできない;
2016-12-07 20:52 kayu77: ちょいとお待ちを~
2016-12-07 20:52 joker-:  ういー
2016-12-07 20:52 kayu77: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6748150
2016-12-07 20:52 kayu77: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6748154
2016-12-07 20:53 kayu77: 自分ならこんな感じに音とっちゃうかな
2016-12-07 20:54 joker-: ん?
2016-12-07 20:54 joker-: ここ3連の音ある?
2016-12-07 20:54 kayu77: ピアノの たららんって音ない?
2016-12-07 20:56 joker-: うーんたしかに白線置いたほうがあってる気がするなぁうん変えた
-Yuzuriha
暇だったんで軽く見てみることにしましたー
ほぼ最初の投稿なので、modというよりもdateなどをメインにチェックします

General


Audio Lead in + 500 or 1000

add tags

BGの規格の変更と、名前をBGとかに変更

Advanceの緑線を消してください。たぶん同じだよね?
https://gyazo.com/5bd439e7a0460fdca627a066a5339c45

Left's Sparkle 緑線を消してください
https://gyazo.com/650cff3b28b94b1a513948a4995bd956

Yohanes' Insane 緑線を消してください
https://gyazo.com/8c0e647c1cedf56bebc7e11c83ea84af
https://gyazo.com/cacdaf03e6cb793251de619c76b8fec7

Akitoshi's Normal のスライダーの感度がすごく微妙なので、0.9でよくない?って思います




 Extra 

00:04:605 (2) -  尾の音が高く大きく感じるので、尾の音はとってあげたほうが良いですね
スライダーの尾は、osuのedit上では音がなりますが、実際のプレイする際には音として叩かないからです。
00:19:305 (3) -  ^^
00:21:705 (3) -  ^^
00:24:105 (3) - ^^
こういうところです

00:47:205 (5,1) -  きちんとblanket組みましょう
https://gyazo.com/17a50f1029e810324d4d9b65b8cfff66
00:48:705 (1) -  ^^

00:57:105 (1,4) - このような微妙な重なりは少しきになります

00:59:205 (7) -  歌詞で、はっきりと音がでているのでここはnoteですかね
00:58:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -  こっちのほうnoteはあまりおすすめできません。
逆だと思います
01:07:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -  ^^

01:23:055 (2) - 尾の音を5%とかにして、音を小さくしましょう

01:33:555 (2,3) -  この2つをスライダーに
01:31:155 (2,1,3,3) -  こいつらがスライダーだからです。

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以上です :)
Beomsan
tAkeマイfiveスターズ
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

Beomsan wrote:

tAkeマイfiveスターズ
고마워!!! ありがとう!!!

@-Yuzurihaさん
Pendに移すときにまとめて直しておきます~
__Ag
おっすぅぅぅぅ!ただいま、またやりそうか?おいらも一緒にやりたいが、間に会えるかと思ってるんや、ところで日本から食べ物をいっぱい連れて行って帰って、食べへんか?
Meg
たべよか~!
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
よっしゃ!この譜面はもうゲスト埋まってるからほかの譜面でやらへん?
食べ物もってきてくれたら一緒に食べよか~!
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
All Update!

@Corinn, -lolist-, Yohanes, Left
Plz re-download this map cuz of added tags, video and bg
[ -Scarlet- ]
Hey there, m4m from your queue :D

  1. 00:04:605 - I think this part needs to be clickable, a circle in short. It would be nice along with the piano. Maybe remove 00:04:305 (1) - slider and convert to 1/1 circles instead?
  2. 00:10:005 (1) - Erm, please increase the distance for this. The suddenly sudden fast pace from 00:09:255 (2) - makes this 00:10:005 (1) - feels like is 1/4 apart
  3. 00:17:655 (2,3) - This jump is definitely uncomfortable. The section consist of rather large jumps, but followed by a rather small 1/4 slider jump, ended with huge jump to the 00:17:805 (3) - . Missed multiple times here :?
  4. 01:11:355 (1) - Could stack the slider end better xd
  5. 01:26:805 (2) - Please a least move this slider a little downwards or something, it is really difficult to read this slider especially in the first try. But later sliders works surprisingly because the players are already aware of these perfectly stacked sliders. Maybe move this one a bit as an indication that there will be upcoming similar stacked slider?

    Pretty solid map again :D

  1. 00:18:705 (1) - Maybe NC here then follow up by NC here 00:19:005 (2) - . Same thing applies to the later section
  2. 00:32:805 (3,4) - Would prefer using 1/2 slider here instead. I think it fits the piano well like what you did at 00:33:705 (3,4) - , but the circles doesn't really follow anything well unlike the obvious vocal at 00:35:205 (4,5) - which works great
  3. 01:06:555 (10,1) - Really huge jump here, and it really flows very badly toward the 01:06:705 (1) - . Consider reducing the distance

    Rest of the map looks fine as it is :D

  • [-lolist's Insane]

    First run testplay

    Really nothing to say for this one, everything plays well! Nicely done~

  1. 00:17:205 (4) - Small stuff, maybe try this instead? http://puu.sh/tlWMV/c540b64764.jpg I think it would fit the song really well
  2. 00:21:105 (1) - 00:28:305 (1) - I don't think there's a need for NC for this one though. Remove it and NC 00:21:405 (2) - instead
  3. 01:04:155 (1) - Maybe add clap on the slider-end here, feels random to have claps starting at blue tick here 01:04:530 (2) -

    Other than that, everything else plays really nicely :D

That's all from me~ Good luck!
lit120
from ur q

[left]
  1. those missing hitsounds...
  2. 00:07:155 (2,2) - nice one, but looks like u have to fix the stacks instead, since u put it on the middle for the slider end
  3. 00:13:755 (3) - missing clap
  4. 00:16:155 (4) - ^
  5. 00:42:105 (2) - 00:44:505 (3) - why not whistle like u did on 00:38:505 (1,2,3) -
  6. 00:54:555 (4,1) - fix the blanket
  7. 01:06:255 (1,2,3) - where's the hitsound .-.
  8. 01:11:205 (3) - missing clap
  9. 01:21:705 (2,2,2) - ^
[extra]
  1. 01:05:805 (3) - clap
  2. 01:11:205 (6) - ^
[-lolist-]
  1. 00:46:905 (1,1,1,1) - what's the NC for?
that's it
DeletedUser_7370134

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

Hey there, m4m from your queue :D

  • [-lolist's Insane]

    First run testplay

    Really nothing to say for this one, everything plays well! Nicely done~ thanks!

lit120 wrote:

[-lolist-]
  1. 00:46:905 (1,1,1,1) - what's the NC for? :arrow: for visual preference
that's it
thx guys!

fixed some minor things
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56475
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Bokura no Seiza
TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
Creator:joker-
Version:-lolist-'s Insane
Source:星恋*ティンクル
Tags:eroge opening Akitoshi Corinn Yohanes -lolist- Left
BeatmapID:1180704
BeatmapSetID:539139

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HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.1
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.75
SliderTickRate:1

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Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

lit120 wrote:

from ur q

[extra]
  1. 01:05:805 (3) - clap
  2. 01:11:205 (6) - ^
both fixed~

that's it

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

Hey there, m4m from your queue :D

  1. 00:18:705 (1) - Maybe NC here then follow up by NC here 00:19:005 (2) - . Same thing applies to the later section No, I'm following present NC pattern in consistent
  2. 00:32:805 (3,4) - Would prefer using 1/2 slider here instead. I think it fits the piano well like what you did at 00:33:705 (3,4) - , but the circles doesn't really follow anything well unlike the obvious vocal at 00:35:205 (4,5) - which works great right, fixed
  3. 01:06:555 (10,1) - Really huge jump here, and it really flows very badly toward the 01:06:705 (1) - . Consider reducing the distance i think flow is not bad... but i reduce the distance

    Rest of the map looks fine as it is :D

That's all from me~ Good luck!
thank you guys!
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
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Yohanes

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

  1. 00:17:205 (4) - Small stuff, maybe try this instead? http://puu.sh/tlWMV/c540b64764.jpg I think it would fit the song really well I don't really like to leave the 1/1 rhythm empty while there're strong music in the background. So I will leave it as it is for now
  2. 00:21:105 (1) - 00:28:305 (1) - I don't think there's a need for NC for this one though. Remove it and NC 00:21:405 (2) - instead I NC'd them based on the downbeats, the strong sound is there so I think it's best to put the NC there.
  3. 01:04:155 (1) - Maybe add clap on the slider-end here, feels random to have claps starting at blue tick here 01:04:530 (2) - That will sound too crowded for my preference. I put the hitsound based on the background instrument, since there're no drum on the slider-end, putting a clap there seems redundant

    Other than that, everything else plays really nicely :D

That's all from me~ Good luck!
Thank you Scarlet! but sorry no change from my end ._.

anyway, I changed some things on my diff
update
osu file format v14

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Title:Bokura no Seiza
TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
Creator:joker-
Version:Yohanes' Insane
Source:星恋*ティンクル
Tags:eroge opening Akitoshi Corinn Yohanes -lolist- Left
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Syph
hi

[Extra]

00:09:105 - place a note here?
00:37:605 (2) - 3/4 seems weird here
00:38:505 (3) - was this intentional? i think it should be 1/1
01:25:155 (2,3,4) - space this a bit less please, it's too much, vocals are pretty calm

[Left's Sparkle]

where's combo colors

00:13:755 (3) - could do a whistle or clap here, sounds a bit weird without
00:15:255 (2) - this was a bit weird to play for me, i know it ruins your stack with 00:15:855 (3) - if you move it but could you try moving it to something like 108|168? feels better
00:27:705 (2,1) - could blanket here
00:38:805 - i don't like this being on a reverse, the sound in the music is so strong here so consider making it clickable like here.. 00:41:205 (4) -
00:43:305 (1) - ^
00:48:105 (1) - finish? there's a cymbal crash owo
01:00:555 (5,1) - could blanket this toooo
01:03:405 (2) - should space this more from 1 since strong sound on this ;;
01:16:305 (1) - finish? idk

gl~
DeletedUser_7370134
thanks Meg for irc mod
2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: ぱっと聞いて01:06:255 (2,3,4,5) -
2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: 01:06:405 - 01:06:555 - 01:06:630 - にだけclapじゃないかなあ
2017-01-21 11:08 Nanashima Asami: ここめっちゃわかんなくて適当につけてた
2017-01-21 11:08 Meg: 01:06:255 (2,3) - のclapは浮きまくってる
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: つけても(2)にwhistleくらいかな
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: あとは
2017-01-21 11:09 Nanashima Asami: あね
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: 01:08:655 (3,4) - ここの3つの音はサークルで拾ったほうがきれいにボーカルフォローできてbetterかな
2017-01-21 11:10 Nanashima Asami: かえたw
2017-01-21 11:10 Meg: サビはとりあえずそんなもんだな~

http://puu.sh/tu4nn/b322729fc8.zip
Meg

Nanashima Asami wrote:

thanks Meg for irc mod
2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: ぱっと聞いて01:06:255 (2,3,4,5) -
2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: 01:06:405 - 01:06:555 - 01:06:630 - にだけclapじゃないかなあ
2017-01-21 11:08 Nanashima Asami: ここめっちゃわかんなくて適当につけてた
2017-01-21 11:08 Meg: 01:06:255 (2,3) - のclapは浮きまくってる
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: つけても(2)にwhistleくらいかな
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: あとは
2017-01-21 11:09 Nanashima Asami: あね
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: 01:08:655 (3,4) - ここの3つの音はサークルで拾ったほうがきれいにボーカルフォローできてbetterかな
2017-01-21 11:10 Nanashima Asami: かえたw
2017-01-21 11:10 Meg: サビはとりあえずそんなもんだな~

http://puu.sh/tu4nn/b322729fc8.zip
これmodじゃなくね?今度ちゃんとmodします
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

Meg wrote:

Nanashima Asami wrote:

thanks Meg for irc mod
2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: ぱっと聞いて01:06:255 (2,3,4,5) -
2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: 01:06:405 - 01:06:555 - 01:06:630 - にだけclapじゃないかなあ
2017-01-21 11:08 Nanashima Asami: ここめっちゃわかんなくて適当につけてた
2017-01-21 11:08 Meg: 01:06:255 (2,3) - のclapは浮きまくってる
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: つけても(2)にwhistleくらいかな
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: あとは
2017-01-21 11:09 Nanashima Asami: あね
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: 01:08:655 (3,4) - ここの3つの音はサークルで拾ったほうがきれいにボーカルフォローできてbetterかな
2017-01-21 11:10 Nanashima Asami: かえたw
2017-01-21 11:10 Meg: サビはとりあえずそんなもんだな~

http://puu.sh/tu4nn/b322729fc8.zip
これmodじゃなくね?modしました
yes kdsで
sahuang
Placehold~~

[nm]
  1. 01:23:055 (4) - why not use a 1/1 slider? Fits the song better. Besides it's lowest diff so i think 2 circles may be a bit difficult.

[adv]
  1. should be Advanced lol

[hd]
  1. 00:23:505 (1,2) - down a bit for better flow
    can use more ds variation next time, no need to stick to ds lol

[yo]
  1. 00:27:705 (5) - wtf is this slider shape...
  2. 00:29:955 (2,3) - why red tick at the end
  3. 01:29:055 (4,5) - why suddenly so big ds lol should be consistent with 01:28:305 (1,2,3) - imo
    More like a light insane

[as]
  1. 00:37:605 (2) - i suggest that you use 2 circles cuz 00:37:605 - 00:37:755 - beat is pretty clear. The slider is not following music/vocal..
  2. 00:46:905 (1,1,1,1) - wew as the piano goes i think if you decrease ds it will be really nice

[ex]
  1. 00:54:705 (1) - move left a bit?can stack 00:53:655 (2,1) -
  2. 00:56:655 (1,2,3) - try same ds
  3. 00:57:105 (1,4) - this overlap is pretty messy
  4. 01:29:955 (4,1) - make them consistent
    A bit messy somehow

[l]
  1. 00:17:505 (1,2,3) - these ds too big...1/4 sliders lol
  2. 00:27:105 (1,2,1) - why
  3. 01:03:105 (1,2,3) - so small ds in kiai
    Don't be lasse
Akitoshi
I used 1/2 instead since I want to map the strong cymbals on 01:23:055 -
thank you Azusa uwu

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TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
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Yohanes

My Angel Azusa wrote:

[yo]
  1. 00:27:705 (5) - wtf is this slider shape... lol I kinda like it, no change for now. not sure tho
  2. 00:29:955 (2,3) - why red tick at the end Red tick at the end act as a 4th tick on the slider. I'm doing it so that it have old slider algorithm (I did this in a lot of my other maps too)
  3. 01:29:055 (4,5) - why suddenly so big ds lol should be consistent with 01:28:305 (1,2,3) - imo that one... I think is not mainly because of the clap makes it deserved a higher spacing, and it's not suddenly btw. It's basically the same with 01:26:655 (4,5) -, 01:27:855 (4,5) -, etc
    More like a light insane It is
Thanks sahuang Azusa! but sorry no change ._.
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Syph wrote:

hi

[Extra]

00:09:105 - place a note here? hmm... it's very calm sound i think, so i dont need to take it
00:37:605 (2) - 3/4 seems weird here i think it's no problem but if other point out it, i'll fix
00:38:505 (3) - was this intentional? i think it should be 1/1 perfectly missing thx!
01:25:155 (2,3,4) - space this a bit less please, it's too much, vocals are pretty calm okay reduce distance

gl~ thanks~

My Angel Azusa wrote:

Placehold~~

[adv]
  1. should be Advanced lol

[hd]
  1. 00:23:505 (1,2) - down a bit for better flow
    can use more ds variation next time, no need to stick to ds lol okay I'll try to next time!

[ex]
  1. 00:54:705 (1) - move left a bit?can stack 00:53:655 (2,1) -
  2. 00:56:655 (1,2,3) - try same ds
  3. 00:57:105 (1,4) - this overlap is pretty messy
  4. 01:29:955 (4,1) - make them consistent
    A bit messy somehow hmm... i'll do my best
All fixed~ thx Azusa!
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[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

Hey there, m4m from your queue :D

  • [Left's Sparkle]

    First run testplay

    Quite unsure why HP5.5 though? Just use HP6 instead @@ hard map so low hp
  1. 00:04:605 - I think this part needs to be clickable, a circle in short. It would be nice along with the piano. Maybe remove 00:04:305 (1) - slider and convert to 1/1 circles instead? rip i don't wanna put so many clickables here
  2. 00:10:005 (1) - Erm, please increase the distance for this. The suddenly sudden fast pace from 00:09:255 (2) - makes this 00:10:005 (1) - feels like is 1/4 apart show increasing tension
  3. 00:17:655 (2,3) - This jump is definitely uncomfortable. The section consist of rather large jumps, but followed by a rather small 1/4 slider jump, ended with huge jump to the 00:17:805 (3) - . Missed multiple times here :? yeah
  4. 01:11:355 (1) - Could stack the slider end better xdrip me
  5. 01:26:805 (2) - Please a least move this slider a little downwards or something, it is really difficult to read this slider especially in the first try. But later sliders works surprisingly because the players are already aware of these perfectly stacked sliders. Maybe move this one a bit as an indication that there will be upcoming similar stacked slider? was considering this one so fixed

    Pretty solid map again :D


That's all from me~ Good luck!
thx for mod!


lit120 wrote:

from ur q

[left]
  1. those missing hitsounds...
  2. 00:07:155 (2,2) - nice one, but looks like u have to fix the stacks instead, since u put it on the middle for the slider endk
  3. 00:13:755 (3) - missing clap
  4. 00:16:155 (4) - ^
  5. 00:42:105 (2) - 00:44:505 (3) - why not whistle like u did on 00:38:505 (1,2,3) -
  6. 00:54:555 (4,1) - fix the blanket lazy me will fix
  7. 01:06:255 (1,2,3) - where's the hitsound .-.
  8. 01:11:205 (3) - missing clap
  9. 01:21:705 (2,2,2) - ^
hs all fix ez

that's it
thx for mod~

Syph wrote:

hi


[Left's Sparkle]

where's combo colors I ate

00:13:755 (3) - could do a whistle or clap here, sounds a bit weird without
00:15:255 (2) - this was a bit weird to play for me, i know it ruins your stack with 00:15:855 (3) - if you move it but could you try moving it to something like 108|168? feels better
00:27:705 (2,1) - could blanket here sahu also said so i'll fix
00:38:805 - i don't like this being on a reverse, the sound in the music is so strong here so consider making it clickable like here.. 00:41:205 (4) - showed that sound like this
00:43:305 (1) - ^
00:48:105 (1) - finish? there's a cymbal crash owo messy i think
01:00:555 (5,1) - could blanket this toooo i don't like blanket here man
01:03:405 (2) - should space this more from 1 since strong sound on this ;; fixed
01:16:305 (1) - finish? idk yeah

gl~
thxformod~

My Angel Azusa wrote:

Placehold~~

[l]
  1. 00:17:505 (1,2,3) - these ds too big...1/4 sliders lol fixed as i can
  2. 00:27:105 (1,2,1) - why loli
  3. 01:03:105 (1,2,3) - so small ds in kiai changed to another one
    Don't be lasse sorry I'm too lasse
thx for mod~
DeletedUser_7370134

My Angel Azusa wrote:

[as]
  1. 00:37:605 (2) - i suggest that you use 2 circles cuz 00:37:605 - 00:37:755 - beat is pretty clear. The slider is not following music/vocal.. :arrow: i want to follow that guitar sound,so i keep that 3/4.
  2. 00:46:905 (1,1,1,1) - wew as the piano goes i think if you decrease ds it will be really nice :arrow: nice,fixed
thanks for the mod azusa!

cooooooooooode
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464,94,45705,2,0,P|454:135|450:169,1,65.6250025033952
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177,259,47055,5,2,0:0:0:0:
143,279,47205,5,2,0:0:0:0:
131,303,47355,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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500,278,48105,2,0,P|492:237|481:195,1,78.7499975967408,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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101,125,54105,2,0,P|116:186|124:226,1,83.1249977803231,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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423,63,60705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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178,271,62655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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310,251,65055,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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185,271,65655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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412,267,71355,6,0,P|344:255|229:241,1,175,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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308,123,72405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
118,215,72555,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,283,72705,5,2,0:0:0:0:
215,90,72855,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,283,73005,2,0,P|313:238|325:193,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,52,73305,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,104,73455,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,104,73755,6,0,P|113:200|129:293,1,175,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,367,74205,2,0,P|293:315|305:268,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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227,212,74655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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280,113,74955,1,4,0:3:0:0:
142,232,75105,6,0,P|185:220|233:210,1,87.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,225,75405,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,37,75555,2,0,P|261:21|187:89,1,175,12|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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190,113,76005,2,0,P|200:146|207:169,1,48.1250014686585,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,20,81255,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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386,70,81705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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373,150,82605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,350,82905,5,10,0:0:0:0:
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118,366,83805,5,8,0:0:0:0:
251,213,83955,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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228,312,84255,2,0,P|278:301|323:294,1,78.7499975967408,8|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
181,69,84555,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84630,12,8,85755,0:0:0:0:
81,81,85905,6,0,P|90:129|112:258,1,166.249995560646,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,377,86355,2,0,P|248:335|258:285,1,83.1249977803231,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,169,86655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,245,86805,2,0,P|157:238|200:232,1,83.1249977803231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,138,87105,6,0,P|364:100|232:103,1,166.249995560646,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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188,344,91605,2,0,P|141:336|103:331,1,83.1249977803231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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223,12,92805,2,0,P|233:56|245:103,1,83.1249977803231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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209,246,95055,1,4,0:3:0:0:
300,34,95205,5,8,0:0:0:0:
232,336,95355,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95430,12,0,100305,0:0:0:0:
Toyosaki Aki
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  1. 00:34:305 - add whistle?
  2. 01:03:405 - ここの音拾いたい・・・拾いたくない?
  3. 01:21:105 (1,2) - どっちも白線まで伸ばしていいんじゃないかなあ
  4. うますぎ

Advanced
  1. 00:37:905 - から00:47:355 - まで同じ曲調のパートって考えたら00:39:555 (5,6) - 00:41:955 (5,6) - 00:44:355 (5,6) - 00:46:755 (5,6) - は音一緒だしスタックさせるか離すか統一してみてはどうかなっておもいました
  2. 00:40:005 (7) - 00:42:405 (7) - 00:44:805 (7) - 00:47:205 (7) - whistle消すか付けるかで揃えたほうが聞いた感じ良さそう
  3. 00:53:955 (5) - ここから1/1にして00:54:705 - を叩きたい
  4. 00:58:755 (5,6,7) - 「ひとみの~」に合わせるならこっちの音取りのほうが合ってると思いまつ
  5. 01:11:205 - add clap
  6. 01:03:855 (7) - この後の間が謎だからこれ(↓)とかどう?
  7. 01:04:605 (1) - add finish
  8. 01:17:955 (6,7,1) - ここピアンノ目立ってるし01:17:955 - から1/1スライダーにするのを試してみてほしい

Hard
  1. 00:14:805 (4,1) - 多分この3/4と1/2のスライダーに角度がないせい(?)で少し叩きにくさを感じた
    曲調は若干違うけど鳴ってるドラムは殆ど同じだから00:11:505 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - と同じ音取りで
    みたいにするとbetterかと
    それか00:37:605 (5,1) - みたいに3/4の後を余裕のある1/1スライダーにすれば読みやすい音取りになると思う
  2. 00:54:405 (4,5,1) - Ctrl+J 試してみてほしい 3/4からの角度がつく分多分こっちのほうが叩きやすいです
  3. 00:57:555 (2,3,4) - と01:07:155 (2,3,4) - は同じ音取りだしconsistencyって意味で00:58:755 (2,3,4,5) - と01:08:355 (2,3,4) - も揃えたらどうかな
  4. 01:34:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - しょーもないことかもしれんけど01:34:305 (1,4) - で後ろで鳴ってるシンセ(?)の音が変わってるから単発とスライダー入れ替えてみては それに01:35:355 (6) - はシンバルなってるしclickableにしたくない?

Yohanes' Insane
  1. 00:04:305 - here is loud piano sound, and you placed clickable object at the other parts. So 00:04:305 - would be better to make the same way as (00:01:905 (2) - 00:03:105 (1) - 00:06:705 (1) - etc.).
  2. 01:09:855 (4) - maybe add whistle
  3. 01:18:705 (7) - ^ (since piano sounds here)
  4. 01:13:455 (4) - add clap is better imo
  5. 01:14:955 (5) - remove whistle
  6. 01:17:355 - ^

Asami's Tragic Love
  1. 00:09:255 (2) - ここ00:09:555 - まで伸ばしたほうが良くない?
  2. 00:14:655 (4,5) - 耳ガイジだから何をfollowしてるかいまいち分からんけどdrum取ってるとしたら若干DS広すぎる感じする xd
  3. 00:58:305 (1,2) - サビの序盤気持ちstack多いしここに関してはunstackのほうがパターン的には合ってるような
  4. good stuff すぎる

Extra
  1. 00:04:605 (2) - この後の間が気になる木
    かといってずっと同じパターンを繰り返すのは単調に感じるかもしれないしピアノ鳴ってるところをスライダーの頭にして
    みたいなスタックにしてみるとかどうかな~
  2. 00:15:855 (4,1) - ここ曲調が変わってるのは明らかだけど配置は繋がっててちょっと違和感感じた 直すとなったら00:16:305 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - をremapしなきゃいけないからお任せします!
  3. 00:37:605 (2,1) - スライダーとはいえちょっと遠くない?
  4. 00:41:205 - ここvocalデカいしclickableにしたいから00:40:905 (3,4) - を1/2スライダー2個にするの試してみてくださし
  5. 00:41:955 (2) - のリバースもいまいちどこをfollowしてるのか分かりづらいから00:41:505 (1,2,3,4) - の音取りも↓のほうが自然だと思う
  6. 00:44:355 (2) - ここもピアノfollowしてるのは分かるけどピアノの音は「てて↑てて↓てて↑てて↓」みたいな(伝われ)2音ずつの分け方しかできないと思うし、リバース使うのは3音で区切りが作れるところに置くべきだと個人的には思う
  7. 00:49:905 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Ctrl+Shift+dで正六角形整えたらどうでしょ

Left's Sparkle
  1. 00:57:555 (2,3) - 00:59:955 (2,3) - 01:07:155 (2,1) - I felt they're cramped to play
とりあえずこれだけ・・・あとで続き書きます xd
数か所マゲさんからの指摘も入ってたり

以上です~GL!
Affirmation
Q

[adv]
00:17:805 (4) - DS error
00:24:105 (3,4) - looks hard for flow.
00:39:555 (5,6) - unstack for cinsistency, you didn't stack at other parts
00:44:355 (5,6) - ^

[Hard]
00:17:205 (3) - almost touching HP bar
00:59:955 (2,3) - avoid overlap since you didn't make overlap well

GL
DeletedUser_7370134

Toyosaki Aki wrote:

modします

Asami's Tragic Love
  1. 00:09:255 (2) - ここ00:09:555 - まで伸ばしたほうが良くない? ここだけメロディ(ピアノ?)が00:09:405 - で終わってるのよね~次の二個は伸びてるけど だからこうしてる
  2. 00:14:655 (4,5) - 耳ガイジだから何をfollowしてるかいまいち分からんけどdrum取ってるとしたら若干DS広すぎる感じする xd ちょいせまくした わからないぐらい微妙だけど
  3. 00:58:305 (1,2) - サビの序盤気持ちstack多いしここに関してはunstackのほうがパターン的には合ってるような スタックさせることで00:58:605 (3) - の頭のスネアを強調させたかいのよね ボーカル伸びててドラム聞こえやすいし
  4. good stuff すぎる それはないです

以上です~GL!
thanks for the mod!
...oh its my 100th post lol
code
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Title:Bokura no Seiza
TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
Creator:joker-
Version:Asami's Insane
Source:星恋*ティンクル
Tags:eroge opening Akitoshi Corinn Yohanes -lolist- Nanashima Asami Left
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226,263,46905,5,2,0:0:0:0:
177,259,47055,5,2,0:0:0:0:
143,279,47205,5,2,0:0:0:0:
131,303,47355,5,2,0:0:0:0:
217,362,47505,6,0,P|262:349|374:326,1,157.499995193482,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,278,47955,1,2,0:0:0:0:
500,278,48105,2,0,P|492:237|481:195,1,78.7499975967408,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,141,48405,2,0,P|319:179|311:217,1,78.7499975967408,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,71,48705,6,0,P|376:27|274:38,1,157.499995193482,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,164,49155,2,0,P|236:153|347:138,1,157.499995193482,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,326,49605,2,0,P|315:317|279:312,1,78.7499975967408,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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223,208,53205,2,0,P|272:217|304:222,1,83.1249977803231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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101,125,53805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
213,0,53955,1,6,0:0:0:0:
101,125,54105,2,0,P|116:186|124:226,1,83.1249977803231,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,245,54330,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,245,54405,2,0,P|181:233|252:220,1,83.1249977803231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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419,155,55155,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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110,168,58455,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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423,63,60705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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124,93,61905,6,0,P|192:35|273:59,2,175,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,271,62655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
33,194,62805,2,0,P|74:184|135:175,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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235,369,63405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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412,267,71355,6,0,P|344:255|229:241,1,175,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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308,123,72405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,216,72555,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,283,72705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,88,72855,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,283,73005,2,0,P|313:238|325:193,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,52,73305,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,104,73455,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,104,73755,6,0,P|113:200|129:293,1,175,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,367,74205,2,0,P|293:315|303:263,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,141,74505,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,211,74655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
381,318,74805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,113,74955,1,4,0:3:0:0:
140,232,75105,6,0,P|183:220|231:210,1,87.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,245,75405,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,38,75555,2,0,P|261:22|187:90,1,175,12|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
190,113,75930,1,0,3:0:0:0:
190,113,76005,2,0,P|200:146|207:169,1,48.1250014686585,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,158,76155,2,0,P|350:182|344:203,1,48.1250014686585,8|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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160,345,77205,2,0,P|153:301|144:259,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,73,77505,2,0,P|143:48|250:123,1,175,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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408,222,78630,1,8,0:0:0:0:
405,213,78705,5,6,0:0:0:0:
145,185,81105,5,10,0:0:0:0:
120,20,81255,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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386,70,81705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,269,82005,5,10,0:0:0:0:
135,104,82155,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,315,82455,5,10,0:0:0:0:
373,150,82605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,350,82905,5,10,0:0:0:0:
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324,220,83505,6,0,P|310:276|304:310,1,78.7499975967408,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,366,83805,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,212,83955,1,8,0:3:0:0:
61,157,84105,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,312,84255,2,0,P|278:301|323:294,1,78.7499975967408,8|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
181,69,84555,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84630,12,8,85755,0:0:0:0:
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209,246,95055,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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Topic Starter
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Toyosaki Aki wrote:

modします

Advanced
  1. 00:37:905 - から00:47:355 - まで同じ曲調のパートって考えたら00:39:555 (5,6) - 00:41:955 (5,6) - 00:44:355 (5,6) - 00:46:755 (5,6) - は音一緒だしスタックさせるか離すか統一してみてはどうかなっておもいました マジで?俺の耳が悪いから間違ってるかもしれんけど、00:39:555 (5,6) - と 00:44:355 (5,6) -が同じ音で、 00:41:955 (5,6) -と 00:46:755 (5,6) -がそれぞれ対応してるように聞こえたから同じように対応させてるんだけど、へんかな…ほかの人に言われたら変えるわ
  2. 00:40:005 (7) - 00:42:405 (7) - 00:44:805 (7) - 00:47:205 (7) - whistle消すか付けるかで揃えたほうが聞いた感じ良さそう これも理由は上と同じなんだが。。。うーんたしかに。。。うーん
  3. 00:53:955 (5) - ここから1/1にして00:54:705 - を叩きたい 百里ある
  4. 00:58:755 (5,6,7) - 「ひとみの~」に合わせるならこっちの音取りのほうが合ってると思いまつ ボーカルに合わせる必要ないかなーって、個人的な好みで申し訳ない
  5. 01:11:205 - add clap
  6. 01:03:855 (7) - この後の間が謎だからこれ(↓)とかどう? なんだここ!?これはひどいですね…これはひどい…直しました
  7. 01:04:605 (1) - add finish え?シンバルなってる?なってないと思うので、keep
  8. 01:17:955 (6,7,1) - ここピアンノ目立ってるし01:17:955 - から1/1スライダーにするのを試してみてほしい Advという難易度のこと考えて、大きいピアンノの音ではないからやりやすさ優先して単純にしてます。そこにスライダーtickあるから ゆ る し て

Hard
  1. 00:14:805 (4,1) - 多分この3/4と1/2のスライダーに角度がないせい(?)で少し叩きにくさを感じた ここだけ1/4なのは確かに変だね、変えた。けど音取りは同じにしてないです
    曲調は若干違うけど鳴ってるドラムは殆ど同じだから00:11:505 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - と同じ音取りで
    みたいにするとbetterかと
    それか00:37:605 (5,1) - みたいに3/4の後を余裕のある1/1スライダーにすれば読みやすい音取りになると思う
  2. 00:54:405 (4,5,1) - Ctrl+J 試してみてほしい 3/4からの角度がつく分多分こっちのほうが叩きやすいです たぶんそん時の俺はoverlapを避けたいがためにそうしなかったけど、やっぱ1/4は変だし音取りかえたそれで1の頭にスタックするように変えた
  3. 00:57:555 (2,3,4) - と01:07:155 (2,3,4) - は同じ音取りだしconsistencyって意味で00:58:755 (2,3,4,5) - と01:08:355 (2,3,4) - も揃えたらどうかな んー4つ全部そろえるのは単調すぎてへんかなーって思うから、それぞれ対応するパートはそろえた
  4. 01:34:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - しょーもないことかもしれんけど01:34:305 (1,4) - で後ろで鳴ってるシンセ(?)の音が変わってるから単発とスライダー入れ替えてみては それに01:35:355 (6) - はシンバルなってるしclickableにしたくない? しょーもなくない、ここ適当すぎるね、変えた

Extra
  1. 00:04:605 (2) - この後の間が気になる木 ここのパートはほんとにシンプルにしたいってのがあってブレイク多めに入れてます。
    かといってずっと同じパターンを繰り返すのは単調に感じるかもしれないしピアノ鳴ってるところをスライダーの頭にして
    みたいなスタックにしてみるとかどうかな~
  2. 00:15:855 (4,1) - ここ曲調が変わってるのは明らかだけど配置は繋がっててちょっと違和感感じた 直すとなったら00:16:305 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - をremapしなきゃいけないからお任せします! 配置がつながっているとは…?remapめんどくさ~いので保留!
  3. 00:37:605 (2,1) - スライダーとはいえちょっと遠くない? ここいい配置が思い浮かばないんだよね~、とりあえず変えた
  4. 00:41:205 - ここvocalデカいしclickableにしたいから00:40:905 (3,4) - を1/2スライダー2個にするの試してみてくださし 前のパートと対応させて音取り同じにしてるからほりゅー
  5. 00:41:955 (2) - のリバースもいまいちどこをfollowしてるのか分かりづらいから00:41:505 (1,2,3,4) - の音取りも↓のほうが自然だと思う 上と理由は同じ~だけどたしかにそれはわかる
  6. 00:44:355 (2) - ここもピアノfollowしてるのは分かるけどピアノの音は「てて↑てて↓てて↑てて↓」みたいな(伝われ)2音ずつの分け方しかできないと思うし、リバース使うのは3音で区切りが作れるところに置くべきだと個人的には思う むむ…そういうものなのか…うーん時間あるとき前向きに検討してこの辺りremapするかも
  7. 00:49:905 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Ctrl+Shift+dで正六角形整えたらどうでしょ 音取りおかしいしかえたのだ~

数か所マゲさんからの指摘も入ってたり[/strike]
以上です~GL!
全体的にExが汚すぎてremapしたいけど時間ないし消そうかどうか迷うところ、次のmod or BNからあまりにも問題あるようなら消すつもりです。
今後のmappingの参考になった!ありがとう!


Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[adv]
00:17:805 (4) - DS error okay
00:24:105 (3,4) - looks hard for flow. i improved it
00:39:555 (5,6) - unstack for cinsistency, you didn't stack at other parts Hmm... it's corresponding with 00:44:355 (5,6) - in my thought
00:44:355 (5,6) - ^

[Hard]
00:17:205 (3) - almost touching HP bar it's no problem imo
00:59:955 (2,3) - avoid overlap since you didn't make overlap well i see, applied

GL
thanks :3
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