Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General

1. Not sure in the tags, i think you should remove Evil_Twilight, and add "zts" and "visual novel"...don't sure yea added zts to the tag. :3
2. 02:09:913 - 02:11:627 - add kiai there! rrr no.

Normal

1. 00:11:627 (1) - remove nc Done
2. 00:27:056 (1) -little confusing, stuck it with (5) Done
3. 00:40:770 - 100% volume -_- my ears, do it quiet, may be 60% Done
4. 00:45:484 (1) - too loud, yeah, same 60% Done
   and another one, try this (sounds good i think):
   1) 00:45:485 - green section (soft) delete clap there and add whistle
   2) 00:45:913 - green section (normal) Done
   3) whistle on the ALL slider, and in the end of it
5. 01:06:485 - remove whistle Done
6. 01:15:056 - LOUUUD -20%
7. 01:29:199 - clap must be there Done
8. 01:31:770 (4) - nc Done
9. 01:55:342 (5) - not a good thing in normal, try this:
   
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   Done
10. 03:18:485 - missed notes there, add circles on the small white ticks ??? There's already a note here o.o

Insane

1. try not to use 100% volume (it makes my ears cry)
2. 01:01:342 (1) - soft finish there Done
3. 01:30:484 (1) - nc Done

Good luck :3

NatsumeRin wrote:

1 year old first map... orz.

not much to say, good luck.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哇泡了 加油

nold_1702 wrote:

咁岩記返起呢張map我係好耐之前(我好新手戈時) 係見個=- -

Makar8000 wrote:

You are missing a reversearrow. You must use a reverse arrow even if its from the template skin in order to skin the complete hitcircle set.

Oh, and by the way, there is a New Combo bug on this note 02:09:913 (1) in the normal, so please manually add the new combo there.

Goodluck with this map~ if you want I can also mod it, just PM me.

Aleks719 wrote:

2 things as Makar8000 said. Fixed

+

General
Audio lead-in is unnecessary, set it 0 in all diffs. Done
Don't use sections on the same time please :

Set offset 4470 in all diffs for avoiding it I change the offset to -372, sounds better

SB
Your SB code looks so messy, i fixed it for you, use my file please and full submit after it of course Thanks a lot~~
also, your sb works for all diffs. make it for all except taiko? mmm do you mean remove the SB in taiko diff? anyway Done

Insane
01:55:556 (9,1) - i think object, which starts from 1/8 yellow tick is kinda odd, btw there are bass sound inside sliderbody (9 )on the blue tick. Try this?

03:03:270 - sounds empty Done
03:04:127 - ^ Done

Evil's Hard
01:34:770 (5) - hidden 2nd reverse

Normal
01:03:056 (5) - add nc (too long combo) Done
01:06:484 (4) - clap to the end Done
01:07:770 (6) - clap instead of whistleDone
01:08:199 (7) - remove clapDone
01:06:484 (4) - add ncDone
01:18:484 (1) - slider touches border of the window, replace it up 2 grids for this. :3

02:29:199 - better map this break~ No :3

Leorda wrote:

Hiii

[Normal]
* Using 0,5x section will confuse beginners who play this about slider speed. You should avoid that To increase the readability for new players,I use 1.0x from 00:20:199 (1) -

03:08:628 (3) - Too much repeating slider can makes confusing for beginners about when the slider is end Fixed
03:15:485 (5) - ^Fixed


[Wmf's Taiko]
* The kiai time should end at 03:06:485Fixed for wmf


[Insane]
01:15:056 (1) - The tail slider is touch the HP BarFixed
01:18:913 (2) - ^Fixed
01:22:663 (3,4) - This object is almost offscreenFixed
01:26:842 (4) - This object is touch the HP BarFixed


Once you done, forum PM me

Flask wrote:

Regou加油!

Loctav wrote:

Funfact: I had the map for the TWC already and I also made a taiko BG for this. But somehow wmf never handed it in, uh? So the taiko diff here doesnt have the BG it supposed to have :'D

iMercurial wrote:

@Natsume, this is not the place to say that shit.

If you don't like this map, then don't comment anything or don't play it.

Natsume just edited his post.

Anyway, Good Job Regou ♥

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