m4m as requested, sorry i'm late-
[Take Control!]
[Take Control!]
- 00:17:404 - 00:18:859 - 00:20:313 - etc. there's a very audible synth note that you could include. imo 00:15:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 00:21:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - feel out of place due to the sudden increases in note density as a result of ignoring these
- 00:25:859 (1,2) - feels really undermapped here given everything that came before it for some reason, maybe it's just me. maybe instead of circles you can try 3/4 sliders like 00:08:404 (1,2) -
- 00:28:313 (1) - 00:31:222 (1) - there's no beat in the music here; stream starts on the white tick after it
- 00:33:404 (1) - i don't see the point in this nc
- 00:36:768 (5) - i think this should be a 1/2 slider instead; you skipped over a really audible sound on 00:36:950 -
- 00:38:586 (3) - maybe nc this to signify that it's a slow slider
- 00:40:586 (2,6) - something something blanket
- 00:50:041 (1,2,3) - maybe you can try a back-and-forth motion to emphasize the claps? just an idea-
- 01:12:132 - 01:12:313 - 02:21:950 - 02:22:132 - some synth sounds you could use to make a stream. you seemed to like to do this a lot near the beginning before vocals, and they're ignored now :<
- 01:30:950 (1) - 02:46:586 (1) - 02:57:495 (1) - 02:58:222 (1) - 04:16:041 (1) - 04:16:768 (1) - 04:27:677 (1) - 04:28:404 (1) - can you please make the ncs here consistent? seeing them be different from each other triggers me lol. i recommend going with the (1,2,3,4) pattern but it's your call
- 01:53:586 - another pretty audible sound. maybe make 01:53:495 (2) - a 1/4 slider so you keep the jump?
- 02:27:586 (5) - i don't really hear a sound here, whereas there are sounds on 02:27:768 - and 02:27:950 - . gotta wonder where your note priority is going at this point :/
- 04:34:950 (1,1,1) - this is cool
- 04:39:313 (2,3,4,5,6) - yeah there's no stream here in the music
- 04:45:040 (3) - 04:51:222 (5) - no beat here in the music