Because I am bad at modding Extras, here I go
[General]
Well, I'll stop here for now since I am really tired right now and making me mod more will make me say more nonsense. Just call me for a IRC mod sometime else
GL!
[General]
- This is stupid, I know but your BG size is 1919x1200 instead of the recommended 1920x1200: I'd recommend you get someone to just edit that since it is unrankable if I am not mistaken
- 00:13:132 (3,3) - Maybe curve these more inwards to show that they are different but keeping the symmetry
- 00:27:313 (1) - I feel like this should have more edgy flow leading from 00:27:132 (4) - since the distance is not emphasizing this enough imo (Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6544344)
- 00:28:768 (1) - Should be consistent with 00:27:313 (1,2) - imo since nothing really makes them different and you ignore a sound on 00:28:950 - due to the extended slider
- 00:30:132 (7) - There is no beat on this tick, just a echo of the previous sound, so I wouldn't want to place a beat here since it doesn't make it feel much different without it. Also, i don't like how you make 00:29:768 (5,6) - and 00:30:132 (7,1) - the same by using the same pattern since the two patterns have different beats on them
- 00:33:494 (2) - NC since you NCd 00:34:222 (1) - ?
- 00:33:132 (1,5) - 00:28:041 (5) - 00:30:950 (5) - 00:34:586 (1) - I mean, this definitely was intentional due to the vocals but I really don't like how it ignores the beats on the red ticks and does not emphasize the sliderends even though the streams have the same sounds but are clickable. I'd just shorten the sliders to the red ticks and add a hitcircle where the slider end was. The vocals are not really held and can just be emphasized as well with 1/2 sliders
- 00:41:768 (9,1) - This NC should be at least visible to emphasize it correctly, because if you leave it stacked, people won't really notice this is NCed by itself and it loses importance
- 01:00:404 (2) - I'd not make it the same shape as 01:00:041 (1) - since the two don't have much similarities in the music (imo 01:00:404 (2) - is even a bit stronger). So you could maybe curve it in some way, it would also look more interesting like that
- 01:03:677 (1,2,3,4) - I can see that this was intentional shaped but making the two "a"s and "b"s shaped different and the "ab" pair shaped the same seems weird to me. For example, you could make 01:04:041 (2,4) - edgy and 01:03:677 (1,3) - curvy
- 01:06:950 (1,2) - Ok, just a random suggestion because I think it represents the vocals more: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6544465
- 01:13:040 (5) - Even if the ranked version might have a note here, I think this note can be ignored and like that, this 01:13:131 (6) - can be more emphasized
- 01:29:859 (1,2,3) - Should have more emphasis than 01:28:041 (1,2,1,2) - imo since the pattern is stronger
- 01:33:041 (3) - I don't hear the 1/4 here really. I mean, this does get repeated a lot in the map, but I don't see a reason to overmap for emphasis here since the sounds aren't too strong for that. Also a point would be to ask why this isn't consistent with 01:44:404 (1,2) - . They do have similar placement in music so they should be similar. Same goes for 01:26:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - with the 1/2 sliders although the 1/4 hitcircle 01:27:222 (3) - is ok
- 01:47:313 (1) - 01:48:768 (1) - This is the strongest note in the whole pattern, so it should be emphasized most. A DS of at least 2.45 should be better here though since you have stuff like 01:37:313 (2) - with DS x 3 which I feel like isn't too much more stronger than 01:47:313 (1) -
- 01:50:949 (1,2,3) - I do agree with these not having linear flow like in the ranked map but having it edgy shouldn't be here either imo since the notes are all emphasized like that including 01:51:132 (2) - which is emphasized too much imo. Maybe something like this could work http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6544616
- 01:57:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - While making this have more 1/4 than 00:41:859 (1,2,3,4) - is fine but these being inconsistent isn't to me, you make many different things clickable which could just be represented fine through a slider end
- 02:28:222 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream makes this vocal less emphasized which I don't find good
Well, I'll stop here for now since I am really tired right now and making me mod more will make me say more nonsense. Just call me for a IRC mod sometime else
GL!