XeoStyle wrote:

Hello jkd, it's zerostyl

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| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | (7K)

Beginner!

00:15:467 (15467|6) - snap problem ? if not, why 00:20:599 (20599|1) - is not the same ? fuck thanks

solid beginner diff

Another! is fine

gonna sleep brb for modding the rest (or not but I hope yes)

eyes wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
Picnic!
00:03:783 (3783|4,3783|5) - maybe move it to 3|4 columns for emphasizing the sound nah I don't like the idea of jack
00:05:125 - just suggestion ^
00:09:862 - 00:10:178 - you can try something like 1.8x>0.2x>1.7x>0.3x>1.6x>0.4x for emphasizing the sound I emphasized them equally
00:12:230 (12230|2,12230|4,12309|6,12309|0,12309|3,12388|2,12388|1,12388|4,12388|5) - emphasize this sound somehow edited it but didn't emphasize it
00:36:230 (36230|1,36309|1,36388|2) - swap columns
01:22:505 - 01:22:821 - good moment for SVs i disagree -- this part is particularly intense since there's 1/8 burst, so putting SV makes it too hard and unreadable
01:55:269 - add a note to 3rd column kinda shuffled

eyes wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
Kawawa's Ex7ra!
00:03:783 (3783|3,3783|5,4020|3,4020|5) - different sounds
00:06:704 (6704|1,6704|3,6862|3,6862|1) - 00:07:967 (7967|1,7967|3,8125|3,8125|1) - ^
I really don't get it what you mean. actually there's no change to me.

00:11:125 (11125|0,11125|6) - i think these should be simple notes
It's okay

00:31:178 (31178|3,31336|3,31494|3,31651|3,31809|3,31967|3,32125|3) - 0_0 00:31:809 (31809|3,31809|2,31967|3,31967|2) - move these to 1|2 columns Arranged something. Thanks!

00:33:546 (33546|5,33546|6,33546|1) - end at 00:33:704 Nice point!

00:43:809 (43809|4) - move to 7th column and make it double will keep

00:54:073 - no burst here? consider
01:02:283 - note keeping by SV sections.
01:04:494 - add lns (suggestion) for break time.
01:38:453 (98453|6,98611|5,98926|5,98926|6) - different pitch I made it jack on drum part
01:43:347 - add lns (suggestion) for break time.

Soul Evans wrote:

This song/video is waaaay too cute OMG >w< AYYYYYYYY
Soul's Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7

General

^ hey wait isn't this mine ^

1. BPM: Okay
2. Offset: Okay
3. AiMod: Okay
4. Tags: Maybe add ''cute'' and ''8bit'' to tags, it's a cute song and 8bit or maybe chiptune would work instead I'll add 8bit and chiptune huehue
5. BG: Okay
6. Kiai: Okay
7. Metadata: Okay
8. Folder’s problem: None
9. Hitsound: Okay
10. Timing: Okay
11. Other: I have an idea about the diff naming for the last diff, picnic! seems too bland and obvious for a diff name while it does work but i have some suggestions to add to it to spice it up:
    super summer day
    fantastic fun time
    Strawberry
    and you can add it with picnic and it would seem less bland
    Hmm I'll stick with the current one for now
    I'll come up with different names maybe
    [Picnic!]
12. 00:20:915 (20915|6) - idk dude maybe it would be better if you moved it to column 5 what's wrong about it? :^)
13. 00:21:862 (21862|5,22020|6) - i prefer if you reversed this, it would give a better flow for 00:21:704 - and give a better opening for 00:22:178 (22178|4,22257|4) - this part 00:21:704 (21704|5,21783|4,21862|5,22020|6) - was following the melody, so yeah i'll stick with current one
14. 00:22:809 - I find it better that you either do it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7488152 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7488156 The sound i'm hearing for the ''dudududu'' could be better interpreted as a slamming chord rather than a loose wonky one heyy first one looks pretty nice
15. 00:23:678 (23678|5) - Move to 4 and 00:23:757 (23757|5) - to 7 while 00:23:678 (23678|6) - to 6, i think this is a consistent pattern for the later section in what you used and gives a better intro for the streams i think changed it a little bit
16. 00:53:757 - Idk man as much as i can combo everything decently in that map, i just couldn't combo this for some reason. the patterns are way to harsh compared to everything else, and i know it's meant to be a roll but for the sake of keeping the difficulty spike consistent i'd recommend https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7488188
    not quite sure if that'll make it any easier tho
    and I think current one is pretty decent to hit and looks nice too
    it's 6.5* :^)
17. 01:10:967 (70967|3) - Moving this to 4 would not make that note get in the way of the slow jam jack, it's been trouble hitting those hmm. is it that hard? I was intending the pitch relevancy on 01:10:809 (70809|2,70967|4,71125|1,71283|3,71441|0,71757|2) - so i'm not sure about changing the current pattern
18. 01:21:716 (81716|4,81874|4,81953|5,82032|4) - i'm not sure this pattern suits, maybe you could change it moved 01:21:716 (81716|4) - to 7. that looks ok right?
19. 01:26:532 (86532|2,86690|2,86847|2,87005|2) - Dude, i suggest changing it LOL I'm not sure how to make this part clearner than this
    I've discussed with Kawawa so long since the original one looked so ugly
    this is the best result we got
    plz suggest how to fix this shit cuz i know this part's shit
20. 01:58:979 (118979|2,119058|4,119058|2,119137|1,119137|3,119216|2,119295|1,119374|2,119453|3,119453|0,119532|1,119532|4) - you know when you have a mimi jack at the start of that stream people would just mess up on it, so i suggest changing it fixed boiii
    

I think that's all i have to say about this diff, cute map >.<

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

Im liking what i see, +3 stars

Reba wrote:

Just a quick revision

[Picnic!]
00:00:862 (862|5) - 두구두구할때 00:00:230 (230|5,309|4,546|1,625|2) - 얘네들의 의도를 이어서 이렇게 재배치 한다면 일관성이 더 유지되고 더 좋다 개인적으로 :: http://puu.sh/vTjfa/a28600b186.jpg 올ㅋ

00:12:073 (12073|4,12073|2,12151|5,12151|1) - 뭔가 양쪽으로 얘네들을 스왚해주면 칠때 더 편하고 좋다, 지금의 상태에선 개인적으로 손이 잘 안간다. 시로 (뭔가 애매한 연타가 생기는 느낌)

00:17:915 (17915|5,17915|1) - 칼럼 1하고 7로 벌려주는건 어때. 전과 같이 playability 를 참고해서 지적하는것이다. 00:17:757 (17757|1,17915|1,17994|2,18073|1) - 00:17:757 (17757|5,17915|5,17994|4,18073|5) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다.

00:28:178 (28178|2) - move to 1 :v 뭔가 칠때 지금 상태로는 내가 로리이고 감금되어있는 느낌을 받는다. 이건 벌려줘야 시원하다 00:27:862 (27862|2,28020|2,28099|1,28178|2) - 00:27:862 (27862|5,28020|5,28099|4,28178|5) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다.

00:31:336 ~ 00:32:757 - 패턴은 노래에 꽤 알맞지만 개인적으로 치기가 너무 불편한 배치다, 참신한 패턴이라면 지적을 안하겠지만 내 개인적인 생각으로는 이건 참신한 패턴이 아니라 불편한 패턴이라고 생각한다, 이렇게 배치를하면 의도를 살짝 유지함과 동시에 더 좋은 패턴이라고 생각한다 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8113862 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8113974 00:31:651 (31651|2,31730|3,31809|2,31888|3,31967|2) - 00:31:651 (31651|5,31730|4,31809|5,31888|4,31967|5) - 00:32:283 (32283|1,32362|2,32441|1,32520|2,32599|1) - 00:32:283 (32283|4,32362|3,32441|4,32520|3,32599|4) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다. (꽤 참신하다 생각했는데 히잉 ㅠ)

00:36:230 (36230|3) - 너무 쪼여있다, 좀 벌려주자 :: http://puu.sh/vTln9/251cffd6de.jpg 하응 너무 쪼엿

01:08:599 (68599|4) - 난 이거 좀 꼬였다, 그리고 뒤에도 1칼럼에 노트가 없어서 거미줄 생기겠다. 나를위해 1칼럼으로 옮겨주라 owo 01:08:125 (68125|4,68204|2,68283|4,68441|4,68520|2,68599|4,68757|3,68915|2) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다.

01:12:546 (72546|0,72625|1) - 이건 확실히 1칼럼 반복이 왼쪽에 있는데 이것까지 왼쪽에 있으면 왼쪽손에 부담이 크다. 오른쪽으로 이런식으로 움직이면 더 개선될거같다 :: http://puu.sh/vTlCJ/f80d5c3a63.jpg 01:12:073 (72073|6,72230|4,72388|4,72546|0,72625|1,72704|4,72862|0,73020|4) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다. (만약 고친다면 01:12:625 (72625|1) - 를 4로 옮기는 방법이 있겠지만 같은 거미줄이 생기고 스페이스바에 있어서 오히려 불편할듯)

01:13:494 - 이런곳에서 232 와 같은 패턴은 솔직히 손이 너무 쉽게 꼬이고 불편하다. 스샷처럼 수정하는건 어떨까? :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8114013 01:13:336 (73336|1,73494|1,73573|2,73651|1,73809|0,73967|3,74125|2,74283|1,74441|2) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다.

01:26:769 (86769|0,86769|1,86926|1,86926|0) - 왼쪽손에게 부담이 심한거같다. 이렇게 한다면 개인적으로 낫다고 생각한다 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8114031 오 굳, 조금 대칭되게 바꿨다

01:34:347 (94347|1) - move to 1? :v 01:34:190 (94190|1,94347|1,94426|2,94505|1) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다.

02:08:926 (128926|5,128926|3,128926|1,129005|4,129005|2) - 이건 00:12:073 - 이거의 모딩을 적용했다면 해라 뀨

Ridho 2307 wrote:

hello jakads~

M4M from this queue t/560468


another

00:01:651 (1651|0) - to 00:05:125 (5125|0) - https://puu.sh/whVRb/2d5bc9912c.jpg for a big effect becomes too hard imo
01:22:505 (82505|4) - change this LN to 1/8 beats oh no this is another diff
01:22:505 (82505|4,83137|1,83769|1,84400|5,85032|5) - add one note again
01:32:611 (92611|2) - change this LN to 1/8 beats same
01:37:347 (97347|1) - ^ same

[/box]


overall this mapset was cool.. i love it

jakads wrote:

Ridho 2307 wrote:

hello jakads~

M4M from this queue t/560468


another

00:01:651 (1651|0) - to 00:05:125 (5125|0) - https://puu.sh/whVRb/2d5bc9912c.jpg for a big effect becomes too hard imo
01:22:505 (82505|4) - change this LN to 1/8 beats oh no this is another diff
01:22:505 (82505|4,83137|1,83769|1,84400|5,85032|5) - add one note again
01:32:611 (92611|2) - change this LN to 1/8 beats same
01:37:347 (97347|1) - ^ same

[/box]


overall this mapset was cool.. i love it

Wonki says he won't change anything
thanks for modding tho

Sr_Korah wrote:

Picnic

1) Move this one 01:07:336 (67336|4) here 01:07:336 (67336|2) - feels better. 01:07:178 (67178|2,67257|3,67336|4,67494|5,67651|6) - these are following the main melody
2) Move this one 01:26:769 (86769|4) to column 3, add this note 01:27:005 (87005|6), move this 01:27:084 (87084|6) to column 5, move this one 01:27:242 (87242|6) here 01:27:163 (87163|6), move this one 01:27:400 (87400|6) to column , move this note 01:27:795 (87795|2) to column 4.
It will be like this hoyl too many notes on the middle part there
not sure about that
3) 01:26:137 (86137|4,86137|0,86216|1,86295|4,86295|6,86295|2,86295|5,86374|3,86453|4,86453|0,86532|5) That stair is weird. what's weird about it?
I realized that making the details for suggestion number 2 was pointless after taking the photo.

Except for the mods I did; Picnic! is already good to go, same for Kawawa's Ex7ra and your Another.

Niks wrote:

when rank

Critical_Star wrote:

very very old request


Lude's Normal!
00:01:020 (1020|4,1178|2) - would prefer a normal note here, unlike 00:00:073 (73|2,388|4,704|2) - which have a consistent drum roll
00:13:651 - could give another note here as well
00:21:230 (21230|1) - move to 3?
00:24:546 - i suggest double at 00:24:704 - rather than 00:24:546 - (melody + kick) Fixed differently, according to the pattern
00:29:599 (29599|4,29757|5) - same idea like above ^ kinda similiar part as well
00:28:020 (28020|2,28099|3,28178|4,28178|0) - move to the right by 2 seems nice
00:45:151 (45151|1) - i see your intention on this part till 00:51:546 - but i find if you later these melody with 1/2 stream here would be better for normal diff. example > http://puu.sh/yFytd/5a78bc0ec8.png Gonna keep it as it is, 1/2 is too boring

Critical_Star wrote:

very very old request

Wonki's Hyper!
00:05:125 - 00:05:441 - 00:05:757 - add a note to emphasizes the drum on every 1/1? // I think it is enough to express itself only with LN.
00:12:073 - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyBr/fe102c11b3.png // Add to 1 3 4
00:12:862 (12862|3,13020|1,13178|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyD2/570ab21290.png // i focus on pressing 'spacebar' twice, so i think its ok now.
00:13:651 - u can add another note at 6 to represent the same crash like 00:13:494 (13494|6,13494|5) - // i put 2 notes on splashing piano sound and left part put notes following melody after.
00:22:967 (22967|5,22967|6,23125|1,23125|0,23283|3,23283|2,23441|4,23441|5) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyEJ/7fa703ef0e.png // personally, I think it's better now.
00:53:125 (53125|2,53125|0,53204|6,53204|4,53283|0,53283|2,53362|6,53362|4,53441|3,53441|2,53441|1,53520|4,53520|5,53599|1,53599|2,53678|5,53678|4) - please do consider to reduce the pattern density here with the normal diff gap > http://puu.sh/yFyIr/9a4cb6a429.png // Changed
01:13:573 (73573|5) - move to 5 seems much comfortable to hit // OK
01:14:599 (74599|2,74678|4,74757|2,74836|4,74915|2,74998|4,75081|2,75165|4,75249|2,75337|4,75425|2,75513|4,75601|2,75694|4,75788|2,75882|4,75977|6,76077|2,76177|6,76277|2,76377|6,76484|2,76591|6,76698|2) - i know is not wrong to do so but i am concern with the pattern density with the normal diff, perhaps try another way round rather a trill pattern // I think so too. this needs change
01:56:926 (116926|0,116926|2,117005|6,117084|0,117084|2,117163|5,117242|4,117242|2,117321|0,117400|2,117400|4,117479|1,117558|4,117558|6,117637|2,117716|6,117716|4,117795|3) - would suggest to reduce the 1/4 layering here, suggest only double on each 1/2 // I choose double on each 1/2

rest diff will be checked again after these mod

Thanks for mod

Litharrale wrote:

this lovely set

Fresh Chicken wrote:

and now I'm here to push this rank

[General]
문제점 없음

[Picnic!]
00:01:020 - ~ 00:01:178 - 앞에 패턴을 봤을 때 양쪽 대칭으로 하는게 낫지 않을까
00:20:125 (20125|4,20283|4) - 갑자기 잭이 있는데? 부드럽게 뒤에 노트를 7로 옮기든지 해봐
00:31:651 (31651|2,31651|5,31730|4,31730|3,31809|5,31809|2,31888|4,31888|3,31967|5,31967|2) - 00:32:283 (32283|4,32283|1,32362|3,32362|2,32441|1,32441|4,32520|2,32520|3,32599|4,32599|1) - 치기 까다롭지 않아? 일부러 그렇게 한거야
괜찮을듯
00:43:020 - ~ 00:43:336 - 여기 연타 애매하다 손이 잘 안가
00:58:178 (58178|4,58178|3,58336|1,58494|3,58494|2,58651|0,58809|5,58809|3) - 이거 순차적으로 복붙해서 왼쪽으로 가게 만들면 괜찮을듯
01:00:704 - ~ 01:01:809 - 이부분 잭이 너무 불규칙적이야 좀 옮기는게 낫겠어
01:38:769 (98769|3) - 01:40:190 (100190|2) - 01:41:374 (101374|4) - 01:42:242 (102242|2) - 01:42:874 (102874|5) - 고스트노트? ㄴㄴ
베이스음 소리 있어

[Kawawa's Ex7ra!]
잡을 거리를 찾지 못했습니다

[Another!]
00:38:915 (38915|3,39073|3,39230|3) - 여기 스페 연타 치기가 좀 애매해 나는 괜찮은거같아
01:07:020 - ~ 01:14:599 - 여기 음정 정확하게 따라간건 좋은데 패턴을 좀 예쁘게 바꾸는 게 좋을듯

[Wonki's Hyper!]
00:06:388 - 여기 갑작스럽게 연타가 나오는데 하드치고는 너무 어렵지 않나?
00:31:336 - 여기 드럼소리가 아니니깐 2놋이 아니라 1놋으로 하는게 맞을 것 같아
01:22:821 - 3놋을 쓰는게 더 적절해보여 ㄴㄴ 여기 2놋이 컨셉
01:32:926 - ^ ^
01:51:953 - 01:52:111 - 01:52:269 - 01:52:426 - 노트 빠졌다 여기 소리 안들리는데?

[Lude's Normal!]
00:15:073 - 여기 노트 빠지지 않았어?
00:25:178 - ^
00:30:230 - ^
01:16:806 - ~ 01:17:517 - 2놋은 좀 많지 않아? 1놋으로도 충분히 강조될듯 저긴 더 강조가 필요한 것 같아

[Beginner!]
문제 없다

ㄱ

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Fuck you