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Umeboshi Chazuke - Panic! Pop'n! Picnic! [OsuMania]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018년 1월 22일 월요일 at 오전 1:21:10

Artist: Umeboshi Chazuke
Title: Panic! Pop'n! Picnic!
Source: BMS
Tags: Lude Kawawa Wonki BOFU2016 - Legendary Again - ああ…翡翠茶漬け…　～もっと　おかわり！～ Chipstyle Hi-Pop むらたむうた 8bit Chiptune
BPM: 190
Filesize: 19133kb
Play Time: 02:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another! - 7Key (4.75 stars, 2047 notes)
  2. Beginner! - 7Key (1.42 stars, 441 notes)
  3. Kawawa's Ex7ra! - 7Key (5.58 stars, 2463 notes)
  4. Lude's Normal! - 7Key (2.24 stars, 938 notes)
  5. Picnic! - 7Key (6.52 stars, 2700 notes)
  6. Wonki's Hyper! - 7Key (3.29 stars, 1243 notes)
Download: Umeboshi Chazuke - Panic! Pop'n! Picnic!
Download: Umeboshi Chazuke - Panic! Pop'n! Picnic! (no video)
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かわいいと
かわいいが
かわいいしてると
クッソかわいい
★ちゃづけ★

Original BGA BOFU2016 Link
Modders!
  1. Bubbler!
  2. Remuring!
  3. Minseok!
  4. Kaythen!
  5. Godssi!
  6. Lulu!
  7. Kawawa!
  8. Allezard!
  9. pwhk!
  10. Davin Fortune!
  11. Reba!
  12. Lude!
  13. zerostyl!
  14. eyes!
  15. Soul Evans!
  16. Reba! (2)
  17. Ridho 2307!
  18. Mordu!
KudoShooters!
  1. CrumpetFiddler! ★★★
  2. My Angel RangE! ★★
  3. Remuring! ★
  4. Lulu! ★
  5. Kawawa! ★
  6. Ramuchi! ★
  7. Ilham! ★
  8. REUSE-ABLE! ★
  9. Chicken! ★
Last edited by DeletedUser_259972 , edited 37 times in total.
Bubbler
34 posts
Joined November 2014
Bubbler
[Lude's Normal]
00:17:599 (17599|2) - 이 음에는 노트가 있는데
00:20:125 - 여기랑 00:25:178 - 여기랑 00:27:704 - 여기랑 00:30:230 - 여기는 같은 음인데 노트가 없으니까 왠지 허전함
의도라면 앞쪽 노트를 빼고 아니라면 나머지 자리에도 노트하나씩 채워주면 좋을듯

00:31:178 (31178|1) - 이 노트는 어떤음을 표현하려고 한건지 잘 모르겠네여

01:02:125 - 개인취향이긴 한데 롱놋들을 멜로디 따라서 내려가는 방향으로 배치했으면 좋겠음

[Wonki's Hyper]
00:32:283 (32283|0,32362|1,32441|2,32520|3,32520|5) -
얘네들을 딱 1/4스냅만큼 위로 올려야 될듯

00:59:046 (59046|5,59046|4,59125|4,59125|5) -
더 강한 비트에서도 따닥이는 안썼는데 약간 무리배치가 아닐지?

02:02:769 - 여기 이빨빠진건 의도인가여

[Another]
패스
01:22:190 (82190|0,82190|2,82190|1,82505|2,82505|0) -
01:32:611 (92611|2,92611|0,92611|1,92926|0) -
왼손상태가 이상해서 그런진 몰라도 2번롱놋 양쪽에 노트붙어있는거 처리가 잘 안되는거같음
챌린지함을 추구한다면 냅둬도 되고 아니라면 롱놋을 1이나 3으로 옮기면 치기 편해질듯
오른손에도 6롱놋 시작점 끝점에 57노트 붙어있는게 있는데 그것도 같이 고려해보세여

[Kawawa's Ex7ra]
00:21:073 (21073|5,21230|4,21388|3) - 길이를 1/2로 늘리면 좋을듯

01:12:073 (72073|2) - 이건 1/4길이로

[Picnic]
페스
개인적으로 막난은 치기쉬운거보단 어렵게 짜여져있는걸 좋아해서 패턴모딩해달라고 해도 할말이 없음
굳이 태클을 걸자면 01:01:967 - 여기서 01:04:494 - 여기까지 치는데 마지막에 정체불명의 미스가 난다는거랑 (한두번 이어보긴 했음)
02:03:558 (123558|6,123558|4,123558|5,123716|5,123716|6) - 여기서 손꼬여서 미스나는거 정도?인데 연습하면 충분히 칠듯
Wonki
931 posts
Joined February 2016
Wonki

Bubbler wrote:

[Wonki's Hyper]
00:32:283 (32283|0,32362|1,32441|2,32520|3,32520|5) -
얘네들을 딱 1/4스냅만큼 위로 올려야 될듯 뭐지 만들다가 잘못만진듯 ㄳ요

00:59:046 (59046|5,59046|4,59125|4,59125|5) -
더 강한 비트에서도 따닥이는 안썼는데 약간 무리배치가 아닐지? 저도 쳐봤을때 그러더라구요 바꿨어요

02:02:769 - 여기 이빨빠진건 의도인가여 히익
DeletedUser_259972
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DeletedUser_259972
말하신건 대부분 다 수정했오
Lude
648 posts
Joined August 2015
Lude
[Lude's Normal]
00:17:599 (17599|2) - 이 음에는 노트가 있는데
00:20:125 - 여기랑 00:25:178 - 여기랑 00:27:704 - 여기랑 00:30:230 - 여기는 같은 음인데 노트가 없으니까 왠지 허전함
의도라면 앞쪽 노트를 빼고 아니라면 나머지 자리에도 노트하나씩 채워주면 좋을듯 00:25:178 - 여기 제외한 모든곳에 노트 츄가

00:31:178 (31178|1) - 이 노트는 어떤음을 표현하려고 한건지 잘 모르겠네여 삭제

01:02:125 - 개인취향이긴 한데 롱놋들을 멜로디 따라서 내려가는 방향으로 배치했으면 좋겠음 고구려 해보겠오
Remuring
556 posts
Joined May 2015
Remuring
앙 자카띠 내가와따 :D

1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

Another
00:23:283 - 6번에 노트하나 추가
02:10:505 - 여기 이렇게 바꾸소 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6580019

Picnic
00:56:836 - 노트하나 추가
00:59:599 - ^
01:18:874 - ^
01:11:046 - 여기 노트하나 3번에 두소
두난이도 밖에 못하겟다 보이는게 이거 뿐
짧은모딩하고간다. :CCC
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DeletedUser_259972
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DeletedUser_259972

R e m u r i n g wrote:

앙 자카띠 내가와따 :D

1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

Another
00:23:283 - 6번에 노트하나 추가 00:23:125 - drum 00:23:283 - no drum
02:10:505 - 여기 이렇게 바꾸소 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6580019 ok http://puu.sh/sjNal/148c09f316.png

Picnic
00:56:836 - 노트하나 추가 하이햇이 치키칭하는거라 두개 놓기엔 쫌 그래서 이렇게 했오
00:59:599 - ^ 안넣는게 의도였는데 넣으니 이쁘군 훗
01:18:874 - ^ 베이스 드럼은 3개, 스네어 드럼은 4개를 원칙으로 했오
01:11:046 - 여기 노트하나 3번에 두소 지금 낮은 음이랑 멜로디만 따라간건데 중간 멜로디를 따라갈까 고민중
두난이도 밖에 못하겟다 보이는게 이거 뿐
짧은모딩하고간다. :CCC
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그럼 나가 ;)
minseok_old_1
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Joined May 2016
minseok_old_1
저도 도와드리겠듬
처음써보니까 잘 잘 모르는거 이해좀 부탁드림 ㅎ

Picnic
00:12:073 ~ 00:12:230 / 02:08:926 ~ 02:09:084- 여기 변속에다가 따닥이라서 치기 까다로워요
kaythen
205 posts
Joined January 2015
kaythen
Hello! Sorry for taking so long.
There wasn't much I could find (and by much, I mean 1 thing) since the maps play so nicely, sorry...

Another:

00:23:915 - 3 note chord will be nice (and more consistent since this part sounds the same and has 3 notes in it 00:28:809 (28809|5,28809|0,28809|6,28967|6,28967|1,28967|5,29125|2,29125|5,29125|6) - )

Hope this helps (probably not but I tried :( )
DeletedUser_259972
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_259972

minseok wrote:

저도 도와드리겠듬 올ㅋ
처음써보니까 잘 잘 모르는거 이해좀 부탁드림 ㅎ

Picnic
00:12:073 ~ 00:12:230 / 02:08:926 ~ 02:09:084- 여기 변속에다가 따닥이라서 치기 까다로워요
연타 없앴어요 :D
모딩감사합니다 o/

kaythen wrote:

Hello! Sorry for taking so long. not at all bruh
There wasn't much I could find (and by much, I mean 1 thing) since the maps play so nicely, sorry... one modding is very precious for me lel

Another:

00:23:915 - 3 note chord will be nice (and more consistent since this part sounds the same and has 3 notes in it 00:28:809 (28809|5,28809|0,28809|6,28967|6,28967|1,28967|5,29125|2,29125|5,29125|6) - ) didn't realize there was kick drum there, nice one!

Hope this helps (probably not but I tried :( )
It helped bruh hueuhe

thank you guys for modding! :D
Kim_GodSSI
Former osu!mania 7K Champion: 2018
358 posts
Joined December 2012
Kim_GodSSI
뷍? 붸에에엥

딱히 볼거 없을것 같은딩


Picnic!
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7| < 걍 써봄


00:12:862 - 4 에다 노트 일부러 추가 안한것 같지만 일단 써놓긴 해보것

00:15:073 - 6 추가 어떤강

00:21:388 - 6 추가

00:21:862 - 2 추가

00:30:941 (30941|6,30941|5) - 이 노트 없는게 낫을것 같은데요 멜로디상
00:31:178 (31178|6) - ^

00:46:651 - ~ 00:46:967 - 여기 뭔가 추가 해야 될것 같은 ( 빈공간 부들 )


01:24:084 - ~ 01:25:190 - 이 부분



이런식으로 어떤감


01:28:821 (88821|1) - 삭제


>_O
DeletedUser_259972
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_259972

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

뷍? 붸에에엥석 OwO

딱히 볼거 없을것 같은딩


Picnic!
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7| < 걍 써봄 멋짐


00:12:862 - 4 에다 노트 일부러 추가 안한것 같지만 일단 써놓긴 해보것 고의라우

00:15:073 - 6 추가 어떤강 노트 규칙 맞추던게 있어서 멜로디는 두개로 했오 :3

00:21:388 - 6 추가 똑같은 이유 :3

00:21:862 - 2 추가 똑같은 이유 :3 (킥드럼은 노트 3개)

00:30:941 (30941|6,30941|5) - 이 노트 없는게 낫을것 같은데요 멜로디상 그러네
00:31:178 (31178|6) - ^ 알맞게 재배열함 굳

00:46:651 - ~ 00:46:967 - 여기 뭔가 추가 해야 될것 같은 ( 빈공간 부들 ) 00:46:651 - 여기에 노트 하나가 빠졌었네 ok
원래 8비트마다 노트 하나씩 넣는게 나름 규칙이였는데 몇번 어긴게 있어서 그것도 수정 ok


01:24:084 - ~ 01:25:190 - 이 부분



이런식으로 어떤감 흠 노트가 조금 많아보이는디


01:28:821 (88821|1) - 삭제 롱놋은 노트개수에서 빼고 매핑했뀨


>_O O_<
Garalulu
936 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
끼예예예예예옊!

[Big inner]
00:05:125 (5125|5,5441|3,5757|4) - 여기도 드럼 롤이니까 롱놋이 어울립니다. 00:00:073 (73|5,388|1,704|5) - 와 비교해 보시오.
00:11:441 - 00:12:704 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6622036 내 생각에는 00:12:546 - 비기너라 해도 여기는 들어가야할듯
02:08:295 - 02:09:558 - ^
00:22:809 - 00:23:441 - 멜로디 딴딴딴딴딴이 있으니까 00:23:283 - 여기도 노트가 있는게 낫겠우.
01:43:032 - 01:43:347 - 1 7 35로 표현하기엔 약간 어색한 부분이 있구려. 1 5 37이나 1 3 57이 좋아보이오.

[Lewd's Normal]
00:01:020 (1020|4,1178|2) - 여기는 드럼 롤이 아니니 단놋 표현은 어떻소
00:11:441 - 여기도 피니쉬 소리 있으니 노트 하나 더 추가요
00:15:073 - 여기 멜로디 하나 빼먹음
01:56:926 - 01:58:197 - 왜 여기는 사이사이에 노트가 빠졋오? 01:57:084 - 01:57:400 - 01:57:716 - 01:58:032 -

[1key's Hyper]
00:05:125 - 00:06:388 - 여기도 1/2 노트들이 필요하다고 생각합니다. 드럼롤만 표현하기엔 하이퍼에선 조금 밋밋하네요.
00:11:441 - 여기도 피니쉬 소리 있으니 노트 하나 더 추가요
00:12:073 - 00:12:388 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6622205 여기도 살짝 밋밋하네염. 드럼의 따닥 따닥 소리와 피니쉬를 표현해 이 정도 노트량이 적당할 듯 합니다.
00:12:704 - 여기도 피니쉬!
00:12:941 - 노트 하나 추가염
00:13:967 - 00:31:654 - 이 구간에서 00:14:204 - 이런 부분들에 노트를 넣어야 한다고 생각해요.
02:06:716 - 02:07:979 - 패턴 제안 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6622260

[An other]
00:13:967 - 00:24:073 - 이 파트와 00:24:073 - 00:34:178 - 이 파트의 차이점은 멜로디가 하나 더 추가된다는 점이오. 그 점을 감안해서 앞쪽은 쉽고 뒤쪽은 어렵게 컨셉을 잡는건 어떨까 하오.

[Powa's Ex7ra]
00:54:073 - 여기는 노트 4개가 되야 하지 않소이까?
01:06:230 - 01:06:388 - 01:05:915 - 01:06:073 - 와 동일한 구성을 하는게 낫다고 생각합니다.

[pic nic]
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DeletedUser_259972
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DeletedUser_259972

Garalulu wrote:

끼예예예예예옊! 빼애애애애애애애애애액

[Big inner] 크고 깊이...
00:05:125 (5125|5,5441|3,5757|4) - 여기도 드럼 롤이니까 롱놋이 어울립니다. 00:00:073 (73|5,388|1,704|5) - 와 비교해 보시오.ok
00:11:441 - 00:12:704 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6622036 내 생각에는 00:12:546 - 비기너라 해도 여기는 들어가야할듯 영감 패턴 정말 잘 짜는구만
02:08:295 - 02:09:558 - ^ 롱노트가 점점 벌어지는(하읏) 느낌이니깐 1 7에 롱놋 놨우.
00:22:809 - 00:23:441 - 멜로디 딴딴딴딴딴이 있으니까 00:23:283 - 여기도 노트가 있는게 낫겠우. 흐음. 여기는 드럼 소리만 따라간 것인데 넣어도 좋을 것 같긴 한데 밀도는 너무 넘칠 것 같고 잘 모르겠오 고민을 해 보도록 하겠오
01:43:032 - 01:43:347 - 1 7 35로 표현하기엔 약간 어색한 부분이 있구려. 1 5 37이나 1 3 57이 좋아보이오. 그렇게 하면 롱놋 위에 쉴드가 생겨서 애매하오. 생각해보겠오

[An other]
00:13:967 - 00:24:073 - 이 파트와 00:24:073 - 00:34:178 - 이 파트의 차이점은 멜로디가 하나 더 추가된다는 점이오. 그 점을 감안해서 앞쪽은 쉽고 뒤쪽은 어렵게 컨셉을 잡는건 어떨까 하오. 그런 컨셉으로 앞부분은 드럼 노트가 일정하게 나오지만 뒷부분은 노트들을 분산시킨것이오. 뀨


[pic nic]
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모딩 참 찰지게 하는군오
조아따
Wonki
931 posts
Joined February 2016
Wonki

Garalulu wrote:

끼예예예예예옊!


[1key's Hyper]
00:05:125 - 00:06:388 - 여기도 1/2 노트들이 필요하다고 생각합니다. 드럼롤만 표현하기엔 하이퍼에선 조금 밋밋하네요.
00:11:441 - 여기도 피니쉬 소리 있으니 노트 하나 더 추가요
00:12:073 - 00:12:388 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6622205 여기도 살짝 밋밋하네염. 드럼의 따닥 따닥 소리와 피니쉬를 표현해 이 정도 노트량이 적당할 듯 합니다.
00:12:704 - 여기도 피니쉬!
00:12:941 - 노트 하나 추가염
00:13:967 - 00:31:654 - 이 구간에서 00:14:204 - 이런 부분들에 노트를 넣어야 한다고 생각해요.
02:06:716 - 02:07:979 - 패턴 제안 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6622260

마지막것만 받겟다.
Kawawa
Kawawa
Beginner, Another, Picnic modded
00:35 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1122254 Umeboshi Chazuke - Panic! Pop'n! Picnic! [Beginner!]]
00:35 jakads: 원하신다면 깔깔!
00:35 Kawawa: 그럼
00:35 Kawawa: 넘어가죠
00:35 jakads: .
00:35 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:35 Kawawa: 봐드리겠소
00:36 Kawawa: 비기너인데
00:36 Kawawa: 왜 1.51성이지
00:36 jakads: 근데 볼것도 없을텐데 뭐랄까
00:36 Kawawa: 인게임에서 1.51성인데염?
00:36 Kawawa: 인게임이 정확한 표기라서 이거 사실상 노말인데
00:36 Kawawa: 웹은 버그구
00:36 Kawawa: 너프좀 해야할듯
00:36 jakads: 어
00:36 jakads: 음?
00:36 jakads: 언제부터 1.51이였지
00:36 jakads: 몰랐오
00:36 jakads: 슈별
00:36 Kawawa: 줄일 수 있게
00:36 Kawawa: 도와드리죠
00:36 Kawawa: 00:08:915 (8915|4,9546|2,9862|0,9862|6) - 
00:37 Kawawa: 이거 4개 누르는거 비기너에는 좀 과해요.
00:37 jakads: 그렇오?
00:37 Kawawa: 넉넉히 잡아야 동시에 뗴고 누르는걸 3개로 한정지으셔야
00:37 Kawawa: 비기너에는
00:37 Kawawa: 3개도 과분하긴 한데 
00:37 Kawawa: 4개는 아니오
00:37 jakads: 00:09:546 (9546|2) - 얘를 지우거나
00:37 jakads: 00:08:915 (8915|4) - 얘를 00:09:546 - 요기로 줄이거나
00:37 Kawawa: 잠시 스샷을 드리겠소
00:37 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxhI3/f916b42939.jpg
00:38 Kawawa: 이런식으로 끊어 표현하는게 나을듯
00:38 jakads: 호오
00:38 jakads: 와카리마시타
00:38 jakads: 와카리맛있다
00:38 Kawawa: 00:11:441 (11441|6,11441|5,12073|1,12073|0,12388|4) - 이거는 갠찮소
00:38 jakads: 흠
00:38 Kawawa: 너프하며ㅕㄴ
00:38 Kawawa: 좋긴한데
00:38 Kawawa: 너프하고싶소?
00:39 jakads: 흐음
00:39 jakads: 롱놋을 지금 없애긴 했는데
00:39 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxhLU/2cf0a9b572.jpg 이런식도 좋고
00:39 jakads: 별개수가 안떨어지네
00:39 Kawawa: 00:12:073 - 여기 꼭 2개를 쓸 필요는 없소
00:39 Kawawa: 오른쪽 롱놋이 쭉 확장되기 떄문에
00:40 Kawawa: 00:22:809 (22809|3,22967|5,23125|1,23441|4) - 
00:40 Kawawa: 요기 많이 어색한듯
00:40 Kawawa: 00:23:125 (23125|1) - 이거를 제거하고  00:22:967 (22967|5) - 여기서 시작되는 피아노를 롱놋으로 묶어서 
00:40 Kawawa: 00:23:441 - 요까지 이어주는걸 권장
00:41 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxhRJ/e0fa73016a.jpg
00:41 jakads: 뭐랄까
00:41 jakads: 드럼 따라간거였는데
00:41 Kawawa: 난 저 소리가 더 강해서 
00:41 Kawawa: 뭔가 어색한거같아요 드럼으로 하자니
00:42 Kawawa: 적용은 꼭 안하셔도 되요
00:42 Kawawa: 의도가 있다면
00:42 Kawawa: 00:28:967 (28967|3) - 이거 삭제하는게 낫지 않소? 00:23:915 - 여기를 안썼는데
00:43 jakads: 안쓴 부분을 채우도록 하겠오
00:43 Kawawa: 00:43:967 - 여기 1개 삭제하는게 나을듯.
00:43 jakads: 00:32:915 (32915|3,33073|5,33230|4,33388|2,33546|1) - 여기도 아까처럼 피아노 묶겠오
00:43 Kawawa: 00:43:967 (43967|2,43967|5,44283|0,44283|4,44441|3,44599|2) - 뭔가 이렇게 밀집되는거 떄문에
00:43 jakads: 저건 실수로 추가한듯
00:43 Kawawa: 레이티잉 올라간듯
00:43 Kawawa: 이거중 하나를 롱놋으로 올리는것도
00:43 Kawawa: 00:43:967 - 
00:43 jakads: 괜찮군오
00:44 jakads: 피아노 찌리링소리
00:44 Kawawa: 하나 제거후 하나를 롱놋으로 묶어서 올리기
00:44 Kawawa: 01:03:783 (63783|6,64020|4,64178|2,64336|0) - 
00:44 Kawawa: 이거 위험하네요
00:44 jakads: ㅇㅅㅇ?
00:45 Kawawa: 이지 난이도는 규칙적인 엇박이 아니라면 
00:45 Kawawa: 배제하는게 좋은데
00:45 Kawawa: 01:04:020 - 여기까지 반박으로 규칙적으로 떨어지니 01:04:178 (64178|2,64336|0) - 이걸 삭제하고  
00:45 Kawawa: 01:04:020 - 이걸 롱놋으로 올리는게
00:45 Kawawa: 좋을수도
00:45 Kawawa: 예시 :: http://puu.sh/sxi4K/a58b0903ef.jpg
00:47 jakads: 이거는
00:47 jakads: 뭔가 킵하고 싶오
00:47 Kawawa: 예
00:47 Kawawa: 01:41:611 (101611|4,101769|2,101926|4,102084|5,102400|4,102400|1,102716|5) - 
00:47 Kawawa: 요긴 바꾸시는게 나을듯?
00:47 jakads: 아
00:47 jakads: 그렇오
00:48 Kawawa: 01:41:769 - 걍 여기에
00:48 Kawawa: 롱놋을쓰지말구 단놋1개로 떼우고
00:48 Kawawa: 01:42:400 - 여기  01:42:716 - 여기도 그냥 2놋
00:48 jakads: 아
00:48 Kawawa: 예시 http://puu.sh/sxid1/75f5c12923.jpg
00:48 jakads: 그냥
00:48 jakads: 멜로디 무시하겠오
00:48 Kawawa: 예
00:48 jakads: 지금까지도 그래왔으니
00:48 Kawawa: 멜로디 자체를 또 넣다보니
00:48 Kawawa: 서브로 들리는 드럼하고 겹쳐져서
00:48 Kawawa: 뭔가 박자감이 더 애매해지는듯
00:49 Kawawa: 01:41:769 - 그럼 여긴 지우고
00:50 Kawawa: 01:58:032 (118032|3) - 의도는 알겠지만 제거를 권장
00:50 Kawawa: 여기서 롱놋과 규칙드럼으로 전개가 넘어가기 떄문에 저걸 제거해서 휴식으로 텀을 제공하는게 나을듯요
00:50 Kawawa: 비기너이다보니
00:50 Kawawa: 02:05:611 - 예를들어 여기도 안쓰셨소.
00:51 Kawawa: 윗부분 02:05:769 (125769|2,126400|4,127032|5,127663|1,128295|0,128926|6) - 이거도 아까처럼 미러로 해주시고
00:51 Kawawa: 대강 1.48되네요.
00:52 jakads: ?
00:52 jakads: 저는 어찌저찌하니
00:52 jakads: 1.42가 됐오
00:52 jakads: 뭐지
00:52 Kawawa: 굿
00:53 Kawawa: 저거 다 
00:53 Kawawa: 적용ㅎ란거요?
00:53 jakads: 예
00:53 jakads: 거의
00:53 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1122253 Umeboshi Chazuke - Panic! Pop'n! Picnic! [Another!]]
00:54 Kawawa: 어나더가 잡을게 없을듯
00:54 Kawawa: 00:31:178 - 여기 왜 노트없소?
00:54 Kawawa: 00:31:336 (31336|5,31494|1) - 이게 멜로디 따라간거라면
00:54 Kawawa: 00:31:178 - 전 이거도 중요하다고 생가갛는데
00:55 jakads: 그 저게
00:55 jakads: 00:29:678 - 여기같은 곳에 들리는 그 뭐랄까
00:55 jakads: 높은 소리
00:55 jakads: 띠링 뚜룽 하는거
00:55 jakads: 그거는 안따라갔오
00:55 Kawawa: 그렇군요
00:55 jakads: 뀨
00:56 Kawawa: 01:02:125 (62125|4,62125|5,62125|6,62125|3,62362|5,62362|3,62362|6,62362|4,62599|6,62599|3,62599|4,62599|5,62836|6,62836|3,62836|4,62836|5) - 
00:56 Kawawa: 요기서 오른쪽으로
00:56 Kawawa: 쳐진거같지않소?
00:56 Kawawa: 변경할 생각이 있다면
00:56 Kawawa: 피드백을 제공하겠다만
00:56 jakads: 흠
00:56 jakads: 그런것같긴 한데
00:56 jakads: 기다려보소
00:57 jakads: 오
00:57 Kawawa: ?
00:57 Kawawa: 왜요
00:57 Kawawa: 전 아무것도 안했는데
00:58 jakads: http://puu.sh/sxiEe/944814b156.png
00:58 Kawawa: 저거 대칭한건 나도 알고 있소
00:58 Kawawa: 이건 어떻소?
00:58 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxiFw/97e860c79f.jpg
00:58 jakads: 노논
00:58 jakads: 저게 지금 바꾼거오
00:58 Kawawa: 아하
00:58 jakads: 헛
00:59 jakads: 흐으믐ㅁ
00:59 Kawawa: 이게 밸런스로는
00:59 jakads: 괜찮긴 한데
00:59 Kawawa: 훨 좋긴한데
00:59 jakads: 초반이 조금 어렵내요
00:59 Kawawa: ㅡㅡ
00:59 Kawawa: 어차피 100%칠거잖아요
00:59 jakads: ㅡㅡ
00:59 jakads: 빼 애액
00:59 Kawawa: 이거
00:59 Kawawa: 쉽소
00:59 Kawawa: 생각하는것보단
00:59 jakads: 생각해보겠오 :)))))))))))))))))))))
01:00 Kawawa: 예
01:00 jakads: 1시네
01:00 jakads: 자라
01:00 jakads: :D
01:00 Kawawa: 엥
01:00 Kawawa: 막난 모딩 필요없으신가
01:00 Kawawa: 그럼 포스트하겠소
01:00 jakads: 아
01:00 jakads: ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
01:00 Kawawa: 수고여
01:00 Kawawa: 아니 자라면서;;
01:00 jakads: 모딩 하고 주무시오
01:00 jakads: 막난 모딩하시면
01:00 jakads: 제가 자장가 불러드리오
01:01 Kawawa: 01:32:453 (92453|2,92453|3,92453|0) - 
01:01 Kawawa: 이거 많지않아요?
01:01 Kawawa: 이게 드럼, 멜로디 때문에 3놋이 된거라면
01:01 Kawawa: 아니다 그냥 드럼에만 3놋준건가
01:02 jakads: yes
01:02 Kawawa: 맞네
01:02 Kawawa: 지금껏 봤을 때 쟝코르도는 패턴을 드럼쪽에 맞추는 듯
01:03 Kawawa: 여러 맵 다 봐왔는데
01:03 Kawawa: 눈송이도 그렇고
01:03 Kawawa: 스타일이군요
01:03 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1120078 Umeboshi Chazuke - Panic! Pop'n! Picnic! [Picnic!]]
01:03 Kawawa: 어나더 볼게 없는것 같은데
01:04 Kawawa: 00:06:546 - 요기 노트 1개 일부러 쓴것이오?
01:04 Kawawa: 이걸 7로 옮기고  여기 5에 1개추가.
01:04 Kawawa: 00:06:388 (6388|4) - 
01:05 jakads: 미래의 동탁 맵퍼오.
01:05 Kawawa: 7로 옮기고 
01:05 Kawawa: 00:06:546 - 5에 추가
01:05 jakads: 저거
01:05 Kawawa: 혹시 하이햇 사운드가
01:05 jakads: 고의였는데
01:05 Kawawa: 없어서 그런거면
01:05 jakads: 보기 안좋네오
01:05 jakads: 수정 했오
01:05 Kawawa: 저 빨간선이 전부 2놋으로 일관되게 유지되어있어서
01:05 Kawawa: 2놋이 다 나을듯
01:06 Kawawa: 00:13:967 (13967|4) - 이거 4로 옮기고  00:13:809 - 여기 5에 추가?
01:07 Kawawa: 멜로디만 있는곳인 00:31:336 (31336|5,31336|2,31494|3,31494|0) - 여기에 2놋을 썼으니. 그 13초 파트를 2개로 유지해주면 좋을듯하오
01:07 jakads: 했오
01:07 jakads: 저건
01:07 jakads: 실수인듯 하오
01:08 Kawawa: 00:43:415 (43415|2,43494|3,43546|4,43599|5,43651|6) - 이거
01:08 Kawawa: 00:43:415 (43415|2) - 이걸 4로 보내고  00:43:494 (43494|3,43546|4,43599|5,43651|6) - 이거 전부를 왼쪽으로 1칸씩
01:08 Kawawa: 옮기는게 어떻소?
01:09 Kawawa: 4스냅에서 6스냅으로 같은 방향으로 계단을 해버리면, 개인적으로는 저 6스냅이 뭘표현하는지 느낌이
01:09 jakads: 이거 혹시
01:09 Kawawa: 좀 애매해지던데
01:09 jakads: 네
01:09 jakads: 그 이유라면
01:09 jakads: 00:43:415 (43415|2) - 얘를 1로 옮기겠오
01:09 jakads: 아니다
01:09 Kawawa: 그게 더어렵지않소?
01:09 Kawawa: readable도 더 어색하고
01:10 Kawawa: 전체 스트림이 끊기는 모양이 되니
01:10 jakads: http://puu.sh/sxjfK/f8717b35a9.png
01:10 Kawawa: 그게 나을듯
01:10 Kawawa: 그 상태에서
01:10 Kawawa: 00:42:862 (42862|2,43020|1) - 이거 오른쪽으로 1칸씩?
01:10 Kawawa: 어떻소?
01:10 jakads: 흠
01:11 jakads: 괜찮아보이오
01:12 Kawawa: 00:51:862 (51862|0,52494|6,53125|0,53757|6) - 이거 누군가는 지적할 수 있소
01:13 Kawawa: 난 괜찮은데 그 표현하는걸 롱놋으로 묶는것 
01:13 Kawawa: 근데 체크 하는 사람이 누구냐에따라 물어 볼 수는 있을 듯 하네요
01:13 jakads: 아
01:13 jakads: 포니그마처럼
01:13 jakads: 지적
01:14 Kawawa: 난 저거 뭘 표현하는지 알고있소
01:14 Kawawa: 근데 카미같은 애들은 이해 못할듯
01:14 jakads: 저런
01:14 Kawawa: 생각보다
01:14 Kawawa: 변경해야 할 만한게 없는데요
01:14 Kawawa: 01:17:769 - 여기까진
01:15 Kawawa: 01:37:032 (97032|6,97347|0,97347|2,97347|1,97347|3,97387|4,97426|5,97466|6,97505|1,97545|2,97584|3,97584|4,97624|5,97663|2,97663|6,97663|1,97821|4,97821|0,97821|3,97900|5,97900|2) - 
01:16 Kawawa: 요기 조금 쉽게 만들고 싶소?
01:16 Kawawa: 도중에 뭔가 좀 변경하고 싶은 부분있으면 말좀 하쇼
01:16 jakads: 무얼 변경하면 좋겠오?
01:16 Kawawa: 01:37:505 (97505|1,97545|2,97584|3,97663|1,97663|2) - 
01:16 Kawawa: 난 이거
01:16 Kawawa: 01:37:663 (97663|2) - 요기 쓰인 롱놋을
01:17 Kawawa: 01:37:663 (97663|6) - 요기다가 쓰는게
01:17 Kawawa: 낫지 않을까요
01:17 Kawawa: 개인적으론 그게 더 편한데 칠때
01:17 jakads: 호오
01:17 Kawawa: readable을 가장 쉽게하는건
01:17 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxjBA/1153fd9a1c.jpg
01:17 Kawawa: 이런식?
01:19 Kawawa: 01:57:558 (117558|2) - 4로 이동?
01:20 jakads: ok
01:20 jakads: 이 후살을
01:20 jakads: 조금 쉽게 만드는법이 없을까요
01:20 jakads: 패턴을
01:20 Kawawa: 많소
01:20 Kawawa: 어디 부분요
01:20 Kawawa: 01:48:400 (108400|0,108400|2,108400|3,108558|2,108558|3,108558|1) - 
01:20 Kawawa: 이런 부분말하는건가
01:20 jakads: nono
01:21 jakads: 01:58:190 - ~ 여기부터
01:21 jakads: 겁나 어렵잖소
01:21 Kawawa: 쉽게
01:21 Kawawa: 해드리겠소
01:21 Kawawa: 따라서 변경하면서 적용할거면 하고 말거면 마시오
01:21 Kawawa: 01:58:190 - 여기부터
01:22 jakads: :D
01:22 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxjPx/cb0e3d0c4f.jpg
01:22 Kawawa: 처음부분은 이게 어떻소?
01:22 jakads: 01:58:190 (118190|4,118269|5,118347|4,118426|5) - 이런 트릴들은 최대한
01:22 jakads: 살려주시오
01:22 Kawawa: 스타일은 다 살릴것이오
01:22 Kawawa: 걱정마쇼
01:22 Kawawa: 만약 저상태로 적용했다면
01:22 Kawawa: 01:58:979 (118979|1,119058|1) - 이걸 3으로 옮겨주시오
01:23 Kawawa: 01:59:453 - 그리고 여기로 와서
01:24 Kawawa: 이런식으로 변경  http://puu.sh/sxjVa/4d0f797cf8.jpg
01:25 Kawawa: 저 상태로 적용이 되었다면 02:00:874 (120874|6) - 이걸 6으로 옮기고02:01:347 (121347|4) - 이걸 4로
01:26 Kawawa: 그리고 이부분으로 와서 02:02:611 - 
01:26 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxk2F/bd3607a1b1.jpg
01:26 Kawawa: 위 스샷과 같이 02:02:611 - 02:02:926 - 요 두 롱놋이 같은 사운드이니 일치시키면서 쉬운 패턴을 유지하는걸 권장하오
01:27 Kawawa: 이정도면 충분한거 같소
01:27 Kawawa: 02:01:032 (121032|1,121190|1) - 덤으로 이걸 1로 옮겨도 되고 안옮겨고 되고
01:28 Kawawa: That's all
01:28 jakads: djdn
01:28 jakads: 어우
01:28 Kawawa: 근데
01:28 Kawawa: 님이 잘못 생각하고 있는게
01:29 Kawawa: 뭐냐면
01:29 Kawawa: 트릴이 어려운게 문제가 아니라, 
01:29 Kawawa: 01:48:400 (108400|3,108400|0,108400|2,108558|2,108558|3,108558|1) - 
01:29 Kawawa: 01:50:926 -  01:51:084 - 이런식으로 나오는 숏롱들의 위치가
01:29 Kawawa: 되게 까다롭게 설계 되어있어서
01:29 Kawawa: 패턴을 칠때 순간적으로 혼동이 와서 어려운것이오.
01:29 jakads: ?
01:29 jakads: 어찌 바꿔야하오
01:29 Kawawa: 패턴 자체는 다 쉬운 편인데, 저 숏롱 들을 가지런히 넣어주면 좋은데
01:30 Kawawa: 우선
01:30 Kawawa: 내가 말한대로 변경한것이오?
01:30 Kawawa: 어느정도는
01:30 jakads: 얘'
01:30 jakads: 예
01:30 Kawawa: 텍스트파일
01:30 Kawawa: 푸쉬좀요
01:30 Kawawa: 그상태로 적용하고 저 숏롱들을
01:30 jakads: ?
01:30 Kawawa: 더 쉽게 해결해보죠
01:30 jakads: 아니아니 그럴필요까진 없고
01:30 Kawawa: 제가 님 적용 한 텍본이 없어서
01:30 jakads: 가지런히라는게 뭔지만
01:31 Kawawa:  아아.
01:31 Kawawa: 01:48:400 (108400|3,108400|0,108400|2,108558|2,108558|3,108558|1) - 예를들어 이부분에서 
01:32 Kawawa: 순간적으로 숏롱이 나오니 숏롱이 나오는 손가락 부분은 더 눌러야하니 어느정도 힘이 들어가지않소?
01:33 Kawawa: 잠시 예시를 들어주겠소
01:34 Kawawa: 이게 기존 패턴하고 뭐 별 비슷하게 보일 수도 있는데
01:34 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxknr/4f08aeb867.jpg http://puu.sh/sxkon/02cf80410f.jpg
01:34 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxknr/4f08aeb867.jpg // http://puu.sh/sxkon/02cf80410f.jpg
01:34 Kawawa: 차이가 크오.
01:34 jakads: 흐음
01:34 Kawawa: 01:50:926 (110926|0,110926|3,110926|2,111084|2,111084|3,111084|1) - 
01:34 jakads: 숏롱과 같은 손에 있는 노트 개수에 따라 난이도가 달라지는 것이오?
01:34 Kawawa: 이러한 파트도 그렇고
01:35 Kawawa: 숏롱에 위치한 손가락에 노트 개수도 있고, 그 숏롱이 가뜩이나 중지에 해당하면요.
01:35 Kawawa: 01:50:926 (110926|0,110926|3,110926|2,111084|3,111084|2,111084|1) - 
01:35 Kawawa: 그리고 이런식으로
01:35 Kawawa: 같은 col이 아니게 될 경우.
01:35 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxkum/9fa5469e44.jpg
01:35 Kawawa: 이거 때문에 어려워지오
01:36 jakads: 아 저건
01:36 Kawawa: 01:51:084 (111084|1) - 이게 1로 이동되면 반대로 더 쉬워지고
01:36 jakads: 이해가 되는듯하오
01:36 Kawawa: 저걸 쉽게 만들자면 예시로
01:36 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/sxkw5/3efed913a9.jpg
01:36 Kawawa: 저렇게 두면 1,3에 많이 분포되어있어서 
01:36 Kawawa: 어렵게 보이겠지만 
01:36 Kawawa: 정작 막상 치면 그냥 쉽게쳐지고 readable면에서는 말할것도 없소
01:37 Kawawa: 저런식으로 두지 않는 경우에는, 양쪽으로 잘 분배하는 식으로 써야하는데
01:38 jakads: 아까 [http://puu.sh/sxknr/4f08aeb867.jpg 이거]랑 [http://puu.sh/sxkon/02cf80410f.jpg 이거]의 차이는 무엇이였오?
01:38 Kawawa: 예를들어 1번쨰껀
01:39 Kawawa: 어떤 미세한악기를 짧은롱놋으로 표현해서 시각적인 효과를 줄 때 구석으로 분배하면 
01:39 Kawawa: readable이 가장 쉬운효과가 있소.
01:39 Kawawa: 2번쨰꺼는 col1,7구석자리가 아닌 다른곳에 위치해서 만들고 싶을 때
01:40 Kawawa: 또 저기서 보면 2번째에서 col3을 피한걸 볼 수 있는데
01:41 Kawawa: 저게 col4를 약간 길게 누르면서 col3에 있는 단놋까지 처리하는건 대체적으로 짜증나는지라
01:41 Kawawa: 물론 저게 오른손 잡이 스페유저라면 저 패턴이 불편하게 느껴지겠지만
01:41 Kawawa: 저는 왼손 스페유저를 대상으로 패턴을 짜는지라
01:43 Kawawa: 내가 알려줄 수 있는건 이게다요
01:43 Kawawa: 알아서 하세요.
01:43 jakads: 예.

:)
Allezard
208 posts
Joined December 2013
Allezard
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
Lude's Normal!
00:21:073 (21073|1) - 7 col
00:21:388 (21388|5) - 1 col
00:22:020 (22020|5) - 7 col

00:22:178 (22178|4,22257|3,22336|2,22415|1,22494|0) - 2/3/4/5/6 col
00:22:651 (22651|2) - 1 col

00:22:967 (22967|6,22967|3,23125|5,23125|2) - Ctrl+G


Wonki's Hyper!
It may be worth to allocate such sounds adding a note?
00:06:073 - 00:06:388 - 00:08:599 - 00:09:862 - 00:11:125 - 00:12:073 - 00:24:073 - 00:33:862 -
For example like here~
00:44:283 - 00:59:125 -

00:08:915 (8915|3,9073|3,9230|3,9388|3,9546|3) - 3 col
00:09:862 (9862|5,9862|1) - 1 and 5 col
00:11:125 (11125|0,11125|6) - 2 and 6 col
00:11:441 (11441|3,11599|3,11757|3,11915|3) - 5 col

may be 2 and 5 col
01:14:599 (74599|2,74678|4,74757|2,74836|4,74915|2,74998|4,75081|2,75165|4,75249|2,75337|4,75425|2,75513|4,75601|2,75694|4,75788|2,75882|4) -
3 and 6 col
01:15:977 (75977|6,76077|2,76177|6,76277|2,76377|6,76484|2,76591|6,76698|2) -

01:26:611 - add?

Another!
00:54:862 -


00:57:073 -


01:02:125 - It may be more convenient?


01:05:915 (65915|4,65994|3) - Ctrl+G
01:06:230 (66230|2,66309|3) - Ctrl+G

01:10:967 - I think better fits)


01:20:453 - ^


01:23:769 - ^


01:27:874 (87874|0) - del
01:28:032 (88032|3,88111|2,88190|4) - Ctrl+H
01:28:190 (88190|6) - Ctrl+H
01:28:347 (88347|0) - Ctrl+H
01:28:505 - then

Nice mapset and good song)
from m4m :)
Lude
648 posts
Joined August 2015
Lude

Allezard wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
Lude's Normal!
00:21:073 (21073|1) - 7 col
00:21:388 (21388|5) - 1 col
00:22:020 (22020|5) - 7 col

00:22:178 (22178|4,22257|3,22336|2,22415|1,22494|0) - 2/3/4/5/6 col
00:22:651 (22651|2) - 1 col

00:22:967 (22967|6,22967|3,23125|5,23125|2) - Ctrl+G Changed a bit differently


Nice mapset and good song)
from m4m :)
Fixed the rest. Gave update via discord
pwhk
448 posts
Joined September 2014
pwhk
M4M Request :)

| 0 - 6 |

[Beginner]
00:14:283 (14283|2,14915|2) - move to 4 for hand balance?
00:15:546 (15546|4,16178|4) - ^ to 2
00:22:967 (22967|1) - I felt this LN is too tricky for beginner, particularly when there is 00:23:125 (23125|6) - . No LN?
01:02:125 (62125|0) - Not exactly consistent with all the singles after it. All doubles are too hard. Remove?
01:04:494 (64494|4,64494|6) - because going all doubles in notes before is too hard, this double become inconsistent with all the singles before it. Pitch also suggest another position (different sound to either 01:03:783 (63783|6,64020|4) - ). single note at 5?
01:48:084 (108084|5,109347|6) - This is tricky to hit for beginners (holding middle finger and hit a note at ring). Swap columns?
01:58:190 (118190|1,119453|0) - ^

[Normal]
00:15:073 - missing note
00:17:915 (17915|0,17994|2,18073|4) - 323 for pitch?
00:21:073 (21073|1,21230|3,21388|5) - Ctrl-H for pitch?
00:24:546 (24546|1,24546|0) - why double here? Seem inconsistent to everywhere else. Remove a note?
00:44:441 (44441|0) - actually the 1/2 jack should go with next 1/2 beat rather than previous. Move to 4?
00:46:178 (46178|5) - move to 6? Only here having same column as next piano sound
00:52:020 (52020|5) - Same as 00:44:441 (44441|0), move to 2?
00:57:862 (57862|0,58020|2) - swap for pitch
00:59:125 - add note for cymbal
01:13:809 (73809|5) - to 0 for pitch
01:18:400 (78400|3) - to 6 for pitch
01:24:558 (84558|5) - to 0 for pitch

[Hyper]
00:13:651 - cymbal present. Add note at 0?
00:32:283 - cymbal present. Add note at 5?
00:41:599 (41599|1,41599|0) - seems extra note here. Remove one?
00:46:967 - missing note?
00:49:494 - ^
01:18:716 (78716|2,78716|0) - cymbal is absent. double is way too strong for simple kick. Remove one note?
01:19:663 (79663|2,79663|0,79821|3,79821|1,79979|2,79979|4) - ^
01:22:190 (82190|3,82190|0) - ^
01:25:347 (85347|5,85663|6) - ^, not pointing out every instance
01:57:716 (117716|6) - I don't think there is any extra sound here.
01:57:874 - But here is. 01:57:716 (117716|6) - Move this note here?
01:58:190 - cymbal here. Add note?
02:00:716 (120716|2) - no sound warrants a double here. Remove?
02:05:453 - ^

[Another]
01:07:809 (67809|4) - move to 3 as different sound to previous
01:37:979 - 01:43:032 - putting 3 notes into kicks are too strong I guess. One note should be enough (particularly here don't have highhats....)

[Ex7ra]
00:31:178 (31178|3,31178|4,31178|5) - remove these notes and extend 00:31:020 (31020|4,31020|5,31020|6) - these LNs to here? The main seems absent here.
01:10:336 (70336|3,70494|4) - swap for pitch?
01:37:584 (97584|0) - jack hidden here. Are you sure?
01:53:781 -01:53:926 - special sound here. Add a short LN like anywhere else?
01:56:295 - 01:56:453 - ^

[Picnic]
Too hard to mod :|

Good luck ~ :)
Wonki
931 posts
Joined February 2016
Wonki

pwhk wrote:

M4M Request :)

| 0 - 6 |
[Hyper]
00:13:651 - cymbal present. Add note at 0?
00:32:283 - cymbal present. Add note at 5?
00:41:599 (41599|1,41599|0) - seems extra note here. Remove one?
00:46:967 - missing note?
00:49:494 - ^
01:18:716 (78716|2,78716|0) - cymbal is absent. double is way too strong for simple kick. Remove one note?
01:19:663 (79663|2,79663|0,79821|3,79821|1,79979|2,79979|4) - ^
01:22:190 (82190|3,82190|0) - ^
01:25:347 (85347|5,85663|6) - ^, not pointing out every instance
01:57:716 (117716|6) - I don't think there is any extra sound here.
01:57:874 - But here is. 01:57:716 (117716|6) - Move this note here?
01:58:190 - cymbal here. Add note?
02:00:716 (120716|2) - no sound warrants a double here. Remove?
02:05:453 - ^

Good luck ~ :)

[Hyper]
00:13:651 - cymbal present. Add note at 0?
00:32:283 - cymbal present. Add note at 5?
00:41:599 (41599|1,41599|0) - seems extra note here. Remove one?
00:46:967 - missing note?
00:49:494 - ^
01:18:716 (78716|2,78716|0) - cymbal is absent. double is way too strong for simple kick. Remove one note?
01:19:663 (79663|2,79663|0,79821|3,79821|1,79979|2,79979|4) - ^
01:22:190 (82190|3,82190|0) - ^
01:25:347 (85347|5,85663|6) - ^, not pointing out every instance
01:57:716 (117716|6) - I don't think there is any extra sound here.
01:57:874 - But here is. 01:57:716 (117716|6) - Move this note here?
01:58:190 - cymbal here. Add note?
02:00:716 (120716|2) - no sound warrants a double here. Remove?
02:05:453 - ^
Thanks guys some applied
Davin Fortune
584 posts
Joined June 2014
Davin Fortune
Gonna mod Picnic diff first since other are still not updated
Picnic
00:06:704 (6704|0,6704|6,6704|2,6704|1,6862|5,6862|4,7020|0,7020|1,7020|3,7020|2,7178|5,7178|6,7336|2,7336|1,7336|3,7336|4,7494|6,7494|0,7651|3,7651|2,7651|4,7651|5,7809|6,7809|0,7809|1,7967|2,7967|5,7967|4,7967|3,8125|6,8125|0,8283|1,8283|4,8283|3,8283|2,8441|5,8441|6) - this better follow 00:06:388 (6388|1,6388|2,6388|0,6388|6,6388|5,6546|4,6546|3) - pattern
00:10:809 - Make them into LN, and 2 LN cause there's pitch change
00:44:678 (44678|3,44678|4) - ghost
00:45:230 - until 00:45:546 - suggest you to make LN pattern in space between these notes
01:28:821 - isn't the amount of note is over?
02:07:821 - like first mod

Gonna mod this next time and sorry bad quality x.x
DeletedUser_259972
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_259972

Allezard wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
Another!
00:54:862 -

meh

00:57:073 -

meh

01:02:125 - It may be more convenient?

I have a pattern in mind :p

01:05:915 (65915|4,65994|3) - Ctrl+G ok
01:06:230 (66230|2,66309|3) - Ctrl+G ok

01:10:967 - I think better fits)

went strict with pitch relevancy here

01:20:453 - ^

seems good

01:23:769 - ^

went consistent with 01:24:084 (84084|6,84084|5,84400|5,84400|6,84716|5,84716|6,85032|5,85032|6,85347|5,85347|6) -

01:27:874 (87874|0) - del drum sound, nope
01:28:032 (88032|3,88111|2,88190|4) - Ctrl+H
01:28:190 (88190|6) - Ctrl+H
01:28:347 (88347|0) - Ctrl+H
kinda applied? shuffled rather
01:28:505 - then

i get the concept

Nice mapset and good song)
from m4m :)

pwhk wrote:

M4M Request :)
no reply = fixed
| 0 - 6 |

[Beginner]
00:14:283 (14283|2,14915|2) - move to 4 for hand balance?
00:15:546 (15546|4,16178|4) - ^ to 2
00:22:967 (22967|1) - I felt this LN is too tricky for beginner, particularly when there is 00:23:125 (23125|6) - . No LN?
01:02:125 (62125|0) - Not exactly consistent with all the singles after it. All doubles are too hard. Remove? I'll keep it for now since I put double notes for start and end
01:04:494 (64494|4,64494|6) - because going all doubles in notes before is too hard, this double become inconsistent with all the singles before it. Pitch also suggest another position (different sound to either 01:03:783 (63783|6,64020|4) - ). single note at 5? ^
01:48:084 (108084|5,109347|6) - This is tricky to hit for beginners (holding middle finger and hit a note at ring). Swap columns?
01:58:190 (118190|1,119453|0) - ^

[Another]
01:07:809 (67809|4) - move to 3 as different sound to previous moved to 0
01:37:979 - 01:43:032 - putting 3 notes into kicks are too strong I guess. One note should be enough (particularly here don't have highhats....) agreed


[Picnic]
Too hard to mod :| :|

Good luck ~ :)

Davin Fortune wrote:

Gonna mod Picnic diff first since other are still not updated
Picnic
00:06:704 (6704|0,6704|6,6704|2,6704|1,6862|5,6862|4,7020|0,7020|1,7020|3,7020|2,7178|5,7178|6,7336|2,7336|1,7336|3,7336|4,7494|6,7494|0,7651|3,7651|2,7651|4,7651|5,7809|6,7809|0,7809|1,7967|2,7967|5,7967|4,7967|3,8125|6,8125|0,8283|1,8283|4,8283|3,8283|2,8441|5,8441|6) - this better follow 00:06:388 (6388|1,6388|2,6388|0,6388|6,6388|5,6546|4,6546|3) - pattern what d'ya mean?
00:10:809 - Make them into LN, and 2 LN cause there's pitch change naah too though
also I didn't put any note 00:11:046 - here lamo where did that come from
00:44:678 (44678|3,44678|4) - ghost 00:47:204 - 00:49:730 - also ghost SPOOPY (very nice catch thanks)
00:45:230 - until 00:45:546 - suggest you to make LN pattern in space between these notes hmm I wanted to go full normal note here but LN seems not bad
I'll consider
01:28:821 - isn't the amount of note is over? nope, 4 notes for snare, 1 LN for melody, same as 01:18:716 -
02:07:821 - like first mod nope

Gonna mod this next time and sorry bad quality x.x
that took a long time
thank you guys for modding :)
Reba
823 posts
Joined August 2013
Reba
몇일 늦어졌네 미안 2쿠도를 받기위한 설계였다

Colmns : | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

[Ponicnic!]
00:22:651 (22651|6,22651|3) - pitch 가 내려가서 왼쪽으로하고 1놋 잭이 뭔가 치기에 불편한 감이있음. 이런 배치로 한다면 더 괜찮아지는거같음. 두번째 숏잭을 없앤 이유는, 첫번째는 음이 똑같지만 두번째는 음이 내려감. :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6883712

00:23:599 (23599|0,23678|5,23678|6) - 왼쪽으로 갔다 오른쪽으로 가는거보단 자연스럽게 흘러가는식이 나은듯 여긴 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6883728

00:28:178 (28178|2) - 1칼럼으로 옮겨주는게 음을더 잘따라가는거같음

00:31:730 (31730|3,31730|4,31809|2,31809|5,31888|4,31888|3,31967|5,31967|2,31967|1) - 개인적으로 치기 불편했음, 이렇게 바꿔줘도 될듯? :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6883754

00:51:862 (51862|0) - 이 롱놋을 1/4 줄이면 미러가 가능하다 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6883795

01:22:505 ~ 뭔가 불편함, 롱놋을 포기해도될듯? :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6883820 만약 수정했으면 미러버전으로 01:32:611

01:24:242 (84242|4) - 칼럼 5를 3번 반복하지 않기위해 2레인으로 옮기기

01:34:347 (94347|1) - 이유는없고 1레인으로 옮기는데 좋아보임

치기 어려운 배치가 있었지만 그걸 지적하면 연계가 되어있어서 고치면 다른데 또 고쳐야하기 때문에 너의 매핑스타일을 존중하면서 해서 좀 짧게됬다
Seulgi
152 posts
Joined September 2014
Seulgi
푸슈우우웅 별을 받아라
Lude
648 posts
Joined August 2015
Lude
Lude's M4M
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7


[Picnic!]
  1. 00:08:915 - 02:05:769 - 여기 연타패턴에서 낮은 피아노음에 5개, 00:09:862 - 크래시에 4개를 주셨는데. 큰 차이는 없겠지만 비중을 반대로 바꿔보는거도 나쁘지 않을거같습니다. 낮은 피아노에 4개랑 크래시에 5개로, 좀 더 마지막에 비중을 두는건 어떠세요? 00:11:441 - 여기에선 제대로 크래시쪽엔 노트량을 늘려서 표현하셨네요. 참고!
  2. 00:19:020 - 여기에만 5코드인데, 의도하셨나요? 하나 줄이시는건? 다른곳은 상한이 4코드 (크래시 제외)였네요. 참고!
  3. 00:41:441 (41441|3) - 요걸 1번으루?
  4. 00:56:757 (56757|1,56836|0) - 요거 잭으로 해도 나쁘지않을거같네요
  5. 01:22:979 (82979|4) - 요걸 3번으루?
  6. 01:34:190 (94190|1) - 요걸 1번으루?
  7. 01:37:900 (97900|2,97900|4) - 요기 2개일필요는 없어보이긴 합니다만, 의도하신거같으니 딱히 뭐라고는 못하갯네요
  8. 01:43:347 (103347|5,103347|6,103347|2,103347|0,103347|4,103347|1) - 요거 롱놋으로 해두 나쁘지 않을듯합니다
잡을게 읎다
DeletedUser_259972
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_259972

Reba wrote:

몇일 늦어졌네 미안 2쿠도를 받기위한 설계였다

Colmns : | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

[Ponicnic!]
00:22:651 (22651|6,22651|3) - pitch 가 내려가서 왼쪽으로하고 1놋 잭이 뭔가 치기에 불편한 감이있음. 이런 배치로 한다면 더 괜찮아지는거같음. 두번째 숏잭을 없앤 이유는, 첫번째는 음이 똑같지만 두번째는 음이 내려감. :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6883712 예쁘네

00:23:599 (23599|0,23678|5,23678|6) - 왼쪽으로 갔다 오른쪽으로 가는거보단 자연스럽게 흘러가는식이 나은듯 여긴 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6883728 이거는 뭐 알아서 바꿔봤어 ^~^

00:28:178 (28178|2) - 1칼럼으로 옮겨주는게 음을더 잘따라가는거같음 I disagree 첵스

00:31:730 (31730|3,31730|4,31809|2,31809|5,31888|4,31888|3,31967|5,31967|2,31967|1) - 개인적으로 치기 불편했음, 이렇게 바꿔줘도 될듯? :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6883754 저거 패턴 구상 어렵게 한거야 그래도 ㅠㅠ
띠로리로링 왔다갔다 하는 멜로디를 표현했달까

00:51:862 (51862|0) - 이 롱놋을 1/4 줄이면 미러가 가능하다 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6883795 짧으면 뭔가 이상해... 2% 부족하다


01:22:505 ~ 뭔가 불편함, 롱놋을 포기해도될듯? :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6883820 만약 수정했으면 미러버전으로 01:32:611 포기하니 편하네

01:24:242 (84242|4) - 칼럼 5를 3번 반복하지 않기위해 2레인으로 옮기기 01:24:084 (84084|4,84242|4,84400|4) - 얘가 같은 음으로 3개라서 고의DEATH

01:34:347 (94347|1) - 이유는없고 1레인으로 옮기는데 좋아보임 01:34:190 (94190|1,94347|1,94505|1) - 얘도 같은 음으로 3개라서 고의DEATH

치기 어려운 배치가 있었지만 그걸 지적하면 연계가 되어있어서 고치면 다른데 또 고쳐야하기 때문에 너의 매핑스타일을 존중하면서 해서 좀 짧게됬다
조아따

Interlude- wrote:

Lude's M4M
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7


[Picnic!]
  1. 00:08:915 - 02:05:769 - 여기 연타패턴에서 낮은 피아노음에 5개, 00:09:862 - 크래시에 4개를 주셨는데. 큰 차이는 없겠지만 비중을 반대로 바꿔보는거도 나쁘지 않을거같습니다. 낮은 피아노에 4개랑 크래시에 5개로, 좀 더 마지막에 비중을 두는건 어떠세요? 00:11:441 - 여기에선 제대로 크래시쪽엔 노트량을 늘려서 표현하셨네요. 참고! 그렇게 하는게 맞긴 한데 이쁘게 안나와.. ㅠㅠ
  2. 00:19:020 - 여기에만 5코드인데, 의도하셨나요? 하나 줄이시는건? 다른곳은 상한이 4코드 (크래시 제외)였네요. 참고! 엄마야? 잘못놨네
  3. 00:41:441 (41441|3) - 요걸 1번으루? 오 예쁘다
  4. 00:56:757 (56757|1,56836|0) - 요거 잭으로 해도 나쁘지않을거같네요 조용한 부분이라 잭은 죳또
  5. 01:22:979 (82979|4) - 요걸 3번으루? 뭔가 더 불편?
  6. 01:34:190 (94190|1) - 요걸 1번으루? 멜로디 때문에 의도적
  7. 01:37:900 (97900|2,97900|4) - 요기 2개일필요는 없어보이긴 합니다만, 의도하신거같으니 딱히 뭐라고는 못하갯네요 엇 1개만 있어도 되는구나 굳
  8. 01:43:347 (103347|5,103347|6,103347|2,103347|0,103347|4,103347|1) - 요거 롱놋으로 해두 나쁘지 않을듯합니다 흠흠 생각해보겠다
잡을게 읎다
후후후... 반말 쓰기 전이였군...
귀엽네 루드 오니이쨩?

둘 다 모딩 아리가또

Ramuchi wrote:

푸슈우우웅 별을 받아라
포니 나가
Lude
648 posts
Joined August 2015
Lude
난 모딩할땐 진지하다구
낄낄
REUSE-ABLE
360 posts
Joined October 2015
REUSE-ABLE
yeah.
love 8 bit map.
+1 kudos :D
XeoStyle
390 posts
Joined October 2013
XeoStyle
Hello jkd, it's zerostyl

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| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | (7K)

Beginner!
00:15:467 (15467|6) - snap problem ? if not, why 00:20:599 (20599|1) - is not the same ?

solid beginner diff
Lude's Normal!
00:55:178 (55178|5) - move to 3 for pitch
move 00:56:441 (56441|3) - to 7, 00:56:599 (56599|4) - to 3 and 00:56:757 (56757|5) - to 1 for pitch
00:58:967 (58967|3,59125|4,59283|5) - do kinda the same thing for this one ? ^
01:01:494 (61494|5,61651|3,61809|4) - CTRL + H for pitch
01:22:505 (82505|4) - would add a LN on 3 because it's a big loud sound.
01:32:611 (92611|2) - same ^
01:37:347 (97347|5) - same again, maybe a little more tricky for this one dunno
Wonki's Hyper!
00:07:967 (7967|2,7967|5,8283|1,8283|4,8599|0,8599|3) - would be cool to make them 1 less gap for pitch, like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7320202
00:24:073 - I feel like this section is a little bit missmapped, like it follows the rythm, but it does not follow the music so eeeeeeh...
00:51:862 (51862|0,51862|2,52020|0,52020|2,52178|4,52178|6,52178|5,52336|1,52336|3,52494|0,52494|2,52651|2,52651|0,52809|4,52809|6,52809|5,52967|3,52967|1) - ^ same for this little part, looks a little akward compared to the music
01:56:926 (116926|0,116926|2,117005|6,117084|0,117084|2,117163|5,117242|2,117242|4,117321|0,117400|2,117400|4,117479|1,117558|6,117558|4,117637|2,117716|6,117716|4) - kinda hard compared to the rest of the chart, concider nerf
02:09:558 (129558|5,129558|0,129558|1,129716|6,129716|3,129795|2,129874|1,129874|4,130032|5,130032|2) - same, a little hard :/

Another! is fine

gonna sleep brb for modding the rest (or not but I hope yes)
eyes
601 posts
Joined January 2016
eyes
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
Picnic!
00:03:783 (3783|4,3783|5) - maybe move it to 3|4 columns for emphasizing the sound
00:05:125 - just suggestion
00:09:862 - 00:10:178 - you can try something like 1.8x>0.2x>1.7x>0.3x>1.6x>0.4x for emphasizing the sound
00:12:230 (12230|2,12230|4,12309|6,12309|0,12309|3,12388|2,12388|1,12388|4,12388|5) - emphasize this sound somehow
00:36:230 (36230|1,36309|1,36388|2) - swap columns
01:22:505 - 01:22:821 - good moment for SVs
01:55:269 - add a note to 3rd column
Kawawa's Ex7ra!
00:03:783 (3783|3,3783|5,4020|3,4020|5) - different sounds
00:06:704 (6704|1,6704|3,6862|3,6862|1) - 00:07:967 (7967|1,7967|3,8125|3,8125|1) - ^
00:11:125 (11125|0,11125|6) - i think these should be simple notes
00:31:178 (31178|3,31336|3,31494|3,31651|3,31809|3,31967|3,32125|3) - 0_0 00:31:809 (31809|3,31809|2,31967|3,31967|2) - move these to 1|2 columns
00:33:546 (33546|5,33546|6,33546|1) - end at 00:33:704
00:43:809 (43809|4) - move to 7th column and make it double
00:54:073 - no burst here?
01:02:283 - note
01:04:494 - add lns (suggestion)
01:38:453 (98453|6,98611|5,98926|5,98926|6) - different pitch
01:43:347 - add lns (suggestion)
Wonki
931 posts
Joined February 2016
Wonki

XeoStyle wrote:

Wonki's Hyper!
00:07:967 (7967|2,7967|5,8283|1,8283|4,8599|0,8599|3) - would be cool to make them 1 less gap for pitch, like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7320202
00:24:073 - I feel like this section is a little bit missmapped, like it follows the rythm, but it does not follow the music so eeeeeeh... piano sound
00:51:862 (51862|0,51862|2,52020|0,52020|2,52178|4,52178|6,52178|5,52336|1,52336|3,52494|0,52494|2,52651|2,52651|0,52809|4,52809|6,52809|5,52967|3,52967|1) - ^ same for this little part, looks a little akward compared to the music
01:56:926 drum sound(116926|0,116926|2,117005|6,117084|0,117084|2,117163|5,117242|2,117242|4,117321|0,117400|2,117400|4,117479|1,117558|6,117558|4,117637|2,117716|6,117716|4) - kinda hard compared to the rest of the chart, concider nerf I don't think so
02:09:558 (129558|5,129558|0,129558|1,129716|6,129716|3,129795|2,129874|1,129874|4,130032|5,130032|2) - same, a little hard :/
02:09:795 - delete here

Another! is fine

gonna sleep brb for modding the rest (or not but I hope yes)
DeletedUser_259972
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_259972

XeoStyle wrote:

Hello jkd, it's zerostyl

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| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | (7K)

Beginner!
00:15:467 (15467|6) - snap problem ? if not, why 00:20:599 (20599|1) - is not the same ? fuck thanks

solid beginner diff

Another! is fine

gonna sleep brb for modding the rest (or not but I hope yes)
wao good modding
jpt modding maybe coming soon


no reply=fixed

eyes wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
Picnic!
00:03:783 (3783|4,3783|5) - maybe move it to 3|4 columns for emphasizing the sound nah I don't like the idea of jack
00:05:125 - just suggestion ^
00:09:862 - 00:10:178 - you can try something like 1.8x>0.2x>1.7x>0.3x>1.6x>0.4x for emphasizing the sound I emphasized them equally :P
00:12:230 (12230|2,12230|4,12309|6,12309|0,12309|3,12388|2,12388|1,12388|4,12388|5) - emphasize this sound somehow edited it but didn't emphasize it
00:36:230 (36230|1,36309|1,36388|2) - swap columns
01:22:505 - 01:22:821 - good moment for SVs i disagree -- this part is particularly intense since there's 1/8 burst, so putting SV makes it too hard and unreadable
01:55:269 - add a note to 3rd column kinda shuffled
ayy lmao
Kawawa
Kawawa

eyes wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
Kawawa's Ex7ra!
00:03:783 (3783|3,3783|5,4020|3,4020|5) - different sounds
00:06:704 (6704|1,6704|3,6862|3,6862|1) - 00:07:967 (7967|1,7967|3,8125|3,8125|1) - ^
I really don't get it what you mean. actually there's no change to me.

00:11:125 (11125|0,11125|6) - i think these should be simple notes
It's okay

00:31:178 (31178|3,31336|3,31494|3,31651|3,31809|3,31967|3,32125|3) - 0_0 00:31:809 (31809|3,31809|2,31967|3,31967|2) - move these to 1|2 columns Arranged something. Thanks!

00:33:546 (33546|5,33546|6,33546|1) - end at 00:33:704 Nice point!

00:43:809 (43809|4) - move to 7th column and make it double will keep

00:54:073 - no burst here? consider
01:02:283 - note keeping by SV sections.
01:04:494 - add lns (suggestion) for break time.
01:38:453 (98453|6,98611|5,98926|5,98926|6) - different pitch I made it jack on drum part
01:43:347 - add lns (suggestion) for break time.
Thanks! Fixed :: https://puu.sh/usmbN/e300e0b234.osu
Soul Evans
Elite Mapper
425 posts
Joined June 2014
Soul Evans
This song/video is waaaay too cute OMG >w<
Soul's Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7

General


  1. BPM: Okay
  2. Offset: Okay
  3. AiMod: Okay
  4. Tags: Maybe add ''cute'' and ''8bit'' to tags, it's a cute song and 8bit or maybe chiptune would work instead
  5. BG: Okay
  6. Kiai: Okay
  7. Metadata: Okay
  8. Folder’s problem: None
  9. Hitsound: Okay
  10. Timing: Okay
  11. Other: I have an idea about the diff naming for the last diff, picnic! seems too bland and obvious for a diff name while it does work but i have some suggestions to add to it to spice it up:
    super summer day
    fantastic fun time
    Strawberry
    and you can add it with picnic and it would seem less bland
    [Picnic!]
  12. 00:20:915 (20915|6) - idk dude maybe it would be better if you moved it to column 5
  13. 00:21:862 (21862|5,22020|6) - i prefer if you reversed this, it would give a better flow for 00:21:704 - and give a better opening for 00:22:178 (22178|4,22257|4) -
  14. 00:22:809 - I find it better that you either do it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7488152 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7488156 The sound i'm hearing for the ''dudududu'' could be better interpreted as a slamming chord rather than a loose wonky one
  15. 00:23:678 (23678|5) - Move to 4 and 00:23:757 (23757|5) - to 7 while 00:23:678 (23678|6) - to 6, i think this is a consistent pattern for the later section in what you used and gives a better intro for the streams i think
  16. 00:53:757 - Idk man as much as i can combo everything decently in that map, i just couldn't combo this for some reason. the patterns are way to harsh compared to everything else, and i know it's meant to be a roll but for the sake of keeping the difficulty spike consistent i'd recommend https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7488188
  17. 01:10:967 (70967|3) - Moving this to 4 would not make that note get in the way of the slow jam jack, it's been trouble hitting those
  18. 01:21:716 (81716|4,81874|4,81953|5,82032|4) - i'm not sure this pattern suits, maybe you could change it
  19. 01:26:532 (86532|2,86690|2,86847|2,87005|2) - Dude, i suggest changing it LOL
  20. 01:58:979 (118979|2,119058|4,119058|2,119137|1,119137|3,119216|2,119295|1,119374|2,119453|3,119453|0,119532|1,119532|4) - you know when you have a mimi jack at the start of that stream people would just mess up on it, so i suggest changing it
I think that's all i have to say about this diff, cute map >.<
DeletedUser_259972
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_259972

Soul Evans wrote:

This song/video is waaaay too cute OMG >w< AYYYYYYYY
Soul's Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7

General

^ hey wait isn't this mine ^

  1. BPM: Okay
  2. Offset: Okay
  3. AiMod: Okay
  4. Tags: Maybe add ''cute'' and ''8bit'' to tags, it's a cute song and 8bit or maybe chiptune would work instead I'll add 8bit and chiptune huehue
  5. BG: Okay
  6. Kiai: Okay
  7. Metadata: Okay
  8. Folder’s problem: None
  9. Hitsound: Okay
  10. Timing: Okay
  11. Other: I have an idea about the diff naming for the last diff, picnic! seems too bland and obvious for a diff name while it does work but i have some suggestions to add to it to spice it up:
    super summer day
    fantastic fun time
    Strawberry
    and you can add it with picnic and it would seem less bland
    Hmm I'll stick with the current one for now
    I'll come up with different names maybe
    [Picnic!]
  12. 00:20:915 (20915|6) - idk dude maybe it would be better if you moved it to column 5 what's wrong about it? :^)
  13. 00:21:862 (21862|5,22020|6) - i prefer if you reversed this, it would give a better flow for 00:21:704 - and give a better opening for 00:22:178 (22178|4,22257|4) - this part 00:21:704 (21704|5,21783|4,21862|5,22020|6) - was following the melody, so yeah i'll stick with current one
  14. 00:22:809 - I find it better that you either do it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7488152 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7488156 The sound i'm hearing for the ''dudududu'' could be better interpreted as a slamming chord rather than a loose wonky one heyy first one looks pretty nice
  15. 00:23:678 (23678|5) - Move to 4 and 00:23:757 (23757|5) - to 7 while 00:23:678 (23678|6) - to 6, i think this is a consistent pattern for the later section in what you used and gives a better intro for the streams i think changed it a little bit
  16. 00:53:757 - Idk man as much as i can combo everything decently in that map, i just couldn't combo this for some reason. the patterns are way to harsh compared to everything else, and i know it's meant to be a roll but for the sake of keeping the difficulty spike consistent i'd recommend https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7488188
    not quite sure if that'll make it any easier tho
    and I think current one is pretty decent to hit and looks nice too
    it's 6.5* :^)
  17. 01:10:967 (70967|3) - Moving this to 4 would not make that note get in the way of the slow jam jack, it's been trouble hitting those hmm. is it that hard? I was intending the pitch relevancy on 01:10:809 (70809|2,70967|4,71125|1,71283|3,71441|0,71757|2) - so i'm not sure about changing the current pattern
  18. 01:21:716 (81716|4,81874|4,81953|5,82032|4) - i'm not sure this pattern suits, maybe you could change it moved 01:21:716 (81716|4) - to 7. that looks ok right?
  19. 01:26:532 (86532|2,86690|2,86847|2,87005|2) - Dude, i suggest changing it LOL I'm not sure how to make this part clearner than this
    I've discussed with Kawawa so long since the original one looked so ugly
    this is the best result we got
    plz suggest how to fix this shit cuz i know this part's shit :(
  20. 01:58:979 (118979|2,119058|4,119058|2,119137|1,119137|3,119216|2,119295|1,119374|2,119453|3,119453|0,119532|1,119532|4) - you know when you have a mimi jack at the start of that stream people would just mess up on it, so i suggest changing it fixed boiii
I think that's all i have to say about this diff, cute map >.<
thanks for the sudden mod :D
the map is pretty much complete with its pattern concept so I feel like I rejected so much but it really helped :D
Crumpey
565 posts
Joined October 2013
Crumpey
Im liking what i see, +3 stars
DeletedUser_259972
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_259972

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

Im liking what i see, +3 stars
wow thank
Reba
823 posts
Joined August 2013
Reba
Just a quick revision

[Picnic!]
00:00:862 (862|5) - 두구두구할때 00:00:230 (230|5,309|4,546|1,625|2) - 얘네들의 의도를 이어서 이렇게 재배치 한다면 일관성이 더 유지되고 더 좋다 개인적으로 :: http://puu.sh/vTjfa/a28600b186.jpg

00:12:073 (12073|4,12073|2,12151|5,12151|1) - 뭔가 양쪽으로 얘네들을 스왚해주면 칠때 더 편하고 좋다, 지금의 상태에선 개인적으로 손이 잘 안간다.

00:17:915 (17915|5,17915|1) - 칼럼 1하고 7로 벌려주는건 어때. 전과 같이 playability 를 참고해서 지적하는것이다.

00:28:178 (28178|2) - move to 1 :v 뭔가 칠때 지금 상태로는 내가 로리이고 감금되어있는 느낌을 받는다. 이건 벌려줘야 시원하다

00:31:336 ~ 00:32:757 - 패턴은 노래에 꽤 알맞지만 개인적으로 치기가 너무 불편한 배치다, 참신한 패턴이라면 지적을 안하겠지만 내 개인적인 생각으로는 이건 참신한 패턴이 아니라 불편한 패턴이라고 생각한다, 이렇게 배치를하면 의도를 살짝 유지함과 동시에 더 좋은 패턴이라고 생각한다 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8113862 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8113974

00:36:230 (36230|3) - 너무 쪼여있다, 좀 벌려주자 :: http://puu.sh/vTln9/251cffd6de.jpg

01:08:599 (68599|4) - 난 이거 좀 꼬였다, 그리고 뒤에도 1칼럼에 노트가 없어서 거미줄 생기겠다. 나를위해 1칼럼으로 옮겨주라 owo

01:12:546 (72546|0,72625|1) - 이건 확실히 1칼럼 반복이 왼쪽에 있는데 이것까지 왼쪽에 있으면 왼쪽손에 부담이 크다. 오른쪽으로 이런식으로 움직이면 더 개선될거같다 :: http://puu.sh/vTlCJ/f80d5c3a63.jpg

01:13:494 - 이런곳에서 232 와 같은 패턴은 솔직히 손이 너무 쉽게 꼬이고 불편하다. 스샷처럼 수정하는건 어떨까? :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8114013

01:26:769 (86769|0,86769|1,86926|1,86926|0) - 왼쪽손에게 부담이 심한거같다. 이렇게 한다면 개인적으로 낫다고 생각한다 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8114031

01:34:347 (94347|1) - move to 1? :v

02:08:926 (128926|5,128926|3,128926|1,129005|4,129005|2) - 이건 00:12:073 - 이거의 모딩을 적용했다면 해라
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Reba wrote:

Just a quick revision

[Picnic!]
00:00:862 (862|5) - 두구두구할때 00:00:230 (230|5,309|4,546|1,625|2) - 얘네들의 의도를 이어서 이렇게 재배치 한다면 일관성이 더 유지되고 더 좋다 개인적으로 :: http://puu.sh/vTjfa/a28600b186.jpg 올ㅋ

00:12:073 (12073|4,12073|2,12151|5,12151|1) - 뭔가 양쪽으로 얘네들을 스왚해주면 칠때 더 편하고 좋다, 지금의 상태에선 개인적으로 손이 잘 안간다. 시로 (뭔가 애매한 연타가 생기는 느낌)

00:17:915 (17915|5,17915|1) - 칼럼 1하고 7로 벌려주는건 어때. 전과 같이 playability 를 참고해서 지적하는것이다. 00:17:757 (17757|1,17915|1,17994|2,18073|1) - 00:17:757 (17757|5,17915|5,17994|4,18073|5) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다.

00:28:178 (28178|2) - move to 1 :v 뭔가 칠때 지금 상태로는 내가 로리이고 감금되어있는 느낌을 받는다. 이건 벌려줘야 시원하다 00:27:862 (27862|2,28020|2,28099|1,28178|2) - 00:27:862 (27862|5,28020|5,28099|4,28178|5) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다.

00:31:336 ~ 00:32:757 - 패턴은 노래에 꽤 알맞지만 개인적으로 치기가 너무 불편한 배치다, 참신한 패턴이라면 지적을 안하겠지만 내 개인적인 생각으로는 이건 참신한 패턴이 아니라 불편한 패턴이라고 생각한다, 이렇게 배치를하면 의도를 살짝 유지함과 동시에 더 좋은 패턴이라고 생각한다 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8113862 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8113974 00:31:651 (31651|2,31730|3,31809|2,31888|3,31967|2) - 00:31:651 (31651|5,31730|4,31809|5,31888|4,31967|5) - 00:32:283 (32283|1,32362|2,32441|1,32520|2,32599|1) - 00:32:283 (32283|4,32362|3,32441|4,32520|3,32599|4) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다. (꽤 참신하다 생각했는데 히잉 ㅠ)

00:36:230 (36230|3) - 너무 쪼여있다, 좀 벌려주자 :: http://puu.sh/vTln9/251cffd6de.jpg 하응 너무 쪼엿

01:08:599 (68599|4) - 난 이거 좀 꼬였다, 그리고 뒤에도 1칼럼에 노트가 없어서 거미줄 생기겠다. 나를위해 1칼럼으로 옮겨주라 owo 01:08:125 (68125|4,68204|2,68283|4,68441|4,68520|2,68599|4,68757|3,68915|2) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다.

01:12:546 (72546|0,72625|1) - 이건 확실히 1칼럼 반복이 왼쪽에 있는데 이것까지 왼쪽에 있으면 왼쪽손에 부담이 크다. 오른쪽으로 이런식으로 움직이면 더 개선될거같다 :: http://puu.sh/vTlCJ/f80d5c3a63.jpg 01:12:073 (72073|6,72230|4,72388|4,72546|0,72625|1,72704|4,72862|0,73020|4) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다. (만약 고친다면 01:12:625 (72625|1) - 를 4로 옮기는 방법이 있겠지만 같은 거미줄이 생기고 스페이스바에 있어서 오히려 불편할듯)

01:13:494 - 이런곳에서 232 와 같은 패턴은 솔직히 손이 너무 쉽게 꼬이고 불편하다. 스샷처럼 수정하는건 어떨까? :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8114013 01:13:336 (73336|1,73494|1,73573|2,73651|1,73809|0,73967|3,74125|2,74283|1,74441|2) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다.

01:26:769 (86769|0,86769|1,86926|1,86926|0) - 왼쪽손에게 부담이 심한거같다. 이렇게 한다면 개인적으로 낫다고 생각한다 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8114031 오 굳, 조금 대칭되게 바꿨다

01:34:347 (94347|1) - move to 1? :v 01:34:190 (94190|1,94347|1,94426|2,94505|1) - 이거슨 멜로디를 따라간다.

02:08:926 (128926|5,128926|3,128926|1,129005|4,129005|2) - 이건 00:12:073 - 이거의 모딩을 적용했다면 해라 뀨
뭔가 멜로디 따라간다면서 많이 거절했는데
다 괜찮은 제안이였다

나중에 생각해보고 바꿀거있으면 바꾸도록 하지

그리고 또 무덤갔네 슈발
_VianK_
785 posts
Joined August 2015
_VianK_
hello jakads~

M4M from this queue t/560468


another


00:01:651 (1651|0) - to 00:05:125 (5125|0) - https://puu.sh/whVRb/2d5bc9912c.jpg for a big effect
01:22:505 (82505|4) - change this LN to 1/8 beats
01:22:505 (82505|4,83137|1,83769|1,84400|5,85032|5) - add one note again
01:32:611 (92611|2) - change this LN to 1/8 beats
01:37:347 (97347|1) - ^

wonki's hyper


00:06:704 (6704|3,7336|5,7967|2,8599|3) - add one note again
01:37:979 (97979|1) - add one note
01:39:242 (99242|0) - ^
01:53:137 (113137|0) - ^
01:54:400 (114400|5) - ^
01:58:190 (118190|6) - ^


overall this mapset was cool.. i love it
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Ridho 2307 wrote:

hello jakads~

M4M from this queue t/560468


another


00:01:651 (1651|0) - to 00:05:125 (5125|0) - https://puu.sh/whVRb/2d5bc9912c.jpg for a big effect becomes too hard imo
01:22:505 (82505|4) - change this LN to 1/8 beats oh no this is another diff
01:22:505 (82505|4,83137|1,83769|1,84400|5,85032|5) - add one note again
01:32:611 (92611|2) - change this LN to 1/8 beats same
01:37:347 (97347|1) - ^ same
[/box]


overall this mapset was cool.. i love it
Wonki says he won't change anything
thanks for modding tho :D
_VianK_
785 posts
Joined August 2015
_VianK_

jakads wrote:

Ridho 2307 wrote:

hello jakads~

M4M from this queue t/560468


another


00:01:651 (1651|0) - to 00:05:125 (5125|0) - https://puu.sh/whVRb/2d5bc9912c.jpg for a big effect becomes too hard imo
01:22:505 (82505|4) - change this LN to 1/8 beats oh no this is another diff
01:22:505 (82505|4,83137|1,83769|1,84400|5,85032|5) - add one note again
01:32:611 (92611|2) - change this LN to 1/8 beats same
01:37:347 (97347|1) - ^ same
[/box]


overall this mapset was cool.. i love it
Wonki says he won't change anything
thanks for modding tho :D

Nope...
Mordu
50 posts
Joined January 2016
Mordu
Picnic
1) Move this one 01:07:336 (67336|4) here 01:07:336 (67336|2) - feels better.
2) Move this one 01:26:769 (86769|4) to column 3, add this note 01:27:005 (87005|6), move this 01:27:084 (87084|6) to column 5, move this one 01:27:242 (87242|6) here 01:27:163 (87163|6), move this one 01:27:400 (87400|6) to column , move this note 01:27:795 (87795|2) to column 4.
It will be like this
3) 01:26:137 (86137|4,86137|0,86216|1,86295|4,86295|6,86295|2,86295|5,86374|3,86453|4,86453|0,86532|5) That stair is weird.
I realized that making the details for suggestion number 2 was pointless after taking the photo.
Except for the mods I did; Picnic! is already good to go, same for Kawawa's Ex7ra and your Another.
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Sr_Korah wrote:

Picnic
1) Move this one 01:07:336 (67336|4) here 01:07:336 (67336|2) - feels better. 01:07:178 (67178|2,67257|3,67336|4,67494|5,67651|6) - these are following the main melody
2) Move this one 01:26:769 (86769|4) to column 3, add this note 01:27:005 (87005|6), move this 01:27:084 (87084|6) to column 5, move this one 01:27:242 (87242|6) here 01:27:163 (87163|6), move this one 01:27:400 (87400|6) to column , move this note 01:27:795 (87795|2) to column 4.
It will be like this hoyl too many notes on the middle part there
not sure about that
3) 01:26:137 (86137|4,86137|0,86216|1,86295|4,86295|6,86295|2,86295|5,86374|3,86453|4,86453|0,86532|5) That stair is weird. what's weird about it?
I realized that making the details for suggestion number 2 was pointless after taking the photo.
Except for the mods I did; Picnic! is already good to go, same for Kawawa's Ex7ra and your Another.
thanks for the unexpected mod!
though i didn't change anything, it helped improve my map :D

== Kawa's diff remapping is planned ==
Niks
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Niks
when rank
DeletedUser_259972
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Niks wrote:

when rank
soon
DeletedUser_259972
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Kawawa has finished remapping his diff
now it's really ready for rank
Litharrale
705 posts
Joined August 2013
Litharrale
can i rank this
Critical_Star
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1,241 posts
Joined December 2013
Critical_Star
very very old request :(


Lude's Normal!
00:01:020 (1020|4,1178|2) - would prefer a normal note here, unlike 00:00:073 (73|2,388|4,704|2) - which have a consistent drum roll
00:13:651 - could give another note here as well
00:21:230 (21230|1) - move to 3?
00:24:546 - i suggest double at 00:24:704 - rather than 00:24:546 - (melody + kick)
00:29:599 (29599|4,29757|5) - same idea like above ^ kinda similiar part as well
00:28:020 (28020|2,28099|3,28178|4,28178|0) - move to the right by 2 seems nice
00:45:151 (45151|1) - i see your intention on this part till 00:51:546 - but i find if you later these melody with 1/2 stream here would be better for normal diff. example > http://puu.sh/yFytd/5a78bc0ec8.png

Wonki's Hyper!
00:05:125 - 00:05:441 - 00:05:757 - add a note to emphasizes the drum on every 1/1?
00:12:073 - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyBr/fe102c11b3.png
00:12:862 (12862|3,13020|1,13178|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyD2/570ab21290.png
00:13:651 - u can add another note at 6 to represent the same crash like 00:13:494 (13494|6,13494|5) -
00:22:967 (22967|5,22967|6,23125|1,23125|0,23283|3,23283|2,23441|4,23441|5) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyEJ/7fa703ef0e.png
00:53:125 (53125|2,53125|0,53204|6,53204|4,53283|0,53283|2,53362|6,53362|4,53441|3,53441|2,53441|1,53520|4,53520|5,53599|1,53599|2,53678|5,53678|4) - please do consider to reduce the pattern density here with the normal diff gap > http://puu.sh/yFyIr/9a4cb6a429.png
01:13:573 (73573|5) - move to 5 seems much comfortable to hit
01:14:599 (74599|2,74678|4,74757|2,74836|4,74915|2,74998|4,75081|2,75165|4,75249|2,75337|4,75425|2,75513|4,75601|2,75694|4,75788|2,75882|4,75977|6,76077|2,76177|6,76277|2,76377|6,76484|2,76591|6,76698|2) - i know is not wrong to do so but i am concern with the pattern density with the normal diff, perhaps try another way round rather a trill pattern
01:56:926 (116926|0,116926|2,117005|6,117084|0,117084|2,117163|5,117242|4,117242|2,117321|0,117400|2,117400|4,117479|1,117558|4,117558|6,117637|2,117716|6,117716|4,117795|3) - would suggest to reduce the 1/4 layering here, suggest only double on each 1/2

rest diff will be checked again after these mod
Lude
648 posts
Joined August 2015
Lude

Critical_Star wrote:

very very old request :(


Lude's Normal!
00:01:020 (1020|4,1178|2) - would prefer a normal note here, unlike 00:00:073 (73|2,388|4,704|2) - which have a consistent drum roll
00:13:651 - could give another note here as well
00:21:230 (21230|1) - move to 3?
00:24:546 - i suggest double at 00:24:704 - rather than 00:24:546 - (melody + kick) Fixed differently, according to the pattern
00:29:599 (29599|4,29757|5) - same idea like above ^ kinda similiar part as well
00:28:020 (28020|2,28099|3,28178|4,28178|0) - move to the right by 2 seems nice
00:45:151 (45151|1) - i see your intention on this part till 00:51:546 - but i find if you later these melody with 1/2 stream here would be better for normal diff. example > http://puu.sh/yFytd/5a78bc0ec8.png Gonna keep it as it is, 1/2 is too boring
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