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Umeboshi Chazuke - Panic! Pop'n! Picnic! [OsuMania]

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Kawawa has finished remapping his diff
now it's really ready for rank
Litharrale
can i rank this
Critical_Star
very very old request :(


Lude's Normal!
00:01:020 (1020|4,1178|2) - would prefer a normal note here, unlike 00:00:073 (73|2,388|4,704|2) - which have a consistent drum roll
00:13:651 - could give another note here as well
00:21:230 (21230|1) - move to 3?
00:24:546 - i suggest double at 00:24:704 - rather than 00:24:546 - (melody + kick)
00:29:599 (29599|4,29757|5) - same idea like above ^ kinda similiar part as well
00:28:020 (28020|2,28099|3,28178|4,28178|0) - move to the right by 2 seems nice
00:45:151 (45151|1) - i see your intention on this part till 00:51:546 - but i find if you later these melody with 1/2 stream here would be better for normal diff. example > http://puu.sh/yFytd/5a78bc0ec8.png

Wonki's Hyper!
00:05:125 - 00:05:441 - 00:05:757 - add a note to emphasizes the drum on every 1/1?
00:12:073 - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyBr/fe102c11b3.png
00:12:862 (12862|3,13020|1,13178|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyD2/570ab21290.png
00:13:651 - u can add another note at 6 to represent the same crash like 00:13:494 (13494|6,13494|5) -
00:22:967 (22967|5,22967|6,23125|1,23125|0,23283|3,23283|2,23441|4,23441|5) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyEJ/7fa703ef0e.png
00:53:125 (53125|2,53125|0,53204|6,53204|4,53283|0,53283|2,53362|6,53362|4,53441|3,53441|2,53441|1,53520|4,53520|5,53599|1,53599|2,53678|5,53678|4) - please do consider to reduce the pattern density here with the normal diff gap > http://puu.sh/yFyIr/9a4cb6a429.png
01:13:573 (73573|5) - move to 5 seems much comfortable to hit
01:14:599 (74599|2,74678|4,74757|2,74836|4,74915|2,74998|4,75081|2,75165|4,75249|2,75337|4,75425|2,75513|4,75601|2,75694|4,75788|2,75882|4,75977|6,76077|2,76177|6,76277|2,76377|6,76484|2,76591|6,76698|2) - i know is not wrong to do so but i am concern with the pattern density with the normal diff, perhaps try another way round rather a trill pattern
01:56:926 (116926|0,116926|2,117005|6,117084|0,117084|2,117163|5,117242|4,117242|2,117321|0,117400|2,117400|4,117479|1,117558|4,117558|6,117637|2,117716|6,117716|4,117795|3) - would suggest to reduce the 1/4 layering here, suggest only double on each 1/2

rest diff will be checked again after these mod
Lude

Critical_Star wrote:

very very old request :(


Lude's Normal!
00:01:020 (1020|4,1178|2) - would prefer a normal note here, unlike 00:00:073 (73|2,388|4,704|2) - which have a consistent drum roll
00:13:651 - could give another note here as well
00:21:230 (21230|1) - move to 3?
00:24:546 - i suggest double at 00:24:704 - rather than 00:24:546 - (melody + kick) Fixed differently, according to the pattern
00:29:599 (29599|4,29757|5) - same idea like above ^ kinda similiar part as well
00:28:020 (28020|2,28099|3,28178|4,28178|0) - move to the right by 2 seems nice
00:45:151 (45151|1) - i see your intention on this part till 00:51:546 - but i find if you later these melody with 1/2 stream here would be better for normal diff. example > http://puu.sh/yFytd/5a78bc0ec8.png Gonna keep it as it is, 1/2 is too boring
Wonki

Critical_Star wrote:

very very old request :(

Wonki's Hyper!
00:05:125 - 00:05:441 - 00:05:757 - add a note to emphasizes the drum on every 1/1? // I think it is enough to express itself only with LN.
00:12:073 - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyBr/fe102c11b3.png // Add to 1 3 4
00:12:862 (12862|3,13020|1,13178|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyD2/570ab21290.png // i focus on pressing 'spacebar' twice, so i think its ok now.
00:13:651 - u can add another note at 6 to represent the same crash like 00:13:494 (13494|6,13494|5) - // i put 2 notes on splashing piano sound and left part put notes following melody after.
00:22:967 (22967|5,22967|6,23125|1,23125|0,23283|3,23283|2,23441|4,23441|5) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yFyEJ/7fa703ef0e.png // personally, I think it's better now.
00:53:125 (53125|2,53125|0,53204|6,53204|4,53283|0,53283|2,53362|6,53362|4,53441|3,53441|2,53441|1,53520|4,53520|5,53599|1,53599|2,53678|5,53678|4) - please do consider to reduce the pattern density here with the normal diff gap > http://puu.sh/yFyIr/9a4cb6a429.png // Changed
01:13:573 (73573|5) - move to 5 seems much comfortable to hit // OK
01:14:599 (74599|2,74678|4,74757|2,74836|4,74915|2,74998|4,75081|2,75165|4,75249|2,75337|4,75425|2,75513|4,75601|2,75694|4,75788|2,75882|4,75977|6,76077|2,76177|6,76277|2,76377|6,76484|2,76591|6,76698|2) - i know is not wrong to do so but i am concern with the pattern density with the normal diff, perhaps try another way round rather a trill pattern // I think so too. this needs change
01:56:926 (116926|0,116926|2,117005|6,117084|0,117084|2,117163|5,117242|4,117242|2,117321|0,117400|2,117400|4,117479|1,117558|4,117558|6,117637|2,117716|6,117716|4,117795|3) - would suggest to reduce the 1/4 layering here, suggest only double on each 1/2 // I choose double on each 1/2

rest diff will be checked again after these mod
Thanks for mod :)
Litharrale
holy fuck i was meant to check this too but i see CS is already here, call me back after CS is done and i swear to god i will do something about this lovely set
AyeAries

Litharrale wrote:

this lovely set
rank pls <3
Critical_Star
have some discussion with the mapper about pattern gap between diff, it is fine now o/
mainly fixed some pattern
good luck :)
-mint-
take my stars
_Streamy_
Hype!!
Nysrogh
I can't wait for the pp :o
Kyousuke-
finally this map can be pushed lmao
Aruel
and now I'm here to push this rank

[General]
문제점 없음

[Picnic!]
00:01:020 - ~ 00:01:178 - 앞에 패턴을 봤을 때 양쪽 대칭으로 하는게 낫지 않을까
00:20:125 (20125|4,20283|4) - 갑자기 잭이 있는데? 부드럽게 뒤에 노트를 7로 옮기든지 해봐
00:31:651 (31651|2,31651|5,31730|4,31730|3,31809|5,31809|2,31888|4,31888|3,31967|5,31967|2) - 00:32:283 (32283|4,32283|1,32362|3,32362|2,32441|1,32441|4,32520|2,32520|3,32599|4,32599|1) - 치기 까다롭지 않아?
00:43:020 - ~ 00:43:336 - 여기 연타 애매하다 손이 잘 안가
00:58:178 (58178|4,58178|3,58336|1,58494|3,58494|2,58651|0,58809|5,58809|3) - 이거 순차적으로 복붙해서 왼쪽으로 가게 만들면 괜찮을듯
01:00:704 - ~ 01:01:809 - 이부분 잭이 너무 불규칙적이야 좀 옮기는게 낫겠어
01:38:769 (98769|3) - 01:40:190 (100190|2) - 01:41:374 (101374|4) - 01:42:242 (102242|2) - 01:42:874 (102874|5) - 고스트노트?

[Kawawa's Ex7ra!]
잡을 거리를 찾지 못했습니다

[Another!]
00:38:915 (38915|3,39073|3,39230|3) - 여기 스페 연타 치기가 좀 애매해
01:07:020 - ~ 01:14:599 - 여기 음정 정확하게 따라간건 좋은데 패턴을 좀 예쁘게 바꾸는 게 좋을듯

[Wonki's Hyper!]
00:06:388 - 여기 갑작스럽게 연타가 나오는데 하드치고는 너무 어렵지 않나?
00:31:336 - 여기 드럼소리가 아니니깐 2놋이 아니라 1놋으로 하는게 맞을 것 같아
01:22:821 - 3놋을 쓰는게 더 적절해보여
01:32:926 - ^
01:51:953 - 01:52:111 - 01:52:269 - 01:52:426 - 노트 빠졌다

[Lude's Normal!]
00:15:073 - 여기 노트 빠지지 않았어?
00:25:178 - ^
00:30:230 - ^
01:16:806 - ~ 01:17:517 - 2놋은 좀 많지 않아? 1놋으로도 충분히 강조될듯

[Beginner!]
문제 없다

Topic Starter
DeletedUser_259972
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Fresh Chicken wrote:

and now I'm here to push this rank

[General]
문제점 없음

[Picnic!]
00:01:020 - ~ 00:01:178 - 앞에 패턴을 봤을 때 양쪽 대칭으로 하는게 낫지 않을까
00:20:125 (20125|4,20283|4) - 갑자기 잭이 있는데? 부드럽게 뒤에 노트를 7로 옮기든지 해봐
00:31:651 (31651|2,31651|5,31730|4,31730|3,31809|5,31809|2,31888|4,31888|3,31967|5,31967|2) - 00:32:283 (32283|4,32283|1,32362|3,32362|2,32441|1,32441|4,32520|2,32520|3,32599|4,32599|1) - 치기 까다롭지 않아? 일부러 그렇게 한거야
괜찮을듯

00:43:020 - ~ 00:43:336 - 여기 연타 애매하다 손이 잘 안가
00:58:178 (58178|4,58178|3,58336|1,58494|3,58494|2,58651|0,58809|5,58809|3) - 이거 순차적으로 복붙해서 왼쪽으로 가게 만들면 괜찮을듯
01:00:704 - ~ 01:01:809 - 이부분 잭이 너무 불규칙적이야 좀 옮기는게 낫겠어
01:38:769 (98769|3) - 01:40:190 (100190|2) - 01:41:374 (101374|4) - 01:42:242 (102242|2) - 01:42:874 (102874|5) - 고스트노트? ㄴㄴ
베이스음 소리 있어


[Kawawa's Ex7ra!]
잡을 거리를 찾지 못했습니다

[Another!]
00:38:915 (38915|3,39073|3,39230|3) - 여기 스페 연타 치기가 좀 애매해 나는 괜찮은거같아
01:07:020 - ~ 01:14:599 - 여기 음정 정확하게 따라간건 좋은데 패턴을 좀 예쁘게 바꾸는 게 좋을듯

[Wonki's Hyper!]
00:06:388 - 여기 갑작스럽게 연타가 나오는데 하드치고는 너무 어렵지 않나?
00:31:336 - 여기 드럼소리가 아니니깐 2놋이 아니라 1놋으로 하는게 맞을 것 같아
01:22:821 - 3놋을 쓰는게 더 적절해보여 ㄴㄴ 여기 2놋이 컨셉
01:32:926 - ^ ^
01:51:953 - 01:52:111 - 01:52:269 - 01:52:426 - 노트 빠졌다 여기 소리 안들리는데?

[Lude's Normal!]
00:15:073 - 여기 노트 빠지지 않았어?
00:25:178 - ^
00:30:230 - ^
01:16:806 - ~ 01:17:517 - 2놋은 좀 많지 않아? 1놋으로도 충분히 강조될듯 저긴 더 강조가 필요한 것 같아

[Beginner!]
문제 없다

Aruel
Fuck you
Garalulu

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Fuck you
Crumpey
Fuck this is old, finally jakads <3

congrats on qual
AyeAries
congrats!! ( ̄ε ̄〃)b
DJ_OSPREY
Can you add easy dif?
DJ_OSPREY
We need a 4k version
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