BURNOUT SYNDROMES - Hikari Are (TV Size) [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Vincs

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Vincs 2016-10-28T06:58:14+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 11 février 2017 at 21:42:07

Artist: BURNOUT SYNDROMES
Title: Hikari Are (TV Size)
Source: Haikyuu!!: Karasuno Koukou VS Shiratorizawa Gakuen Koukou
Tags: haikyuu volleyball crows cawub karasuno
BPM: 178
Filesize: 2773kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Cawub's Salad (2,55 stars, 224 notes)
Crows (5,09 stars, 389 notes)
Platter (3,14 stars, 324 notes)
Rain (4,05 stars, 402 notes)

Download: BURNOUT SYNDROMES - Hikari Are (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Changed MP3 might wanna redownload (08/12/2016)
ok i fucked up but now its fixed

haikyuu is pretty good (like top 1 good)
did that in a bit less than 4 hours :^)
nerfed something because of cawub
did some polishing, probably more to do
fullspread?
(idk if the last diff is rankable tbh)
all the spacings should be fixed on the last diff, except at the ending
cimer kyu bb
i really dont know how to make streams for the last diff
ty caleb for the salad
ty benny big help ♥
hitsounds done ( 2 months later lul )

Last edited by Vincs 2017-02-11T20:42:39+00:00, edited 14 times in total.

o x

1,528 posts

Joined May 2015

o x 2016-11-03T20:46:08+00:00

Haikyuu ftw!
[Rain]
00:08:315 (2) - I think this should just be a single circle.

That's all I could really find cough cough because I did a ton of irc modding. I love this map, good job!
[Crows]
00:19:270 (5) - NC here would make sense.
00:32:416 (1) - Try putting the slider end at x:96 y:192 I the jump flows better this way.
01:10:337 (6,1) - Not a fan of this jump, sounds a bit awkward to me
01:13:961 (4,5,6) - so many hypers @.@ try closing the distance of these a bit.
01:18:764 (3,4,5) - and these qwq
01:19:185 (3,4,5) - aaaaand these ;w;
^that's of course my opinion I don't like those kinds of hypers
01:24:663 (4,5,6) - This feels a bit klunky of a jump I prefer the distance between 5,6 to be shorter or the kick sliders to be circles.

I like this map it's lots of fun to play! Nice job most of the hypers feel like they flow nicely.

Hope this helped, I will mod the rest of the difficulties when they are completed!

Salad

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31320
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari Are (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Hikari Are (TV Size)
Artist:BURNOUT SYNDROMES
ArtistUnicode:BURNOUT SYNDROMES
Creator:Vincs
Version:Salad
Source:Haikyuu!!: Karasuno Koukou VS Shiratorizawa Gakuen Koukou
Tags:
BeatmapID:1121145
BeatmapSetID:526177

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3.8
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:6.8
ApproachRate:6.8
SliderMultiplier:1.62
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Vincs

166 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Vincs 2016-11-03T21:10:46+00:00

Thanks baby, modified most of the stuff you pointed out, nerfed all the full h-dash stuff :^)

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2016-12-07T14:47:47+00:00

Just modding cause love this map <3

General

Spread issues: Some issues with AR; Salad AR6.8, Platter AR8, Rain AR8.9, Overdose AR9.4. There is a huge gap in AR between Salad and Platter. I suggest making Salad to AR7 and since the Overdose has such high AR, make Rain to AR9 considering the high note density.
Some issues with HP; As far as I know, decimals on HP have no effect. Make the HP 4 -> 5 -> 6 -> 7
Tags: There are no tags so I suggest adding some, at least add Cawub to tags
Combo Colors: There are no combo colors, add some
AiMod: Check AiMod, the audio preview time is different throughout the diffs. Make 00:31:405 - preview time on all diffs
Audio: The audio bitrate is over 192kbps, use this instead (remeber to recheck offset when adding new mp3, I always forget xD)
Hitsounds: The map isn't hitsounded
Kiai time: The kiai is different in all the diffs, I think the kiai used in Salad works best on all diffs.

Cawub's Salad

You should try to use the same distance for dashing throughout the diff, sometimese you have really long jumps and sometimes you have very easy dashes. Another thing is that your kiai time is mapped with 1/1 sliders with almost no dashing required while you use a lot of 1/2 patterns, and even 1/2 dashes, in the parts that's not kiai... It should rather be the other way around :thinking: I'll try to point some stuff out and you can go through your diff.
00:00:225 (1,2) - Notes placed on the same grid is kind of flow breaking, try putting (1) on x48. You can also extend (2) to 00:00:899 - to follow the vocals
00:05:113 (6,1,2,3) - A lot of notes placed on the same grid, try to move things around a little
00:10:843 (7,8) - This jump is wrongly placed, it should be between these 00:11:011 (8,1) -
00:25:674 (3) - What sound is this slider following? I think it would be nice to make it end 00:26:180 - and then add a repeat
00:26:686 - Suddenly a lot of 1/2's.. I suggest deleting some notes or making some 1/1 sliders instead
00:40:843 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest removing
00:54:326 - Suddenly a lot of 1/2's again when you've previously mapped the same sounds as 1/1's like here 00:32:753 - Try to be a little more consistent

Platter

00:00:225 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here you are mapping vocals and suddenly you start mapping them as triplets 00:03:090 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and then you go back to normal sliders again 00:07:135 (1,1) - and then back to triplets again 00:08:483 (2,3,4,5) - I think what you did in the first pattern fits better as it's an intro
00:11:096 (2,3) - You can add a dash here as the beat on (3) is very strong
00:21:461 (2,3) - This should be a hyper imo, it's a very strong beat and it doesn't even have a dash
00:27:191 (7,1) - Add a hyper or at least a dash here too
00:30:056 (4,5) - A dash here would be fitting
00:31:573 (2,3) - And a hyper here
00:32:416 (4,5) - This is walkable but you really should have a dash here to emphasize the strong beat
Looking at the rest of the diff it's the same issues repeating itself and I'm too lazy to point them all out. You have a lot of walkable patterns and then suddenly a hyper or a dash and then walkable patterns again. You should try adding some more dashes and hypers on the stronger beats. Platters are meant to introduce the hyperdashes so would be nice to have a little more than 3-4 of them

Rain

You have a lot of "overmapping" throughout the diff with triplets which I think you should remove;
1. 00:13:708 (2) -
2. 00:16:405 (3) -
3. 00:33:933 (4) -
4. 00:37:978 (5) -
5. 00:46:068 (4) -
6. 00:48:764 (2) -
7. 01:06:292 (4) -
00:40:674 (6,1) - 00:51:461 (3,1) - I think making this a 1/2 hyperdash flows better considering it's a rain and jumps like this might be too hard.
00:56:180 (2) - This sounds a bit off when you've mapped the vocals with 1/1 sliders everywhere else
01:26:517 (1) - Why a spinner here? You've mapped similar vocals previously 00:20:618 (1,1,2,3,4) - and especially when none of the other diffs have a spinner here it just feels weird to have one in Rain
01:28:034 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it's better to keep this as simple as possible cause it's a rain. I suggest remove hyper between 01:28:286 (4,5) -

Crows

00:13:708 (3) - 00:16:405 (1) - I can't hear any beat for 1/4 here, make it a normal note or something
00:17:922 (6) - Here you have a normal slider where 00:18:427 (7,8,9,1,2,1) - you've mapped the triplet beats. I'd map the slider as a triplet too for consistency
00:28:540 (6) - Make this end on blue tick, no reason for it to be 1/8 and makes it consistent with the way you mapped other similar vocals like here 00:35:450 (5,6) -
00:35:281 (4) - Again, a triplet here plays very well but there is no beat for it in the song so it will be considered overmap
00:36:124 (7,1) - Maybe a hyper here?
00:40:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't flow very well, (5) and (6) are really hard to catch. You could decrease the spacing here and try splitting the next stream by adding a jump on 00:41:433 (2,3) - to follow the vocals
00:44:719 (4) - Again no beat for a triplet
00:48:764 (1) - Same as above
00:52:135 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, this doesn't flow very well as the two last notes are very hard to hit, you could try making this more linear like this and move the next stream a bit further to the right to keep the hyper
00:57:023 (4) - End this on blue tick
00:58:371 (1,1,1) - Same as mentioned before, end these on blue tick as there is no reason for it to be 1/8
00:56:854 (3) - No beat for a triplet
01:02:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as pointed out with previous streams like this
01:10:337 (6) - No beat for triplet
01:13:708 (1,2,3) - I don't think this flows very well as you have to stop up on the middle slider here to be able to catch everything
01:15:141 (6) - Again no beat for a triplet, but would be nice to have a hyper between these 01:14:551 (5,7) -
01:21:292 - I suggest reducing the SV a tiny bit and nerfing the distances just a tiny bit it's extremely overkill
I absolutely love this map though, it's really well done

That's all from me, GL :3

Vincs

166 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Vincs 2016-12-07T23:03:11+00:00

BennyBananas wrote:
Just modding cause love this map <3

General
Spread issues: Some issues with AR; Salad AR6.8, Platter AR8, Rain AR8.9, Overdose AR9.4. There is a huge gap in AR between Salad and Platter. I suggest making Salad to AR7 and since the Overdose has such high AR, make Rain to AR9 considering the high note density.
Some issues with HP; As far as I know, decimals on HP have no effect. Make the HP 4 -> 5 -> 6 -> 7
Tags: There are no tags so I suggest adding some, at least add Cawub to tags
Combo Colors: There are no combo colors, add some
AiMod: Check AiMod, the audio preview time is different throughout the diffs. Make 00:31:405 - preview time on all diffs
Audio: The audio bitrate is over 192kbps, use this instead (remeber to recheck offset when adding new mp3, I always forget xD)
Hitsounds: The map isn't hitsounded
Kiai time: The kiai is different in all the diffs, I think the kiai used in Salad works best on all diffs.
Cawub's Salad
You should try to use the same distance for dashing throughout the diff, sometimese you have really long jumps and sometimes you have very easy dashes. Another thing is that your kiai time is mapped with 1/1 sliders with almost no dashing required while you use a lot of 1/2 patterns, and even 1/2 dashes, in the parts that's not kiai... It should rather be the other way around :thinking: I'll try to point some stuff out and you can go through your diff.
00:00:225 (1,2) - Notes placed on the same grid is kind of flow breaking, try putting (1) on x48. You can also extend (2) to 00:00:899 - to follow the vocals
00:05:113 (6,1,2,3) - A lot of notes placed on the same grid, try to move things around a little
00:10:843 (7,8) - This jump is wrongly placed, it should be between these 00:11:011 (8,1) -
00:25:674 (3) - What sound is this slider following? I think it would be nice to make it end 00:26:180 - and then add a repeat
00:26:686 - Suddenly a lot of 1/2's.. I suggest deleting some notes or making some 1/1 sliders instead
00:40:843 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest removing
00:54:326 - Suddenly a lot of 1/2's again when you've previously mapped the same sounds as 1/1's like here 00:32:753 - Try to be a little more consistent
Platter
00:00:225 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here you are mapping vocals and suddenly you start mapping them as triplets 00:03:090 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and then you go back to normal sliders again 00:07:135 (1,1) - and then back to triplets again 00:08:483 (2,3,4,5) - I think what you did in the first pattern fits better as it's an intro
00:11:096 (2,3) - You can add a dash here as the beat on (3) is very strong
00:21:461 (2,3) - This should be a hyper imo, it's a very strong beat and it doesn't even have a dash
00:27:191 (7,1) - Add a hyper or at least a dash here too
00:30:056 (4,5) - A dash here would be fitting
00:31:573 (2,3) - And a hyper here
00:32:416 (4,5) - This is walkable but you really should have a dash here to emphasize the strong beat
Looking at the rest of the diff it's the same issues repeating itself and I'm too lazy to point them all out. You have a lot of walkable patterns and then suddenly a hyper or a dash and then walkable patterns again. You should try adding some more dashes and hypers on the stronger beats. Platters are meant to introduce the hyperdashes so would be nice to have a little more than 3-4 of them
yea i'm pretty bad at platters, I'll try fixing most of it
Rain
You have a lot of "overmapping" throughout the diff with triplets which I think you should remove;
00:13:708 (2) -
00:16:405 (3) -
00:33:933 (4) -
00:37:978 (5) -
00:46:068 (4) -
00:48:764 (2) -
01:06:292 (4) -
00:40:674 (6,1) - 00:51:461 (3,1) - I think making this a 1/2 hyperdash flows better considering it's a rain and jumps like this might be too hard.
00:56:180 (2) - This sounds a bit off when you've mapped the vocals with 1/1 sliders everywhere else kept this one, following the lyrics
01:26:517 (1) - Why a spinner here? You've mapped similar vocals previously 00:20:618 (1,1,2,3,4) - and especially when none of the other diffs have a spinner here it just feels weird to have one in Rain
01:28:034 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it's better to keep this as simple as possible cause it's a rain. I suggest remove hyper between 01:28:286 (4,5) -
Crows
00:13:708 (3) - 00:16:405 (1) - I can't hear any beat for 1/4 here, make it a normal note or something
00:17:922 (6) - Here you have a normal slider where 00:18:427 (7,8,9,1,2,1) - you've mapped the triplet beats. I'd map the slider as a triplet too for consistency I prefer it that way, it follows the voice nicely imo
00:28:540 (6) - Make this end on blue tick, no reason for it to be 1/8 and makes it consistent with the way you mapped other similar vocals like here 00:35:450 (5,6) -
00:35:281 (4) - Again, a triplet here plays very well but there is no beat for it in the song so it will be considered overmap
00:36:124 (7,1) - Maybe a hyper here?
00:40:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't flow very well, (5) and (6) are really hard to catch. You could decrease the spacing here and try splitting the next stream by adding a jump on 00:41:433 (2,3) - to follow the vocals
00:44:719 (4) - Again no beat for a triplet
00:48:764 (1) - Same as above
00:52:135 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, this doesn't flow very well as the two last notes are very hard to hit, you could try making this more linear like this and move the next stream a bit further to the right to keep the hyper
00:57:023 (4) - End this on blue tick
00:58:371 (1,1,1) - Same as mentioned before, end these on blue tick as there is no reason for it to be 1/8
00:56:854 (3) - No beat for a triplet
01:02:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as pointed out with previous streams like this
01:10:337 (6) - No beat for triplet
01:13:708 (1,2,3) - I don't think this flows very well as you have to stop up on the middle slider here to be able to catch everything
01:15:141 (6) - Again no beat for a triplet, but would be nice to have a hyper between these 01:14:551 (5,7) -
01:21:292 - I suggest reducing the SV a tiny bit and nerfing the distances just a tiny bit it's extremely overkill
I absolutely love this map though, it's really well done

That's all from me, GL :3

everything i haven't put red on will be or is already fix ;> thanks

o x

1,528 posts

Joined May 2015

o x 2016-12-07T23:23:26+00:00

BennyBananas wrote:
Just modding cause love this map <3 Such a nice song!

General
Spread issues: Some issues with AR; Salad AR6.8, Platter AR8, Rain AR8.9, Overdose AR9.4. There is a huge gap in AR between Salad and Platter. I suggest making Salad to AR7 Done.
Some issues with HP; As far as I know, decimals on HP have no effect. Wasn't aware, fixed.
Combo Colors: There are no combo colors, add some There already are some http://puu.sh/sHJhr.png
Hitsounds: The map isn't hitsounded Mine was hitsounded :c
Cawub's Salad
You should try to use the same distance for dashing throughout the diff, sometimes you have really long jumps and sometimes you have very easy dashes. If I kept the dashes the same distance the whole map then it wouldn't but fun. It would be the same dash over and over no? Another thing is that your kiai time is mapped with 1/1 sliders with almost no dashing required while you use a lot of 1/2 patterns, and even 1/2 dashes, in the parts that's not kiai... It should rather be the other way around :thinking: I'll try to point some stuff out and you can go through your diff. Changed some stuff in the first Kiai but I like how the other 3 are set out. I don't know if I will change anything related to them.
00:00:225 (1,2) - Notes placed on the same grid is kind of flow breaking, try putting (1) on x48. First 2 notes of the song doesn't break a flow it starts the flow. You can also extend (2) to 00:00:899 - to follow the vocals This would make the rest of the section sound really awkward as the sliders are not directly following the vocals. To be specific if I were to follow what you said than 00:01:068 (3) this note would sound very out of place.
00:05:113 (6,1,2,3) - A lot of notes placed on the same grid, try to move things around a little Fixed. Used this instead http://puu.sh/sHKIq.jpg
00:10:843 (7,8) - This jump is wrongly placed, it should be between these 00:11:011 (8,1) - Fix
00:25:674 (3) - What sound is this slider following? I think it would be nice to make it end 00:26:180 - and then add a repeat Following lead guitar also heard in the 2 sliders before this one.
00:26:686 - Suddenly a lot of 1/2's.. I suggest deleting some notes or making some 1/1 sliders instead 1/2 complements the song fine. I like this better than 1/1 Sliders.
00:40:843 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest removing If I remove it, it would sound empty and I really don't like how it sounds with 1/1 sliders, not sure what else I could do. Open to suggestions though
00:54:326 - Suddenly a lot of 1/2's again when you've previously mapped the same sounds as 1/1's like here 00:32:753 - Try to be a little more consistent Note that the chorus changes here and becomes more dense. If I kept the same 1/1 beat I was doing in the first part then the map wouldn't be very fun IMO. To me the 1/2 patterns after the 1/1 sound nice :c
That's all from me, GL :3

Also changed 00:47:922 (4,5,6) and 01:09:495 (1,2,3) so that it isn't on the same grid. Since you mentioned same grid objects it helped me realise I had some things I could change

Thank you lots for mod!

Update

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Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2016-12-09T00:11:35+00:00

Just me dropping by again hehe

Cawub wrote:
BennyBananas wrote:
Cawub's Salad
You should try to use the same distance for dashing throughout the diff, sometimes you have really long jumps and sometimes you have very easy dashes. If I kept the dashes the same distance the whole map then it wouldn't but fun. It would be the same dash over and over no? - Well I have to disagree with you on this, this is a Salad and should give an introduction to dashing which means the dashing should be easy and consistent and on stronger beats only.. Another thing is that your kiai time is mapped with 1/1 sliders with almost no dashing required while you use a lot of 1/2 patterns, and even 1/2 dashes, in the parts that's not kiai... It should rather be the other way around :thinking: I'll try to point some stuff out and you can go through your diff. Changed some stuff in the first Kiai but I like how the other 3 are set out. I don't know if I will change anything related to them.
00:40:843 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest removing If I remove it, it would sound empty and I really don't like how it sounds with 1/1 sliders, not sure what else I could do. Open to suggestions though - Seems like my sentence got deleted here lmao, I meant I suggest removing some notes here to emphasize the stronger beats, you could try a timeline like this

o x

1,528 posts

Joined May 2015

o x 2016-12-10T16:46:34+00:00

BennyBananas wrote:
Well I have to disagree with you on this, this is a Salad and should give an introduction to dashing which means the dashing should be easy and consistent and on stronger beats only..

I guess we will have to agree to disagree, the way I see it is that Salad should also be where you get used to basic dashing seeing as a platter is an introduction to hyper dashes and by that time I think the user should be relatively good at basic dashing.

BennyBananas wrote:
00:40:843 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest removing - Seems like my sentence got deleted here lmao, I meant I suggest removing some notes here to emphasize the stronger beats, you could try a timeline like this

Decided to do something similar to this, thanks for the suggestion!

Thanks again!

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