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Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix)

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ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 29. Mai 2011 at 21:12:40

Artist: Baby Alice
Title: Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: jericho2442 Lucifer Louis Cyphre Firce777 BounceBabe
BPM: 141,25
Filesize: 5019kb
Play Time: 02:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,68 stars, 120 notes)
  2. Firce777's Taiko (4,83 stars, 927 notes)
  3. Hard (4,92 stars, 414 notes)
  4. jericho2442's Rave!! (5 stars, 407 notes)
  5. Lucifer's Normal (2,71 stars, 174 notes)
Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Easy : Done
Lucifer's Normal : Done (By Louis Cyphre)
Hard : Done
jericho2442's Rave!! : Done (By Jericho2442)
Firce777's Taiko : Done (By Firce777)
SB : Done (By BounceBabe)
Thank You All !<3
Last edited by ShadowSoul , edited 42 times in total.
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
Timing:
BPM: 141.250
Offset: 1110
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
as requested here is my guest diff and some hitsounds for my diff <333

Download: Diff.zip
Demmou
20 posts
Joined January 2011
Demmou
Uhm... really like this one :o But more difficulties would be better ^.^
noneed
546 posts
Joined April 2010
noneed
Catchy song~ :D

General:
Add jericho2442 in tags
Start Kiai time here: 00:31:684
And also at 01:15:861
__
Uhh, now I notice Kiai Ttimes ain't same in the diffs.Overall I like it in Jerichos better so take over from him Shadow?

Hard:
00:43:577 (4) - copy paste the slider to 44:427 horizontally flipped

Jericho:
Didn't find anything here, well mapped!

Yeah very nice mapset so far, fun to play :)
If you're too lazy for an Easy I would map it for you n_n
Mik-ey
91 posts
Joined April 2010
Mik-ey
STAR*
K i R a
152 posts
Joined May 2010
K i R a
star ~~

Legend
T = tip
N = necessary

General

BPM: 141,25 :)
Offset:1110

When you change the offset you need too to put the offset of the timing points ok xD, to do it go to the position of the timing point (its not necessary to be exact), go timing and use current time.

Hard

N What the... overall diff? Its a hard, not an extra. Get down it. 7 or... 6
T 00:12:993 - You can put here a spinner :)
N 00:33:393 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/83270 - Put the red point one square down to align perfect.
N 00:36:791 (3) - Align with the down circle (and replace the 4 too to make spacing ok)
N 00:50:596 (8,1) - Align too with the slider
N 00:51:340 (4,5,6,7) - Max spacing D: and not aligned, you need to change position because spacing cant be more down and you cant put it ok. Change all spacing.
N 01:25:428 (1,2,3,4) - align and 5 spacing.
N 01:54:950 (7) - Align with the two circles. (before and after the slider)
N 01:58:773 (2) - Geometrical Jump, 1 square up.
N 02:01:110 (6) - Align
T 02:11:941 (4) - Em... symetrical? Do it symetrical end with start. And align with the circle before it.
T&N 02:25:959 (1) - Start it in the big with line.

Rave

N 00:26:809 (2,3,4,5) - ah? And the rythm? change it, that are 5 beats.
Not much to say more, revise the spacing and align, same than in hard.

Good luck ;)
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

K i R a wrote:

star ~~

Legend
T = tip
N = necessary

General

BPM: 141,25 :)
Offset:1110

When you change the offset you need too to put the offset of the timing points ok xD, to do it go to the position of the timing point (its not necessary to be exact), go timing and use current time.

Hard

N What the... overall diff? Its a hard, not an extra. Get down it. 7 or... 6 sure fixed
T 00:12:993 - You can put here a spinner :) fixed
N 00:33:393 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/83270 - Put the red point one square down to align perfect. okay
N 00:36:791 (3) - Align with the down circle (and replace the 4 too to make spacing ok) fixed
N 00:50:596 (8,1) - Align too with the slider fixed
N 00:51:340 (4,5,6,7) - Max spacing D: and not aligned, you need to change position because spacing cant be more down and you cant put it ok. Change all spacing. also fixed
N 01:25:428 (1,2,3,4) - align and 5 spacing. fixed
N 01:54:950 (7) - Align with the two circles. (before and after the slider) i think it looks okay so ..
N 01:58:773 (2) - Geometrical Jump, 1 square up. fixed
N 02:01:110 (6) - Align lol fixed <3
T 02:11:941 (4) - Em... symetrical? Do it symetrical end with start. And align with the circle before it. hmm don't understand what u mean x3
T&N 02:25:959 (1) - Start it in the big with line. fixed

Good luck ;)
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442

K i R a wrote:

Rave

N 00:26:809 (2,3,4,5) - ah? And the rythm? change it, that are 5 beats. no

Good luck ;)
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
http://puu.sh/1Qg9

I've made a small SB :) I hope you like it

So good luck too ~
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

BounceBabe wrote:

http://puu.sh/1Qg9

I've made a small SB :) I hope you like it

So good luck too ~


Danke !<3
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,842 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Wann hattest du mir noch mal den Taiko request gegeben? xD
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Finished. Add to tags: "Lucifer Louis Cyphre" in all difficulties

Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [Lucifer's Normal].osu
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Hard
00:12:897 (1) - start at 00:12:791
Some nazi mod
00:24:048 (3,4) - spacing
00:32:756 (1,2) - ^
00:38:278 (3) - grid right
01:27:764 (4) - grid up
02:10:030 (4) - grid left

Easy
00:53:357 (3) - spacing (ctrl+1)
01:06:950 (3) - ^
01:08:649 (5) - ^
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Some extra fixes, please update my difficulty
Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [Lucifer's Normal].osu
Nyan-Zapo
127 posts
Joined August 2010
Nyan-Zapo
:)
giO-
giO-
nice :)
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Hellzero wrote:

Hard
00:12:897 (1) - start at 00:12:791 fixed
Some nazi mod
00:24:048 (3,4) - spacing fixed
00:32:756 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:38:278 (3) - grid right fixed
01:27:764 (4) - grid up fixed
02:10:030 (4) - grid left fixed

Easy
00:53:357 (3) - spacing (ctrl+1) fixed
01:06:950 (3) - ^ fixed
01:08:649 (5) - ^ fixed
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
[Easy]

01:02:278 (4) - new combo
01:03:977 (3) - new combo
01:04:826 (8) - diesen slider vielleicht durch etwas anderes ersetzen, weil bei 1:05:251 sollte ein clap sein und danach passen die auch nicht mehr so gut zum vorherigen teil
01:09:499 (1) - new combo
würde overall difficulty eins erhöhen. das schaut zu einfach aus ö.ö

[Normal]

02:09:819 (1) - mod says not snapped dont know why :?
00:21:924 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - little uneven spacing i think 00:52:083 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:57:180 (3,4) - maybe position it somewhere else. i prefer when it is not too close to the top or bottom of the scren
01:51:127 (2) - clap on end
02:11:092 (3,1) - nazi spacing lol
02:15:764 (4,5,6) - here too



[Hard]

würde appraoch rate auf 6 setzen. die ist schon insane und das machts ein wenig einfacher

00:19:800 (2) - der slider hier passt nicht wirklich

so spielt es sich besser zb
00:46:561 (6) - würde 6 und 7 vertauschen, dass 6 ein slider ist und 7 ein circle. klingt um einiges besser. auch in den nächsten paar beats wo es sich halt wiederholt

01:56:649 (6) - whistle noch dazu
02:00:048 (4) - new combo
02:01:110 (1) - und new combo hier
02:06:419 (1) - new combo
02:07:906 (1) - new combo
02:09:605 (2) - new combo
spinner am besten noch bis 2:27:233
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Hanyuu wrote:

[Easy]

01:02:278 (4) - new combo fixed
01:03:977 (3) - new combofixed
01:04:826 (8) - diesen slider vielleicht durch etwas anderes ersetzen, weil bei 1:05:251 sollte ein clap sein und danach passen die auch nicht mehr so gut zum vorherigen teil fixed
01:09:499 (1) - new combo fixed
würde overall difficulty eins erhöhen. das schaut zu einfach aus ö.ö
okay
[Normal]

02:09:819 (1) - mod says not snapped dont know why :?
00:21:924 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - little uneven spacing i think 00:52:083 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:57:180 (3,4) - maybe position it somewhere else. i prefer when it is not too close to the top or bottom of the scren
01:51:127 (2) - clap on end
02:11:092 (3,1) - nazi spacing lol
02:15:764 (4,5,6) - here too



[Hard]

würde appraoch rate auf 6 setzen. die ist schon insane und das machts ein wenig einfacher

00:19:800 (2) - der slider hier passt nicht wirklich fixed

so spielt es sich besser zb
00:46:561 (6) - würde 6 und 7 vertauschen, dass 6 ein slider ist und 7 ein circle. klingt um einiges besser. auch in den nächsten paar beats wo es sich halt wiederholt fixed

01:56:649 (6) - whistle noch dazu Nope :3
02:00:048 (4) - new combo fixed
02:01:110 (1) - und new combo hier fixed
02:06:419 (1) - new combo fixed
02:07:906 (1) - new combo fixed
02:09:605 (2) - new combo fixed
spinner am besten noch bis 2:27:233 Nope :3
MoonShade
487 posts
Joined February 2010
MoonShade
[storyboard]
- A bit bright in the break at 00:59:304, isn't it?

[Easy]
00:25:322 (1) - 1 grid right
01:02:278 (1,2,1) - put the 2nd (1) exactly over the 1st
01:25:640 (1) - till 01:29:463? or place a circle at 01:29:463
01:36:685 (1,1,1) - combo spam, why? :o
01:50:278 (1,2,3,4,5) - select them and move them to the left till (3) is exactly at the middle-line, looks more symmetric
02:14:065 (1,1,1,2) - weird new combos
02:25:959 (1) - just an idea, you could try to silence the spinner. Same in hard.

[Luzifer's Normal]
02:09:819 (1) - finish at the beginning doesn't seem to fit, doesn't it has to be at the end of the slider?
02:11:517 (1) - finish at the beginning doesn't seem to fit
Nice diff

[Hard]
00:31:694 (3) - start: finish sound?
00:35:092 (4) - don't put a clap at the beginning, your clap has to be on 2 and 4 (in musical terms), maybe put a finish sound instead?
00:36:791 (4) - ^
00:36:366 (2) - clap, it's on a 2
00:37:640 (5) - remove clap, it's on a 3
00:38:065 (2) - add clap here, it's on a 4
01:06:525 (4,5) -
SPOILER
01:41:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
SPOILER
01:47:092 (1,2,3,...) - move it 1 grid down

[jericho2442's Rave!!]
02:25:534 (1) - as mentioned above, I would love to see a quiet slider here, but it's up to you

Very nice map, Star :3
Yomeiro
91 posts
Joined August 2010
Yomeiro
Meh~
Little mod...~

Easy

Hitsounds are fine as they're for the most part but:

00:18:525 (1) - NC?
Part from 00:31:694 (1) - 00:43:587 (5) could also be a 4,4,4,4 Combo Formation, but since it's like how it is atm and it's also ok like that I guess~:
00:43:163 (1) - Remove NC?, Seems a bit weird that there's a NC at that place~

00:21:074 (7) - Add Clap? :3

Had a little idea though for the Kiai-Parts so here a little suggestion:

I added Inherited Timing Sections at:

34667,-100,4,1,1,85,0,1
34879,-100,4,1,2,85,0,1
41463,-100,4,1,1,85,0,1
41676,-100,4,1,2,85,0,1
45286,-100,4,1,2,85,0,0 (Just changed something here~)
45711,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0
52083,-100,4,1,2,85,0,0
52508,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0
58879,-100,4,1,2,85,0,0
59304,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0
78844,-100,4,1,1,85,0,1
79056,-100,4,1,2,85,0,1
85640,-100,4,1,1,85,0,1
85853,-100,4,1,2,85,0,1
96685,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0 (I moved this one from 96260 to here~)
103056,-100,4,1,2,85,0,0
123021,-100,4,1,1,85,0,1
123233,-100,4,1,2,85,0,1
129817,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0 (Just changed something here~)
130242,-100,4,1,2,85,0,0
140437,-100,4,1,2,85,0,0
140862,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0

The only thing these do is basically, change the clap-hitsound to louder ones~
If you were to add these, following things have to be changed as well in my opinion~:

00:45:286 (1) - Add Finish
00:50:809 (1) - Add finish at last tick of this slider
00:57:605 (1) - ^
02:19:163 (4) - ^
01:25:640 (1) - Add a note with clap-sound, move the spinner to 01:26:065 and maybe make the spinner shorter~
02:09:817 (1) - ^, Spinner would be at 02:10:242 then (add finish to it)

That's all for Easy~ xD

Lucifer's Normal

01:51:127 (2) - No clap at the end of this slider... intended? :o~

Nothing else here~

Hard

I guess the free part after 00:27:871 (6) makes sense in general, but I would like to see if you could add a spinner or something else~
Same after 01:56:649 (6)~ (this free part is a bit shorter but still, a Spinner couldn't probably hurt~ :3)

00:26:171 (6) - First tick, change clap to finish?~ :3
00:41:888 (4) - Add finish on first tick~
00:43:587 (4) - ^
02:03:446 (3) - ^
02:11:941 (5) - ^
01:19:269 (4,8) - Since you added the finishes from Moons modpost at 00:35:092 (4) and 00:36:791 (4), why not add them here too?
01:26:065 (4,4) - ^
01:20:118 (5) - Remove this clap.
01:21:817 (9) - ^
02:05:145 (2) - Add finish~
02:10:242 (4) - ^

Nothing Else~^^

jericho2442's Rave!!

Some streams have a weird formation but other than that, nice diff~

Since you wanted me to attach your Easy with the Inherited Poiints I wanted to add, I'll guess I'll just do that~
Have this star^^

Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [Easy].osu
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
fixed only unsnapped note and 1 clap. All nazi will be ignored.
Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [Lucifer's Normal].osu
Firce777
Elite Mapper
530 posts
Joined February 2010
Firce777
taiko finished :D

Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [Firce777's Taiko].osu
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
finde dude mod go~

[General]

Black Background colours in all diffs?
You have 3 .osb files. Delete (Dark_Ai) and (ShadowSoul) Pina Colada because they are unused
Add BounceBabe into the Tags? She made the SB for you..

[Easy]

01:18:844 (5) - New combo here
01:50:703 (2,4) - The sliders can be a bit conufsing for new players.
02:10:242 (1,1) - Definatly NO. too hard to reacht the sliders after the spinner
02:14:065 (1,2,3,4) - looks a bit odd but if you want to keep it np
02:25:959 (1) - Too short for a easy diff imo.

[Normal]

Sexy louis <3

[Hard]

I know the doubles fits the music good but its might be a bit too hard.. dunno
If you don't mind i suggest some circle removes.

SPOILER
Delete those notes BUT don't do it if you don't want

00:22:986 -
00:23:198 -
00:24:685 -
00:24:897 -
00:37:640 -
01:07:163 -
01:07:375 -

02:01:110 - Remove new combo?


[Fine dude's Insane]

01:15:871 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/1V4o
01:17:145 (2,3,4) - Don't really fit here
01:18:844 (2,3,4) - ^
01:23:517 - Add note?
01:25:216 - ^
01:26:915 - ^
02:25:534 (1) - Don't like the finish at the end ~_~ if you silence the spin it sounds better imo


~
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

-Lennox- wrote:

finde dude mod go~

[General]

Black Background colours in all diffs?
You have 3 .osb files. Delete (Dark_Ai) and (ShadowSoul) Pina Colada because they are unused
Add BounceBabe into the Tags? She made the SB for you.. Ohh .. xD :D

[Easy]

01:18:844 (5) - New combo here Fixed
01:50:703 (2,4) - The sliders can be a bit conufsing for new players. Fixed
02:10:242 (1,1) - Definatly NO. too hard to reacht the sliders after the spinner Fixed
02:14:065 (1,2,3,4) - looks a bit odd but if you want to keep it np Fixed
02:25:959 (1) - Too short for a easy diff imo. Fixed


[Hard]

I know the doubles fits the music good but its might be a bit too hard.. dunno
If you don't mind i suggest some circle removes.

SPOILER
Delete those notes BUT don't do it if you don't want

00:22:986 - Okay
00:23:198 - Okay
00:24:685 - Okay
00:24:897 - Okay
00:37:640 - Okay
01:07:163 - Nope :3
01:07:375 - Nope :3

02:01:110 - Remove new combo? Okay

~
Firce777
Elite Mapper
530 posts
Joined February 2010
Firce777
sorry, slider velocity fixed :o

Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [Firce777's Taiko].osu
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Sekai
;)
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Sexy louis <3
<3
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
hello~~ ♥

this just my suggestions

[easy]

00:21:074 (5) - Grid 1 dowm
00:52:508 (1) - Grid 1 up
00:56:756 (3) - Grid 1 left
01:53:676 (5) - Stack with 01:51:977 (3) ?

perfect diff

[Lucifer'´s normal]

Music track (lead-in) 2000

00:22:348 (2) - Grid 1 up
00:24:047 (2) - Grid 1 dowm
01:12:472 (3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1WyQ

nice diff

[hard]

+1 Appreach Rate?

00:15:021 (2) - Incorrect spacing
00:15:977 (5) - grid 1 dowm
00:44:225 (5) - Stack with the end slider 00:43:587 (4) ?
01:24:366 (3) - Grid 1 right

[Jericho2442's Rave]

00:28:295 (7) - Grid 2 dowm
00:43:375 (1) - New combo?

that all

sorry my poor english :(

STAR ! and let´s party woowowow xD
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442

-Lennox- wrote:

[Fine dude's Insane]

01:15:871 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/1V4o nah
01:17:145 (2,3,4) - Don't really fit here srry dont agree xD
01:18:844 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:23:517 - Add note?
01:25:216 - ^
01:26:915 - ^ that would break the timing pattern i was after
02:25:534 (1) - Don't like the finish at the end ~_~ if you silence the spin it sounds better imo yup sounds better


~

Pereira006 wrote:

[Jericho2442's Rave]

00:28:295 (7) - Grid 2 dowm tbh sure, looks nice
00:43:375 (1) - New combo? breaks my combo pattern
Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [jericho2442's Rave!!].osu
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~ ♥

this just my suggestions

[easy]

00:21:074 (5) - Grid 1 dowm fixed~
00:52:508 (1) - Grid 1 up fixed~
00:56:756 (3) - Grid 1 left fixed~
01:53:676 (5) - Stack with 01:51:977 (3) ? No :3

perfect diff





[hard]

+1 Appreach Rate? Hmh .. Ya i think that's better <3

00:15:021 (2) - Incorrect spacing fixed~
00:15:977 (5) - grid 1 dowm fixed~
00:44:225 (5) - Stack with the end slider 00:43:587 (4) ? No :3

01:24:366 (3) - Grid 1 right fixed~
Berncastell
137 posts
Joined January 2010
Berncastell
z
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

Disable the Letterbox During Breaks on every difficulty, since you've a storyboard.

Try to find a better background, the one you have now is a little bit suggestive as well. (Me and jericho agreed about that)

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

00:34:667 (4) - New combo.
01:38:384 (3) - ^
02:17:463 (3) - ^

[Lucifer's Normal]

Adjust the Audio Lead-In through the file .osu to 2000.

Most of the hitsounds on this difficulty are too quiet. Try to increase the volume or something.

02:25:747 (1) - This spinner should end at 02:27:021 like the other difficulties.

[Firce777's Taiko]

Disable the storyboard on this difficulty, doesn't suit at all. Try to find a TaikoBG for this instead.

00:15:869 (1) - Unsnapped.
00:15:975 (2) - ^
01:00:046 (1) - ^
01:00:152 (2) - ^
02:10:453 (3) - ^
02:27:233 (1) - Remove this spinner, doesn't suit at all.

[Hard]

00:38:278 (3) - Add a Finish at the end of this slider.
00:55:481 (7) - New combo.
00:55:694 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:57:180 (7) - New combo.
00:57:605 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:03:446 (3) - Hidden repeat is completely hidden due to the hitburst from 02:02:384 (7).
02:06:844 (4) - Add a Finish.
02:23:835 (7) - New combo.
02:24:472 (1) - Remove new combo.

[jericho2442's Rave!!]

01:10:348 (7) - New combo.
01:10:773 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:22:030 (8) - New combo.
01:59:198 (3) - New combo due to the jump.

Overall you did a good job, but I think you could ask some more modding before asking me for a recheck... I especially suggest you to ask some Taiko modders since that difficulty could use some improvements imo. Can't star atm due to the many fixes >_< Good luck :3
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Disable the Letterbox During Breaks on every difficulty, since you've a storyboard. Fixed

Try to find a better background, the one you have now is a little bit suggestive as well. (Me and jericho agreed about that) I will do that :3 Edit : Done

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

00:34:667 (4) - New combo. Fixed
01:38:384 (3) - ^ ^
02:17:463 (3) - ^[/color] ^

[Firce777's Taiko]

Disable the storyboard on this difficulty, doesn't suit at all. Disabled !

[Hard]

00:38:278 (3) - Add a Finish at the end of this slider. Done
00:55:481 (7) - New combo. Fixed ~
00:55:694 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
00:57:180 (7) - New combo. ^
00:57:605 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
02:03:446 (3) - Hidden repeat is completely hidden due to the hitburst from 02:02:384 (7). ^
02:06:844 (4) - Add a Finish. ^
02:23:835 (7) - New combo. ^
02:24:472 (1) - Remove new combo.[/color] ^

Overall you did a good job, but I think you could ask some more modding before asking me for a recheck... I especially suggest you to ask some Taiko modders since that difficulty could use some improvements imo. Can't star atm due to the many fixes >_< Good luck :3 Thx :3
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p3n
Global Moderator
947 posts
Joined June 2009
p3n
[Easy]
nothing 8-)

[Lucifer's Normal]
00:30:844 - to silence the spinner ENDING use this timestamp instead of 00:30:738
01:15:021 - ^ instead of 01:14:915

[Hard]
00:28:083 (1) - add finish to spinner
00:36:154 (1) - move to 356/184 to make it symmetrical
00:40:189 (2,3) - switch slider and circle to fit the song
SPOILER
01:12:260 (1) - add finish to spinner
01:49:428 (4) - add new combo!!!

[Jericho2442's Rave!!]
nothing :|

Very good job!
~star
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

p3n wrote:

[Easy]
nothing 8-) :P

[Hard]
00:28:083 (1) - add finish to spinner Done .. but i don't know if that sounds so good ..
00:36:154 (1) - move to 356/184 to make it symmetrical Done
00:40:189 (2,3) - switch slider and circle to fit the song Done
SPOILER
01:12:260 (1) - add finish to spinner Done
01:49:428 (4) - add new combo!!! Uhm No ?:3

~star
Piotrekol
1,002 posts
Joined March 2010
Piotrekol
i just love it so what i can do?
star~
FireballFlame
280 posts
Joined May 2010
FireballFlame
[Lucifer's Normal]
There is basically nothing wrong with this map, but couldn't you make it a bit more interesting? There isn't much happening until 2:13 and until then it feels quite similar to the Easy diff.

[Hard]
00:45:711 (1,8,7,7) - Sieht nicht sonderlich schön aus; kannst du's so einrichten, dass die alle an der selben Stelle sind?

[jericho2442's Rave!!]
00:27:446 (6) - I wouldnt expect a 2nd reverse there, maybe remove it?
00:51:021 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9), 00:58:242 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Eww. Are those shapes really necessary? :/

Anyway, star.
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
moe bg >///<

[Easy]
Good, but try making the sliders you make change direction at the beat, though, it's not necessary, I just like that :3

01:17:570 (4) - doesn't look right o.o
01:20:968 (4) - should look more like this one :3

hmm, I don't like some sliders, but they play through out the whole song so it's fine :3
[Lucifer's Normal]
gj :3
[Firce's Taiko]
Aah Firce thanks for color coding ><

lol I'd want some megadons/katus emphasizing the 'aah' in the chorus :3
but not really
lol you made this hard, at least there are no firce doomstreams ;_;
[Hard]
gj :3
[jericho's rave]
00:51:021 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is the only stream I didn't like, sort of throws my aim off, but eh

star~ :3
Firce777
Elite Mapper
530 posts
Joined February 2010
Firce777

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Firce777's Taiko]

Disable the storyboard on this difficulty, doesn't suit at all. Try to find a TaikoBG for this instead. added
00:15:869 (1) - Unsnapped.
00:15:975 (2) - ^
01:00:046 (1) - ^
01:00:152 (2) - ^
02:10:453 (3) - ^
02:27:233 (1) - Remove this spinner, doesn't suit at all. removed
thanks for advice :3



Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [Firce777's Taiko].osu
ratstar
37 posts
Joined January 2010
ratstar
nice map ,star~ ^^)ﾉ~☆
Jenny
2,200 posts
Joined November 2010
Jenny
After looking at the Hard- and Rave-diffs i can't complain about anything except one thing and that's not a big one:

[Rave]
Decrease the overall difficulty by 1 (so it's 7 then).

[Hard]
Maybe you could also change the tripples so that they are not all on the same spot and have a little movement; me likez it more that way, but that's just my opinion.


-> I just gave this a star^^
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ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Broetchen8441 wrote:

[Hard]
Maybe you could also change the tripples so that they are not all on the same spot and have a little movement; me likez it more that way, but that's just my opinion. No
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
[Easy]
00:34:667 (1) - clap C2?
00:41:463 (1) - ^
00:47:410 (1,1,1) - combo spamming, i hate this
00:54:207 (1) - remove NC
00:57:605 (1) - ^
01:18:844 (1) - clap C2?
01:25:640 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:45:711 - 00:58:667 : try adding some shapes at those sliders ..
01:29:888 - 01:42:844 : same here ^

i was lazy :(
anyways god job :O
star for this elppa dab !
Hyguys
1,272 posts
Joined May 2010
Hyguys
''Baby Alice''
okayface.png
HERE WE GO
Blue is suggestion!
Red is error!you must fix!
Black is nazi. 8-)

:arrow: General
Make clap noticeable

:arrow: EASY
The hell you are getting better on mapping ;_; Soon you will be mapping better than everyone olololo
SPOILER
00:47:410 Remove that damn new combo and third control point , 2 grids down and 1 left

00:49:110 New combo
00:50:809 ^
00:53:357 Clap
00:55:906 Remove new combo ... = =
00:59:304 ^
01:17:570 http://puu.sh/1YHO
01:36:685 BLARGHAKDLÇAKSÇLDKASÇLDA http://puu.sh/1YHW and clap
01:38:384 ^Cpypast dat slider and then ctrl + h
01:50:702 http://puu.sh/1YI6 =.=
01:52:402 ^Cpypast dat slider and then ctrl + h
02:06:844 =_= http://puu.sh/1YIn i'm gettin enough of your bad sliders
Ok other diffs are fine
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Tonoicutzu wrote:

[Easy]
00:34:667 (1) - clap C2? ya
00:41:463 (1) - ^ ya
00:47:410 (1,1,1) - combo spamming, i hate this sry x) changed combo
00:54:207 (1) - remove NC ya
00:57:605 (1) - ^ ya
01:18:844 (1) - clap C2? ya
01:25:640 (5) - ^ ya

[Hard]
00:45:711 - 00:58:667 : try adding some shapes at those sliders .. i edited some sliders
01:29:888 - 01:42:844 : same here ^ ^

i was lazy :(
anyways god job :O
star for this elppa dab !

Hyguys wrote:

:arrow: EASY
]00:47:410 Remove that damn new combo and third control point , 2 grids down and 1 left
[/color] ya
00:49:110 New combo ya
00:50:809 ^ ya
00:53:357 Clap ya
00:55:906 Remove new combo ... = = ya
00:59:304 ^ ya
01:17:570 http://puu.sh/1YHO No
01:36:685 BLARGHAKDLÇAKSÇLDKASÇLDA http://puu.sh/1YHW and clap No
01:38:384 ^Cpypast dat slider and then ctrl + h No
01:50:702 http://puu.sh/1YI6 =.= No
01:52:402 ^Cpypast dat slider and then ctrl + h No
02:06:844 =_= http://puu.sh/1YIn i'm gettin enough of your bad sliders[/spoilerbox] fixed
Ok other diffs are fine
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442

osuplayer111 wrote:

[jericho2442's Rave!!]

01:10:348 (7) - New combo. nope that would break the combo pattern
01:10:773 (1) - Remove new combo. same
01:22:030 (8) - New combo. yea tbh i dont remember having that so long.....
01:59:198 (3) - New combo due to the jump. tru i guess, but its not a jump ;p

FireballFlame wrote:

[jericho2442's Rave!!]
00:27:446 (6) - I wouldnt expect a 2nd reverse there, maybe remove it? nope it is needed
00:51:021 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9), 00:58:242 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Eww. Are those shapes really necessary? :/ yup they are normal not bland as hell streams ;p

Anyway, star.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[jericho's rave]
00:51:021 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is the only stream I didn't like, sort of throws my aim off, but eh look above ;p

Broetchen8441 wrote:

[Rave]
Decrease the overall difficulty by 1 (so it's 7 then).nah that would destroy the maps feeling i want
Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [jericho2442's Rave!!].osu
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,842 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Taiko Mod:
01:02:596~01:04:826 - kdd kdd kdd kdd kdd > kkd kdd k ddd d kdd kdk
01:09:286~01:11:623 - kdd kdd kdd kdd kdd > kdd kkd k ddkdk ddk kdd
02:21:711(3) - kat
02:22:136(3) - don?
02:22:986(1) - delete (there are similiar points the whole song, maybe make it like that?)
02:26:915(2) - delete?

Overall 8/10 Really nice~


And here the requested Taiko_BG

TorNis
102 posts
Joined April 2011
TorNis
Suggestions:

[Easy]
01:50:702 (2) - Decrease slider for 2 ticks
01:51:552 - Add Circle
01:52:402 (5) - Decrease slider for 2 ticks
01:53:251 - Add Circle
That way it sound better imo

02:14:065 (1,2,1,2) - Kinda dissapointed to see in the end simple sliders especially when you have very nice at the other parts :)

[Lucifer's Normal]
00:03:658 - Feels a missing note especially since next combos have that note in form of slider
01:57:499 - Unnecessary timing points?

Your diff is quite easy for normal. I would loved to see vocal line traps in "Pina Colada"/"Whooo~pa" parts like this for example 02:13:640
But if vocal line is not your note basis then don't mind this suggestion.

[Hard]
01:20:543 (7) - don't like this slider because it's making off-beat sounds
How about adding kiai fountains at "Aaaaah" and/or "Whooo~pa" parts? :)

Enjoyed playing this map. Star :3
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