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Hollow Delta
793 posts
Joined March 2015
Hollow Delta
From the Bubblicious Modding Queue.

Very late I know, I was busy the week you posted there.

Easy
SPOILER
00:13:353 - These notes don't line up and it kinda bugs me. Adjust the slider a bit so it's lined up?
00:29:352 (2) - Adjust this circle so it's perfectly blanketed by the slider.
00:30:018 (1,2,1) - I don't know how aiMod didn't catch this, but I'm assuming you didn't use DS on this diff. It's highly recommended to use DS on easy.

Meep's Easy
SPOILER
[spoilerbox]00:04:688 (3) - You're better off building up the slider along with the song by making this a reverse slider on the red ticks. Like this: http://puu.sh/s8tso/c046bf382b.jpg Having a 3/4 slider here feels very awkward.
[/spoilerbox]

Lexis' Hyper
SPOILER
00:21:353 (5,6) - I think it matches the song better if you replace 5 with the start of 6, and place a circle where the tail of 6 was before you moved it.

Sudden Death
SPOILER
LOL These stats. I love this diff already.
00:17:686 (2) - I recommend making this slider vertical so it's parallel to 1 and 3.
00:38:017 (1) - I recommend extending this slider to here. I see you're trying to make it have an equal shape to the previous sliders, so you'll have to adjust the SV on it.
Rizen
1,662 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen
mmm

countdown set on purpose???

Beginner
  1. The thing about beginners is that because it's so simple, you want to relate it to the song as much as possible. This include slider shapes, which can be manipulated so the angle points correspond to something in the music. Otherwise, you can slap the beginner diff to any other 180.020bpm song
  2. 00:06:021 (1) - you can edit the slider body so the angle points correspond with the large white ticks in the music like this. Applies to other sliders such as 00:16:686 (1) - , 00:22:019 (1) - , etc.
  3. 00:31:351 (1) - can probably remove NC as the NC pattern i'm getting from this difficulty is one per 4 measures. Same at 00:36:684 (1) -
Easy
  1. 00:15:353 (2,1) - I kinda disagree with using 1/1 in a diff that mostly uses all 1/2. It just seems kinda out of place imo... applies to 00:24:685 (1,2) - too
  2. 00:29:352 (2) - spacinggg (also the blanket is rather off)
  3. 00:30:018 (1,2,1) - inconsistent spacing
Meep's Easy
  1. 00:18:020 (1) - remove NC here?
  2. 00:23:352 - would make this clickable tbh, since the other downbeats in this song are all clickable
  3. 00:35:684 (2,3,4) - 3 consecutive circles could be difficult for new players, so maybe make it a circle then 1/1 slider?
Normal
  1. Is it possible to make the CS of this 3.5? ;_; 4 seems a bit too small
  2. 00:19:353 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - previously, you had the 1/2 rhythms when there are those artificial sounds (?) e.g. at 00:09:687 (3,4,5) - and 00:13:687 (3,4,1) - . However in this pattern, you seem to be doing the opposite of that. Shouldn't the rhythm be like this?
  3. 00:24:685 (1,2) - maybe blanket as you have done with most of your patterns
Mk's Hard
  1. 00:27:352 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - if you listen carefully to the music, there is no sounds on the red ticks at 00:27:852 (2) - , 00:29:185 (2) - , etc. so having objects on these red ticks doesn't follow the music at all :(
    other than that, no complaints
Lexis' Hyper
  1. 00:22:519 (2,3,4) - if you enable stacking, you can see that the blanket is rather off
  2. 00:30:935 (5,6,7,1) - I do not suggest such an intense rhythm for a rather calm part of the song, try replacing the 3 circles with a 1/4 repeat slider instead?
  3. 00:35:351 (1) - I think the circle here can easily be confused to be 1/4 after the previous object due to your choice of stacking it (in other words, I do not agree with stacking this note. Perhaps try spacing it out)
  4. 00:35:351 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe a nice pentagon pattern?
Turtle's Light Insane
  1. 00:03:355 (1,2,1,2) - do not agree with having these sliders 1/2 as the vocals are held for 3/4... Could try circles instead mm
  2. 00:24:685 (1) - accidental clap?
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
hello from my queue

General :
- well tbh beginner diff is unnecessary here
- 00:05:271 - i think preview time is better placed in here because preview time is used when we open the map. the epic music part is directly listened by ppl

Beginner :
- i would say AR 1, AR 0 is weird
- why would you use 0,5x SV greenline timing in 0,40 sv so it means the real SV is 0,2 then next easy has 0,6 sv.. that is kinda imbalance for me
- 00:11:354 (1) - why not end the slider at 00:15:353 - for consistency?
- 00:16:686 (1) - also spacing between 0,99x and 1,12x is inconsistency pls fix
- meh all your spacing in here is inconsitent, i saw 1,85x 0,99x, 1,50x etc.. please only use 1 spacing to make them consistent

Easy :
- i would say AR 2 here due your rhythms mostly are 2/1 gap
- HP3? its too high, use HP 2
- 00:20:686 (2) - the design somehow is weird, the curve level is so different with previous avatar, try make like http://puu.sh/sctuZ/0ebd7ff757.jpg this?
- 00:24:685 (1) - for me you should end the slider at 00:25:352 - due music's pitch
- 00:29:352 (2) - spacing error (0,91x)
- 00:32:685 (1) - watch out your spacing

Meep's Easy :
- AR 1 OD o HP 1? please no meme :C AR 3 OD 2 HP 1,5 look best for me
- 00:04:688 (3) - i would say end the slider at 00:05:354 - for follow the vocal, if you do then remove the repeat and add a circle for 00:05:688 -
- 00:06:021 (1) - drum finish for consistency with another easy?
- 00:23:352 - that isnt good to make strong beat mapped with a slider tail, swap rhythm for 00:22:686 (2,3) -
- i just realised, where is the hitsound?

Normal :
- CS 3 or 3,5? CS 4 is too small for newbie
- 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - please use 0,9x spacing too for consistency
- 00:15:853 - remove clap

well i will stop in here. your normal diff is quite hard with many 1/2 notes when your highest easy diff is still a relaxing easy diff. your hard diff SV is quite fast then its imbalance between normal and hard SV speed.
Hyper OD setting can be 6 and HP 5. that would be more balance and the diff is too much 1/4 notes which making the spread is bad
Turtle's Light Insane isnt a light insane. that is a insane diff so please rename as Turtle's Insane

well basically in my eyes, the map is still can improve a loooooooooooootttttttttt. sorry if my words sound rude since you asked honest opinion then i do

good luck nyu saradisk is love ><
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan
Sorry for being quite inactive~

Bubblun wrote:

Bubblun's Mod
00:21:353 (5,6) - I think it matches the song better if you replace 5 with the start of 6, and place a circle where the tail of 6 was before you moved it. Oh, really interesting ! Fixed !
Other changes :
+ 00:31:268 (7,2,3) - Stacked 7 - 3

Rizen wrote:

Rizen's Mod
  1. 00:22:519 (2,3,4) - if you enable stacking, you can see that the [url=http://puu.sh/saxp1/4a458acb35.jpg]blanket is rather off
    Oh, fixed ^^[/url]
  2. 00:30:935 (5,6,7,1) - I do not suggest such an intense rhythm for a rather calm part of the song, try replacing the 3 circles with a 1/4 repeat slider instead?
    Here, I know but I can't really do this because it will create a NC conflict or will not looks good, I won't delete the circles because it won't follow the song like I wanted it when I mapped this GD.
  3. 00:35:351 (1) - I think the circle here can easily be confused to be 1/4 after the previous object due to your choice of stacking it (in other words, I do not agree with stacking this note. Perhaps try spacing it out)
    I need to stack them because the pattern is really spaced and it's hard to place it
  4. 00:35:351 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe a nice pentagon pattern?
    that's already a pentagon xd

Xinely wrote:

Hyper OD setting can be 6 and HP 5. that would be more balance and the diff is too much 1/4 notes which making the spread is bad
OD : 5 → 5.5
HP : 4 → 4.5

good luck nyu saradisk is love ><
HERE'S THE UPDAAAAAAATE ♥
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 355
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
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Title:216 - ASUS
TitleUnicode:216 - ASUS
Artist:saradisk
ArtistUnicode:saradisk
Creator:nyu -
Version:Lexis' Hyper
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:166 suzuya kantai collection kancolle Deppyforce Yukiyo _Meep_ Lexis MkGuh
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Zyl
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Joined October 2013
Zyl
Can i GD Normal?
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan

Zyl wrote:

Can i GD Normal?
The map is in pending that supposes that the map is complete so i don't really know if nyu - will accept because he already called a BN etc...
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Zyl
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Joined October 2013
Zyl
k, relax~
Lully
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Lully
reviving after christmas~
Yukiyo
425 posts
Joined June 2014
Yukiyo

Ora wrote:

Yuyiko's Insane

00:06:437 (2,3) - small blanket fix (space gets wider near the sliderend of 00:06:437 (2) - ) sure
00:16:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - either stack this with 00:16:020 (1) - or give it the same DS from it like this: https://puu.sh/s2nvU/fc4fb77dd2.png Why should I? any reason
00:27:352 (6) - The placement of this just feels weird to me because of the overlap. maybe at least make it symmetrical with 00:26:935 (4,5) - or maybe even put it further to the right (just my opinion, it might be fine how it is)Hmm I like it how it is, and I don't see a prob with it
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Yukiyo
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Yukiyo

Ora wrote:

Yuyiko's Insane

00:06:437 (2,3) - small blanket fix (space gets wider near the sliderend of 00:06:437 (2) - ) sure
00:16:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - either stack this with 00:16:020 (1) - or give it the same DS from it like this: https://puu.sh/s2nvU/fc4fb77dd2.png Why should I? any reason
00:27:352 (6) - The placement of this just feels weird to me because of the overlap. maybe at least make it symmetrical with 00:26:935 (4,5) - or maybe even put it further to the right (just my opinion, it might be fine how it is)Hmm I like it how it is, and I don't see a prob with it

iYiyo wrote:

yukiyo's
00:10:520 (3,1) - the actual transition has a weird flow, i recommend you to 00:10:854 (1) - ctrl+g this. I was actually wanting that weird flow cuz of the introduction to this new patterning and and the 2nd half of the measure before the kiai
00:17:686 (3) - maybe make this into 2 1/4 sliders? would fit better mainly because 00:17:936 - feels quite empty from the patterns you were building.
00:20:353 (3) - 00:23:019 (3) - ^ That's the point of it ;-; empahsis thorough forced emptiness. Player be like"wait there is a pause" and then have to move to the next note fast though technically it's only a 1/2 gap like the other pattern.
00:26:352 (5) - Again leaving 00:26:602 - empty is quite weird since all is stream, maybe do a continous stream or make 00:26:352 (5) - into 2 1/4 sliders. I guess
00:27:352 (6) - start the NC here instead? ye lol
00:28:685 - 00:30:018 - 00:31:351 - 00:32:685 - 00:34:018 - I highly recommend you to map these notes since they're quite strong, so they're worth it to map i think. Hmm they are not the main melody though and suddenly introducing other elemnts from bg music, I dislike
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Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
dead
Neptunee
137 posts
Joined May 2016
Neptunee
Good job i love it :>
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan

Deppyforce wrote:

dead
↓↓↓

nyu - wrote:

reviving after christmas~

Neptunee wrote:

Good job i love it :>
Thanks :3
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
still dead lmfao
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan
yes :c
Lully
1,270 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Lully

nyu - wrote:

reviving after christmas~
merry christmas
walaowey
952 posts
Joined March 2012
walaowey
irc stuff with lukas's diff

lukas's
2018-01-29 02:00 [ L u k a s ]: yo wanna mod my gd xd
2018-01-29 02:00 [ L u k a s ]: irc
2018-01-29 02:00 [ L u k a s ]: it's short
2018-01-29 02:00 walaowey: ok link it
2018-01-29 02:00 [ L u k a s ]: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1108568 saradisk - 216 - ASUS]
2018-01-29 02:03 walaowey: 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - 
2018-01-29 02:03 walaowey: this looks like not properly arrange
2018-01-29 02:03 walaowey: lol
2018-01-29 02:03 walaowey: 00:05:188 (4) - 
2018-01-29 02:03 walaowey: and that off stack xD
2018-01-29 02:04 [ L u k a s ]: ok fixed
2018-01-29 02:05 walaowey: 00:05:354 (5,6,7,8,9) - 
2018-01-29 02:05 walaowey: 00:37:351 (5,6,7,8,9) - 
2018-01-29 02:05 walaowey: the spacing is different lol
2018-01-29 02:05 walaowey: isnt they suppose to be same? since they got similar rhythm
2018-01-29 02:07 [ L u k a s ]: o yes
2018-01-29 02:07 [ L u k a s ]: lmao
2018-01-29 02:07 [ L u k a s ]: is that it?
2018-01-29 02:07 walaowey: 00:07:521 (2,3,4,5) - 
2018-01-29 02:08 walaowey: blanket stuff xd
2018-01-29 02:09 walaowey: anyway thats all i guess
2018-01-29 02:09 walaowey: xd
2018-01-29 02:10 walaowey: 00:23:686 (3,4) - 
2018-01-29 02:10 [ L u k a s ]: ok post in forum and you'll get your kudosu
2018-01-29 02:10 walaowey: maybe copy 1/2
2018-01-29 02:10 [ L u k a s ]: =3=
2018-01-29 02:10 walaowey: xd
2018-01-29 02:10 walaowey: and place it at similar position
2018-01-29 02:11 walaowey: yea sure will post in forum
2018-01-29 02:11 walaowey: havent get any kds in a while xD
2018-01-29 02:11 walaowey: ohh this is modv1 okay
pw384
2,287 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
from my queue


[dpf's Sudden Death]

- 00:24:019 (1,2,3,4) - the movement of cursor is awkward here imo. moving 4 to somewhere around x=309, y=77 works fine for me

- i love the hp and od


[Lukas' Another]

- you need to add hitsounds

- 00:31:517 (2,3,4) - unsnapped objects

- i think you can add new combos more frequently, especially when the change in patterns need to be indicated via new combos (like 00:05:354 (5) - ). precisely, i recommend adding new combos every 2 beats in this duration: 00:04:688 - to 00:27:352 - . the post-kiai part is fine

- 00:04:355 (4,4) - (minor thing) you can stack them properly

- 00:05:354 (5,6,7,8) - keep the spacing consistent

- 00:05:437 (6) - also i suggest stacking it with the tail of 00:04:854 (2) - , like what you've done at 00:37:351 (5,6) -

- 00:06:687 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing is too huge here, and out of place because you didn't employ such spacing before kiai section aside from this one. consider reducing the spacing

- 00:10:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make them a precise square, or the spacing of 00:10:854 (8,9) - is just way too small compared with 00:10:020 (1,8) -

- 00:10:687 (6,7) - ... also, i highly suggest altering them into a 1/4 slider in order to follow the instrument better and consistently with the following 3 another 1/4 sliders

- 00:14:437 (4,5,6,7,8) - try place them apart as they look quite weird while overlapping with 00:14:020 (1,3) -

- kiai seems fine imo


[Yukiyo's Insane]

- 00:26:352 (5) - one more reverse?

- 00:28:852 (1,3) - check the spacing between the 2 objects. you can make it the same with the one of 00:29:102 (2,4) -


[Insane]

- 00:09:354 (2,3,4) - spacing

- 00:34:684 (5,6) - try polishing the shape. change 6 into a parallel straight slider is better for me

- 00:35:351 (1) - put it to x=232, y=300 to make 00:35:351 (1,2) - symmetrical against the line segment connected with 3 and 4. also, 00:35:351 (1,2,3,4) - turn into a precise diamond


[Turtle's Light Insane]

- 00:37:350 (5) - unsnapped object

- 00:05:354 (5) - new combo

- 00:26:685 (1,2,3,4) - claps are way too many for this part. consider removing claps on these sliders' tails


[Mk's Hard]

- this difficulty is good


[Normal]

- why main slider velocity = 0.6? you use 1.5x greenlines throughout nearly the whole difficulty. also it is not recommended for low difficulties to have big slider velocity change (you see, the spacing of 00:04:688 (3,4,1) - is quite confusing for Normal players). so i'd suggest at least you'd better rearrange the spacing of 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - . use 0.9 main velocity and 1.0x greenline if possible (if so, you have to revamp 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - )

- 00:24:685 (1,2) - blanket them better


[Easy]

- 00:27:352 (1,2) - blanket them better

- 00:30:018 (1,2,1) - distance snap is important on low difficulties


[Beginner]

- 00:03:354 (1,2,1) - distance snap again. note: the 1.10x and 1.11x on top-right corner does not mean consistency as you use 0.5x slider velocity for the slider (the distance shown is scale to slider velocity).

- 00:16:686 (1,2) - blanket them better


that's all, good luck on ranking!
Lully
1,270 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Lully

pw384 wrote:

from my queue


[Insane]

- 00:09:354 (2,3,4) - spacing ok

- 00:34:684 (5,6) - try polishing the shape. change 6 into a parallel straight slider is better for me ok!

- 00:35:351 (1) - put it to x=232, y=300 to make 00:35:351 (1,2) - symmetrical against the line segment connected with 3 and 4. also, 00:35:351 (1,2,3,4) - turn into a precise diamond fixed but different



[normal]

- why main slider velocity = 0.6? you use 1.5x greenlines throughout nearly the whole difficulty. also it is not recommended for low difficulties to have big slider velocity change (you see, the spacing of 00:04:688 (3,4,1) - is quite confusing for Normal players). so i'd suggest at least you'd better rearrange the spacing of 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - . use 0.9 main velocity and 1.0x greenline if possible (if so, you have to revamp 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - ) i think this isnt a huge issue since it isnt really a "big" change when you're playing, if someone else mentions it ill reconsider changing that

- 00:24:685 (1,2) - blanket them better ok!



[Easy]

- 00:27:352 (1,2) - blanket them better ok!


- 00:30:018 (1,2,1) - distance snap is important on low difficulties ok



[Beginner]

- 00:03:354 (1,2,1) - distance snap again. note: the 1.10x and 1.11x on top-right corner does not mean consistency as you use 0.5x slider velocity for the slider (the distance shown is scale to slider velocity). ok uwu


- 00:16:686 (1,2) - blanket them better ok!


that's all, good luck on ranking! thankssss
@lukas i added hitsounds
Enkrypton
217 posts
Joined November 2014
Enkrypton
NM from queue. Full mod cause 0:38 seconds lolE.

Beginner
00:11:354 (2,1) - blanket the slider tail into the curve of slider 1, overall would look more neater
00:22:019 (2) - try red anchor 257|344 and first white anchor 197|386 blanket looks slightly better
00:22:019 (2) - either way try to make the sharper curves on 00:23:352 or 00:24:685 to emphasis the tone change in music

Easy
00:11:354 (1) - make it a equilateral triangle with 00:10:020 (2,3) try 110|181

Mk's Hard
00:22:019 (1) - 67|49 parallel a bit off

Lexis Hyper
00:11:354 (1,2,3) - move 3 down a bit so u get a symmetrical design, what you have now looks unorganized
00:25:685 (6) - theres no point in making this red anchor when theres no special change in the music and your previous designs dont have this
00:35:184 (6,1) - stacking circle 1 really ruins the emphasis on the bass kicks, separate them

Insane
00:29:602 (6) - maybe used curved design like u did here: 00:28:018 (4,5) This way u can make this circle 00:29:852 (7) less clustered.

Lukas Another
00:31:101 (6,7,8,1) - last circle looks really uncomfortable in its current position, i mean its an insane so u can prob just place it non overlapped and the spacing will is still good to represent the change in the music there. for example placing 00:31:351 (1) in the middle of slider 2 and the stack would look really nice
00:37:351 (5) - i think NC here would be good cause drum goes super hihg speed.

DeppyForce SD
fun map dude

No mods on diff = cant find anything.
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan

Enkrypton wrote:

NM from queue. Full mod cause 0:38 seconds lolE.

Lexis Hyper
00:11:354 (1,2,3) - move 3 down a bit so u get a symmetrical design, what you have now looks unorganized
00:25:685 (6) - theres no point in making this red anchor when theres no special change in the music and your previous designs dont have this
00:35:184 (6,1) - stacking circle 1 really ruins the emphasis on the bass kicks, separate them Imo the music is fast enough to not ruin it
Update
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 355
Countdown: 1
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:216 - ASUS
Artist:saradisk
ArtistUnicode:saradisk
Creator:nyu -
Version:Lexis' Hyper
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
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Lully
1,270 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Lully

Enkrypton wrote:

NM from queue. Full mod cause 0:38 seconds lolE.

Beginner
00:11:354 (2,1) - blanket the slider tail into the curve of slider 1, overall would look more neater ok
00:22:019 (2) - try red anchor 257|344 and first white anchor 197|386 blanket looks slightly better ok
00:22:019 (2) - either way try to make the sharper curves on 00:23:352 or 00:24:685 to emphasis the tone change in music ok

Easy
00:11:354 (1) - make it a equilateral triangle with 00:10:020 (2,3) try 110|181 ok


Insane
00:29:602 (6) - maybe used curved design like u did here: 00:28:018 (4,5) This way u can make this circle 00:29:852 (7) less clustered. i just put the circle out of the cluster-zone

No mods on diff = cant find anything.
thanks for the moddddd

updated lexis diff
Seolv
847 posts
Joined March 2016
Seolv

Enkrypton wrote:

Lukas Another
00:31:101 (6,7,8,1) - last circle looks really uncomfortable in its current position, i mean its an insane so u can prob just place it non overlapped and the spacing will is still good to represent the change in the music there. for example placing 00:31:351 (1) in the middle of slider 2 and the stack would look really nice ok
00:37:351 (5) - i think NC here would be good cause drum goes super hihg speed. I don't know man, I don't think high speed is good enough reason for NC
@nyu can you stack the circle in the first suggestion
Seolv
847 posts
Joined March 2016
Seolv

pw384 wrote:

from my queue


[dpf's Sudden Death]

- 00:24:019 (1,2,3,4) - the movement of cursor is awkward here imo. moving 4 to somewhere around x=309, y=77 works fine for me

- i love the hp and od


[Lukas' Another]

- you need to add hitsounds

- 00:31:517 (2,3,4) - unsnapped objects

- i think you can add new combos more frequently, especially when the change in patterns need to be indicated via new combos (like 00:05:354 (5) - ). precisely, i recommend adding new combos every 2 beats in this duration: 00:04:688 - to 00:27:352 - . the post-kiai part is fine nah I prefer my nc consistent like this

- 00:04:355 (4,4) - (minor thing) you can stack them properly

- 00:05:354 (5,6,7,8) - keep the spacing consistent

- 00:05:437 (6) - also i suggest stacking it with the tail of 00:04:854 (2) - , like what you've done at 00:37:351 (5,6) - nah I wanna keep 5 stacked

- 00:06:687 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing is too huge here, and out of place because you didn't employ such spacing before kiai section aside from this one. consider reducing the spacing

- 00:10:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make them a precise square, or the spacing of 00:10:854 (8,9) - is just way too small compared with 00:10:020 (1,8) - nope, that would ruin the blankets

- 00:10:687 (6,7) - ... also, i highly suggest altering them into a 1/4 slider in order to follow the instrument better and consistently with the following 3 another 1/4 sliders background music gets different here

- 00:14:437 (4,5,6,7,8) - try place them apart as they look quite weird while overlapping with 00:14:020 (1,3) -

- kiai seems fine imo
thanks for your mod!
updoot =3=
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 355
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
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BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
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Title:216 - ASUS
TitleUnicode:216 - ASUS
Artist:saradisk
ArtistUnicode:saradisk
Creator:nyu -
Version:Lukas' Another
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
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Axhina
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Joined March 2015
Axhina
hi there why no modding v2 ><
Insane>

00:06:354 (2) - actually very strong beat make a down motion or smth
00:09:520 (4) - clap sound missing
00:10:854 (4,6,8) - would clap them for build-up
00:19:019 (5) - clap might work here

gl with map ^^
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