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Mekki

Mekki 2016-10-20T19:05:49+00:00

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Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
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Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2016-10-20T19:21:07+00:00

Added Mk Diff and moved to pending ~

Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-10-20T20:54:31+00:00

I know I'm a guest mapper on this map, but I'll tell my opinion on some diff (I'll mod it if you haven't understand)
Just don't give kudosu

nyu-'s diffs

[Beginner]

00:03:354 (1,2,1) - A line could look better

00:22:019 (1,1) - The flow here can be better, maybe a blanket and keeping slider-art will be... . . ?

00:36:684 (1) - Ctrl + g on this slider to make it less far than the previous slider

[Easy]

00:04:688 (2,1,2) - A triangle with the same spacing everywhere can be cool lel

00:07:354 (1,1) - You could curve the end of this slider : 00:07:354 (1) - and create a better flow

00:19:353 (1,1) - A blanket ?

00:20:686 (1,1) - Curve one of these sliders, it looks a bit ugly

[Normal]

00:04:688 (3,4,1) - A rythm consistency but a spacing change... 'kay o.o

00:08:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe move (3-4-5) in front of (1-2) to do a linear flow

00:14:020 (1,2) - Blanket ?

00:16:686 (1,2) - Improve blanket

00:18:020 (1,2) - Improve blanket

00:24:685 (1) - Double reverse sliders aren't really recommended in Normal diffs

00:35:351 (1) - Double reverse sliders aren't really recommended in Normal diffs

[Insane]

00:05:854 (7) - This slider can cause so much sliderbreaks, and why not change it into 2 circles to make a more proper stream ?

00:06:687 (3,4,5) - Failed line ..lel

00:07:354 (1,3) - Improve blanket

00:16:603 (9,1) - Why this spacing change ? I know we enter in the kiai time, but that's not needed.

00:18:020 (1,5) - Maybe a stack can look better than an overlap

00:23:019 (5,1) - Failed line... Again lel

00:33:351 (4,1) - Make/Improve blanket idk

_Meep_'s diff

[Easy]

Nothing because I already helped you with it in pm :3

MkGuh's diff

[Hard]

00:06:687 (3) - Curve this slider a bit, it will look better

00:08:354 (3,1) - Improve blanket

00:18:686 (2,3,1) - Add/Improve some blankets

00:20:019 (2,3,1) - Improve these blankets

00:23:352 (1,2) - Improve blanket

00:24:352 (3,1) - Ctrl + J on (3) and move it a bit to have a better flow example

00:34:018 (1,2,3,1) - Looks strange. I'll recommend to change (3) into a slider like (last 1) and try to blanket (2) and (first 1) at the same time.

00:35:851 (2,4) - You should delete these circles for give more attention to the biggest beats

Lexis' diff

[Hyper]

I won't talk about myself owo

_DT3's diff

[Light Insane]

00:03:355 (1,2,1,2) - These stacks looks strange but okay if you want them... x)

00:15:936 (4) - THIS circle can disappoint so much the player and cause so much sliderbreaks...

00:26:602 (4) - ^

00:35:351 (1,2,1,2) - Again these stacks... x)

Yukiyo's diff

[Insane]

00:14:520 (3) - This slider looks strange because the previous sliders aren't like it : they begin by a small straight line and finish by a big one, and this slider begin by the big one and finish by the small one.

00:16:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:19:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing for the streams isn't consistent

I can understand if this 00:26:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - and this 00:26:685 (1,2,3,4) - streams are spaced, but not that one : 00:24:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - because this stream is again in the consistency of the kiai. (if you can understand what I say xd)

00:32:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - Improve these blankets

Deppyforce's diff

[Sudden Death]

I can't play extra diffs, so... No mod xd

PS : If others Guest mappers can talk about all diffs, it can be cool

Last edited by Vovan 2016-10-21T07:02:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Renumi

Beatmap Nominator

910 posts

Joined July 2012

Renumi 2016-10-20T23:34:39+00:00

lexis gave sort of a mod while i was napping gg
from my modding q thx
that's a lot a diffsa wew
short song short suggestions ww

[ Beginner]

how long did it take to make this diff hwa

00:22:019 (1) - Is barely in playfield

Well since it's such a a short map, there's not much I can say about it, other than the fact that nothing here has DS. Easy/Beginner difficulties should really rely on DS imo.

[ Easy]

00:08:687 (1) - Maybe make this a repeat slider?
00:20:686 (1) - Remove nc.

them nc's wew

[ Meep's Easy]

i think kiai is a bit messed up

00:06:687 (2,3,4,5) - I think this sounds better imo
Suggestion
00:14:020 (5) - NC here for consistency.
00:20:686 (4) - What happened with ds here
00:20:686 (4) - While on this slider, why not make it so that the previous repeat sort of ~flows~ into this next big slider?
Suggestion
00:24:685 (5) - NC for consistency as well.

[ Normal]

00:08:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Combos on this map are relatively short, I'd suggest NCing one of these notes or sliders too mantain consistency.
00:14:687 (2) - Why not make these flow, or more specifically, I think moving it a tad bit to the left would look good.
Suggestion
00:16:686 (1) - playfield
00:31:351 (1,1) - Not a big fan at all of these sliders. A simple curve or bezier would do.

[ Mk's Hard]

i love diffs like this so much omg i found nothing only big concern is some overlaps and why 00:24:019 (2,3) - these are so curved but what can you do omg nice also hitsounds

[ Lexis' Hyper]

why did i change skins lmfao im so unprofessional

00:09:354 (2,3,4,5) - Uhh, why not arrange like a curved slider would?
Suggestion
00:21:852 (7) - Move this note a little higher?
00:23:352 (1,4) - y no blanket

it's kinda fast for a 3* diff

[ Turtle's Light Insane]

00:04:688 (1,1,1,1) - I know it goes with the song, but the NC's here are a bad idea
00:13:353 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make these curve along the way, instead of a sudden... curve at the '3'?
Suggestion
00:19:686 (3) - Remove red node doesn't compliment the rest of your sliders all that well jksjdjsda
00:26:685 (1,1,1,1) - Same thing about the nc's :<
00:31:185 (6,7,1) - A double would do just fine like the rest, it kinda sounds like there's an extra unwarranted beat in there with the current notes

neat

[ Yukiyo's Insane]

lower volume please 100% is too much and overpowers the song

00:04:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It's just me but why straight? Curvier would look good IMO
00:16:020 (1,1) - Stack?

tbh i don't think the song really calls for streams but ok

[ dpf's pls nerf]

i don't think i need to go into much detail

00:08:687 (1,2,3,4) - Ruins flow how you have to jerk your cursor back to hit the stream
00:16:686 - kiai pls
00:26:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - no nc wh

it's surprisingly fun to play lmao

gl hf if you're going to rank sorry if mod seemed kinda bad :<

Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-10-21T07:08:29+00:00

Renigar wrote:
lexis gave sort of a mod while i was napping gg
from my modding q thx
that's a lot a diffsa wew
short song short suggestions ww

[ Lexis' Hyper]
why did i change skins lmfao im so unprofessional
00:09:354 (2,3,4,5) - Uhh, why not arrange like a curved slider would? Nah~ I like my actual patttern (my pattern is that bad ?)
Suggestion
00:21:852 (7) - Move this note a little higher? Yay, fix
00:23:352 (1,4) - y no blanket ???
it's kinda fast for a 3* diff I know but 0:38 Hyper diff

gl hf if you're going to rank sorry if mod seemed kinda bad :<

Lexis' Hyper

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Deppyforce

1,989 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-10-21T10:10:37+00:00

fix all except first suggestion cuz i think its fine lol thank also ar10 now

osu file format v14

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DeRandom Otaku

2,143 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-10-21T11:30:10+00:00

light mod thing aka kd farm
[General]

"saradisk - 216 - ASUS.osb" unsused
Change ur hs to mp3 format lo

[Deppy]

00:24:019 (1) - why is this 3/4 slider instead of triple+kick slider like 00:18:686 (1,2,3,4) -

[Yukiyo]

00:36:851 (2,3,4) - why not gradually increase spacing b/w each since intensity building up

[Insane]

00:14:687 (2,3) - bad rhythm choice . it represents the song in no way -_
00:15:936 (1) - unnecessary nc , ps it makes structure look bad
00:27:685 (2) - space it more cos looks like 1/4 visual

[Turtle]

00:04:854 (1,1) - u dont really need this nc spam and trust me others will force u to remove them aswell
00:06:687 (1,2,3,4) - u r doing this totally wrong w since u can clearly hear 00:06:854 (2,3,4) - have sound on heads only while 00:06:687 (1) - has sounds on both head and end AND in this way the sound at 00:06:771 - doesnt get emphasized, TL:DR 00:06:687 (1) - change into 2 circles ~~ same goes for 00:09:354 (1) - and others like this
00:16:353 (1) - remove nc for consistency
00:26:852 (1,1) - 00:36:850 (1,1) - no

[Lexis]

idk this diff lacks quality in structure and rhyhtm . idk how to help with that cos i m too lazy to do the explanations

[MK's guh]

00:16:686 (1) - do some other shape here pls not same as 00:16:353 (3) - cuz its way more intenser at 00:16:686 - could copy paste 00:17:020 (2) -

hot bed

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2016-10-21T15:22:33+00:00

Lexis wrote:
I know I'm a guest mapper on this map, but I'll tell my opinion on some diff (I'll mod it if you haven't understand)
Just don't give kudosu

nyu-'s diffs
[Beginner]

00:03:354 (1,2,1) - A line could look better i like my triangle

00:22:019 (1,1) - The flow here can be better, maybe a blanket and keeping slider-art will be... . . ? waiting for more opinions

00:36:684 (1) - Ctrl + g on this slider to make it less far than the previous slider ok

[Easy]

00:04:688 (2,1,2) - A triangle with the same spacing everywhere can be cool lel ok

00:07:354 (1,1) - You could curve the end of this slider : 00:07:354 (1) - and create a better flow nah.. i dont really like how that is going.

00:19:353 (1,1) - A blanket ? would ruin flow

00:20:686 (1,1) - Curve one of these sliders, it looks a bit ugly ok
^
[Normal]

00:04:688 (3,4,1) - A rythm consistency but a spacing change... 'kay o.o <:

00:08:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe move (3-4-5) in front of (1-2) to do a linear flow ok

00:14:020 (1,2) - Blanket ? doesnt fits there

00:16:686 (1,2) - Improve blanket yo

00:18:020 (1,2) - Improve blanket yo

00:24:685 (1) - Double reverse sliders aren't really recommended in Normal diffs but fits well here.

00:35:351 (1) - Double reverse sliders aren't really recommended in Normal diffs but fits well here.

[Insane]

00:05:854 (7) - This slider can cause so much sliderbreaks, and why not change it into 2 circles to make a more proper stream ? no stream is meh

00:06:687 (3,4,5) - Failed line ..lel this.. i dont even want it to be a line.

00:07:354 (1,3) - Improve blanket k

00:16:603 (9,1) - Why this spacing change ? I know we enter in the kiai time, but that's not needed. its needed imo... and it looks cool.

00:18:020 (1,5) - Maybe a stack can look better than an overlap k

00:23:019 (5,1) - Failed line... Again lel fix

00:33:351 (4,1) - Make/Improve blanket idk ay

PS : If others Guest mappers can talk about all diffs, it can be cool ikr

Renigar wrote:
lexis gave sort of a mod while i was napping gg
from my modding q thx
that's a lot a diffsa wew
short song short suggestions ww

[ Beginner]
how long did it take to make this diff hwa 5~15mins.
00:22:019 (1) - Is barely in playfield its still in playfield
Well since it's such a a short map, there's not much I can say about it, other than the fact that nothing here has DS. Easy/Beginner difficulties should really rely on DS imo.

[ Easy]
00:08:687 (1) - Maybe make this a repeat slider? idk why. would mess up flow
00:20:686 (1) - Remove nc. ayy
them nc's wew

[ Normal]
00:08:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Combos on this map are relatively short, I'd suggest NCing one of these notes or sliders too mantain consistency. fix
00:14:687 (2) - Why not make these flow, or more specifically, I think moving it a tad bit to the left would look good. ok
Suggestion
00:16:686 (1) - playfield not unrankable
00:31:351 (1,1) - Not a big fan at all of these sliders. A simple curve or bezier would do. nah, they're fine imo.

gl hf if you're going to rank sorry if mod seemed kinda bad :< every mod is cool

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
light mod thing aka kd farm
[General]
"saradisk - 216 - ASUS.osb" unsused lol fixed
Change ur hs to mp3 format lo fix
[Insane]
00:14:687 (2,3) - bad rhythm choice . it represents the song in no way -_ changed kickslider to 1 circle
00:15:936 (1) - unnecessary nc , ps it makes structure look bad if ren says so
00:27:685 (2) - space it more cos looks like 1/4 visual fix
hot bed

thanku al

Yukiyo

425 posts

Joined June 2014

Yukiyo 2016-10-21T15:38:52+00:00

Lexis wrote:
I know I'm a guest mapper on this map, but I'll tell my opinion on some diff (I'll mod it if you haven't understand)
Just don't give kudosu

Yukiyo's diff
[Insane]

00:14:520 (3) - This slider looks strange because the previous sliders aren't like it : they begin by a small straight line and finish by a big one, and this slider begin by the big one and finish by the small one. I guess

00:16:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:19:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing for the streams isn't consistent ye it's increasing

I can understand if this 00:26:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - and this 00:26:685 (1,2,3,4) - streams are spaced, but not that one : 00:24:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - because this stream is again in the consistency of the kiai. (if you can understand what I say xd) Ye I wanted to do something else to the end of the kiai to build up emphasis and pressure etc. long stream = good lead in

00:32:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - Improve these blankets ok ok

Renigar wrote:
lower volume please 100% is too much and overpowers the song k
00:04:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It's just me but why straight? Curvier would look good IMO Cuz I am going with the square
00:16:020 (1,1) - Stack? Didn't want that stack, so it wouldn't get hidden
tbh i don't think the song really calls for streams but ok There are those sounds doe xd

DeRandom Otaku said: 00:36:851 (2,3,4) - why not gradually increase spacing b/w each since intensity building up Nicu Idea

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_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

_DT3 2016-10-21T15:40:42+00:00

Lexis wrote:
_DT3's diff
[Light Insane]

00:03:355 (1,2,1,2) - These stacks looks strange but okay if you want them... x) Yes I do ;w;

00:15:936 (4) - THIS circle can disappoint so much the player and cause so much sliderbreaks... Fits the song and causes for a fitting diff spike

00:26:602 (4) - ^ ^

00:35:351 (1,2,1,2) - Again these stacks... x) Same as above ;w;

Thanks for modding!

Renigar wrote:
[ Turtle's Light Insane]
00:04:688 (1,1,1,1) - I know it goes with the song, but the NC's here are a bad idea Removed every second NC
00:13:353 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make these curve along the way, instead of a sudden... curve at the '3'? I want symmetry here like for the other patterns
Suggestion
00:19:686 (3) - Remove red node doesn't compliment the rest of your sliders all that well jksjdjsda Why not owo
00:26:685 (1,1,1,1) - Same thing about the nc's :<Same as above
00:31:185 (6,7,1) - A double would do just fine like the rest, it kinda sounds like there's an extra unwarranted beat in there with the current notes But there clearly is a sound on the red tick
neat

Thanks for modding!

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Turtle]
00:04:854 (1,1) - u dont really need this nc spam and trust me others will force u to remove them aswell Removed before
00:06:687 (1,2,3,4) - u r doing this totally wrong w since u can clearly hear 00:06:854 (2,3,4) - have sound on heads only while 00:06:687 (1) - has sounds on both head and end AND in this way the sound at 00:06:771 - doesnt get emphasized, TL:DR 00:06:687 (1) - change into 2 circles ~~ same goes for 00:09:354 (1) - and others like this Not for me, for me they all have that sound on the slider
00:16:353 (1) - remove nc for consistency Don't mean to be consistent there, that was intentional
00:26:852 (1,1) - 00:36:850 (1,1) - no Yes
hot bed Ikr

Sankyuu Renn

Update, be careful with metadata

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DeRandom Otaku

2,143 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-10-21T15:50:25+00:00

nyu - wrote:
every mod is cool

cos they give sp

Deppyforce

1,989 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-10-21T21:30:50+00:00

@ren changed rhythm d

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Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2016-10-22T10:16:09+00:00

came from my queue❤

General

convert them to .wav file.
applause.mp3
combobreak.mp3
drum-hitfinish.mp3
normal-hitfinish.mp3
try to add more hs. without Lexis' Hyper

dpf's Sudden Death

i dont think this diff need ar10. 9.5max for this flow
add some hs more. i believe you didnt finish yet. sounds poor for me especially front part
00:31:101 (5,6,7,1) - could you try to replace them? its make confuse when play

Yukiyo's Insane

add more hs pls. others are nice for me.

Insane

add more hs pls
00:04:021 (2,1,2,1) - 1/1 and 1/2 at the same place can make players confuse. try to avoid one of them
00:08:187 (3,4) - replace 4 bit far from 3 feels too close like 1/4 object
00:14:853 (3) - i think, ctrl g better for flow. if you agree with me, 00:15:520 (2) - this will be better to read.
00:19:019 (5) - same as 00:08:187 (3,4) -. try to make 5 from 4. they too close for now.
00:23:352 (1) - ^
00:29:352 (5,6,7) - i believe you can place them better then current. this just for example>> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6380911
00:34:684 (5,6,7) - ^same https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6380919

Turtle's Light Insane

add more hs pls
00:04:854 (1,1,1) - i dont think they need nc spam
00:26:852 (1,1,1) - remove nc
00:36:850 (1,1,1) - ^

Lexis' Hyper

00:34:184 (2,3,4,5) - not fit for music. listen that part. 1/2 sliders better for music. http://puu.sh/rRxli/4b1fc6cfcb.jpg
and 00:35:268 (7) - remove this. there is no sound from original music.

Mk's Hard

00:03:354 (1) - any special reason to put spinner for here? i think better to put objects with right rhythm. like other maps.

Normal

00:24:685 (1) - 2times repeat slider not that good choice for bpm180 normal diff. remove 1 repeat part from it. and put single note for 00:25:685 - here. >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6381074
00:28:352 (3) - listen here with 25~50%. you can listen there is no sound from music. try to map with original sound instead of 1/1. just for example. >> http://puu.sh/rRy4w/71885d898f.jpg
00:29:685 (3) - ^
00:31:018 (3) - ^
00:32:351 (3) - ^
00:33:684 (3) - ^
00:35:018 (3) - ^ okay i'll stop to spam. but there are more. you should fix them
00:35:351 (1) - same as 00:24:685 (1) - here. remove 1 repeat part from it.

Meep's Easy

kiai dont have end point.
00:06:021 (4,1) - swap nc. since new rhythm + sounds start on there.
00:14:020 (5) - seems you forgot. add nc for here.
00:24:685 (5) - ^
00:27:352 (1,2) - they really not fit music also distance make newbies confuse. just try to put 2/1 sliders i think thats better for play. >>http://puu.sh/rRyun/2a5b293f71.jpg

Easy

replacing new combo terms. current one too spam. i think put nc for every 2big white tick is looks good.

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2016-10-22T10:44:32+00:00

Euny wrote:

came from my queue❤

General
convert them to .wav file.
applause.mp3
combobreak.mp3
drum-hitfinish.mp3
normal-hitfinish.mp3
fixed
try to add more hs. without Lexis' Hyper will do that after everyone posted an update of their diffs. ~
Insane
add more hs pls
00:04:021 (2,1,2,1) - 1/1 and 1/2 at the same place can make players confuse. try to avoid one of them fixed
00:08:187 (3,4) - replace 4 bit far from 3 feels too close like 1/4 object fixed
00:14:853 (3) - i think, ctrl g better for flow. if you agree with me, 00:15:520 (2) - this will be better to read. hmm.. yeah i agree.
00:19:019 (5) - same as 00:08:187 (3,4) -. try to make 5 from 4. they too close for now. fixed
00:23:352 (1) - ^
00:29:352 (5,6,7) - i believe you can place them better then current. this just for example>> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6380911 applying it for now, lets see what others say
00:34:684 (5,6,7) - ^same https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6380919 same
Normal
00:24:685 (1) - 2times repeat slider not that good choice for bpm180 normal diff. remove 1 repeat part from it. and put single note for 00:25:685 - here. >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6381074 fixed
00:28:352 (3) - listen here with 25~50%. you can listen there is no sound from music. try to map with original sound instead of 1/1. just for example. >> http://puu.sh/rRy4w/71885d898f.jpg
00:29:685 (3) - ^
00:31:018 (3) - ^
00:32:351 (3) - ^
00:33:684 (3) - ^
00:35:018 (3) - ^ okay i'll stop to spam. but there are more. you should fix them remapped part
00:35:351 (1) - same as 00:24:685 (1) - here. remove 1 repeat part from it. yup, fixed
Easy
replacing new combo terms. current one too spam. i think put nc for every 2big white tick is looks good. fixed

thanks for the mod!

Deppyforce

1,989 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-10-22T11:19:41+00:00

Euny wrote:

came from my queue❤

dpf's Sudden Death
i dont think this diff need ar10. 9.5max for this flow keep for now cuz i want the 10 10 10 setting so its harder to pass the map!
add some hs more. i believe you didnt finish yet. sounds poor for me especially front part yes
00:31:101 (5,6,7,1) - could you try to replace them? its make confuse when play stacked 3 notes (5,6,7) instead to emphasize 1, i dont think its that hard to read though

thanks
update

Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-10-22T14:17:20+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Lexis]
idk this diff lacks quality in structure and rhyhtm . idk how to help with that cos i m too lazy to do the explanations

how ? x)

Euny wrote:

came from my queue❤

Lexis' Hyper
00:34:184 (2,3,4,5) - not fit for music. listen that part. 1/2 sliders better for music. http://puu.sh/rRxli/4b1fc6cfcb.jpg
Fix :3
and 00:35:268 (7) - remove this. there is no sound from original music.
Good catch ! fix !

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Yukiyo

425 posts

Joined June 2014

Yukiyo 2016-10-22T15:07:30+00:00

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_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

_DT3 2016-10-22T22:49:55+00:00

@Euny: I thought I added those in last update ._.
Also, I didn't do hitsounds

@nyu - : Could you do Euny's points for me again in case there is no NC there?

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2016-10-23T13:26:53+00:00

Hitsounded almost all diffs and applied NC changes for DT3. <:

- Angelia

118 posts

Joined August 2013

- Angelia 2016-10-24T09:28:37+00:00

NM

[insane]
00:16:603 (12,1) - 有点想吐槽这个间距
00:20:353 (1) - remove nc
00:20:686 (2) - nc

[light insane]
00:16:353 (1) - remove nc
00:23:019 (3) - ctrl+g
00:36:017 (1) - remove nc
00:37:350 (5) - nc

~~没什么好摸的……~~

daisuke?

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2016-10-24T11:07:31+00:00

- Angelia wrote:
NM
[insane]
00:16:603 (12,1) - 有点想吐槽这个间距 fix
00:20:353 (1) - remove nc fix
00:20:686 (2) - nc fixed

~~没什么好摸的……~~ ikr. <:

daisuke?

Vivyanne

1,218 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2016-10-24T11:42:23+00:00

its holiday and im bored so lets go

beginner
>i think this is rly not needed as a diff in the mapset yea since the simplest rythm to still fit the song is already used in the Easy diffs. i betya more people will make a drama out if this since this is just unneeded diffs which is rly stupid yea :/
other than that rework ur sliders so that they look better xd

easy
00:24:685 (1,2) - why not use the same rythm here as u used in 00:15:353 (2) - ? (with the 1/1 gap instead of 2/1 gap) since the song is way more intense.
00:15:353 (2) - reconsider this as this is literally the only 1/1 gap in the map xd

meep

00:11:687 (2,3,4) - i think this wud be a little nicer if it was perfectly symmetrical tbh
00:16:686 (1,2,3) - please use a more intense rythm like u did before, the song gets more intense instead of weaker so theres no reason to switch to a less intensive rythm ;w;
00:32:685 (3) - i think a NC would fit, song changes a bit eyeye

normal
00:15:353 (1) - wud be nice if u could change this slider curve a bit so that it aligns better with the notes beforehanddd
00:16:686 (1,2) - fix blanket if intented???
00:28:685 (1,2,1,2) - why are these circles instead of sliders? consider making this consistent eya

mkguh
00:03:354 (1) - im not sure about the spinner in the beginning, as the easier diffs seem to have this mapped with sliders/circles, maybe you should consider doing that too, as using a less intense rythm on the same part but in a higher difficulty really looks weird
00:31:351 (1) - yea i get the varietry part but id still make this curve with a white dot instead of red to keep the curve consistent with the rest of the section, would make a little more sense

lexis
00:04:688 (3) - u can consider a NC here since the rythm changes a lot yea
00:04:688 (3,4) - not perfectly aligned ;w;
00:12:687 (1,3) - same slidershape for the patterning maybe?
00:34:184 (2,3,4,5) - i dare to bet that this throws a lot of players that can just reach this level due to the sudden change in rythm style. try to make it fit with the rest of the section so the player doesnt have to get confused \o/

_dt3
>can u pls up the OD to fit more with the insane, like 6,7 or 7 orz
00:10:020 (1) - imo itd be cooler to have this a little closer to 00:09:687 (3) - becus now the movement u want the player to make feels rly forced
00:16:353 (1) - why nc this if u didnt do it all the other timess
00:16:353 (1) - maybe u can stack this with the head of 00:18:353 (3) - ? would be a little cooler tbh
00:37:684 (6) - pls do not use 1/8 gaps, especially on easier diffs since the timing now is very strict and most likely difficult for the player. consider making it a 1/4 gap

insane
00:05:854 (7) - this slider sounds, really really weird tbh. consider just making it a 1/8 reverse so it fits the song better
00:11:020 (6,7,8,9) - a l i g n m e n t p l s
00:14:853 (3) - this note feels rly stupid rn, double negative flow that wasnt used in the map before all of the sudden, threw me off on my first play. consider ctrl+g
00:29:602 (6,7) - u didnt do anything like this before, so just make the overlap the same as with the sliderend streams to cause less confusion \o/
00:37:684 (5) - same as with turtle, pls make this 1/4 gap

yukistrata
00:16:020 (1,1) - y u no stack aa a a
00:18:020 (1,2,3) - almost unreadable 1/4 gaps tbh, way too spaced as to what was seen before thus reads as a 1/2 gap all the time. consider NCing all notes or decrease the spacing plsss (counts for all similar situationss)
00:27:019 (1) - theres like no reason to NC here so remove okthanks
>for the ending, i rly dont like how you are skipping beats like 00:28:768 - and 00:30:102 - . the easier diffs have used them and filling the ending up a bit wouldnt hurt, so map them \o/ (u can even simply just stack the notes onto the first slider's head lol)

deppyforce
>ar10 od10 hp10 uuh xd i get the sudden death part but i dont think these hard settings fit with the map itself, pls consider nerfing them
00:27:352 (1) - tbh i dont think the jump emphasis fits here due to the song actually breaking down instead of increasing a lot in intensity, consider not having the jumpp

shitmod xd

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2016-10-24T12:50:46+00:00

HighTec wrote:
its holiday and im bored so lets go yay

beginner
>i think this is rly not needed as a diff in the mapset yea since the simplest rythm to still fit the song is already used in the Easy diffs. i betya more people will make a drama out if this since this is just unneeded diffs which is rly stupid yea :/ waiting for more opinions on this
other than that rework ur sliders so that they look better xd they are cool af!

easy
00:24:685 (1,2) - why not use the same rythm here as u used in 00:15:353 (2) - ? (with the 1/1 gap instead of 2/1 gap) since the song is way more intense. ok
00:15:353 (2) - reconsider this as this is literally the only 1/1 gap in the map xd not anymore. <:

normal
00:15:353 (1) - wud be nice if u could change this slider curve a bit so that it aligns better with the notes beforehanddd gud idea
00:16:686 (1,2) - fix blanket if intented??? fixed
00:28:685 (1,2,1,2) - why are these circles instead of sliders? consider making this consistent eya consistent w/ 00:32:685 (1,2) -

insane
00:05:854 (7) - this slider sounds, really really weird tbh. consider just making it a 1/8 reverse so it fits the song better ok
00:11:020 (6,7,8,9) - a l i g n m e n t p l s fix
00:14:853 (3) - this note feels rly stupid rn, double negative flow that wasnt used in the map before all of the sudden, threw me off on my first play. consider ctrl+g euny suggested it to be like this.. flow feels fine imo but.. hm. fixed
00:29:602 (6,7) - u didnt do anything like this before, so just make the overlap the same as with the sliderend streams to cause less confusion \o/ oke
00:37:684 (5) - same as with turtle, pls make this 1/4 gap kay

shitmod xd

thanku for the mod

Yukiyo

425 posts

Joined June 2014

Yukiyo 2016-10-24T17:26:53+00:00

HighTec wrote:
yukistrata
00:16:020 (1,1) - y u no stack aa a a I don't want them stacked
00:18:020 (1,2,3) - almost unreadable 1/4 gaps tbh, way too spaced as to what was seen before thus reads as a 1/2 gap all the time. consider NCing all notes or decrease the spacing plsss (counts for all similar situationss) It's readable, cuz used pattern in past so players prolly expect again
00:27:019 (1) - theres like no reason to NC here so remove okthanks I guess
>for the ending, i rly dont like how you are skipping beats like 00:28:768 - and 00:30:102 - . the easier diffs have used them and filling the ending up a bit wouldnt hurt, so map them \o/ (u can even simply just stack the notes onto the first slider's head lol) Honestly, they are not even loud enough to be mapped

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Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-10-24T18:32:42+00:00

Now that I have some time, I'll apply faster :d

Mod

HighTec wrote:
lexis

00:04:688 (3) - u can consider a NC here since the rythm changes a lot yea
It's true, fixed.
00:04:688 (3,4) - not perfectly aligned ;w;
true again, fixed~
00:12:687 (1,3) - same slidershape for the patterning maybe?
It's fine like that, imo~
00:34:184 (2,3,4,5) - i dare to bet that this throws a lot of players that can just reach this level due to the sudden change in rythm style. try to make it fit with the rest of the section so the player doesnt have to get confused \o/
The problem is not here but after, and I think that actual pattertn fits because, just check the timeline, I used this timing pattern more that one time. And the next combo isn't really hard, that's not 200bpm deathstream or hyper mega ultra jump.

☆☆☆☆☆ Lexis' Hyper ☆☆☆☆☆

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Yes now I'll write in big because you haven't saw my last update after Euny's Mod xD

Deppyforce

1,989 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-10-26T11:37:01+00:00

i do sudden death stuff cuz the map is short enough
keep the jump thing cuz start of new verse shuld be strong and emphasizing is to make it different from previous rhythm (its not a part of 1/8 stuff in the song so spacing to 1 should be noticeably different)

thanks

_Meep_

1,725 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2016-10-26T13:11:17+00:00

Euny wrote:
Meep's Easy
kiai dont have end point. Fixed
00:06:021 (4,1) - swap nc. since new rhythm + sounds start on there. Fixed
00:14:020 (5) - seems you forgot. add nc for here. Fixed
00:24:685 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:27:352 (1,2) - they really not fit music also distance make newbies confuse. just try to put 2/1 sliders i think thats better for play. >> I wanted to make this difficulty a bit unique,where the players could experience sliderart at an earlier stage rather than later,it felt like a waste for beginners to not experience something this beautiful(not mine,as in sliderart itself)http://puu.sh/rRyun/2a5b293f71.jpg

Thx 4 ze mod

HighTec wrote:
its holiday and im bored so lets go

meep
Fixed
Fixed
00:11:687 (2,3,4) - i think this wud be a little nicer if it was perfectly symmetrical tbh Fixed
00:16:686 (1,2,3) - please use a more intense rythm like u did before, the song gets more intense instead of weaker so theres no reason to switch to a less intensive rythm ;w; Fixed
00:32:685 (3) - i think a NC would fit, song changes a bit eyeye Fixed

shitmod xd

Thanx 4 moddin'

http://puu.sh/rWcky/dfbc82aadb.osu

LowAccuracySS

605 posts

Joined October 2015

LowAccuracySS 2016-10-28T22:26:19+00:00

Bear with me on this modding, this map is already pretty much complete for that matter

Beginner

great diff but holy crap those were extremely slow sliders lol

Easy

See beginner, minus the slider complaint

Meep's Easy

00:04:688 (3) - Slider seems a bit weird, maybe it's just me

Normal

Looks fine to me, no changes needed imo

Mk's Hard

see Normal

Lexis' Hyper

00:27:352 (1) - too fast of a transition especially after the drop happened

Turtle's Light Insane

00:04:688 (1,2,3,4) - Please make these normal hit circles for the love of HP drain <3
00:36:684 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Insane

00:10:687 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - oh good god please make that turn more forgiving please

Yukiyo's Insane

phenom. diff- I enjoyed playing it a lot

dpf's Sudden Death

00:37:351 (1,2,3,4) - ew, I get it's supposed to be hard but that's stupidly dfficult to do imo

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2016-10-28T22:54:13+00:00

TheSlimeMan wrote:
Bear with me on this modding, this map is already pretty much complete for that matter

Insane
00:10:687 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - oh good god please make that turn more forgiving please It's.. normal for an Insane to have stuff like that, so its fine.

Thanks for the mod!

LowAccuracySS

605 posts

Joined October 2015

LowAccuracySS 2016-10-28T23:13:57+00:00

nyu - wrote:
TheSlimeMan wrote:
Bear with me on this modding, this map is already pretty much complete for that matter

Insane
00:10:687 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - oh good god please make that turn more forgiving please It's.. normal for an Insane to have stuff like that, so its fine.
Thanks for the mod!

oh lol thanks for creating <3

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-10-29T05:30:57+00:00

sudden death diff

nice meme map
I don't think AR 10 is necessary
I don't think HP 10 is necessary
did fort help you hitsound this or..?
00:36:684 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The low spacing ruins the ending imo because listening to the music it's the same intensity as the section 00:27:352 and the spacing doesn't reflect the song.

Deppyforce

1,989 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-10-29T08:04:09+00:00

@slimeman not really cuz theyre still overlapping

@hi im nathan yes its not ''necessary'' but it should be acceptable
i make good maps

fix end

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Come[Back]Home

1,790 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2016-10-29T09:23:33+00:00

Beginner

I have nothing to say here, except that the shapes of the first 3 sliders is weird to look at lol.

Easy

00:32:018 (2) - This one is touching the hp-bar which is unrankable
00:35:351 (1) - Instead of a boring repeat, wouldnt this look cooler? Click

Meep's Easy

00:04:688 (3) - There are so many strong beats, but youve decided to let it repeat on nothing. Mind explain why? Cause this doesnt fit at all
00:13:020 (4,1) - This would look way better if you blank them properly.
00:20:686 (3) - Shouldnt this one get a NC to make it consistent? (Like the parts before it)

Some NC inconsistencies in this one.

Normal
How about cs 3,5? Seems more fitting in a Normal

00:06:021 - You sure about sv-change here? Most Normals dont have any to not confuse the players, since they are still getting into the game.
00:28:018 (2,1) - This is kinda hard to predict for newer players. They cant expect the slider to repeat on a blue tick, and clicking the circle afterwards is a bit hard then. 00:32:018 (2,1) - same here...and so on. Maybe you should just replace them with sliders aswell.

Mk's Hard

Isnt the sv a bit too high? If you compare it too normal its way faster than before. I think that might be a problem for the spread.

00:36:684 (1) - I wouldve just mapped this part, since its a Hard and clearly mappable now.

Lexis' Hyper

00:07:354 (1,2,3) - This is a bit hard to read, since its slightly overlapping with the pattern before when you play the map.
00:14:687 (3,1) - This looks very cramped, maybe you should move (1) a bit away
00:25:185 (3,4,5) - Almost touching the hp bar, move them lower.

Turtle's Light Insane

00:35:351 (1,2,1,2) - I think you should try to make it more clear that those are 1/4 now. People will probably missread those because of the sliders before and click to early.

Cool Diff~

Insane

00:10:687 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is way too hard to follow in an Insane. Please think about something, this isnt supposed to be in an Insane.
00:16:603 (12,1) - This is too hard aswell.
00:29:602 (6,7) - Why the low ds suddenly? Its inconsistent. Same here 00:34:934 (6,7) -

Yukiyo's Insane

00:35:184 (5,1) - Higher spacing between those would fit really nice

Awesome diff

dpf's Sudden Death

Wow, okay. Looks nice~

Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-10-29T15:10:52+00:00

TheSlimeMan wrote:
Bear with me on this modding, this map is already pretty much complete for that matter
Lexis' Hyper
00:27:352 (1) - too fast of a transition especially after the drop happened
I'm just following the rythm.

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Lexis' Hyper

00:07:354 (1,2,3) - This is a bit hard to read, since its slightly overlapping with the pattern before when you play the map.
True, moved a bit
00:14:687 (3,1) - This looks very cramped, maybe you should move (1) a bit away
Fixed
00:25:185 (3,4,5) - Almost touching the hp bar, move them lower.
Fix

Lexis' Hyper

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_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

_DT3 2016-10-30T12:55:03+00:00

- Angelia wrote:
NM
[light insane]
00:16:353 (1) - remove nc Yes
00:23:019 (3) - ctrl+g Intentional, so no
00:36:017 (1) - remove nc It's consistent, so no
00:37:350 (5) - nc Same as above, i think

daisuke?

HighTec wrote:
its holiday and im bored so lets go Same

_dt3
>can u pls up the OD to fit more with the insane, like 6,7 or 7 orz 6.7 it is
00:10:020 (1) - imo itd be cooler to have this a little closer to 00:09:687 (3) - becus now the movement u want the player to make feels rly forced Should be fine, though the flow is a bit jarred, it plays fine
00:16:353 (1) - why nc this if u didnt do it all the other timess Fixed above
00:16:353 (1) - maybe u can stack this with the head of 00:18:353 (3) - ? would be a little cooler tbh Wat
00:37:684 (6) - pls do not use 1/8 gaps, especially on easier diffs since the timing now is very strict and most likely difficult for the player. consider making it a 1/4 gap 1/4 gap it is

shitmod xd Naah

TheSlimeMan wrote:
Bear with me on this modding, this map is already pretty much complete for that matter

Turtle's Light Insane
00:04:688 (1,2,3,4) - Please make these normal hit circles for the love of HP drain <3 I-it's supposed to be a diff spike though...
00:36:684 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Turtle's Light Insane

00:35:351 (1,2,1,2) - I think you should try to make it more clear that those are 1/4 now. People will probably missread those because of the sliders before and click to early. I am pretty sure that that's 1/2. And besides, that sequence already was there before so people should read it just fine

Cool Diff~ Sankyuu

Thanks for modding, guys!

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Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2016-10-31T11:59:03+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Beginner

I have nothing to say here, except that the shapes of the first 3 sliders is weird to look at lol. if u think so ;;;;

Easy

00:32:018 (2) - This one is touching the hp-bar which is unrankable not unrankable but fixed.
00:35:351 (1) - Instead of a boring repeat, wouldnt this look cooler? Click fixed, good point

Normal
How about cs 3,5? Seems more fitting in a Normal CS4 normal = nyu's normal

00:06:021 - You sure about sv-change here? Most Normals dont have any to not confuse the players, since they are still getting into the game. Since.. its not too rapid, imma keep it.
00:28:018 (2,1) - This is kinda hard to predict for newer players. They cant expect the slider to repeat on a blue tick, and clicking the circle afterwards is a bit hard then. 00:32:018 (2,1) - same here...and so on. Maybe you should just replace them with sliders aswell. Waiting for other opinions.. i think they'll can do this.

Insane

00:10:687 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is way too hard to follow in an Insane. Please think about something, this isnt supposed to be in an Insane. The SR is pretty high, so this is acceptable here.
00:16:603 (12,1) - This is too hard aswell. Reducing spacing a bit.
00:29:602 (6,7) - Why the low ds suddenly? Its inconsistent. Same here 00:34:934 (6,7) - euny suggested me to do this here.. ;;;;

Thanks for the mod!

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-10-31T13:27:25+00:00

m4m from modreqs xd my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/508455

the beginner diff is not needed since its just here to have a meme beginner diff ur monstrata

[General]
the hitsounds are waaaaaaaay too loud hoyl
maybe use more than 2 combo colours?

[Easy]
00:07:687 - this is a pretty strong beat u ignored maybe think about trying to emphasize it with a 1/1 reverse slider?
00:08:687 (1,2,3,1) - the slider overlap try to make a square pattern with those 4? or copy the slider and play with symmetry?
00:27:352 (1,2) - not perfect blanket xdf
00:27:352 (1,2,1) - also try to form a triangle with those 3?
00:32:018 (2) - spacing!?
00:32:685 (1,2,1) - fix triangle pls

[Meep's Easy]
this map is just p random
00:06:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - u follow the music which is okay,i dont really understand the low sv but its okay
00:08:687 (1,2,3,4) - could you like form a square?
00:11:354 (1) - no overlaps in easy diffs pls
00:12:687 (3,4) - what are you trying to emphasize here? but the slider at 00:12:687 - and the note behind it
the whole kiai just focusses on the vocal which is not as audible as the music(which u followed before there fore it looks really weird,also why nc spam aa)
00:22:019 (1) - i guess u thought here was ''FUCK VOCALS'' and u just started mapping on ???
dont know bout the end it looks like u just didint know what to do

[Normal]
00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - u use a 1/1 spacing and suddenly here 00:05:688 (4,1) - (which still is a 1/1 spacing) the spacing changes,how is a beginner going to expect that.
00:24:019 (2) - copy this slider and paste it 00:24:685 (1) - here so u can blanket properly
rest looks okayish

[Mk's Hard]
00:10:020 (1) - ctrl+g this to have a little bit of flow variation?
00:17:353 (3,4,1,2) - fix square pls

00:31:851 (2,3,1) - triangle fix

[Lexis' Hyper]

00:08:354 (5,2) - fix stack
00:14:520 (2,1) - i guess u didnt stack this on purpose
rest looks good

[Turtle's Light Insane]
00:22:852 (2,4) - ctrl+g those?
even doe this map is made out of 1 rhythm and that copy pasted it still looks and plays awesome. best diff so far!

[Insane]
idk what but something in this diff triggers me
00:08:021 (2) - what is this slider trying to emphasize?
the whole map has no to little structure you go in every direction just randomly,no memorible patterns idk
idk how to describe how i feel bout this diff,it just looks too random imo,spacing just reduces/increases randomly idk

[Yukiyo's Insane]
this diff

k_hand:

[dpf's Sudden Death]

this diff is okay i guesS? a bit too hard for me to judge sorry

Mekki

Mekki 2016-10-31T16:18:56+00:00

fixed everything except nazi suggestiosn like blankets or ''weird'' slider shapes af also, thanks for who said my diff is good

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Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-10-31T18:05:23+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
[Lexis' Hyper]

00:08:354 (5,2) - fix stack
00:14:520 (2,1) - i guess u didnt stack this on purpose
rest looks good Fixed both

Lexis' Hyper

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Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-11-01T02:26:48+00:00

Easy

I believe you can only use 1 DS in Easy. Try to fix these parts and double check in case I missed one:
00:27:352 (1,2) - 0.9 DS
00:32:018 (2,1) - 1.1 DS
I think those are the only ones!

Normal

00:24:685 (1) - I would use the same curve you have at 00:24:019 (2) - for this. (copy/paste and rotate). It also gives a better blanket for 00:25:685 (2) - and wouldn't really affect anything
Everything else seems fine ^^

Lexis' Hyper

00:14:520 (2,1) - Stack? stacking it will force you to adjust DS 00:16:020 (2) - and possibly more of that section
00:08:354 (5,2) - ^
00:30:185 (2,3,4,5,6) - Use consistent DS for these patterns. It's minor but it still matters in my opinion (it looks like you want 1.1 DS, keep it the same for all. Right now it ranges from 1.5-1.11)
00:32:851 (2,3,4,5) - you do a better job here with consistent DS
00:34:184 (2,3,4,5) - Fix

Turtle's Light Insane

There is 1 inconsistency that I see in this difficulty and it's the DS for all of these patterns in the kiai time:
00:16:686 (1,2,3) -
00:18:020 (1,2,3) -
00:19:353 (1,2,3) -
00:20:686 (1,2,3) -
and so on...

The DS's aren't too much off, but it seems pretty random (between 2.8 and 3.2 DS)

00:35:184 (6) - Also minor DS change (you use 2.5 through this last section and you have 2.44 here) x211 y368 seems to work and keeps 2.5DS leading to 00:35:351 (1) -

Insane

00:27:352 - From here on, I see a couple inconsistencies:
00:29:018 (3,4) - This is the only time you use a stacked double which has the potential to confuse players
00:29:852 (7) - Very minior, you use 0.9 DS here and then 0.86 at 00:35:184 (7) -
Lastly, I also see a lot of different curved sliders (maybe 10 or so) which just isn't attractive in my opinion and seems random. I don't think it will prevent rankability but I would polish that part up a little bit if I were you. It's a pretty small part so it wouldn't be that hard.

Everything else in the diff seems fine ^_^

Yuyiko's Insane

00:06:437 (2,3) - small blanket fix (space gets wider near the sliderend of 00:06:437 (2) - )
00:16:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - either stack this with 00:16:020 (1) - or give it the same DS from it like this: https://puu.sh/s2nvU/fc4fb77dd2.png
00:27:352 (6) - The placement of this just feels weird to me because of the overlap. maybe at least make it symmetrical with 00:26:935 (4,5) - or maybe even put it further to the right (just my opinion, it might be fine how it is)

dpf's sudden death:

00:18:270 (2) - Seems a little bit lazily added (pretty random overlap too). Maybe something like this:

GL! Looks like it's getting close to complete

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2016-11-01T02:41:48+00:00

hey m4m from ur q

[General]

Only 2 colors for the combo doesn't look good for me.. why not adding some brown for all the diffs? (0,240,50)
Just the insane diff have the widescreen support disabled. since there's no storyboard i guess u should disable for the rest of the diffs too.
Is the countdown set as enabled on purpose? Imo it would be better if you disable it but it's ok.

[dpf's]
Uhh Idk but HPdrain & OD 10 isnt too much for the diff? I recommend you to reduce it since the diff is quite hard for itself, leave the od and hp 10 for the hr mode.
00:05:688 (1) - should it have a NC? I think just having NC 00:05:354 (1) - it's ok.
00:07:354 (1,2,3) - & 00:10:020 (1,2,3) - are following the same music/rhythm but they play different pattern which make it a bit weird to play.
00:14:020 (1,2,3) this pattern ocurr after some spaced sliders 00:13:520 (3,4,5) - and then you reduce quite a lot the distance between those notes. Then you do 00:14:687 (1,2,3) - which I find quite good but it doesn't really fit the playstyle u were building. Finally you have 00:15:353 (1,2,3) - which is following and total different pattern from the previous 2 and idk but it felt quite weird. If I were you I'd space the pattern a little bit from each other and make 00:15:353 (1,2,3) - have the same rhythm for the previous2.
00:18:020 (1,2) - These 2 sliders seems to be a bit random imo. why not trying some symmetric aesthetic with 00:18:270 (2) - ? the actual angle is a bit weird.
00:32:434 (5,6,1,2,3) - I guess moving 00:32:851 (2) - to 160,288 would play/fit better imo. the actual angel lacks of flow for me, while moving 00:32:851 (2) - there would make a rhomb 00:32:434 (5,1,2,3) - which is better i think.

[yukiyo's]
00:10:520 (3,1) - the actual transition has a weird flow, i recommend you to 00:10:854 (1) - ctrl+g this.
00:17:686 (3) - maybe make this into 2 1/4 sliders? would fit better mainly because 00:17:936 - feels quite empty from the patterns you were building.
00:20:353 (3) - 00:23:019 (3) - ^
00:26:352 (5) - Again leaving 00:26:602 - empty is quite weird since all is stream, maybe do a continous stream or make 00:26:352 (5) - into 2 1/4 sliders.
00:27:352 (6) - start the NC here instead?
00:28:685 - 00:30:018 - 00:31:351 - 00:32:685 - 00:34:018 - I highly recommend you to map these notes since they're quite strong, so they're worth it to map i think.

[insane]
00:05:771 - I recommend you to cut the stream 00:05:688 - here since 00:05:771 - has no actual sound worth to be mapped imo, maybe do something like this? http://puu.sh/s2pe5/1bac1450d5.jpg
I don't really like 00:14:020 (1) - this overlap when playing tbh. Also the distance 00:13:520 (4,5,6) - between these are a bit inconsistent. maybe do something like http://puu.sh/s2po5/3fdd82353a.jpg
00:14:687 (2,3,4) - maybe make this a 3/4 reverse slider? just like 00:14:020 (1) - this one. Would fit better the song imo.
00:15:936 - there's no stream sound so I guess you should delete it or make 00:15:686 (3) - a 3/4 slider instead.
00:19:019 (5,6,1) - This have good flow but the jump is quite random since you're not adding jumps around these patterns. I suggest you to reduce 00:19:019 (5,6) - this distance a bit.
00:32:435 - imo this sound should be clickable instead of ending it with a slider tail.
00:38:017 - add a note here since i'ts quite a strong beat?

[turtle's]
00:05:688 (6,2,3) - this stack seems a bit weird when playing. maybe stack them manually? http://puu.sh/s2pKC/0fe172232c.jpg

[lexis's's's] jking xd
00:08:354 (5,2) - stack?
00:14:687 (3,4) - maybe make these a 1/1 slider + note just like what u did 00:14:020 (1,2) - here?
00:14:520 (2,1) - stack?
00:31:268 - add note here?

[mk's]
00:06:021 (1) - Idk but maybe start this slider more in the center from the grid since it's coming right after the spinner and beginners might miss it.
00:19:019 (3,2) - maybe avoid this overlap?
00:35:851 (2,4) - I'delete these 2 because the main focus here are the 4 strong beat (00:35:351 - 00:35:684 - 00:36:018 - 00:36:351 - ) and those single notes might confuse the players.

[nomal]
00:10:020 - here you're missing the strong beat by adding a single note and then start a slider 00:10:354 - here which feels a bit off the rhythm, specially for the difficulty. I recommend you to follow this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/s2qye/191f12022a.jpg

[meep's]
00:04:688 (3,1) - i guess you can blanket it better.
00:15:353 (3,4) - idk but these single notes feels a bit empty, why not making these 1/1 sliders instead?
00:23:019 (3) - ending a strong beat with a slider tail is not a good idea specially on lower diffs since they're not intuitive for the new players. better to emphasize these strong beat with the head of a slider. I recommend you to follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/s2qIW/cc6dd544b1.jpg
00:27:019 - add a note here?

[easy]
CS 3 isn't too much for a 1.1*? I guess CS 2 + deleting the beginner diffs would be enough i guess. Or just keep the beginner and lower the CS from easy, it keeps on 1*(0.99) which is fine imo.

oh well that's all from me. GL with you mapset!

Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-11-01T10:40:35+00:00

Ora wrote:
Lexis' Hyper

00:14:520 (2,1) - Stack? stacking it will force you to adjust DS 00:16:020 (2) - and possibly more of that section
Already stacked but nyu haven't updated ;w;
00:08:354 (5,2) - ^
Already stacked too
00:30:185 (2,3,4,5,6) - Use consistent DS for these patterns. It's minor but it still matters in my opinion (it looks like you want 1.1 DS, keep it the same for all. Right now it ranges from 1.5-1.11)
this is consistant DS ;w;
00:32:851 (2,3,4,5) - you do a better job here with consistent DS
Consistent too xD
00:34:184 (2,3,4,5) - Fix Fix what ? o.o

iYiyo wrote:
[lexis's's's] jking xd
00:08:354 (5,2) - stack?
Already stacked but nyu haven't updated... again x)
00:14:687 (3,4) - maybe make these a 1/1 slider + note just like what u did 00:14:020 (1,2) - here?
Nah~ That I wanted in these slider is 3 = AAAA --- 4 = SUS (just listen the "lyrics" lol)
00:14:520 (2,1) - stack?
Already stack but don't updated
00:31:268 - add note here?
fix
oh well that's all from me. GL with you mapset!

☆☆ THAT BIG BOX WITH MY DIFF THAT NYU WILL UPDATE ☆☆

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Deppyforce

1,989 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-11-01T11:37:24+00:00

lazy to write reply this time but i fixed stuff lol thanks for mod

osu file format v14

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Artist:saradisk
ArtistUnicode:saradisk
Creator:nyu -
Version:dpf's Sudden Death
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
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Mun

470 posts

Joined July 2015

Mun 2016-11-03T01:50:52+00:00

pls remap all diffs

only modding 1 or 2 diffs since i'm not a fan of this song
I see very little wrong with it (since there's very little that can be wrong with a 50 second map) other than the horribly invasive and busy hitsounds

dpf's Sudden Death

00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - Change each of these sliderends to the Soft sampleset and lower hitsound volume to minimum
00:06:021 (1) - This hitsound is REALLY fort
00:10:770 (1) - Move this middle note up just a bit so the triple is curved, seems to help with flow
00:12:187 (3,2,3) - Probably stack these
00:16:686 (1) - oh my god this sound NO
00:19:186 (5) - This plays better with ctrl+G
00:19:686 (3,1) - Probably stack the sliderend with the start of the triple

I'm not experienced with small CS maps, + map is really short - lack of content in this mod can't be helped
Can't be bothered to go through it multiple times actually, I hate this song more than I expected
anime was a mistake

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Lilyanna 2016-11-03T07:51:31+00:00

m4m my ku

General :

- disable countdown and widescreen support on all diff
- maybe use soft sliderslide
- i think the preview point choice could have been better
- 00:38:017 - unconsistent hitsound here along the spread

easy :

- 00:19:353 (1,2) - can make the symmetry of the slider (1)
- 00:28:852 - if u pause here u can notice the blanket is really off best way to fix it is moving this note 00:29:352 (2) - here 00:29:018 - fix blanket and then move it back here 00:29:352 -

meep's easy :

- 00:04:688 (3) - it flowes wierd try ctrl j
- 00:07:354 (4,5,6) - if u map this same as this 00:06:021 (1,2,3) - with 2 notes and then 1/1 slider would feel better imo
- 00:23:352 - doesnt feel right ending on the downbeat where should be clickable for new pattern
- 00:32:685 (1,2,3,4) - try this for better looking pattern http://puu.sh/s4Ua5/ff337d8eb3.jpg

Normal :

- 00:10:020 (5,1) - swap nc
- 00:24:685 (1,2) - could blanket
- 00:27:352 - not so fan of few overlaps starting from this part

the rest seem ok and im bad at modding higher sr if my mod drain is short u can mod one or 2 diff only on my map

im sorry short mod i hope i helped!
good luck.

_Meep_

1,725 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2016-11-06T14:40:32+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Meep's Easy

00:04:688 (3) - There are so many strong beats, but youve decided to let it repeat on nothing. Mind explain why? Cause this doesnt fit at all Firstly,I didn't want to map it to the point where the player would be overwhelmed by notes that play the part. If I were to place notes,beginners would be confused on which beat to tap,considering that part sounds like a stream,where there are many loud sounds,therefore I decided to place a slider so that it is easier for beginners to play.They do not need to force themselves to click accidentaly either,since they know that sliders are click+hold
00:13:020 (4,1) - This would look way better if you blank them properly. Fixed
00:20:686 (3) - Shouldnt this one get a NC to make it consistent? (Like the parts before it) Fixed

Some NC inconsistencies in this one. Fixed

[meep's]
[*]00:04:688 (3,1) - i guess you can blanket it better. Fixed
[*]00:15:353 (3,4) - idk but these single notes feels a bit empty, why not making these 1/1 sliders instead? Fixed
[*]00:23:019 (3) - ending a strong beat with a slider tail is not a good idea specially on lower diffs since they're not intuitive for the new players. better to emphasize these strong beat with the head of a slider. I recommend you to follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/s2qIW/cc6dd544b1.jpg Fixed
[*]00:27:019 - add a note here? Fixed

[Meep's Easy]
this map is just p random
00:06:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - u follow the music which is okay,i dont really understand the low sv but its okay uh,okay...
00:08:687 (1,2,3,4) - could you like form a square? Fixed
00:11:354 (1) - no overlaps in easy diffs pls The note would already be long gone considering the slider was 4 ticks already.
00:12:687 (3,4) - what are you trying to emphasize here? but the slider at 00:12:687 - and the note behind it The high pitched idk what to call it thingy
the whole kiai just focusses on the vocal which is not as audible as the music(which u followed before there fore it looks really weird,also why nc spam aa) I'm really not too sure about what you're talking about here tbh,the NC spams uh,I'll remove em.
00:22:019 (1) - i guess u thought here was ''FUCK VOCALS'' and u just started mapping on ??? Fixed
dont know bout the end it looks like u just didint know what to do Added a few notes,the reason why I didn't map much for the last part,was because there were quite alot of similar sounds,therefore would confuse beginners on what to click to.

[/quote]

meep's easy :

- 00:04:688 (3) - it flowes wierd try ctrl j I don't think it's weird :/
- 00:07:354 (4,5,6) - if u map this same as this 00:06:021 (1,2,3) - with 2 notes and then 1/1 slider would feel better imo I don't exactly feel better using that pattern,so no ;w;
- 00:23:352 - doesnt feel right ending on the downbeat where should be clickable for new pattern Fixed
- 00:32:685 (1,2,3,4) - try this for better looking pattern http://puu.sh/s4Ua5/ff337d8eb3.jpg Fixed

Thanks 4 dem mods,was deleting and replacing and was lost whose was whose,so thanks anyway guys <3

http://puu.sh/s8qaQ/d60a5e0425.osu

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-11-06T16:07:32+00:00

From the Bubblicious Modding Queue.

Very late I know, I was busy the week you posted there.

Easy

SPOILER

00:13:353 - These notes don't line up and it kinda bugs me. Adjust the slider a bit so it's lined up?
00:29:352 (2) - Adjust this circle so it's perfectly blanketed by the slider.
00:30:018 (1,2,1) - I don't know how aiMod didn't catch this, but I'm assuming you didn't use DS on this diff. It's highly recommended to use DS on easy.

Meep's Easy

SPOILER

[spoilerbox]00:04:688 (3) - You're better off building up the slider along with the song by making this a reverse slider on the red ticks. Like this: http://puu.sh/s8tso/c046bf382b.jpg Having a 3/4 slider here feels very awkward.

[/spoilerbox]

Lexis' Hyper

SPOILER

00:21:353 (5,6) - I think it matches the song better if you replace 5 with the start of 6, and place a circle where the tail of 6 was before you moved it.

Sudden Death

SPOILER

LOL These stats. I love this diff already.
00:17:686 (2) - I recommend making this slider vertical so it's parallel to 1 and 3.
00:38:017 (1) - I recommend extending this slider to here. I see you're trying to make it have an equal shape to the previous sliders, so you'll have to adjust the SV on it.

Rizen

1,666 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-11-08T10:13:52+00:00

mmm

countdown set on purpose???

Beginner

The thing about beginners is that because it's so simple, you want to relate it to the song as much as possible. This include slider shapes, which can be manipulated so the angle points correspond to something in the music. Otherwise, you can slap the beginner diff to any other 180.020bpm song
00:06:021 (1) - you can edit the slider body so the angle points correspond with the large white ticks in the music like this. Applies to other sliders such as 00:16:686 (1) - , 00:22:019 (1) - , etc.
00:31:351 (1) - can probably remove NC as the NC pattern i'm getting from this difficulty is one per 4 measures. Same at 00:36:684 (1) -

Easy

00:15:353 (2,1) - I kinda disagree with using 1/1 in a diff that mostly uses all 1/2. It just seems kinda out of place imo... applies to 00:24:685 (1,2) - too
00:29:352 (2) - spacinggg (also the blanket is rather off)
00:30:018 (1,2,1) - inconsistent spacing

Meep's Easy

00:18:020 (1) - remove NC here?
00:23:352 - would make this clickable tbh, since the other downbeats in this song are all clickable
00:35:684 (2,3,4) - 3 consecutive circles could be difficult for new players, so maybe make it a circle then 1/1 slider?

Normal

Is it possible to make the CS of this 3.5? ;_; 4 seems a bit too small
00:19:353 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - previously, you had the 1/2 rhythms when there are those artificial sounds (?) e.g. at 00:09:687 (3,4,5) - and 00:13:687 (3,4,1) - . However in this pattern, you seem to be doing the opposite of that. Shouldn't the rhythm be like this?
00:24:685 (1,2) - maybe blanket as you have done with most of your patterns

Mk's Hard

00:27:352 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - if you listen carefully to the music, there is no sounds on the red ticks at 00:27:852 (2) - , 00:29:185 (2) - , etc. so having objects on these red ticks doesn't follow the music at all
other than that, no complaints

Lexis' Hyper

00:22:519 (2,3,4) - if you enable stacking, you can see that the blanket is rather off
00:30:935 (5,6,7,1) - I do not suggest such an intense rhythm for a rather calm part of the song, try replacing the 3 circles with a 1/4 repeat slider instead?
00:35:351 (1) - I think the circle here can easily be confused to be 1/4 after the previous object due to your choice of stacking it (in other words, I do not agree with stacking this note. Perhaps try spacing it out)
00:35:351 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe a nice pentagon pattern?

Turtle's Light Insane

00:03:355 (1,2,1,2) - do not agree with having these sliders 1/2 as the vocals are held for 3/4... Could try circles instead mm
00:24:685 (1) - accidental clap?

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-11-09T16:00:43+00:00

hello from my queue

General :
- well tbh beginner diff is unnecessary here
- 00:05:271 - i think preview time is better placed in here because preview time is used when we open the map. the epic music part is directly listened by ppl

Beginner :
- i would say AR 1, AR 0 is weird
- why would you use 0,5x SV greenline timing in 0,40 sv so it means the real SV is 0,2 then next easy has 0,6 sv.. that is kinda imbalance for me
- 00:11:354 (1) - why not end the slider at 00:15:353 - for consistency?
- 00:16:686 (1) - also spacing between 0,99x and 1,12x is inconsistency pls fix
- meh all your spacing in here is inconsitent, i saw 1,85x 0,99x, 1,50x etc.. please only use 1 spacing to make them consistent

Easy :
- i would say AR 2 here due your rhythms mostly are 2/1 gap
- HP3? its too high, use HP 2
- 00:20:686 (2) - the design somehow is weird, the curve level is so different with previous avatar, try make like http://puu.sh/sctuZ/0ebd7ff757.jpg this?
- 00:24:685 (1) - for me you should end the slider at 00:25:352 - due music's pitch
- 00:29:352 (2) - spacing error (0,91x)
- 00:32:685 (1) - watch out your spacing

Meep's Easy :
- AR 1 OD o HP 1? please no meme :C AR 3 OD 2 HP 1,5 look best for me
- 00:04:688 (3) - i would say end the slider at 00:05:354 - for follow the vocal, if you do then remove the repeat and add a circle for 00:05:688 -
- 00:06:021 (1) - drum finish for consistency with another easy?
- 00:23:352 - that isnt good to make strong beat mapped with a slider tail, swap rhythm for 00:22:686 (2,3) -
- i just realised, where is the hitsound?

Normal :
- CS 3 or 3,5? CS 4 is too small for newbie
- 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - please use 0,9x spacing too for consistency
- 00:15:853 - remove clap

well i will stop in here. your normal diff is quite hard with many 1/2 notes when your highest easy diff is still a relaxing easy diff. your hard diff SV is quite fast then its imbalance between normal and hard SV speed.
Hyper OD setting can be 6 and HP 5. that would be more balance and the diff is too much 1/4 notes which making the spread is bad
Turtle's Light Insane isnt a light insane. that is a insane diff so please rename as Turtle's Insane

well basically in my eyes, the map is still can improve a loooooooooooootttttttttt. sorry if my words sound rude since you asked honest opinion then i do

good luck nyu saradisk is love ><

Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-11-09T21:26:00+00:00

Sorry for being quite inactive~

Bubblun wrote:
Bubblun's Mod
00:21:353 (5,6) - I think it matches the song better if you replace 5 with the start of 6, and place a circle where the tail of 6 was before you moved it. Oh, really interesting ! Fixed !

Other changes :
+ 00:31:268 (7,2,3) - Stacked 7 - 3

Rizen wrote:
Rizen's Mod
00:22:519 (2,3,4) - if you enable stacking, you can see that the [url=http://puu.sh/saxp1/4a458acb35.jpg]blanket is rather off
Oh, fixed ^^[/url]
00:30:935 (5,6,7,1) - I do not suggest such an intense rhythm for a rather calm part of the song, try replacing the 3 circles with a 1/4 repeat slider instead?
Here, I know but I can't really do this because it will create a NC conflict or will not looks good, I won't delete the circles because it won't follow the song like I wanted it when I mapped this GD.
00:35:351 (1) - I think the circle here can easily be confused to be 1/4 after the previous object due to your choice of stacking it (in other words, I do not agree with stacking this note. Perhaps try spacing it out)
I need to stack them because the pattern is really spaced and it's hard to place it
00:35:351 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe a nice pentagon pattern?
that's already a pentagon xd

Xinely wrote:
Hyper OD setting can be 6 and HP 5. that would be more balance and the diff is too much 1/4 notes which making the spread is bad
OD : 5 → 5.5
HP : 4 → 4.5

good luck nyu saradisk is love ><

HERE'S THE UPDAAAAAAATE ♥

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Zyl

521 posts

Joined October 2013

Zyl 2016-11-15T22:57:15+00:00

Can i GD Normal?

Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-11-18T13:07:04+00:00

Zyl wrote:
Can i GD Normal?

The map is in pending that supposes that the map is complete so i don't really know if nyu - will accept because he already called a BN etc...

Last edited by Vovan 2016-11-20T21:40:20+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Zyl

521 posts

Joined October 2013

Zyl 2016-11-18T19:35:26+00:00

k, relax~

Lully

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2016-12-03T15:13:15+00:00

reviving after christmas~

Yukiyo

425 posts

Joined June 2014

Yukiyo 2016-12-06T20:16:58+00:00

Ora wrote:
Yuyiko's Insane

00:06:437 (2,3) - small blanket fix (space gets wider near the sliderend of 00:06:437 (2) - ) sure
00:16:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - either stack this with 00:16:020 (1) - or give it the same DS from it like this: https://puu.sh/s2nvU/fc4fb77dd2.png Why should I? any reason
00:27:352 (6) - The placement of this just feels weird to me because of the overlap. maybe at least make it symmetrical with 00:26:935 (4,5) - or maybe even put it further to the right (just my opinion, it might be fine how it is)Hmm I like it how it is, and I don't see a prob with it

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Yukiyo

425 posts

Joined June 2014

Yukiyo 2016-12-06T20:17:23+00:00

Ora wrote:
Yuyiko's Insane

00:06:437 (2,3) - small blanket fix (space gets wider near the sliderend of 00:06:437 (2) - ) sure
00:16:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - either stack this with 00:16:020 (1) - or give it the same DS from it like this: https://puu.sh/s2nvU/fc4fb77dd2.png Why should I? any reason
00:27:352 (6) - The placement of this just feels weird to me because of the overlap. maybe at least make it symmetrical with 00:26:935 (4,5) - or maybe even put it further to the right (just my opinion, it might be fine how it is)Hmm I like it how it is, and I don't see a prob with it

iYiyo wrote:
yukiyo's
00:10:520 (3,1) - the actual transition has a weird flow, i recommend you to 00:10:854 (1) - ctrl+g this. I was actually wanting that weird flow cuz of the introduction to this new patterning and and the 2nd half of the measure before the kiai
00:17:686 (3) - maybe make this into 2 1/4 sliders? would fit better mainly because 00:17:936 - feels quite empty from the patterns you were building.
00:20:353 (3) - 00:23:019 (3) - ^ That's the point of it ;-; empahsis thorough forced emptiness. Player be like"wait there is a pause" and then have to move to the next note fast though technically it's only a 1/2 gap like the other pattern.
00:26:352 (5) - Again leaving 00:26:602 - empty is quite weird since all is stream, maybe do a continous stream or make 00:26:352 (5) - into 2 1/4 sliders. I guess
00:27:352 (6) - start the NC here instead? ye lol
00:28:685 - 00:30:018 - 00:31:351 - 00:32:685 - 00:34:018 - I highly recommend you to map these notes since they're quite strong, so they're worth it to map i think. Hmm they are not the main melody though and suddenly introducing other elemnts from bg music, I dislike

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Deppyforce

1,989 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-12-24T07:59:27+00:00

dead

Neptunee

137 posts

Joined May 2016

Neptunee 2016-12-31T16:26:28+00:00

Good job i love it :>

Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2017-01-01T21:55:32+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
dead

↓↓↓

nyu - wrote:
reviving after christmas~

Neptunee wrote:
Good job i love it :>

Thanks :3

Deppyforce

1,989 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-03-13T20:45:10+00:00

still dead lmfao

Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2017-03-15T14:20:09+00:00

yes :c

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2018-01-26T22:02:30+00:00

nyu - wrote:
reviving after christmas~

merry christmas

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2018-01-28T18:12:58+00:00

irc stuff with lukas's diff

lukas's

2018-01-29 02:00 [ L u k a s ]: yo wanna mod my gd xd
2018-01-29 02:00 [ L u k a s ]: irc
2018-01-29 02:00 [ L u k a s ]: it's short
2018-01-29 02:00 walaowey: ok link it
2018-01-29 02:00 [ L u k a s ]: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1108568 saradisk - 216 - ASUS]
2018-01-29 02:03 walaowey: 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - 
2018-01-29 02:03 walaowey: this looks like not properly arrange
2018-01-29 02:03 walaowey: lol
2018-01-29 02:03 walaowey: 00:05:188 (4) - 
2018-01-29 02:03 walaowey: and that off stack xD
2018-01-29 02:04 [ L u k a s ]: ok fixed
2018-01-29 02:05 walaowey: 00:05:354 (5,6,7,8,9) - 
2018-01-29 02:05 walaowey: 00:37:351 (5,6,7,8,9) - 
2018-01-29 02:05 walaowey: the spacing is different lol
2018-01-29 02:05 walaowey: isnt they suppose to be same? since they got similar rhythm
2018-01-29 02:07 [ L u k a s ]: o yes
2018-01-29 02:07 [ L u k a s ]: lmao
2018-01-29 02:07 [ L u k a s ]: is that it?
2018-01-29 02:07 walaowey: 00:07:521 (2,3,4,5) - 
2018-01-29 02:08 walaowey: blanket stuff xd
2018-01-29 02:09 walaowey: anyway thats all i guess
2018-01-29 02:09 walaowey: xd
2018-01-29 02:10 walaowey: 00:23:686 (3,4) - 
2018-01-29 02:10 [ L u k a s ]: ok post in forum and you'll get your kudosu
2018-01-29 02:10 walaowey: maybe copy 1/2
2018-01-29 02:10 [ L u k a s ]: =3=
2018-01-29 02:10 walaowey: xd
2018-01-29 02:10 walaowey: and place it at similar position
2018-01-29 02:11 walaowey: yea sure will post in forum
2018-01-29 02:11 walaowey: havent get any kds in a while xD
2018-01-29 02:11 walaowey: ohh this is modv1 okay

pw384

Beatmap Nominator

2,322 posts

Joined January 2012

pw384 2018-01-29T11:21:57+00:00

from my queue

[dpf's Sudden Death]

- 00:24:019 (1,2,3,4) - the movement of cursor is awkward here imo. moving 4 to somewhere around x=309, y=77 works fine for me

- i love the hp and od

[Lukas' Another]

- you need to add hitsounds

- 00:31:517 (2,3,4) - unsnapped objects

- i think you can add new combos more frequently, especially when the change in patterns need to be indicated via new combos (like 00:05:354 (5) - ). precisely, i recommend adding new combos every 2 beats in this duration: 00:04:688 - to 00:27:352 - . the post-kiai part is fine

- 00:04:355 (4,4) - (minor thing) you can stack them properly

- 00:05:354 (5,6,7,8) - keep the spacing consistent

- 00:05:437 (6) - also i suggest stacking it with the tail of 00:04:854 (2) - , like what you've done at 00:37:351 (5,6) -

- 00:06:687 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing is too huge here, and out of place because you didn't employ such spacing before kiai section aside from this one. consider reducing the spacing

- 00:10:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make them a precise square, or the spacing of 00:10:854 (8,9) - is just way too small compared with 00:10:020 (1,8) -

- 00:10:687 (6,7) - ... also, i highly suggest altering them into a 1/4 slider in order to follow the instrument better and consistently with the following 3 another 1/4 sliders

- 00:14:437 (4,5,6,7,8) - try place them apart as they look quite weird while overlapping with 00:14:020 (1,3) -

- kiai seems fine imo

[Yukiyo's Insane]

- 00:26:352 (5) - one more reverse?

- 00:28:852 (1,3) - check the spacing between the 2 objects. you can make it the same with the one of 00:29:102 (2,4) -

[Insane]

- 00:09:354 (2,3,4) - spacing

- 00:34:684 (5,6) - try polishing the shape. change 6 into a parallel straight slider is better for me

- 00:35:351 (1) - put it to x=232, y=300 to make 00:35:351 (1,2) - symmetrical against the line segment connected with 3 and 4. also, 00:35:351 (1,2,3,4) - turn into a precise diamond

[Turtle's Light Insane]

- 00:37:350 (5) - unsnapped object

- 00:05:354 (5) - new combo

- 00:26:685 (1,2,3,4) - claps are way too many for this part. consider removing claps on these sliders' tails

[Mk's Hard]

- this difficulty is good

[Normal]

- why main slider velocity = 0.6? you use 1.5x greenlines throughout nearly the whole difficulty. also it is not recommended for low difficulties to have big slider velocity change (you see, the spacing of 00:04:688 (3,4,1) - is quite confusing for Normal players). so i'd suggest at least you'd better rearrange the spacing of 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - . use 0.9 main velocity and 1.0x greenline if possible (if so, you have to revamp 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - )

- 00:24:685 (1,2) - blanket them better

[Easy]

- 00:27:352 (1,2) - blanket them better

- 00:30:018 (1,2,1) - distance snap is important on low difficulties

[Beginner]

- 00:03:354 (1,2,1) - distance snap again. note: the 1.10x and 1.11x on top-right corner does not mean consistency as you use 0.5x slider velocity for the slider (the distance shown is scale to slider velocity).

- 00:16:686 (1,2) - blanket them better

that's all, good luck on ranking!

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2018-01-29T18:00:57+00:00

pw384 wrote:
from my queue

[Insane]

- 00:09:354 (2,3,4) - spacing ok

- 00:34:684 (5,6) - try polishing the shape. change 6 into a parallel straight slider is better for me ok!

- 00:35:351 (1) - put it to x=232, y=300 to make 00:35:351 (1,2) - symmetrical against the line segment connected with 3 and 4. also, 00:35:351 (1,2,3,4) - turn into a precise diamond fixed but different

[normal]

- why main slider velocity = 0.6? you use 1.5x greenlines throughout nearly the whole difficulty. also it is not recommended for low difficulties to have big slider velocity change (you see, the spacing of 00:04:688 (3,4,1) - is quite confusing for Normal players). so i'd suggest at least you'd better rearrange the spacing of 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - . use 0.9 main velocity and 1.0x greenline if possible (if so, you have to revamp 00:03:354 (1,2,3,4) - ) i think this isnt a huge issue since it isnt really a "big" change when you're playing, if someone else mentions it ill reconsider changing that

- 00:24:685 (1,2) - blanket them better ok!

[Easy]

- 00:27:352 (1,2) - blanket them better ok!

- 00:30:018 (1,2,1) - distance snap is important on low difficulties ok

[Beginner]

- 00:03:354 (1,2,1) - distance snap again. note: the 1.10x and 1.11x on top-right corner does not mean consistency as you use 0.5x slider velocity for the slider (the distance shown is scale to slider velocity). ok uwu

- 00:16:686 (1,2) - blanket them better ok!

that's all, good luck on ranking! thankssss

@lukas i added hitsounds

Enkrypton

217 posts

Joined November 2014

Enkrypton 2018-01-30T03:44:39+00:00

NM from queue. Full mod cause 0:38 seconds lolE.

Beginner
00:11:354 (2,1) - blanket the slider tail into the curve of slider 1, overall would look more neater
00:22:019 (2) - try red anchor 257|344 and first white anchor 197|386 blanket looks slightly better
00:22:019 (2) - either way try to make the sharper curves on 00:23:352 or 00:24:685 to emphasis the tone change in music

Easy
00:11:354 (1) - make it a equilateral triangle with 00:10:020 (2,3) try 110|181

Mk's Hard
00:22:019 (1) - 67|49 parallel a bit off

Lexis Hyper
00:11:354 (1,2,3) - move 3 down a bit so u get a symmetrical design, what you have now looks unorganized
00:25:685 (6) - theres no point in making this red anchor when theres no special change in the music and your previous designs dont have this
00:35:184 (6,1) - stacking circle 1 really ruins the emphasis on the bass kicks, separate them

Insane
00:29:602 (6) - maybe used curved design like u did here: 00:28:018 (4,5) This way u can make this circle 00:29:852 (7) less clustered.

Lukas Another
00:31:101 (6,7,8,1) - last circle looks really uncomfortable in its current position, i mean its an insane so u can prob just place it non overlapped and the spacing will is still good to represent the change in the music there. for example placing 00:31:351 (1) in the middle of slider 2 and the stack would look really nice
00:37:351 (5) - i think NC here would be good cause drum goes super hihg speed.

DeppyForce SD
fun map dude

No mods on diff = cant find anything.

Vovan

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2018-01-30T16:04:20+00:00

Enkrypton wrote:
NM from queue. Full mod cause 0:38 seconds lolE.

Lexis Hyper
00:11:354 (1,2,3) - move 3 down a bit so u get a symmetrical design, what you have now looks unorganized
00:25:685 (6) - theres no point in making this red anchor when theres no special change in the music and your previous designs dont have this
00:35:184 (6,1) - stacking circle 1 really ruins the emphasis on the bass kicks, separate them Imo the music is fast enough to not ruin it

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 355
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 25685
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:216 - ASUS
TitleUnicode:216 - ASUS
Artist:saradisk
ArtistUnicode:saradisk
Creator:nyu -
Version:Lexis' Hyper
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:166 suzuya kantai collection kancolle Deppyforce Yukiyo [_L_u_k_a_s_] lukas Lexis MkGuh
BeatmapID:1109124
BeatmapSetID:521926

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"background.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Lully 2018-01-30T19:10:17+00:00

Enkrypton wrote:
NM from queue. Full mod cause 0:38 seconds lolE.

Beginner
00:11:354 (2,1) - blanket the slider tail into the curve of slider 1, overall would look more neater ok
00:22:019 (2) - try red anchor 257|344 and first white anchor 197|386 blanket looks slightly better ok
00:22:019 (2) - either way try to make the sharper curves on 00:23:352 or 00:24:685 to emphasis the tone change in music ok

Easy
00:11:354 (1) - make it a equilateral triangle with 00:10:020 (2,3) try 110|181 ok

Insane
00:29:602 (6) - maybe used curved design like u did here: 00:28:018 (4,5) This way u can make this circle 00:29:852 (7) less clustered. i just put the circle out of the cluster-zone

No mods on diff = cant find anything.

thanks for the moddddd

updated lexis diff

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2018-01-31T20:03:05+00:00

Enkrypton wrote:
Lukas Another
00:31:101 (6,7,8,1) - last circle looks really uncomfortable in its current position, i mean its an insane so u can prob just place it non overlapped and the spacing will is still good to represent the change in the music there. for example placing 00:31:351 (1) in the middle of slider 2 and the stack would look really nice ok
00:37:351 (5) - i think NC here would be good cause drum goes super hihg speed. I don't know man, I don't think high speed is good enough reason for NC

@nyu can you stack the circle in the first suggestion

Seolv

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Joined March 2016

Seolv 2018-01-31T20:15:07+00:00

pw384 wrote:
from my queue

[dpf's Sudden Death]

- 00:24:019 (1,2,3,4) - the movement of cursor is awkward here imo. moving 4 to somewhere around x=309, y=77 works fine for me

- i love the hp and od

[Lukas' Another]

- you need to add hitsounds

- 00:31:517 (2,3,4) - unsnapped objects

- i think you can add new combos more frequently, especially when the change in patterns need to be indicated via new combos (like 00:05:354 (5) - ). precisely, i recommend adding new combos every 2 beats in this duration: 00:04:688 - to 00:27:352 - . the post-kiai part is fine nah I prefer my nc consistent like this

- 00:04:355 (4,4) - (minor thing) you can stack them properly

- 00:05:354 (5,6,7,8) - keep the spacing consistent

- 00:05:437 (6) - also i suggest stacking it with the tail of 00:04:854 (2) - , like what you've done at 00:37:351 (5,6) - nah I wanna keep 5 stacked

- 00:06:687 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing is too huge here, and out of place because you didn't employ such spacing before kiai section aside from this one. consider reducing the spacing

- 00:10:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make them a precise square, or the spacing of 00:10:854 (8,9) - is just way too small compared with 00:10:020 (1,8) - nope, that would ruin the blankets

- 00:10:687 (6,7) - ... also, i highly suggest altering them into a 1/4 slider in order to follow the instrument better and consistently with the following 3 another 1/4 sliders background music gets different here

- 00:14:437 (4,5,6,7,8) - try place them apart as they look quite weird while overlapping with 00:14:020 (1,3) -

- kiai seems fine imo

thanks for your mod!

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Version:Lukas' Another
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
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Axhina

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Axhina 2018-02-01T17:35:59+00:00

hi there why no modding v2 ><
Insane>

00:06:354 (2) - actually very strong beat make a down motion or smth
00:09:520 (4) - clap sound missing
00:10:854 (4,6,8) - would clap them for build-up
00:19:019 (5) - clap might work here

gl with map ^^

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