Rivals_7 wrote:

[Blue's Insane]

1. I suggest you change this background.
   from what i see, this is pretty much like a poster rather than a wallpaper (well you can see all those japanese moonrunes filling the pic.). Its not so "Aesthetic" so yea.....
   
2. 00:09:852 (9852|4,9852|2,10007|3) - feel like one of these should be stacked. from what i could see from your structural pattern before - 00:09:230 (9230|6,9386|6) - Applied
   
3. 00:20:577 (20577|2,20577|0) - reduce one? there's no guitar there, i believe Applied
   
4. 00:35:810 - you miss the kick here somehow? (dont forget the HS) Oh noes Applied
   
5. 00:38:298 - ^? kinda sad you didnt cover the kick :u Applied
   
6. 00:40:629 (40629|1) - loud snare could deserve two notes or something Keeping this
   
7. 00:53:842 (53842|1,53842|3,53842|5) - could be a quad. considering its about to encounter a new phase of the song Applied
   
8. 01:03:013 (63013|1,63168|1) - lemme assume this stack follows vocal. then i suggest you add note at 6 for - 01:03:479 - too This doesnt follow the vocal though
   
9. 01:04:567 (64567|6,64722|5) - could do the same thing as - 01:04:256 (64256|0,64412|0) - for vocal as well Same as above

Rivals_7 wrote:

[Hard]

00:51:355 - Missing W here applied

[Blue's Insane]

00:51:355 - missing W too applied

[Game Start!]

00:10:785 (10785|0,10785|3,10785|6,11251|5,11251|1,11251|3) - wasnt this the same noise as - 00:11:717 (11717|2,11717|4) - ?
same thing with the structure near the end yup removed one note each

00:25:241 (25241|0,25551|6,25707|5) - i recall that these LN are supposedly to follow the vocal but it doesnt after all

It should be somewhat like this. #1 LN cover "Shii~" #2 "ta~" " #3 "ee~" yup re-arranged, also the patterns following it.

00:39:541 (39541|2) - pretty sure this should be double for the guitar. refer - 00:37:054 (37054|4,37054|1) -
Additionaly before you move the first highlight there ( - 00:39:541 (39541|2) - ) it shouldnt be shielded with the LN above and below it. okay re-arranged and added another note.

00:44:515 (44515|2) - ^? yup added another note.

00:53:375 (53375|6,53375|4,53375|2,53375|3,53375|0,53531|0,53531|1,53531|5,53531|3,53531|6) - ctrl+G? variate from the pattern below applied.

Might tricheck the hitsounds in case i missed some of them.
You may call protastic to rebub if you already comfortable with everything

-BlueFire- wrote:

Rivals_7 wrote:

[Blue's Insane]

1. I suggest you change this background.
   from what i see, this is pretty much like a poster rather than a wallpaper (well you can see all those japanese moonrunes filling the pic.). Its not so "Aesthetic" so yea.....
   
2. 00:09:852 (9852|4,9852|2,10007|3) - feel like one of these should be stacked. from what i could see from your structural pattern before - 00:09:230 (9230|6,9386|6) - Applied
   
3. 00:20:577 (20577|2,20577|0) - reduce one? there's no guitar there, i believe Applied
   
4. 00:35:810 - you miss the kick here somehow? (dont forget the HS) Oh noes Applied
   
5. 00:38:298 - ^? kinda sad you didnt cover the kick :u Applied
   
6. 00:40:629 (40629|1) - loud snare could deserve two notes or something Keeping this
   
7. 00:53:842 (53842|1,53842|3,53842|5) - could be a quad. considering its about to encounter a new phase of the song Applied
   
8. 01:03:013 (63013|1,63168|1) - lemme assume this stack follows vocal. then i suggest you add note at 6 for - 01:03:479 - too This doesnt follow the vocal though
   
9. 01:04:567 (64567|6,64722|5) - could do the same thing as - 01:04:256 (64256|0,64412|0) - for vocal as well Same as above

UPDATE: http://puu.sh/v6qKv/3e5c8ece48.osu

Protastic101 wrote:

In Game Start, might be nice to make 00:20:266 (20266|5,20266|6,20344|3,20344|4,20422|0,20422|1,20422|2) - more symmetrical like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7748725 applied

00:50:733 (50733|6,50733|0) - double hs. tbh though, I can't really hear a 1/2 kick there so I'd recommend just removing the whistle from that spot completely in all the diffs. applied
00:51:044 (51044|6) - ^ applied. removed the whistle to be consistent across all diffs

00:52:132 - oh my god, 5 note chords, save me (no suggestion here, just pointing out my natural hate of large chords) wew lad


Blue's thing
00:10:007 (10007|2) - consider moving to 5 to avoid an LN + 1/2 ministack on the same hand

Protastic101 wrote:

In Game Start, might be nice to make 00:20:266 (20266|5,20266|6,20344|3,20344|4,20422|0,20422|1,20422|2) - more symmetrical like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7748725

00:50:733 (50733|6,50733|0) - double hs. tbh though, I can't really hear a 1/2 kick there so I'd recommend just removing the whistle from that spot completely in all the diffs.
00:51:044 (51044|6) - ^

00:52:132 - oh my god, 5 note chords, save me (no suggestion here, just pointing out my natural hate of large chords)


Blue's thing
00:10:007 (10007|2) - consider moving to 5 to avoid an LN + 1/2 ministack on the same hand
o k

-BlueFire- wrote:

Protastic101 wrote:

In Game Start, might be nice to make 00:20:266 (20266|5,20266|6,20344|3,20344|4,20422|0,20422|1,20422|2) - more symmetrical like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7748725

00:50:733 (50733|6,50733|0) - double hs. tbh though, I can't really hear a 1/2 kick there so I'd recommend just removing the whistle from that spot completely in all the diffs.
00:51:044 (51044|6) - ^

00:52:132 - oh my god, 5 note chords, save me (no suggestion here, just pointing out my natural hate of large chords)


Blue's thing
00:10:007 (10007|2) - consider moving to 5 to avoid an LN + 1/2 ministack on the same hand
o k

>>>>>>> http://puu.sh/vbbIZ/8b0bd02ddd.osu

Rivals_7 wrote:

Nominated!

-Nitrous wrote:

Congrats on your first!

Wonki wrote:

Some question about 'NEW GAME!' diff

00:34:101 - I think creator missed drum sound



check this

Comare to normal and hard difficulty, 'NEW GAME!' also need note.

Wonki wrote:

Some question about 'NEW GAME!' diff

00:34:101 - I think creator missed drum sound



check this

Comare to normal and hard difficulty, 'NEW GAME!' also need note.

Protastic101 wrote:

*doot*

Rivals_7 wrote:

Re-nominated!

Protastic101 wrote:

*doot*

Niks wrote:

yo come back