Rivals_7 wrote:

how to ruin a mapper spirit in one step. i wiil push through!!!1!11oneone

[Blue's Insane]




will continue with the last diff tomorrow
And dont forget to change tags like Doormat has mentioned

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Easy]

1. turn off widescreen for perfection *heh* nais
   
2. might tune down the OD to 6,5 since this diff is particularly introduce some LNs that quite tricky to release the LNs accompany a one note so that players would know when they would release it, as suggested by Protastic, but anyways I changed it.
   
3. 00:21:510 (21510|1) - feel that this could be on 7 since the cymbal emphasis is somewhat quite big so larger jump movement from col 4( - 00:21:355 (21355|3) - ) to 7 might be accurate enough to indicate it. yup applied.
   
4. 00:22:909 (22909|3) - isnt this cymbal like everything else in this diff? why just a note with W? double will fit better here
   you may remove the SB sound sample at this timing, so it wont doubled yup applied.
   
5. 00:23:220 (23220|4) - to - 00:29:437 (29437|4) - lack of mid col usage. try to move 1 or 2 note of them yup applied.
   
6. 00:53:842 (53842|3) - tfw emphasize impact but only one note added one more note
   
7. 01:15:137 (75137|3) - 110% sure this should be same with - 00:03:013 (3013|4,3013|2) - yup applied.

[Normal]

1. Widescreen... but meh... lol lol i'll just untick widescreen support for all diffs xd
   
2. this BG quality hurts lol, not talking the resolution, but the actual quality is kinda blurry. Its looks like a screenshot yup will change that
   
3. 00:15:448 (15448|2,15759|2,16070|1,16380|1) - 00:23:531 (23531|1,23842|1,24152|0,24463|0,24774|1,25085|1) - 00:25:396 (25396|5,25707|5,26018|6,26329|6,26639|5,26950|5,27261|4,27572|4) -
   Talking about hand balance stuff. think i can agree with the #1 but #2 and #3 are lul
   think you can rearrange some stuff here. Normal tier players, especially whose new on 7K might find a hard time doing this. yup re-arranged.
   
   its not obligatory anyways, mainly for intuitive purposes.
   
4. 00:47:779 (47779|0,47779|6) - there's like 7 seconds without any note in the middle lol. but it looks like you doing for symmetrical purposes so w/e yup symmetry issues smh
   
5. 01:17:158 (77158|4) - you didnt double the guitar? yeah i forgot lol. added one note
   
6. 01:17:624 (77624|2,77935|1) - should be the same as - 00:05:500 (5500|2,5500|4,5810|3,5810|1) - . talk about consistency stuff ;w; fixed
   
7. 01:20:422 (80422|5,80422|2) - and - 00:08:298 (8298|5) - should be a consistent in layering as well fixed also ;w;

[Hard]

1. dat hot Shinoda tbh i against bikini stuff i kno rite but hifumi is fine too ;;
   
2. 00:07:987 (7987|6,7987|0) - suuuper sure this should be triple or some kind. was thinking that since I already had the cymbal hitsound and the whistle I think it didn't have to be a triple, but anyways I added a note because of the cymbal emphasis.
   
3. 00:10:785 - where's the drum emphasis ?:D? this makes "Hard" looks easier than "Normal".
   same thing applied for the same structure near the end yup added a note at 4, also at the end.
   
4. 00:20:422 (20422|4,20422|0,20422|1) - remove one. no cymbal emphasis here and its pretty much like the other kicks so..... layering consistency okay
   
5. 00:22:909 (22909|3,22909|1) - now this shall be triple yup applied
   
6. 00:28:038 (28038|3,28349|3,28971|3,29282|3,29748|3,30059|3,30526|3,31147|3,31458|3) - honestly this is the only part which i found not comfortable when testplaying. considering that this anchors arent particularly pitch-wise, think you should rearrange this part to be less anchory. yup re-arranged, but idk if it would fit into your criteria lol
   
7. 00:40:318 (40318|4,40318|3,40318|6) - 00:43:893 (43893|0,43893|1,43893|4) - 00:45:292 (45292|6,45292|1,45292|2) - i'm sure this wasnt supposed to be triple, wouldnt it?. something sounds similar to - 00:46:380 (46380|2,46380|6) - for 00:40:318 (40318|4,40318|3,40318|6), I think it would be a triple since there is a cymbal, for emphasis and consistency purposes since I applied your suggestions on the lower diff. But for the last two I removed one note.
   
8. 00:53:842 (53842|4,53842|2) - should be treated the same as the other triples since they particularly contains the same noises yup added one note
   
9. 01:14:204 (74204|5) - this actually has loud drum thing. add on 7? okay applied

[Blue's Insane]

1. I suggest you change this background.
   from what i see, this is pretty much like a poster rather than a wallpaper (well you can see all those japanese moonrunes filling the pic.). Its not so "Aesthetic" so yea.....
   
2. 00:09:852 (9852|4,9852|2,10007|3) - feel like one of these should be stacked. from what i could see from your structural pattern before - 00:09:230 (9230|6,9386|6) -
   
3. 00:20:577 (20577|2,20577|0) - reduce one? there's no guitar there, i believe
   
4. 00:35:810 - you miss the kick here somehow? (dont forget the HS)
   
5. 00:38:298 - ^? kinda sad you didnt cover the kick :u
   
6. 00:40:629 (40629|1) - loud snare could deserve two notes or something
   
7. 00:53:842 (53842|1,53842|3,53842|5) - could be a quad. considering its about to encounter a new phase of the song
   
8. 01:03:013 (63013|1,63168|1) - lemme assume this stack follows vocal. then i suggest you add note at 6 for - 01:03:479 - too
   
9. 01:04:567 (64567|6,64722|5) - could do the same thing as - 01:04:256 (64256|0,64412|0) - for vocal as well

Rivals_7 wrote:

[Blue's Insane]

1. I suggest you change this background.
   from what i see, this is pretty much like a poster rather than a wallpaper (well you can see all those japanese moonrunes filling the pic.). Its not so "Aesthetic" so yea.....
   
2. 00:09:852 (9852|4,9852|2,10007|3) - feel like one of these should be stacked. from what i could see from your structural pattern before - 00:09:230 (9230|6,9386|6) - Applied
   
3. 00:20:577 (20577|2,20577|0) - reduce one? there's no guitar there, i believe Applied
   
4. 00:35:810 - you miss the kick here somehow? (dont forget the HS) Oh noes Applied
   
5. 00:38:298 - ^? kinda sad you didnt cover the kick :u Applied
   
6. 00:40:629 (40629|1) - loud snare could deserve two notes or something Keeping this
   
7. 00:53:842 (53842|1,53842|3,53842|5) - could be a quad. considering its about to encounter a new phase of the song Applied
   
8. 01:03:013 (63013|1,63168|1) - lemme assume this stack follows vocal. then i suggest you add note at 6 for - 01:03:479 - too This doesnt follow the vocal though
   
9. 01:04:567 (64567|6,64722|5) - could do the same thing as - 01:04:256 (64256|0,64412|0) - for vocal as well Same as above

Rivals_7 wrote:

[Hard]

00:51:355 - Missing W here applied

[Blue's Insane]

00:51:355 - missing W too applied

[Game Start!]

00:10:785 (10785|0,10785|3,10785|6,11251|5,11251|1,11251|3) - wasnt this the same noise as - 00:11:717 (11717|2,11717|4) - ?
same thing with the structure near the end yup removed one note each

00:25:241 (25241|0,25551|6,25707|5) - i recall that these LN are supposedly to follow the vocal but it doesnt after all

It should be somewhat like this. #1 LN cover "Shii~" #2 "ta~" " #3 "ee~" yup re-arranged, also the patterns following it.

00:39:541 (39541|2) - pretty sure this should be double for the guitar. refer - 00:37:054 (37054|4,37054|1) -
Additionaly before you move the first highlight there ( - 00:39:541 (39541|2) - ) it shouldnt be shielded with the LN above and below it. okay re-arranged and added another note.

00:44:515 (44515|2) - ^? yup added another note.

00:53:375 (53375|6,53375|4,53375|2,53375|3,53375|0,53531|0,53531|1,53531|5,53531|3,53531|6) - ctrl+G? variate from the pattern below applied.

Might tricheck the hitsounds in case i missed some of them.
You may call protastic to rebub if you already comfortable with everything

-BlueFire- wrote:

Rivals_7 wrote:

[Blue's Insane]

1. I suggest you change this background.
   from what i see, this is pretty much like a poster rather than a wallpaper (well you can see all those japanese moonrunes filling the pic.). Its not so "Aesthetic" so yea.....
   
2. 00:09:852 (9852|4,9852|2,10007|3) - feel like one of these should be stacked. from what i could see from your structural pattern before - 00:09:230 (9230|6,9386|6) - Applied
   
3. 00:20:577 (20577|2,20577|0) - reduce one? there's no guitar there, i believe Applied
   
4. 00:35:810 - you miss the kick here somehow? (dont forget the HS) Oh noes Applied
   
5. 00:38:298 - ^? kinda sad you didnt cover the kick :u Applied
   
6. 00:40:629 (40629|1) - loud snare could deserve two notes or something Keeping this
   
7. 00:53:842 (53842|1,53842|3,53842|5) - could be a quad. considering its about to encounter a new phase of the song Applied
   
8. 01:03:013 (63013|1,63168|1) - lemme assume this stack follows vocal. then i suggest you add note at 6 for - 01:03:479 - too This doesnt follow the vocal though
   
9. 01:04:567 (64567|6,64722|5) - could do the same thing as - 01:04:256 (64256|0,64412|0) - for vocal as well Same as above

UPDATE: http://puu.sh/v6qKv/3e5c8ece48.osu

Protastic101 wrote:

In Game Start, might be nice to make 00:20:266 (20266|5,20266|6,20344|3,20344|4,20422|0,20422|1,20422|2) - more symmetrical like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7748725 applied

00:50:733 (50733|6,50733|0) - double hs. tbh though, I can't really hear a 1/2 kick there so I'd recommend just removing the whistle from that spot completely in all the diffs. applied
00:51:044 (51044|6) - ^ applied. removed the whistle to be consistent across all diffs

00:52:132 - oh my god, 5 note chords, save me (no suggestion here, just pointing out my natural hate of large chords) wew lad


Blue's thing
00:10:007 (10007|2) - consider moving to 5 to avoid an LN + 1/2 ministack on the same hand

Protastic101 wrote:

In Game Start, might be nice to make 00:20:266 (20266|5,20266|6,20344|3,20344|4,20422|0,20422|1,20422|2) - more symmetrical like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7748725

00:50:733 (50733|6,50733|0) - double hs. tbh though, I can't really hear a 1/2 kick there so I'd recommend just removing the whistle from that spot completely in all the diffs.
00:51:044 (51044|6) - ^

00:52:132 - oh my god, 5 note chords, save me (no suggestion here, just pointing out my natural hate of large chords)


Blue's thing
00:10:007 (10007|2) - consider moving to 5 to avoid an LN + 1/2 ministack on the same hand
o k

-BlueFire- wrote:

Protastic101 wrote:

In Game Start, might be nice to make 00:20:266 (20266|5,20266|6,20344|3,20344|4,20422|0,20422|1,20422|2) - more symmetrical like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7748725

00:50:733 (50733|6,50733|0) - double hs. tbh though, I can't really hear a 1/2 kick there so I'd recommend just removing the whistle from that spot completely in all the diffs.
00:51:044 (51044|6) - ^

00:52:132 - oh my god, 5 note chords, save me (no suggestion here, just pointing out my natural hate of large chords)


Blue's thing
00:10:007 (10007|2) - consider moving to 5 to avoid an LN + 1/2 ministack on the same hand
o k

>>>>>>> http://puu.sh/vbbIZ/8b0bd02ddd.osu

Rivals_7 wrote:

Nominated!

-Nitrous wrote:

Congrats on your first!

Wonki wrote:

Some question about 'NEW GAME!' diff

00:34:101 - I think creator missed drum sound



check this

Comare to normal and hard difficulty, 'NEW GAME!' also need note.

Wonki wrote:

Some question about 'NEW GAME!' diff

00:34:101 - I think creator missed drum sound



check this

Comare to normal and hard difficulty, 'NEW GAME!' also need note.

Protastic101 wrote:

*doot*

Rivals_7 wrote:

Re-nominated!

Protastic101 wrote:

*doot*

Niks wrote:

yo come back