[All difficulties]
01:34:997 (1) - Should fade this spinner out. It's really loud.
[Normal]
Apply this to the first hitobject in your .osu. This will snap the spinner to the correct beat.
In general it felt like you were relying on the offbeats waaay too much on this difficulty.
[Shiki's Hard]
00:02:012 (1,2,3,4) - strange that you have such wider spacing compared to the rest of the map during a minutely slower part. If anything, smaller spacing -> larger spacing would make more sense with a BPM increase.
00:38:414 (1,3) - This overlap is pretty ugly. D:
00:51:706 (4,5,6) - The larger spacing here didn't feel very smooth
00:57:022 (2) - Extend to 00:57:782 - and add a finish.
The way you use your sliders combined with your hitsounding leaves big gaping holes where I'm expecting a custom clap or a finish and all I get is the hiss of the slider slide. :<
[Insane]
00:27:971 (11,2,3) - The overlap here is kinda eh especially considering you have fairly large spacing.
And since I'm here, 00:26:452 (6,11) - are aligned fairly poorly.
01:18:478 (5) - This rhythm was kind of unexpected. Might play better as a stack instead of a slider.
In general, the design of the patterns felt a little poor. The high spacing and fast slider speed aren't helping for sure, but if you try to take a little more care in how you present your map it will up the quality by ten-fold.
01:34:997 (1) - Should fade this spinner out. It's really loud.
[Normal]
Apply this to the first hitobject in your .osu. This will snap the spinner to the correct beat.
256,192,2012,12,8,423700:34:617 (2) - Sticking to the offbeats during the kiai plays incredibly awkwardly. I really recommend you try a different rhythm here. You have some really good choices in the music that I really don't have to suggest anything, I hope.
In general it felt like you were relying on the offbeats waaay too much on this difficulty.
[Shiki's Hard]
00:02:012 (1,2,3,4) - strange that you have such wider spacing compared to the rest of the map during a minutely slower part. If anything, smaller spacing -> larger spacing would make more sense with a BPM increase.
00:38:414 (1,3) - This overlap is pretty ugly. D:
00:51:706 (4,5,6) - The larger spacing here didn't feel very smooth
00:57:022 (2) - Extend to 00:57:782 - and add a finish.
The way you use your sliders combined with your hitsounding leaves big gaping holes where I'm expecting a custom clap or a finish and all I get is the hiss of the slider slide. :<
[Insane]
00:27:971 (11,2,3) - The overlap here is kinda eh especially considering you have fairly large spacing.
And since I'm here, 00:26:452 (6,11) - are aligned fairly poorly.
01:18:478 (5) - This rhythm was kind of unexpected. Might play better as a stack instead of a slider.
In general, the design of the patterns felt a little poor. The high spacing and fast slider speed aren't helping for sure, but if you try to take a little more care in how you present your map it will up the quality by ten-fold.