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Chen Mei Wen - Wo De Wei Lai Shi (TV Size)

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Shiki

Kytoxid wrote:

[Shiki's Hard]

I'd recommend following Insane's example for the opening if you map it; use plenty of sliders to make the timing windows a bit more lenient. ok (:

01:16:769 (3) - Partially covered by the hitburst of 7, so it doesn't look too good. Maybe you can flip it to the other side? done
01:27:022 (4) - How about continuing the previous pattern? End this on the white tick so that there's a beat there, and add a note where the current endpoint is. ok

A bunch of unused timing sections you could delete if you felt like it, or maybe they had some purpose but weren't configured properly:
00:58:541 -
01:04:712 -
01:26:832 - deleted
Thanks~
Kytoxid
A few more suggestions, lemme know what you think of them and then we'll go from there.

[Normal]

00:34:617 (2) - These are a bit..pointy. Make them rounder?
00:43:731 (5) - Move this a bit away from the end of 3?
01:33:478 (4,5,6,7) - These offbeats might be a bit hard for the easiest diff.

[Hard]

00:02:012 (1) - Starts too quiet, make this a bit louder?

Biggest thing about the diff is that the jump from Normal-Hard is very harsh. Gotta get a second opinion on that...

[Insane]

Same as Hard, start it a bit louder.

Wow those sliders are fast. But eh. This is alright too.

EDIT: Bubbled after consultation with a few other MATs that Normal-Hard gap is a bit large, but acceptable.
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zsr123
thank you :)
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Garven
[All difficulties]
01:34:997 (1) - Should fade this spinner out. It's really loud.

[Normal]
Apply this to the first hitobject in your .osu. This will snap the spinner to the correct beat.
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00:34:617 (2) - Sticking to the offbeats during the kiai plays incredibly awkwardly. I really recommend you try a different rhythm here. You have some really good choices in the music that I really don't have to suggest anything, I hope.
In general it felt like you were relying on the offbeats waaay too much on this difficulty.

[Shiki's Hard]
00:02:012 (1,2,3,4) - strange that you have such wider spacing compared to the rest of the map during a minutely slower part. If anything, smaller spacing -> larger spacing would make more sense with a BPM increase.
00:38:414 (1,3) - This overlap is pretty ugly. D:
00:51:706 (4,5,6) - The larger spacing here didn't feel very smooth
00:57:022 (2) - Extend to 00:57:782 - and add a finish.
The way you use your sliders combined with your hitsounding leaves big gaping holes where I'm expecting a custom clap or a finish and all I get is the hiss of the slider slide. :<

[Insane]
00:27:971 (11,2,3) - The overlap here is kinda eh especially considering you have fairly large spacing.
And since I'm here, 00:26:452 (6,11) - are aligned fairly poorly.
01:18:478 (5) - This rhythm was kind of unexpected. Might play better as a stack instead of a slider.
In general, the design of the patterns felt a little poor. The high spacing and fast slider speed aren't helping for sure, but if you try to take a little more care in how you present your map it will up the quality by ten-fold.
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zsr123

Garven wrote:

[All difficulties]
01:34:997 (1) - Should fade this spinner out. It's really loud.done

[Normal]
Apply this to the first hitobject in your .osu. This will snap the spinner to the correct beat.fixed
256,192,2012,12,8,4237
00:34:617 (2) - Sticking to the offbeats during the kiai plays incredibly awkwardly. I really recommend you try a different rhythm here. You have some really good choices in the music that I really don't have to suggest anything, I hope.should be better now I guess
In general it felt like you were relying on the offbeats waaay too much on this difficulty.


[Insane]
00:27:971 (11,2,3) - The overlap here is kinda eh especially considering you have fairly large spacing.
And since I'm here, 00:26:452 (6,11) - are aligned fairly poorly.should be better now I guess
01:18:478 (5) - This rhythm was kind of unexpected. Might play better as a stack instead of a slider.done
In general, the design of the patterns felt a little poor. The high spacing and fast slider speed aren't helping for sure, but if you try to take a little more care in how you present your map it will up the quality by ten-fold.
thanks for modding. :)
Shiki

Garven wrote:

[Shiki's Hard]
00:02:012 (1,2,3,4) - strange that you have such wider spacing compared to the rest of the map during a minutely slower part. If anything, smaller spacing -> larger spacing would make more sense with a BPM increase. Fixed spacing
00:38:414 (1,3) - This overlap is pretty ugly. D: I think now is better.
00:51:706 (4,5,6) - The larger spacing here didn't feel very smooth Done
00:57:022 (2) - Extend to 00:57:782 - and add a finish. OK
The way you use your sliders combined with your hitsounding leaves big gaping holes where I'm expecting a custom clap or a finish and all I get is the hiss of the slider slide. :<
Garven
I'm getting -14 ms on offset. Apply that (or if you can find a better one) to both offsets on all difficulties and resnap.
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zsr123

Garven wrote:

I'm getting -14 ms on offset. Apply that (or if you can find a better one) to both offsets on all difficulties and resnap.
fixed, thanks :)
Garven
Booooop.
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zsr123
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Alace
<Taiko>
01:04:413 and 01:04:793 useless timing lines

<Normal>
00:04:888 (1) - add a new combo

<Insane>
00:55:347 00:58:432 01:21:312 01:22:356 useless timing lines

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我們等等看有沒有高品質點的

http://puu.sh/4OfU vid offset應該是1850+- 一些 要記得fullsub歐
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zsr123

Alace wrote:

<Taiko>
01:04:413 and 01:04:793 useless timing lines deleted

<Normal>
00:04:888 (1) - add a new combo done

<Insane>
00:55:347 00:58:432 01:21:312 01:22:356 useless timing lines deleted

有鄉民表示vid畫質爛到掉渣
我們等等看有沒有高品質點的

http://puu.sh/4OfU vid offset應該是1850+- 一些 要記得fullsub歐 1850有点后了 1660感觉更好
thanks :)
Alace
Ok after those tiny fixing, we have better vid now
Plz reDL the mapset if you guys have it already
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zsr123
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