[General]
I don't know if it's a good idea to map the 130 BPM section; by the time you get used to it, it's already changed. Oh well.
[Normal]
00:15:250 (4) - Make this not partially cover the next 1?
Good points: A gentle upward difficulty slope from start to finish, plays very smoothly and well.
Points of consideration: What I said abovel, and other little messy things occur throughout. Another common one is that hitbursts will frequently cover or partially cover notes that come after, because the notes bend back on themselves, such as01:30:820 (4,5,6,1,2,3). Also doesn't look as good.
[Shiki's Hard]
I'd recommend following Insane's example for the opening if you map it; use plenty of sliders to make the timing windows a bit more lenient.
01:16:769 (3) - Partially covered by the hitburst of 7, so it doesn't look too good. Maybe you can flip it to the other side?
01:27:022 (4) - How about continuing the previous pattern? End this on the white tick so that there's a beat there, and add a note where the current endpoint is.
A bunch of unused timing sections you could delete if you felt like it, or maybe they had some purpose but weren't configured properly:
00:58:541 -
01:04:712 -
01:26:832 -
[Insane]
00:54:933 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I didn't think this stream fit very well.
01:23:794 (7) - This slider repeat is covered for a bit long, it doesn't appear until the note almost starts. With such fast sliders, I'd avoid this.
Pretty good map.
I don't know if it's a good idea to map the 130 BPM section; by the time you get used to it, it's already changed. Oh well.
[Normal]
00:15:250 (4) - Make this not partially cover the next 1?
Good points: A gentle upward difficulty slope from start to finish, plays very smoothly and well.
Points of consideration: What I said abovel, and other little messy things occur throughout. Another common one is that hitbursts will frequently cover or partially cover notes that come after, because the notes bend back on themselves, such as01:30:820 (4,5,6,1,2,3). Also doesn't look as good.
[Shiki's Hard]
I'd recommend following Insane's example for the opening if you map it; use plenty of sliders to make the timing windows a bit more lenient.
01:16:769 (3) - Partially covered by the hitburst of 7, so it doesn't look too good. Maybe you can flip it to the other side?
01:27:022 (4) - How about continuing the previous pattern? End this on the white tick so that there's a beat there, and add a note where the current endpoint is.
A bunch of unused timing sections you could delete if you felt like it, or maybe they had some purpose but weren't configured properly:
00:58:541 -
01:04:712 -
01:26:832 -
[Insane]
00:54:933 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I didn't think this stream fit very well.
01:23:794 (7) - This slider repeat is covered for a bit long, it doesn't appear until the note almost starts. With such fast sliders, I'd avoid this.
Pretty good map.