1. Dancehall Rave!! (3.95 stars, 236 notes)
2. Hardcore Rave!!! (4.99 stars, 504 notes)
3. Soft Rave! (1.99 stars, 163 notes)
4. SteRRuM's Rave!!! (4.99 stars, 464 notes)

marshall_racer wrote:

mod ... because i'm bored xD

Soft Rave! :
01:22:526 (2,1) - may seem confusing i think its fine

Dancehall Rave!! :
nothing to mention except the inheriting points, not sure if they're supposed to be like they are now (e.g. 02:24:241 : shouldn't this start a bit later?), also, i don't like the short brake from 02:02:383 to 02:03:669, a spinner would be good there, but that's just my opinion i mostly always start some of my timing points early, and i dont want a spinner in a tricky spot like that in this diff

Hardcore Rave!!! :
same about the inheriting points as above same as above

SteRRuM's Rave!!! :
nice

jericho2442 wrote:

marshall_racer wrote:

mod ... because i'm bored xD

Soft Rave! :
01:22:526 (2,1) - may seem confusing i think its fine

Dancehall Rave!! :
nothing to mention except the inheriting points, not sure if they're supposed to be like they are now (e.g. 02:24:241 : shouldn't this start a bit later?), also, i don't like the short brake from 02:02:383 to 02:03:669, a spinner would be good there, but that's just my opinion i mostly always start some of my timing points early, and i dont want a spinner in a tricky spot like that in this diff

Hardcore Rave!!! :
same about the inheriting points as above same as above

SteRRuM's Rave!!! :
nice

thanks anyway o/

-Lennox- wrote:

mod because i'm a fine dude wuuuh!

[Storyboard]

Just awesome

[General]

Why is "russian" in tags oô? tru its not needed

[Soft Rave]

01:08:812 - hmm why isn't here a note? Feels a bit odd to play tru added
01:22:526 (2,1) - That isn't fine imo >.< Its really confusing for new players kk since 2 ppl agree ive changed it
01:56:812 (1,1) - The first slider looks a bit bad how it ends i suggest something like this nope i did this how i wanted it
02:03:669 - Same as above sure
02:31:098 - ^ due to the rhythm im going for here noty

[Dancehall Rave]

00:25:955 (1,1,2,3) - I think to reach the notes after the spinner is really hard for newbies so ehh change maybe? this map aint really for newbies soo noty
00:41:812 (1,1,1,1) - hmpf why the 1,1,1,1 combo? It isn't neccesary at all imo. I suggest 2,2 combo it is totally necessary, one combo per vocal line, by making it (2,2) at this point it would completely destroy the combo pattern by trying to use 1 combo per 2 vocal lines
02:03:669 - Same like [Soft Rave] done due to follow vocal line and it feels bad at this point to use a note away from the vocal line

[Hardcore Rave]

02:01:955 (1) - Put them into the center? trutru it works better

[SteRRuM's Rave]

02:06:883 (6,7,8) - this?tru its less blind

James2250 wrote:

-End the final kiai at the same place on every difficulty? fixed

Soft Rave!:
01:14:384 (2) - new combo to follow your pattern? fixed
02:09:241 (2) - ^ fixed

Anyway yeah no problems, seeing as you want a few more mods will hold off on bubbling
Have one of my rare kudosu stars

1. umm..unify the stack Leniency?

1. 00:36:699(1)-Maybe make it like this?It more easy to read for newbie.
   suggestion

   
2. 02:30:883(x)-Unused green line..Remove it
3. 02:56:812(x)-I suggest put a spinner here to instead of slider..

1. 00:25:098(1.2.3.4)-Don't stack here?I feel ugly during gameplay..
2. 01:06:133(x)-Remove this pair of unused green line.
3. 02:02:169(x)-Remove this unnecessary break!No need to adding break there when the last part has heavier HP rape.
4. 02:42:955(2.3.4.5)-I against this pattern in Normal(!?Hard maybe?but overall seem normal.) But fine :/

1. AR-1 maybe?
2. 00:25:955(9)-Stack with the previous note?Feel weird when I play it.
3. 01:06:241(3~)-If I were you..I maight reduce the spacing of this..
4. 01:22:955(1)-IMO..This tripet is not fit the music too much :/maybe change it to 1/2 notes?
5. 02:16:955(4)-a new combo here would be nice :3
6. 02:0:241(x)-This spinner is too shout..I know it is rankable but That's feel bad during gameplay.
7. 03:11:812(11)-This default clap is quite weird for me.
8. 03:11:812(11)-also..Use a note to instead of slider!!Make the same end point with other ebd point.

1. 00:33:883(x)-I prefer add a note here.Well...depend on you.
2. 01:08:062(x)-Quite afraid of this spinner.
3. 02:56:812(7.1)-Swap New combo?

kanpakyin wrote:

Get some time to mod this

[General]

1. umm..unify the stack Leniency?

its different on purpose

[Soft Rave!]

1. 00:36:699(1)-Maybe make it like this?It more easy to read for newbie. ...its not hard
2. 02:30:883(x)-Unused green line..Remove it trutru
3. 02:56:812(x)-I suggest put a spinner here to instead of slider..no that would mean i would have to start notes too fast after the spiiner, thus creating a pattern i deem abit too tricky for this map

[Dancehall Rave!!]

1. 00:25:098(1.2.3.4)-Don't stack here?I feel ugly during gameplay.. sorry dont really agree
2. 01:06:133(x)-Remove this pair of unused green line. trutru
3. 02:02:169(x)-Remove this unnecessary break!No need to adding break there when the last part has heavier HP rape. sure
4. 02:42:955(2.3.4.5)-I against this pattern in Normal(!?Hard maybe?but overall seem normal.) But fine :/
   made abit more simple

[Hardcore Rave!!!]

1. AR-1 maybe? no chance at all
2. 00:25:955(9)-Stack with the previous note?Feel weird when I play it.nah would break the effect im after
3. 01:06:241(3~)-If I were you..I maight reduce the spacing of this.. its a typical jeristream
4. 01:22:955(1)-IMO..This tripet is not fit the music too much :/maybe change it to 1/2 notes? no that would break the flow, read the overall play, at this point i increase the power of the SB thus at the same time i increase the power of the map, flows great to me so noty
5. 02:16:955(4)-a new combo here would be nice :3 tru
6. 02:0:241(x)-This spinner is too shout..I know it is rankable but That's feel bad during gameplay. tru i guess, changed to something else
7. 03:11:812(11)-This default clap is quite weird for me. tru
8. 03:11:812(11)-also..Use a note to instead of slider!!Make the same end point with other ebd point.no

[SteRRuM's Rave!!!]

1. 00:33:883(x)-I prefer add a note here.Well...depend on you. no tis following the vocal so a note here would not suit
2. 01:08:062(x)-Quite afraid of this spinner. its fine tbh
3. 02:56:812(7.1)-Swap New combo?tru

You did a Good Job here o/

jericho2442 wrote:

dudes its almost been a month....thats not super fast you kno