1. Easy (1.58 stars, 69 notes)
2. Hard (4.73 stars, 193 notes)
3. Kong's Insane (5 stars, 262 notes)
4. Normal (3.84 stars, 114 notes)

1. Source is incorrect. See FireballFlame's post.
2. Having a mix of standard diff names and custom ones is really weird. It makes the mapset inconsistent. I can't make sense out of Ai and Hana, so I'd suggest you used standard diff names.
3. Add "opening" in tags ?
4. The soft finish sounds really loud imo. Try making one that is a bit softer.

1. 00:11:463 (5) - The lack of clap on the first beat of the slider leaves a feeling that something's missing.
2. 00:18:281 (5) - The second repeat is hidden by the hitburst from (4). I don't think new players would expect the slider to repeat twice, so I think you should change the slider's placement.
3. 00:20:100 (6) - To keep following the same clap pattern, there shouldn't be anything here.
4. 00:30:100 (1) - Why did you stop with the claps from this slider ?
5. 01:03:281 (1,2,3) - This overlap looks rather bad ingame because it doesn't overlap properly - you should change the position of (2) and (3).
6. 01:08:281 (3) - Add a clap on the last beat ?

1. There are really way too many 1/2 for a Normal. And some come in confusing or long patterns.
2. 00:21:918 (1,2) - This for example: the second repeats comes a bit out of nowhere (despite matching the song) and can be surprising... I suggest you remove one repeat out of each slider.
3. 00:26:463 (3) - Same.
4. 00:38:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern is really too hard. First the repeat sliders with two repeats, then the long streak of 1/2 with sharp angles...
5. 00:48:281 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - confusing spacing: (3,1) are spaced normally, but then the spacing is halved, which makes the 1/2 hard to read.
6. 00:55:554 (1,3) - The added 1/2 due to the repeat don't really make sense to the music... Why don't you make them 1/1 sliders ? It would sound and play a lot better imo
7. 00:59:190 (1,2,3,4) - Same comments about the added 1/2
8. 01:06:236 (5,6) - Extemely confusing spacing and spacing issue. The placement looks like (5) has 3 repeats, but it only has 2, and it makes the spacing a jump that's extremely confusing to play.

1. Really, way too many added beats, 1/2 or 1/4s.

1. Same...

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. Source is incorrect. See FireballFlame's post.
2. Having a mix of standard diff names and custom ones is really weird. It makes the mapset inconsistent. I can't make sense out of Ai and Hana, so I'd suggest you used standard diff names.
3. Add "opening" in tags ?
4. The soft finish sounds really loud imo. Try making one that is a bit softer.

Easy

1. 00:11:463 (5) - The lack of clap on the first beat of the slider leaves a feeling that something's missing.
2. 00:18:281 (5) - The second repeat is hidden by the hitburst from (4). I don't think new players would expect the slider to repeat twice, so I think you should change the slider's placement.
3. 00:20:100 (6) - To keep following the same clap pattern, there shouldn't be anything here.
4. 00:30:100 (1) - Why did you stop with the claps from this slider ?
5. 01:03:281 (1,2,3) - This overlap looks rather bad ingame because it doesn't overlap properly - you should change the position of (2) and (3).
6. 01:08:281 (3) - Add a clap on the last beat ?

Ano

1. There are really way too many 1/2 for a Normal. And some come in confusing or long patterns.
2. 00:21:918 (1,2) - This for example: the second repeats comes a bit out of nowhere (despite matching the song) and can be surprising... I suggest you remove one repeat out of each slider.
3. 00:26:463 (3) - Same.
4. 00:38:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern is really too hard. First the repeat sliders with two repeats, then the long streak of 1/2 with sharp angles...
5. 00:48:281 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - confusing spacing: (3,1) are spaced normally, but then the spacing is halved, which makes the 1/2 hard to read.
6. 00:55:554 (1,3) - The added 1/2 due to the repeat don't really make sense to the music... Why don't you make them 1/1 sliders ? It would sound and play a lot better imo
7. 00:59:190 (1,2,3,4) - Same comments about the added 1/2
8. 01:06:236 (5,6) - Extemely confusing spacing and spacing issue. The placement looks like (5) has 3 repeats, but it only has 2, and it makes the spacing a jump that's extremely confusing to play.

Hana

1. Really, way too many added beats, 1/2 or 1/4s.

Kong's Insane

1. Same...

as a insane diff, I think it is ok So no.But thanks

Really, not all songs can have an Insane mapped that fits the song. It's not important to have an Insane in the mapset... Especially if you're going to "overmap" for it...

Liked the Easy and Normal but really hated Hard and Insane. Mapset is rather fine as a whole.

1. The first section (20%) sounds too low imo, Perhaps 30~35%?
2. The mapset is quite nice, just make sure you fix those major issues

1. 00:27:145 (2,3) - This stacked 1/2 feels a bit random tbh. Since you've used only "1/1" and some repeating "1/2" I suggest to remove (2). (or delete (2) and start (3) 1/2 earlier)
2. 00:29:190 (4) - This stack doesn't flow. Actually, It might be a bit disorienting for rookies, I suggest to move it somewhere else.
3. 00:36:690 - I suggest to map this break, the song is short enough so there won't be any problems, plus if you map it you'll keep the consistency with the other diffs.
4. 01:24:190 (3,4) - Why this diff ends on 01:24:418 - ? In my opinion you should end it here: 01:24:645 - like the other diffs, plus that last circle might be a bit unexpected, something like this would be much better.

1. 00:43:509 (1) - This spacing was a bit confusing, move this object closer to the last slider using distance snap please.
2. 01:04:418 (1) - ^
3. 01:17:372 (1) - Combo-break'd here, the spacing makes this object look like a fake 1/2. I know that the spacing decreased due to the slider speed change but the slow down starts from this point not before so please fix this spacing. It should be spaced like this
4. 01:17:372 - You should user 0.75x instead of 0.50x like you did in [Easy], the slider speed change from 1.0 to 0.50 feels so bad and unintuitive
5. 01:17:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The length of this combo is too long, split it up please.

1. Perhaps OD -1? Suits the map better imo.
2. 01:12:600 (8) - The 2nd repeat is getting covered by the previous hitburst which is a major issue. Move the slider somewhere else or try to re-arrange the pattern
3. 01:17:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as [Normal], 0.50x feels really bad imo, 0.75x would not affect the flow of the map plus it's more intuitive.

1. 00:02:372 (2) - This slider is not following the rhythm correctly. Players will expect only 3 repeats, the 4th repeats lands on 'nothing'. I strongly suggest to remove 2 repeats and then add a circle here: 00:02:855 -
2. 01:27:372 (6) - That last repeat doesn't sound good, if you want to keep it try reducing volume gradually for those last beats
3. 01:18:509 (2,3,4) - The hitburts are covering some repeats of the slider, which is unrankable
4. 01:19:872 (5,6,7) - Same here, I find these sliders a bit intuitive but none of the parts of the sliders should be covered so you'll have to re-arrange these patterns.
5. I find this diff is too streammy for the song, I feel that most of those streams are not mapped to any rhythm/music. Not a big fan of this diff :/