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HakuNoKaemi
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Makar wrote:

[General]

  1. The difficulty names do not really express difficulty level, and since the star ratings are matching it's even harder to tell :< this can be a problem in multiplayer matches.
They're Persona names of the game. Especially Orpheus,Thanatos and Orpheus Telos are actually the protagonist Persona.

The difficulties are on the correct order though ( Easy - Normal - Hard - Hard - Insane )
I changed the timing some times, so notes are unsnapped... so thank for highlighting it

[Orpheus]

  1. Actually, a novice player doesn't even usually expect he should click following music.
  2. 00:00:635 (1) -no need to empathize a guitar note though, the guitar is empathized by the tick, and the end of a slider empathize much more than a hit circle.
  3. 00:14:612 (1) - If I was to be completely consistent in all map, this was at east a 4 star difficulty. I'm more consistent during the voiced part.
  4. 01:02:851 (1) - And abandon completely the consistency? just no. i made the easy be more consistent on some parts only, and discarded most of it
  5. 01:17:339 (1) - There more then only the music calling it: avoiding too many 1/2 consecutive notes( 3 or 4 here ), avoiding the star rating passing 3, using some easy rhythm ( it isn't really to just know I used a slider to follow the overall mix/list]

[Orthrus]

  1. 00:06:947 - He's respecting guitar, though he is a symmetry mapper, and that shouldn't be hard to see
  2. 00:12:401 - ^
  3. 00:23:140 - I will refer this, he arleady refused what I won't refer.
  4. 00:28:589 (6) - It's a "corrective" SV change... a 0.05 change is seriously little to call "SV change"
  5. 01:21:601 (3) - The fact 01:22:117 (x) - isn't here is hard to read. That's easy to read if you know the symmetry and the fact the last slider and note followed voice.
will refer what I said I will refer... (the mapper's of the GDs are credited in the starting post/map info.)


[Thanatos]

  1. I have nothing major to point out, but in general some of your 1/2 sliders seem like they are there just to "be there" if you know what I mean. The locations of them don't really make much musical sense. For example: 01:27:060 (8) - should start on 01:26:890 (7) instead so the sliders start on the accents (clap pattern) instead of being placed randomly.
They aren't placed randomly, notice the in-pattern symmetry plus the music STOP at the end of it.(and start in the note after)
I'm not following voice there, I'm following drums mostly, so expect that sliders are placed differently than how you would place them following music.

Orpheus Telos]

  1. 01:04:049 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This is definitely overmapping where you shouldn't be. If you want to bring out the accents I suggest using Jumps instead ._.

it's not a fastidious overmapping, and it have musical sense ( think of the guitar chords vibrating or so), plus it's actually really invisible, but the chord he's playing (the guitarist), is played in a manner they sound like a stream. but it's difficult to explain, and neither somthing you can know with a few plays.
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those
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those
[General]
  1. Consider creating a custom sliderpoint10.png and sliderpoint30.png that is fitting of the skin.
  2. Maybe it's your hitsounds, maybe it's your offset, but S:C1 clap is awfully off time on some of the objects, as well as the S:C2 clap.
[SB]
  1. Some words are unnecessarily capitalized in your storyboard images, unless there's some sort of reason?
  2. 00:37:969 - "it's" should read "its".
  3. 01:08:651 - "endless" is one word and should be contained in one image.
  4. 01:12:060 - I can't really hear "feel so alive" here, what's your lyric source?
  5. 01:23:140 - No fade in sequence.
  6. 01:29:958 - No fade out. Perhaps intentional here.
[Orpheus Telos]
  1. 00:32:515 (3) - Can be made better.
  2. 00:59:787 (2,3) - 5.28x spacing, less than 200ms. You're looking for symmetry here, but this kind of spacing is kinda meh.
  3. 01:02:344 (7) - Although slider tick can tell how fast this slider goes, the sv and spacing for 01:02:344 (7,1,2) - isn't that fitting.
  4. 01:04:049 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not sure how this is mapped to the music, since I really only hear 1/2 rhythms.
[Asura]
  1. 00:22:287 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not really liking the configuration.
[Taiko]
  1. Default slider tick rate to 1.
  2. Default circle size.
  3. Background image has the taiko bar a few pixels too high.
  4. Can't really say too much about the mapping. There are places in the map where I felt could have used some more notes, but it may or may not throw off the over quality of the map, due to the nature of the song.
[Thanatos]
  1. I'm confused about your usage of 3-object patterns and their spacing. When do you use 00:14:617 (1,2,3) - ? 00:22:799 (5,6,7) - ? 00:35:583 (4,5,1) - ?
  2. 00:28:594 (5) - See if you're able to able to make this slider have a whole in the middle to fully distinguish the looping.
  3. 00:37:458 (5,1,2,3) - Not really sure if I can agree with this kind of spacing. Much better if you spaced them out.
  4. 00:49:049 (2) - Clap the slider head, right?
[Orthrus]
  1. 00:20:498 (1) - Remove new combo spinner, obvious continuation of 00:20:071 (3) - .
  2. 00:38:140 (1,2) - Best if sliders were symmetrical since it feels like that's what your intention was, and there isn't much point in making last slider node (1) into an anchor.
  3. 01:13:594 (1) - As the above.
  4. 01:28:679 (1) - Remove new combo spinner, obvious continuation of 01:28:594 (3) -
[Orpheus]
  1. 00:08:140 (2) - Slider looks rather chunky because the angle formed at the anchors is too large. Make them a little closer to a straight angle for better effect.
  2. 00:27:231 (2) - Clap the slider head, right?
  3. 00:36:776 (2,1,2,3) - Not so appropriate in the easiest diff of the set. There may be around 700ms of time between each object, but that amount of time flies by really quickly for beginner players.
  4. 01:02:856 (1,2) - 1/2 spaced objects generally considered too fast for the easiest diff. I would consolidate these two objects into a single slider.
  5. 01:16:322 (1,2,3) - Try making these three objects into a single slider.
  6. 01:17:344 (1,2,3) - Not so sure this exact rhythm pattern is accurate or best. There seem to be many alternatives that may be better but only use 1/1 sliders and circles.
  7. 01:27:912 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make (1) into a circle. Starting 01:28:594 - , use three 1/2 sliders in time with the music.
HakuNoKaemi
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The rest is accepted

those wrote:

[SB]
  1. Stylizing reasons. Lie how titles are usually a have some capitalized words
  2. 01:08:651 - Is this a rule? It doesn't seem to me. End~less seems better cut in two images
  3. 01:12:060 - this, I made some memory errors though(corrected)
  4. 01:29:958 - It's intentional like you said.
[Orpheus Telos]
  1. 00:59:787 (2,3) - Looking for symmetry ok. The jump is actually justified by the vocal.
  2. 01:02:344 (7) - Well, (7) does fit good, you can "lament" (2), but it does hold the note, so the sv changes are justified, NC to (2) (removed to (1) and different jump should fit a bit more.
  3. 01:04:049 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - In fact it's overmapped, But it does fit.
[Thanatos]
  1. I'm confused about your usage of 3-object patterns and their spacing. When do you use
    00:14:617 (1,2,3) - They all follow the same instrument-line
    00:22:799 (5,6,7) - ^, and the stack is done at the other way to preserve blanketing. though I preferred to spread those.
    00:35:583 (4,5,1) - Should be easy to find that (1) having a NC and being a slider and following vocal means that this is a different line from (4,5). See how (1) start from a vocal.
  2. 00:28:594 (5) - You did mean more circular? You can actually really see the looping easily with at least 2 sliderstlyes (peppyslider and mmslider2)
  3. 00:37:458 (5,1,2,3) - Much better if I DON'T space them out. No one using antijumps doesn't means no one shall use them. I use antijumps in those cases when the music feel "slowed"
  4. 00:49:049 (2) - You mean Finish? the Clap is that Bass-drum like sound.
[Orthrus]
  1. 00:38:140 (1,2) - Armin does have a different slider-making style. It's still symmetric if you Ctrl+H. Without the red point it isn't.
  2. 01:13:594 (1) - As the above.
[Orpheus]
  1. 00:08:140 (2) - I like them better with a larger angle.
  2. 00:27:231 (2) - The clap is after that point.(red tick)
  3. 00:36:776 (2,1,2,3) - The beginners I asked to play this said "they didn't even feel it, because it felt really natural".
  4. 01:02:856 (1,2) - You can actually use 1/2 object in easies. Plus this isn't that hard.
  5. 01:16:322 (1,2,3) - It won't play natural.
  6. 01:17:344 (1,2,3) - It is a star-lowering pattern that make the player break from those 1/2 before. they follow the principal snares.
  7. 01:27:912 (1,2,3,4,5) - the (1,2) do follow vocal and pass to drums.
thank for the mod
Kuria
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Kuria
m4m stuff :3

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07:08 HakuNoKaemi: : uh?
07:09 HakuNoKaemi: : Hihi! :3
07:09 Kuria: : oh, youre there :)
07:09 HakuNoKaemi: : need help^
07:09 HakuNoKaemi: : ?
07:09 Kuria: : just wanna ask, are you accepting mod request these moment?
07:09 Kuria: : yeah >_<
07:09 HakuNoKaemi: : oki
07:09 Kuria: : ah, great!
07:10 Kuria: : then, this map^^
07:10 *Kuria is listening to (Goku Rakujokai - Oato ga Yoroshikutte... Yo! (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/56404]
07:11 Kuria: : thanks in advance :)
07:11 HakuNoKaemi: : I usually like asking a m4m in change for an higher priority, would you mod one of mine too?
07:11 Kuria: : which map?
07:12 *HakuNoKaemi is editing (Shuhei Kita - Soul Phrase)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28856]
07:12 *Kuria is listening to (Shuhei Kita - Soul Phrase)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28856]
07:12 Kuria: : ill try :3
07:13 Kuria: : popped bubble?
07:13 HakuNoKaemi: : yes
07:13 HakuNoKaemi: : popped by charlie who wasn't to be found anywhere after popping
07:14 Kuria: : lol
07:14 HakuNoKaemi: : I tried contacting him, but nothing
07:15 Kuria: : is he gone or just ignoring all the messages?
07:15 HakuNoKaemi: : just ignoring, I guess
07:15 Kuria: : =3=
07:15 HakuNoKaemi: : he just can0t be talking at modhelp and afk at the same moment
07:15 HakuNoKaemi: : *can't
07:16 HakuNoKaemi: : anyway, how you found me ?.?
07:17 Kuria: : through pending thread
07:17 Kuria: : xP
07:18 Kuria: : mmm if you dont mind
07:18 Kuria: : i wanna mod your map irc is it ok?
07:19 HakuNoKaemi: : oki
07:19 HakuNoKaemi: : remember to save the log after
07:19 Kuria: : k
07:22 Kuria: : techical issue first
07:23 Kuria: : i found a bit many error pointed out through AIBAT, such an incosistency of countdown for each diff, letterbox, etc
07:24 HakuNoKaemi: : only inconsistency is cobo colours
07:24 HakuNoKaemi: : *combo colours
07:24 HakuNoKaemi: : When you did download the map?
07:24 Kuria: : since yesterday
07:24 Kuria: : updated already
07:25 HakuNoKaemi: : http://puu.sh/PhRy < that's the only inconsistency it show to me >:<
07:27 Kuria: : http://puu.sh/PhTr this is what i found on aibat xP
07:27 Kuria: : i think ill try re dl it again
07:27 HakuNoKaemi: : I checked http://puu.sh/PhU5 in all diffs
07:28 HakuNoKaemi: : ah, delete old diffs
07:28 HakuNoKaemi: : (I changed some diffs name)
07:28 Kuria: : o3o
07:29 HakuNoKaemi: : you had downloaded it time ago, and redownloaded it yesterday, probably
07:31 Kuria: : ok, fixed now :3
07:31 Kuria: : mmm, consider make the lead-in into 2sec?
07:32 Kuria: : 1,6sec is enough though, but i think it will be not for the others >_<
07:32 HakuNoKaemi: : 1635+635 is the real lead in
07:32 Kuria: : yeah, i know
07:33 Kuria: : just in case that ppl that need a bit longer time to prepare
07:33 Kuria: : for the*
07:33 HakuNoKaemi: : 2 seconds it's enough ...
07:33 Kuria: : okay then
07:33 Kuria: : ill start from orpheus
07:35 Kuria: : since your map is already bubbled and have a plenty of a good mod (niva's, makar's, etc), maybe i'll unable to pointing many stuff, so please forgive me for
07:35 Kuria: : that >_<
07:35 Kuria: : ill try to pointing out a pattern that i feel uneasy instead
07:37 Kuria: : 00:08:135 (2,1) - hmmm, about this 2 slider, i found that this is the only sliderpattern that seems different with the other similar pattern
07:38 Kuria: : why not change the shape into curved instead?
07:38 Kuria: : since i saw many of the slider shape that you using on the similar stanza are using curved
07:39 Kuria: : same goes for 01:09:157 (6) - , that i think it would be better if you make it into "S" shaped slider :3
07:40 HakuNoKaemi: : I can try something like this http://puu.sh/P75M
07:40 HakuNoKaemi: : http://puu.sh/Pi71
07:40 Kuria: : flower.mp3 o.o
07:41 HakuNoKaemi: : wrong link >.<
07:41 Kuria: : lol ok
07:41 HakuNoKaemi: : Anyway I would started linking my covers sometime anyway XD
07:41 Kuria: : ah, this is good one
07:41 Kuria: : 00:06:771 (1) - almost out of playfield, is this ok? o.o
07:42 Kuria: : still reachable thoough, ppl will not notice it when playing
07:43 Kuria: : 00:14:612 (1) - move the endslider up abit, it seem like it was not covering the previous slider perfectly enough imo
07:44 Kuria: : 00:38:135 (1,2,3) - kinda tricky one :3
07:46 Kuria: : but the comboburst make it still readable, so i think it's ok for now
07:46 HakuNoKaemi: : It's not out of playfield
07:46 Kuria: : almost~
07:46 Kuria: : http://puu.sh/Picg
07:48 Kuria: : at least make the startpoint still inside the playfield
07:48 HakuNoKaemi: : testplay and see >.<
07:48 Kuria: : already
07:48 Kuria: : that's why i said will not recognizeable while playing :3
07:48 Kuria: : it*
07:49 Kuria: : just take it as consideration^^
07:49 HakuNoKaemi: : out of playfield means it's out of the reachable part
07:49 Kuria: : i see
07:50 Kuria: : then, ill go to the next part now
07:50 HakuNoKaemi: : so, you should see if it go under the HP bar
07:51 HakuNoKaemi: : (but I think I should have corrected most of those errors so far
07:51 HakuNoKaemi: : )
07:51 Kuria: : k
07:52 Kuria: : 01:02:851 (1,2) - i think a 1/4 beat pattern here is a bit hard to play for the beginners, considering this as the easiest diff currently o.o
07:52 Kuria: : eh, wait
07:53 HakuNoKaemi: : ?,?
07:53 Kuria: : 1/2 beat
07:53 Kuria: : (lol me still confused with the 1/2, 1/4, 1/6 things orz)
07:54 HakuNoKaemi: : 01:04:129 (1) - < moved it 1/4 before
07:54 HakuNoKaemi: : it's just cosmethics, though
07:54 Kuria: : hmm
07:54 Kuria: : still acceptable, ok
07:55 HakuNoKaemi: : oh, rollbacked, I did follow the bass hit to start the spinner, so returned were it was before
07:55 Kuria: : kay
07:56 Kuria: : can we continue this?
07:56 HakuNoKaemi: : yep
07:56 Kuria: : 01:09:157 (6) - make this shape into S like what i suggesting before :3
07:57 Kuria: : since it have the same shape as the first one
07:57 HakuNoKaemi: : 01:07:112 (3,4,5) -
07:57 Kuria: : i see
07:58 Kuria: : kay :3
08:00 Kuria: : 01:17:169 (4,1) - i think you want to try following the drum voice here to make it consistent on the beat placement, but afterall, this is still easy diff, and i
08:00 Kuria: : think forming the pattern like this are really hard to play by the beginners too
08:00 Kuria: : why not start the 01:17:339 (1) - from 01:17:680 - instead?
08:01 Kuria: : but if you follow this, you need to rearrange the next pattern too after this slider
08:02 Kuria: : or i can suggest you to change 01:17:169 (4) - notes into 1/2 slider
08:02 Kuria: : from 01:17:169 - until 01:17:339 -
08:02 Kuria: : and then start the next slider 01:17:680 -
08:03 Kuria: : it wil be more easy to play for the beginners imo^^
08:04 Kuria: : if you follow my suggestion, i highly suggest to adding the finish sound for 01:17:339 (1) - slider on the startpoint :3
08:05 Kuria: : since it will be start from 01:17:680 - , it was really match to adding the finish
08:05 Kuria: : uhmm, are you still there? o.o
08:06 HakuNoKaemi: : http://puu.sh/Pivp
08:07 Kuria: : roger
08:08 HakuNoKaemi: : http://puu.sh/Pixd
08:09 HakuNoKaemi: : (I manually stacked (2) because it'll stack anyway like this, so I don't lose the blanket
08:10 Kuria: : k
08:11 Kuria: : (seems different from what i meant though >_<)
08:11 Kuria: : ill continue~
08:11 HakuNoKaemi: : It's still mapped like before
08:11 Kuria: : yeah
08:11 HakuNoKaemi: : since the slidertick is on an ex hitcircle
08:11 HakuNoKaemi: : it sound the same
08:11 HakuNoKaemi: : and it's doable since it's soft
08:12 Kuria: : okay
08:12 Kuria: : then
08:12 Kuria: : 01:26:885 (3) -
08:12 Kuria: : i think it was supposed to be play from 01:26:714 - instead
08:13 Kuria: : yeah, it was true
08:13 HakuNoKaemi: : 01:26:203 (2) -
08:13 HakuNoKaemi: : I think most people will think that it'll follow the same thing as it
08:14 Kuria: : what do you mean? o.o
08:14 HakuNoKaemi: : 01:26:885 (3) - hear the drums
08:15 Kuria: : ah, i see
08:15 Kuria: : but why repeat slider? :o
08:15 Kuria: : i hear the drums are played until 01:27:055 -
08:15 Kuria: : according to my ears lol
08:16 HakuNoKaemi: : because 3 1/2 hit circles are worser?
08:16 Kuria: : not at all i think
08:16 Kuria: : well, if you dont wanna change it, it's ok
08:17 Kuria: : imma continue to the next diff if youre done :3
08:18 HakuNoKaemi: : I'm done
08:18 HakuNoKaemi: : Asura and Orthrus are not mine (if you played Persona, names of mine diffs are protagonist Persona)
08:19 Kuria: : k
08:19 Kuria: : then, ill mod your diff only, is it ok?
08:19 HakuNoKaemi: : ok
08:19 HakuNoKaemi: : mod the rest in the post
08:19 Kuria: : kay xD
08:21 Kuria: : 00:20:407 - expected to be a spinner from here orz
08:22 HakuNoKaemi: : how ? I wouldn't expect it that much >.<
08:22 Kuria: : lol
08:22 Kuria: : maybe just me
08:22 Kuria: : also
08:22 Kuria: : 00:16:146 (6,7) - is this unstacked notes are intentional
08:22 Kuria: : ?
08:23 Kuria: : im also see it on some other similar pattern too
08:23 HakuNoKaemi: : they're stacked manually
08:23 Kuria: : it was like this http://puu.sh/PiMK
08:23 HakuNoKaemi: : since (6) would stack over (7), i did the other way
08:24 Kuria: : i see
08:24 Kuria: : why not stack (7) on (6) endslider with 0,0 DS instead?
08:25 Kuria: : not much chage though, so just forget it >_<
08:25 HakuNoKaemi: : I prefer to be stacked like this, i would destroy the blanketing if I did everytime like this
08:26 HakuNoKaemi: : don't be afraid of this though, since most modders don't usually know this
08:26 Kuria: : lol
08:26 Kuria: : but i know :D
08:27 Kuria: : k ill continue
08:27 Kuria: : 00:57:396 (3,4,5) - make it like this? http://puu.sh/PiPG
08:27 Kuria: : flowed better imo
08:28 HakuNoKaemi: : I like better in the inner part than in the outer
08:28 HakuNoKaemi: : seems more like a bow
08:28 Kuria: : kay
08:29 Kuria: : next diff
08:32 Kuria: : @_@
08:33 Kuria: : the hitcircle and combo colors are blend with the video
08:33 HakuNoKaemi: : there are some crazy things *start whistling*
08:33 Kuria: : also why CS3? o3o
08:33 HakuNoKaemi: : though with the skin hitburst isn't hard to see undercircle notes >,<
08:34 Kuria: : no, the problem is the combo color instead orz
08:35 Kuria: : 01:19:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - yellow
08:35 Kuria: : consider change the combo color order \o\
08:36 HakuNoKaemi: : the BG is green/red
08:36 Kuria: : you need to consider for the player who want to play with video too o3o
08:37 HakuNoKaemi: : which parts?
08:37 Kuria: : the one that i mention above
08:37 Kuria: : 01:19:555 (1,2,3,4,5) -
08:37 HakuNoKaemi: : (the Video BG color is Green/Red there
08:38 HakuNoKaemi: : the dog?
08:38 Kuria: : looks like it
08:38 Kuria: : although 80% are green
08:39 Kuria: : the place that you put the beats are the one that still consist the yellow color
08:39 Kuria: : also this 01:21:089 (1,2,3) - @_@
08:40 Kuria: : lets aside this for now
08:40 HakuNoKaemi: : the red is really different
08:40 HakuNoKaemi: : though I can just jump yellow there
08:41 Kuria: : different story when you actually play it
08:41 HakuNoKaemi: : though I still don't see problems >.< http://puu.sh/Pj4c
08:42 Kuria: : kay
08:42 Kuria: : imma continue
08:42 Kuria: : 01:03:532 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - o3o?
08:42 HakuNoKaemi: : It isn't so hard, as I'm using a grey border
08:43 HakuNoKaemi: : Ah, that's hard
08:43 HakuNoKaemi: : though I can't pretty much think something less "epic"
08:43 Kuria: : why not make this jump intead of stream? xP
08:44 Kuria: : i dont see any reason to add 1/4 notes here when you dont hear any 1/4 beat at all on that part
08:44 HakuNoKaemi: : 3 sliders would be easy and jumps would be nosense if not used where I'm arleady using them
08:45 HakuNoKaemi: : I can't thing nothing better for now
08:46 HakuNoKaemi: : I can still make the Jump after the stream longer, though
08:46 Kuria: : im thinking about something like these http://puu.sh/Pj8L
08:47 Kuria: : well, if you still dont want to change this, it's ok
08:47 Kuria: : hmm
08:48 Kuria: : ok, i think that's all for now
08:48 Kuria: : i'm not see any awkward parts besides all of all i mentioned above :3
08:48 Kuria: : what*
08:49 Kuria: : you still there?
08:52 Kuria: : o.o
08:54 Kuria: : imma browsing for a while till you poking me then~
08:54 HakuNoKaemi: : just three simple slider
08:54 Kuria: : lol
08:54 HakuNoKaemi: : though I liked better if I could use slider tick rate four there
08:54 HakuNoKaemi: : http://puu.sh/Pjh3
08:54 HakuNoKaemi: : simple 1.25x slider
08:54 Kuria: : ah, this one is pretty
08:55 Kuria: : ill mod the other 2 diff later :3
08:55 HakuNoKaemi: : I though that more than 1.25x of speed would got peoples angry
08:56 Kuria: : well, it's not if you place it on the right timing
08:56 Kuria: : like when the song pace are somewhat became faster or some else
08:57 Kuria: : btw, imma not mod the taiko diff, since i cant mod taiko orz
08:57 Kuria: : sorry for that T_T
08:59 HakuNoKaemi: : the skin sliderpoint 10 e 30 are uploaded?
08:59 Kuria: : ?
09:00 HakuNoKaemi: : (see in the folder if you have "sliderpoint10.png" and "sliderpoint30.png"
09:00 Kuria: : ye
09:02 HakuNoKaemi: : http://puu.sh/P75M < anyway, one of the two voice is me
09:02 HakuNoKaemi: : the one that seem registered
09:03 Kuria: : ahah
09:03 Kuria: : haku, are you done?
09:03 Kuria: : i'll post this when you're done~
09:04 HakuNoKaemi: : I did end
09:04 Kuria: : kay :3
09:04 Kuria: : sorry if it wasn't helpful to you at all >_<
09:05 HakuNoKaemi: : I did find something more thanks to you though
09:05 Kuria: : i see :)
09:05 Kuria: : thanks^^

i'll mod the the guest difficulty later~
Kuria
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Kuria
2nd part.

[Orthus]
  1. 00:00:890 (2) - uhmm, is this notes are supposed to be on 00:00:976 - , maybe you're mistaking or just place it unintentional before
  2. 00:00:976 (2) - also for this circles, i think it was a bit too up, almosttouching the hp bar. Maybe you can fix it by moving the position of 00:00:635 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - a bit
  3. 00:12:396 - add note here? I feel better with it on that part :3
  4. 00:59:271 (1,2,4) - make this three slider into normal curved slider instead? since i saw that almost the 1/2 beat slider are all with the normal curved shape
  5. 01:16:317 (3) - try to make the endslider end on the 01:16:828 - or 01:17:169 - (forming a new pattern)? To make it match with the song rhythm, i feel like the rhythm are kinda off if youre put the endslider on 01:16:998 - while i'm hearing the drum voice are actually getting loud on 01:16:828 - and 01:17:169 -
[Ashura]
  1. 00:05:067 (3,1,2) - lol, pretty fun with what you did in here, love it^^. But it seems that the endslider on the 00:05:067 (3,1,2) - (the reverse point) are not really symmetrical with the 00:05:067 (3,1,2) -
    try this:
    204,288,35237,1,8
    256,184,35578,1,8
    256,240,35748,1,8
    448,280,36089,6,0,B|392:312|288:280,1,140,8|0
  2. 00:19:555 - adding note here? seems much better imo
  3. 00:33:362 (3) - the upper part of this circle is overlapped by the hp bar, better move this down (along with the next 2 notes) :3
sorry if it was too few, but that all i can find for now
good luck with this map :)
HakuNoKaemi
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Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi

Kuria wrote:

2nd part.
I know, it's strange I'm fixing
Deleted=Fixed
[Orthus]
  1. 00:12:396 - It was suggested other times.. though there aren't symmetric ways to map it...
  2. 00:59:271 (1,2,4) - for that part, it stay's like this. If you link the first part of the slider it's a triangle
  3. 01:16:317 (3) - man, mantaining symmetry's hard, though i fixed
[Ashura]
  1. 00:05:067 (3,1,2) - wrong code 35578 is 00:35:578, the real one is with 5067, though rotated by -4°/-5°
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
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Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
[Orpheus]

  1. 00:09:498 (1) - Sento un piatto venir suonato qui. Che ne dici di metterlo in risalto aggiungendo un finish all'inizio di questo slider?
  2. 00:12:226 (1) - Lo stesso viene applicato qua
  3. 01:03:703 (3) - Che ne diresti di aggiungere un soft finish alla fine dello slider? Secondo me ci sta molto bene...
  4. 00:41:203 (1) - CTRL+H qui? Imho,il flow è migliore e più naturale con 00:40:521 (4) -.
[Orthrus]

  1. 00:16:487 (1) - Che ne dici di spostare la New Combo su 00:17:680 (3) - ? E' una cosa piccola,ma penso che attualmente questa impostazione sia più coerente di quella usata ora.
[Thanatos]

  1. 00:50:407 (4) - Che ne diresti di aggiungere un New Combo qui,seguendo così il drum nel bg?
  2. 01:10:862 (5) - Non so te,ma io trovo decisamente più naturale il flow tra lo slider 01:10:180 (4) - se questa nota se messa a x:128 y:280. L'impostazione attuale va bene,ma trovo questa qui migliore parlando di flow.
  3. 01:18:362 (3,4,5,6,7) - E' piùche altro una cosa grafica,ma questo pentagono potrebbe essere migliorato. Cosa ne pensi di questo pattern?
    SPOILER

    332,212,77680,2,0,B|316:160|268:140,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
    236,236,78362,1,0
    136,228,78703,1,8
    112,132,79044,5,0
    204,88,79385,1,8
    284,148,79726,1,8
    Ho anche ruotato 01:17:680 (2) - per fixare il blanket con la nota successiva
[Asura]

  1. 00:15:635 (3,4) - I still don't understand why here you are using a different spacing from all the other patterns. I mean, this the only place in this first zone where you are using a 1.3~1,4 distance!
  2. 00:21:260 (4,5,6) - Honestly,I think this triplet fits quite bad here,but if you don't want to change anything here,that's ok.
  3. 00:52:794 (1,2,3) - What do you think on changing the pattern into this? I think this flows better than this setting
Orpheus Telos te lo modderò in seguito,ora sono mezzo assonnato,lol
HakuNoKaemi
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Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi

-kevincela- wrote:

[Orpheus]

  1. 01:03:703 (3) - Va un pò contro il modo in cui ho messo gli hitsound...
[Orthrus]

  1. 00:16:487 (1) - La più coerente mi pare spostarlo sul (2), la simmetria non ne risente ed è consistente... credo...
[Thanatos]

  1. 00:50:407 (4) - Sto seguendo maggiormente le liriche per gli NC
  2. 01:10:862 (5) - ho Ctrl+R lo slider così non ho un salto tanto lungo..
  3. 01:18:362 (3,4,5,6,7) - Non avevo inizialmente notato il codice e ho fixato con il Create Polygon Circles...

    [Asura]

    1. 00:21:260 (4,5,6) - Ha già rifiutato, diverse volte, e per me non sta poi tanto male... quindi non posso fare niente qui
Orpheus Telos te lo modderò in seguito,ora sono mezzo assonnato,lol
JudgeTheDude
595 posts
Joined September 2011
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my modding queue.

[Lyrics]
00:39:498 Isn't it "It's always" instead of "its old ways" ?

Just checked Orthrus, the other diffs were too hard for me, sorry :(

Good luck for rank
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
from my queue
lol, nothing find :?
easy is protect for me

good luck
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
IRC modded!
Since charles have not been rechecking for at least a month, so I will go ahead and rebubble this.

IRC log
23:07 kanpakyin: [Orpheus]
23:09 kanpakyin: 00:16:998 (1) - How about adding a finish at the end of the slider?
23:10 HakuNoKaemi: did
23:10 HakuNoKaemi: I didn't remember to add it, thank :3
23:11 kanpakyin: 00:38:135 (1,2,3) - hum, I don't really recommend this kind of spacing in the easiest difficulty, it may
23:11 kanpakyin: confuses newbie imo.
23:12 kanpakyin: stack it?
23:13 HakuNoKaemi: I arleady made many newbie try it, and they said it felt "like it wasn't there"
23:13 HakuNoKaemi: (in the sense they did felt the slowdown)
23:15 kanpakyin: 01:17:169 (2,1) - Were you making this intentionally?
23:17 HakuNoKaemi: it was a bit different before ( as the slider before was in a place the blanket got destroyed )
23:17 HakuNoKaemi: anyway, it's the same as the normal stack
23:17 HakuNoKaemi: should stack normally?
23:18 HakuNoKaemi: (and I did it to check the blanket)
23:18 kanpakyin: if possible
23:19 kanpakyin: [Orthrus]
23:21 HakuNoKaemi: (It's Armin's, though I can mod it in his place, I didn't find symmetric ways to fix some modders usual
23:21 HakuNoKaemi: rhythm suggestion )
23:24 kanpakyin: 00:31:657 (1) - Remove the whistle at the beginning of slider and then put it on the end of the slider? Also,
23:24 kanpakyin: 00:32:339 (2) - remove whistle, 00:32:680 (3) - add a whistle at the beginning, remove it at the end
23:27 HakuNoKaemi: did partially
23:27 HakuNoKaemi: ( I made the start of the sliders have the whistle)
23:28 kanpakyin: [Thanatos]
23:31 kanpakyin: 00:47:339 (2,3) - I think unstack it looks better here.
23:32 HakuNoKaemi: oki,
23:33 HakuNoKaemi: tried to create a blanketing
23:34 kanpakyin: 00:59:271 (7) - Stacking problem again lol, anyway ignore this if you did that intentionally.
23:34 HakuNoKaemi: was intentional there, the slider stack onto the circle, and move it
23:34 HakuNoKaemi: so I stacked the circle
23:35 kanpakyin: I mean you are not perfectly stacked.
23:36 kanpakyin: 01:27:907 (2) - Just my personal taste. I don't really like the shape of slider ;_;
23:37 HakuNoKaemi: not perfectly blanketed?
23:39 HakuNoKaemi: now it should be better blanketed http://puu.sh/1e4Eu
23:39 kanpakyin: 00:59:271 (7) - you should stack the note on the slider's end properly
23:40 HakuNoKaemi: it's more visible like this
23:41 kanpakyin: I don't see any difference between unstack and stack..
23:41 HakuNoKaemi: http://puu.sh/1e4GM <- autostacked it look like this
23:42 HakuNoKaemi: http://puu.sh/1e4H4 <- now it's stacked to "continue" the slider
23:43 kanpakyin: [Asura]
23:43 HakuNoKaemi: (it's _Kiva's I have his authorisation and he's afk as now)
23:44 kanpakyin: 00:00:976 (3) - The slider lost its symmetry, could you slighly adjust it?
23:47 HakuNoKaemi: should be fixed
23:47 HakuNoKaemi: http://puu.sh/1e4M5
23:47 HakuNoKaemi: should be easier to check the symmetry now too
23:47 kanpakyin: k
23:48 kanpakyin: 00:21:260 (4,5,6) - Soory but I can't find a reason that a triplet is needed here. Since there are no drum and
23:48 kanpakyin: instrument to support it
23:49 kanpakyin: 00:28:589 (1) - Same as 00:00:976-
23:51 HakuNoKaemi: did either
23:52 kanpakyin: [Orpheus Telos]
23:56 kanpakyin: 00:59:612 (1,2,3,4) - This jump makes me sad :<
23:57 kanpakyin: anyway, the spacing is much larger than other jump in the map, so how about reducing the spacing a bit?
23:58 HakuNoKaemi: it's quite sensed, though i can search ways to reduce it...
23:58 HakuNoKaemi: (in the sense it do follow the vocals pitch and volume)
23:59 kanpakyin: I know , so I just asked for reducing the spacing, not removed the jump.
00:01 kanpakyin: I am going to start my taiko mod if you are ready
00:02 HakuNoKaemi: reduced to 4.08x lke this http://puu.sh/1e4M5
00:02 kanpakyin: [Taiko]
00:03 kanpakyin: 00:20:407 (65) - big don here?
00:05 HakuNoKaemi: ok
00:05 kanpakyin: 01:05:919 (198,199) - small notes sound better here imo
00:05 HakuNoKaemi: (the Taiko's made by [Shalon], have his authorisation too)
00:06 kanpakyin: oh then, no any other problems.
00:06 kanpakyin: upload the map please
00:06 HakuNoKaemi: made 198 a d, since 199 is heavier than 198 it's a D
00:07 HakuNoKaemi: it's the first time with this new build
00:07 kanpakyin: ok
00:24 kanpakyin: have you done?
00:36 HakuNoKaemi: yep (had a shower in the mean time)
00:39 HakuNoKaemi: (took some tea with honey :3)
00:39 kanpakyin: k

Rebubbled~

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Not my kind of favourite map but everything seems fine here.

Ranked~
Stefan
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Stefan


I lol'd.

Anyway, congrats!
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
oh man i remember this map o.o. congratz on the rank ;)
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
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HeatKai
awesome map haku >w<b grats
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
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-kevincela-
Yay,congratz :D
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
Ranked during my sleep :3

everytime a first time XD
shikyu
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shikyu
omedetou :3
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DeletedUser_1417202
I Love persona3!!

persona3 op is great!

make osu song thanks!
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
I made a Persona 4 map too
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/1837519
Crok425
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Crok425
Congrats on the ranked map!
A l y s s
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A l y s s
Where do you get this Osu Skin :OOO?

I totally love it^^

Is there anychance i can download it? :O? :)
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
It's created by me ^^ (I took some pieces from sallad Persona 4 Skin)
Let me upload it, and I'll give it to you ^^
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