1. Easy (3,37 stars, 118 notes)
2. Haku No Okami (5 stars, 290 notes)
3. Kanpakyin's Taiko Muzukashii (4,83 stars, 370 notes)
4. Lily Petals (5 stars, 303 notes)
5. Maya's Beginner (1,33 stars, 70 notes)
6. Niva's Hard (4,88 stars, 235 notes)
7. Normal (4,42 stars, 178 notes)
8. Ono's Taiko Oni (4,94 stars, 426 notes)

1. Skin Upgraded
2. Lily Petals is a guest by Lilac, differently, Haku No Okami it's a mixed reference, game and an old guest of mine
3. Haku No Okami mod don't followed. why? Totally ranted
4. Only 2 suggestions followed.
5. Listem to music more: you pretty much don't hear many instruments many times

1. drumroll sliders are PERFECTLY fine, hear the drumroll into the music, and still ... you did mod harder diffs first, so you should've hear the streams
2. Ok for the NC

1. Everything you say look worser while playing(normal stacking make the patterns ugly while playing in those parts)
2. Stack in easy unrankability is a bullshit I won't permit to be taken as rule. But as now is rankable.

• 00:13:585 - 00:13:930 - slider
  00:14:275 - 00:14:447 - ^
  00:14:792 - note
  00:14:964 - ^
  00:20:482 - ^
  00:21:171 - 00:21:344 - slider
  00:21:688 - note
  00:22:033 - 00:22:378 - slider.

• Size circle - 1

• 
  01:03:930 - 01:04:275 - Slider
  01:04:619 - note
  01:04:792 - 01:05:137 - slider 1 repeat.

• 00:09:447 (2,3) - " k k "
  00:10:137 (5,1) - as the previous ones
  00:15:309 (3) - move this to 00:15:482
  00:15:482 (3,4,5,1,1) - with (3) changed as before, make this a " d d k d k "
  00:16:861 (2) - add a " d " here
  00:17:895 (1) - from " k " to " d "
  00:47:723 (2) - K here fits way better than D
  01:00:482 (2,3,1) - and 01:03:240 (1,2,3) - "D(wan)D(na) K(sei--) "(PS: i think you can ignore the previous Wan-na go 00:52:206 (1,2,3) - )
  01:03:930 (1) - this becomes a " d "

• 01:22:895 (147,148,149,150,151) - changed from " k kkd D " to " kkd k D"
  01:23:757 (152) - From " d " to " k "
  01:27:206 (166,167,168) - from " d d d " to " d d k "
  01:27:895 (169) - from "d" to "k"

1. The thread's title ....
   
   Some thing wrong here xD

   

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:38:413 (1,2) - Switch the New Combos , Finish on number 1 is the best way Imo , and
   2. 00:50:137 (2) - Hmm... This slider sounds very weird in my ears , I suggested you end this slider at 00:50:826 - Much better
   3. 00:54:964 (4) - It is not bad to use a slider here , but add a finish sounds is needed here 00:55:654 - Maybe you can change the rhythm like this , not a bad idea IMO
      
   4. 01:12:206 (1) - Make this slider prettier? Current one looks a bit ugly >_<
   5. 01:17:550 (1) - Please end this spinner at 01:19:102 - to follow the music more
   6. 01:27:033 (1) - Why this slider start at this Timing? , It isn't fitting the music at all and, I recommend you start this slider at 01:27:378 -
   7. Not bad , need more works Imo
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:20:482 (1,2) - These are no any cymbal in the music , so remove these two finishes on this part.
   2. 00:34:964 (2) - Remove finish , same reason as above
   3. 00:36:344 (1) - Yes , remove finish
   4. 01:05:999 (3) - Hmm... Use whistle instead of finish to make the same hitsound like 01:03:240 (1) -

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:03:240 (1,2,3) - Short sliders are not a good idea in Easy diff , I suggested you make them easily , current part is a bit hard for Beginners
   2. 00:08:757 (1,2) - Same suggestion as above
   3. 00:13:585 (2,3) - They are not fitting the background music well , try to remove circle 00:14:275 (3) - and extend the slider there do the same thing on next part too
      
      Picture

      
   4. 00:21:344 (5,6) - This rhythm is very strange , please try something else to followthe music more
   5. 00:58:930 (4) - This slider looks a bit askew try this code , I make it prettier , In my perspective though

      312,144,58930,2,0,B|284:76|200:56|144:108,1,200

   6. 01:12:550 (2) - Blanket with 1 better ?
   7. 01:27:895 (4,5) - 5 is on Blue tick? it's too hard to catch on a Easy diff!!! try my arrangement ^_^
      
      Picture

      
   8. I must to tell you , this Easy looks not like a Easy , it likes Normal , Called the normal+ is not excessive too
      I hope you can change the diff name to Normal or something else >_< or make this map easier
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:08:757 (1) - Two consecutive finishes here are too loud for me , try to remove finish end , sounds better!
   2. 01:06:344 (7) - Miss a clap on this slider's start?
   3. 01:14:964 (2) - Add a clap start ? sounds good here
   4. 01:25:999 (1) - Remove clap to consistant with other 1/2 sliders

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:51:344 (4) - Move this note backward by 2 tick to 00:51:171 -
   2. 01:13:930 (4) - Curve this slider to the another side?
   3. 01:28:413 (7) - End this slider at blue tick to follow the music well
   4. Yes , this difficulty's arrangements are very good!!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Hmm... Nothing to complain!

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:03:757 (3,4) - This jump is too large!! This is a hard difficulty , so I hope you can reduce the spacing , or try to put a New Combo on slider (4)
   2. 00:04:619 (7) - Same as above Actually , I have some Combo suggestion to you , here is mine
      
      1. 00:03:930 (4) - Put a New Combo for the huge jump
      2. 00:04:619 (4) - Put a New Combo here too , same reason
      3. 00:05:137 (1) - Remove New Combo
      4. 00:05:999 (3) - Put a really great New Combo here for the hitsound change!!
   3. 00:23:757 (4) - Move 3rd-point 1 grid right to make this slider blanket with previous circle well
   4. 01:01:171 (1) - I think you can make this slider a better flow! like this! (Ctrl+G first , and Rotate this slider by 15 [Closewise] , and then put this slider to the best place!
      
      Picture

      
   5. 01:17:637 (6) - I hope you can add a circle here , there is a drum in the background music , and it is not quiet Imo
   6. 01:18:930 (3) - Change to a circle here sounds better the sound at 01:19:102 - is a bit odd for me on this difficulty
   7. Good patterns!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Awesome hitsounds as always , Niva ^_^

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. You miss some Combo color setting , please check them again , change them like other difficulties!!
      
      Notepad Picture

      
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:16:861 (4) - Put a New Combo? The jump distance become huge here
   2. 01:19:792 (4) - Add a circle to follow the drum? although the background music is quiet
   3. 01:23:240 (1) - This slider is not good to look , looks very askew.
   4. Really Nice diff!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Wow! awesome hitsounds!

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:02:895 - Add a circle here like 01:19:275 (4,5) -
   2. 00:08:413 (1) - Add a circle here too! and I suggested delete 00:08:585 (1) - if you add the note
   3. 00:56:516 (1,2) - Put objects under the previous sliderbody looks not good , try other arrangment?
   4. 01:02:895 (6) - Same as above
   5. 01:06:344 (7) - Same!
   6. 01:17:033 (4,5,6) - This jump is very odd Imo , I prefer to use the same spacing here and do not jump
   7. 01:17:637 (8) - Why don't you move this circle to other place , I am very worried about this kind of pattern , try to move this note to x:276 y:268
   8. 01:26:516 (4) - Add a New Combo for a new triangle 01:26:516 (4,5,6,7) -
   9. 01:28:413 (5) - Hmm...you know
   10. 01:28:757 (9) - Delete this note , sense there is nothing in the background music this timing
   11. Yes , really nice map!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Good !

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:24:275 (100) - O口O!?
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:22:550 (93) - Hmm , don sounds better Imo , sense it follow the music more
   2. 00:26:861 (115) - k may follow the vocal more ?
   3. 00:30:826 (135) - Hmm , this D is not needed in my option , because you didn't add finish on 00:25:309 (107) -
   4. 00:32:723 (145,146) - These Dons are not really needed too ,there is nothing in the background
   5. 00:33:585 (149) - Ya , if you listen the song carefully , you must want to cahnge this d to a D
   6. 00:50:137 (7) - Change to d to follow the music more?
   7. 01:00:654 (50) - k here to follow the vocal?
   8. Really great Muzukashii!

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. None!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. None!! This Taiko Oni is good enough to Ranked!!!

spboxer3 wrote:

Recommendations:

1. Custom combo colours
   Custom combo colours do not really matter to taiko as they will be overwritten in actual gameplay. The case is the same with combo numbering, but you may wish to use the numbering to mark out red/blue notes visually within edit mode (assuming no custom colours have been set), this would make modding for other people easier and could make mapping easier:
   

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Finally done my mod , I am lazy now ~
Good Luck with this map , Hope it ranked as soon as possible ^_^
Good Luck :3

Barney Stinson wrote:

Allora

Easy

00:40:826 (3,4,5,6) - hai missato in nightcore, che ti aggiunge un beat continuo da 1/2. Inoltre manchi di pazienza mentre giochi le più facili.
00:44:275 (4) - decidero qualcos'altro... quando l'AIMod funzionerà
00:52:550 (4) - ^


Normal

00:06:171 (2) - .... manchi di pazienza ._.

Lilac's

00:00:999 (3) - neanch'io capisco che c'è di male O.O
01:15:482 (5) - riferirò
01:23:240 (1) - ^

bossandy wrote:

I just mod 2 easiest diffs , spend many times , I will give you my mod when I mod all difficulties ^_^

Edit :

Hmm , here is my mod \:D/
　　
[ General]
　

1. The thread's title ....
   
   Some thing wrong here xD

   

　
[ Maya's Beginner]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:38:413 (1,2) - I actually think she inteded to follow the line of the lyrics "To change after what's"
   2. 00:50:137 (2) - Ended the white tick after and moved the second slider start to the next red. To remain consistent to what she wanted to do
   3. 01:17:550 (1) - End in the red tick before (the sound there is louder)
   4. 01:27:033 (1) - Start the red tick after, and the white tick sound is a slidertick
   5. Not bad , need more works Imo
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:05:999 (3) - modified the hitsounds a little

　
[ Easy]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:03:240 (1,2,3) - They're distanced and not hard to click...
   2. 00:08:757 (1,2) - ^
   3. 00:13:585 (2,3) - They follow the guitar and make the change of line-following more soft, instead of it being hard. ( (2) start on drum, but (3,4,5,6,7) follow guitar)
   4. 00:21:344 (5,6) - Nothing strange, it follow the music a bit complexly for an easy maybe. ( changed the pattern )
   5. 01:12:550 (2) - Made it longer... (hearing it, I simplified it too much ...)
   6. 01:27:895 (4,5) - Listen to the music there. It's not a problem and it won't be hard to catch if our fellow beginners know how to play following music. ( and music, is music ). Plus I'm consistent to the guitar, and have a better flow as now.
   7. Beginner is like Persona 4 Safety. This is like Persona 4 Beginner. Normal is Intermediate and so.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:25:999 (1) -It's consistent with the music as now. Which is preferred for me.

[ Niva's Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:03:757 (3,4) - If a jump got sense, it will be better flowing. Though I changed the Comboes here
   2. 00:04:619 (7) - I did change in the same way :3 ( Changed with ^ XD )
   3. 01:17:637 (6) - Should refer - plus it's actually following the vocals ( as so, seeing the pattern and circles approach/apparition, you will see when to click )
   4. 01:18:930 (3) - It's consistent to the guitar, as now...
   5. Good patterns!

[/list]
　
[ Lily Petals]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. Combo Colours are to be chosen by the mapper. Here they represent the mapping style Lilac tried to imitate (so it's not unrankable)
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:16:861 (4) - Changed the pattern a little ~ ( Still, NC to the more consistent location (5))
   2. 01:19:792 (4) - Should refer maybe... but it's really quiet
   3. Really Nice diff!
   　
   [ Haku No Okami]
   　
   
   1. Unrankable stuff
      ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
      
      1. None!
      　
   2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
      ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
      
      1. 00:02:895 - In the one you linked there is a sound, that isn't here... fixed by editing .osu ( x0.40 SVM )
      2. 00:08:413 (1) - Nothing here to map...
      3. 00:56:516 (1,2) - Moved (1) and exchanged NC. Nothing bad in underslider objects other then "no one use them"
      4. 01:02:895 (6) - Nothing bad in underslider objects other then "no one use them"
      5. 01:06:344 (7) - ^
      6. 01:17:033 (4,5,6) - The jump is in the other diff too, justified by the higher pitch
      7. 01:17:637 (8) - Nothing bad here. Just the fact I separated the stream in two parts since i NC the last note of it
      8. 01:28:413 (5) - Nothing bad in underslider objects other then "no one use them"
      9. 01:28:757 (9) - It won't, anyway, seem strange to play ( a 5-note stream seems better than 4-note, plus there actually is a softer less louder snare here (that seems like an echo )
      10. Yes , really nice map!
      　
   3. Hitsounds
      ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
      
      1. Good !
   　
   
   d= don ( Normal )
   k= katsu ( Clap or Whistle )
   D= Big Don ( Finish )
   K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )
   　
   [ Kanpaktin's Taiko Muzikashii]
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:22:550 (93) - Hmm , don sounds better Imo , sense it follow the music more
   2. 00:26:861 (115) - k may follow the vocal more ?
   3. 00:30:826 (135) - Hmm , this D is not needed in my option , because you didn't add finish on 00:25:309 (107) -
   4. 00:32:723 (145,146) - These Dons are not really needed too ,there is nothing in the background
   5. 00:33:585 (149) - Ya , if you listen the song carefully , you must want to cahnge this d to a D
   6. 00:50:137 (7) - Change to d to follow the music more?
   7. 01:00:654 (50) - k here to follow the vocal?
   8. Really great Muzukashii!

　
shall ask kanpakyin

[ Ono's Taiko Oni]

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. None!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. None!! This Taiko Oni is good enough to Ranked!!!

　

spboxer3 wrote:

Recommendations:

1. Custom combo colours
   Custom combo colours do not really matter to taiko as they will be overwritten in actual gameplay. The case is the same with combo numbering, but you may wish to use the numbering to mark out red/blue notes visually within edit mode (assuming no custom colours have been set), this would make modding for other people easier and could make mapping easier:
   

　　--------------------------------------------------------
Finally done my mod , I am lazy now ~
Good Luck with this map , Hope it ranked as soon as possible ^_^
Good Luck :3

bossandy wrote:

[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:51:344 (4) - Following voice, so no
   2. 01:13:930 (4) - It's because I wanted symmetry ( adjusted the (1) )
      
      SPOILER
   3. Yes , this difficulty's arrangements are very good!!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Hmm... Nothing to complain!

[/color][/b]

bossandy wrote:

[ Kanpaktin's Taiko Muzikashii]

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:24:275 (100) - O口O!?
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:22:550 (93) - Hmm , don sounds better Imo , sense it follow the music more //No because I want to strive a balance there.
   2. 00:26:861 (115) - k may follow the vocal more ? //Then the pattern will be more complicated, or the level will be too hard for muzu.
   3. 00:30:826 (135) - Hmm , this D is not needed in my option , because you didn't add finish on 00:25:309 (107) - //True, applied.
   4. 00:32:723 (145,146) - These Dons are not really needed too ,there is nothing in the background //k.
   5. 00:33:585 (149) - Ya , if you listen the song carefully , you must want to cahnge this d to a D //Putting big note in 1/2 stream is too hard for muzu, especially this is a 7*muzu
   6. 00:50:137 (7) - Change to d to follow the music more? //Same as previous, too hard for muzu.
   7. 01:00:654 (50) - k here to follow the vocal?

osu file format v10

[General]
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PreviewTime: 38413
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:
Artist:Shihoko Hirata feat. Yumi Kawamura
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:HakuNoKaemi
Version:Kanpakyin's Taiko Muzukashii
Source:Persona 4 The Animation
Tags:OnosakiHito Maya-kira Lilac Kanpakyin Niva Atlus Opening 2 Yu Narukami Yosuke Hanamura Yukiko Amagi Chie Satonaka Kanji Tatsumi Rise Kujikawa Teddie Naoto Shirogane Shadow Velvet Room Arcana Tarot Thoth
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CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
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Kiyro wrote:

Random mod.

[General]
Togli la skin che da un casino di fastidio D: Sai la risposta

[Maya's Beginner]
Slider tick rate -1 ci sono alcuni slidertick nei rossi e da fastidio solo dal punto di vista grafico

[Easy]
Slider tick rate -1 ci sono alcuni slidertick nei rossi e non da fastidio
00:20:654 (3) - Mettilo in 00:20:482 Seguo la batteria
00:21:516 (4) - Mettilo in 00:21:171 ^
00:22:550 (1) - Se segui la mod di prima ovviamente questo deve essere messo più lontano dallo slider che c'è prima. ^

[Normal]
00:50:826 (3) - Secondo me va meglio un po' più lungo. Seguo le liriche qui

[Haku No Okami]
Circle size -1 Varietà alla vita, serve
00:30:137 (7) - Stackalo con la fine dello slider Non ne vedo il motivo, visto che l'ho usato diverse volte
01:28:757 (9) - Togli questo beat. Sono più che certo di sentire un piccolissimo suono simile allo Snare di prima, ma davvero muto

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[Maya's Beginner]

00:18:757 (2) - Imho, worser since it'll become overmapped. There are no loud sound there.

00:28:068 (1,2,3) - Imho, it's way more complicated standardizing it like that. Following music is way funnier and easier than using easy standard white tick patterns

00:36:344 (1,2) - Imho, it's way more complicated standardizing it like that. Following music is way funnier and easier than using easy standard white tick patterns

00:52:206 (1) - Wanna ~ means the start of a new verse
00:52:895 (2) - and since this new verse start at the reapeat, it's better leaving it like this

[Easy]

00:28:413 (2,3,4) - One note is off, you used a blue tick (wowzer) and so. There is no real difference between where verses start as while one end, the other start ( if one ended when one started, you where right ). Plus I don't want to standardize.

00:32:206 (3,1) - Maybe 3 is too long to really blanket 1?

00:39:792 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - It fit the drums and voice better like this. Plus I don't need completely avoid red tick. This shall be harder than Beginner and easier than Normal. And it is.

00:50:137 (1,2) - I'll stack 1/1.

01:00:482 (1,2) - ^
01:03:240 (1,2) - ^
01:22:378 (6,7) - ^

01:12:206 (1) -I used vocals to NC in all the map. So no. I won't change NC.

01:17:378 (6) - So. I use a nosense blue tick, to follow the music less ? just to make it simpler?

01:20:654 (4) - Please listen to music. I followed that same guitar note many times.

01:28:671 (5) - Listen to music. Please.

There's a lot to work on in this diff IMO. Please work on these rhythms here, and ones that I might have not mentioned.
I'm gtfo'ing here or not? might continue reading also.

[Normal]

Won't check.

[Niva's Hard]

00:49:792 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:137 (2) - NC
It do make sense, since there the instrumental stop.

00:27:033 (8,1) - I'm asking why you ask such futile questions?

[Lily Petals]

Nice diff. :3
Not much too say.

00:40:654 (1,2) - They're too distant and he already disagreed one time if I remember.

01:19:619 (2,3) - Many suggestion for easier diffs where even less audible than this.

[Haku No Okami]

HP drain - 1 There is no need to do this since the slow section is the start and the end slow section is short and rich in NCs
It's too hard to recover health if you miss notes, especially in slow sections.

This is one of those maps where you have to play with your eyes ears and not your earseyes. :D :C
Lilac guest is even more to be played with Eyes than this. This is to be played coordinating both ears and eyes to follow what you see for the first time if you don't know the song.

00:00:482 (1,2) - Why this antijump? it's not.

00:33:585 - Because you don't usually map to take all the NCs. I followed Yumi voice and mapped it like this.(the slider is following a single word)

00:55:999 (7,1) - It's not. Since it is an Hard/Insane I can use this kind of patterns.
01:02:378 (5,6) - ^
01:05:654 (5,7) - ^
01:27:895 (4,5) - ^


01:17:550 (7,8,1) - It's a no.

01:22:378 (6) - Call it guitar hold. I'm holding on to the guitar

This map is fun if you like hidden notes, but I really don't, sorry.

Well there was so much to say for easy/normal that I kind of got tired out for the other diffs. Sorry.
So many things I didn't followed, I got tired to just read.

That's all I think. I really hope this was helpful. I'll leave star. <3 Good luck.

1. Move to 00:47:206 - (same end at 00:47:723 - ). Then move to x:360 y:264 on grid (see image)
   
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2. Move to 00:46:688 - add a repeat and shorten until it end at 00:47:723 -. Fix spacing. I suggest to change slider's shape.
   
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Copia questi due
482,344.827586206897,4,1,0,60,1,0
482,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
e incollali al posto di 
482,344.827586206897,4,1,1,60,1,1

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Esempio

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
Te lo metto a titolo di cronaca: i tuoi comboburst hanno 1 pixel di troppo in altezza.

[Maya's Beginner]
00:47:033 (1,1,2) - Fixata con uno slider singolo invece di quello a ripetizione (ma la lunghezza è quella). A gli altri 2 ho lasciato seguire la batteria

[Easy]
00:20:654 (3) - Sto seguendo la batteria, penso se ne accorgano (infatti ho usato i vati hitsound normal qui)
00:26:344 (2) - Uso uno slider singolo (è più semplice)
00:39:792 (2,3) - e 00:41:861 (1,2) - Finche non sto esagerando troppo dovrebbe andare bene
01:12:550 (2,3,4,1) - ^

[Normal]
01:25:999 (1,2) - In alcune parti ho sbagliato a farlo, appena li trovo li tolgo

[Niva's Hard]
Hard? Really?

[Haku no Okami]
Ho capito perché ti hanno detto che è una mappa da giocare con gli occhi.
Hai messo qualche jump random e un po' di overmap, ma niente di così eccessivo.
Unico appunto qui: 01:25:999 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Secondo me hai esagerato con i jump e 01:28:413 (5) - non si vede per niente.
Più che altro è giustificato dalla musica

S h i o n wrote:

From your M4M Queue:

[Maya's Beginner]
01:23:240 (1,2) - Big white tick contain no heavier beats, actually.

[Easy]
00:14:275 (1) - in play the don't overlap. I adjusted the pattern anyway
00:20:654 (3,4) - There's nothing akward in following drums, though
00:28:413 (2,3,4) - Neither in following the voice.
00:45:137 (1,1) - Garv-what? It's not small. The recovering time HAVE SENSE. IT WAS NOSENSE the other way. Still, the time suggested by the editor are exaggerated
01:21:171 (6) - NC'ed (5).
01:28:671 (5) - It is the other way probably ...

[Niva's Hard]
00:54:964 (6,7,1,2) - not overmapped

[Lily Petals]
to refer to Lilac

[Haku No Okami]
00:27:723 (4) - It's a separate vocal, so no stacking as it flow bad.
01:03:930 (9,1) - why?, I follow vocals for comboes O.O
01:06:344 (7) - Yes, they can be hidden in insanes.
01:09:275 (6,7,8) - why?

1. Nothing , I just want you ask someone to check your skin settings , I really can't check Skin because of my bad computer...

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:48:413 (4) - Hmm , I prefer to add a New Combo here , because of the music change , and this pattern is a bit long than others too
   2. 00:50:137 (1) - Shorten this slider by 1/2 , it means end this slider at 00:50:826 - It sounds a bit odd for now
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:13:240 (2) - There is no cymbal in the background music I think , remove it plz
   2. 01:26:688 (3) - New Combo here because of Combo Length?

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:11:516 (6,1) - Switch New Combo place , like 00:05:999 (1) - ?
   2. 00:12:033 (1,2) - Apparent spacing issue :3
   3. 00:50:482 (2,3) - I prefer to make this spacing the same with other pattern
   4. 01:15:826 (1) - I know you put New Combo to follow the vocal , but I still suggest you remove this New Combo
   5. 01:27:895 (4,5) - I highly suggested you that make this pattern easier , circle (5) on blue tick must deceived many players!! try my pattern :
      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Nice

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:08:413 (5) - This cover is a bit over in my opinion
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Okay

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:13:844 (6) - Delete this circle ? sounds better in my opinion
   2. 01:17:550 (6,7,1) - You know what I want to say I think
   3. 01:22:378 (6) - Highly suggest to add a New Combo here , This SV change is too sudden , really !!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Good !

1. You should disable video in taikos
2. You must fix sizes of these skin elements:
   

1. 00:00:481 (1) - I'd move this slider some grid left to center it prefectly on the grid, moving 00:03:240 (1) too. I mean:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   310,191,481,2,0,B|362:111|318:39|258:27|198:39|154:111|206:191,1,360,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   264,296,3240,6,0,B|196:324|144:280,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:14:964 (2) - You should remove this finish to keep consistency with previous patterns and also because it sounds too loud. You didn't use it on 00:03:844 / 00:09:447 / 00:19:447 and 00:20:482.
3. 00:21:171 (2) - This slider touches HP bar. You need to move it some grid down or else where
4. 00:22:550 (1) - Add finish to match that clash in the cymbals. It sounds pretty nice
5. 00:29:964 (3) - You are missing whistle on this slider's tail. You know, to keep consistency with 00:25:309
6. 00:38:413 (1,2) - Switch new combo here. The vocal is still going and the new vocal section starts on the next slider: 00:39:102 (2)
7. 00:44:275 (2) - What about to add finish on this slider's head? Because I can hear cymbals in the song on that tick, same for 00:46:688 (3). Actually it looks too loud, so I'd also suggest you to reduce those finishes volume till 45%
8. 00:49:275 (2) - I'd avoid this short sliders in the easiest diff. I would extend it by 1/1
9. 01:17:550 (1) - Reducing this spinner by 1/1 would fit this vocal part best
10. 01:23:240 (1) - Finish on the slider's head

1. 00:09:447 (2) - This slider touches HP bar. Move it some grid down
2. 00:11:516 (1) - To keep consistency with previous part you should reduce this slider by 1/2
3. 00:16:171 (4,5) - Unstack them or replace them with 1/1 slider, pls.
4. 00:20:654 (3) - Listening the music this slider should start 1/2 earlier. According to this you need to add a circle on 00:21:171.
5. 00:26:344 (2) - You are using this huge HP bar.. Then, same of 00:09:447 (2) :\
6. 00:41:861 (1) - I understood that you are mapping this easy following mainly vocal sound. Well, you should remove this circle then, it just makes confusion to novice players since this is an easy. But, honestly, this part still doesn't convince me. I think that rhythm like this would fit better with vocal rhythm: http://puu.sh/1FuCS
7. 00:50:137 (1) - I guess you forgot to add finish here
8. 01:15:826 (1,2) - Switch new combo
9. 01:19:275 (4) - Mh.. make this slider symmetrical (actually it isn't. You can see it in test play mode) :
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   208,348,79275,2,0,B|260:356|296:316|296:316|328:324|328:324|328:288|328:288|380:252|368:180,1,280,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. I'd reduce OD by 1 tick.
2. 00:03:930 (2,3) - You should add whistle on (2)'s head and on (3)'s head (maybe removing it from tail if you don't like how 2 whistles sound on that short slider)
3. 00:07:206 (4) - Missing whistle. You added it on 00:01:688 then to keep consistency.
4. 00:11:171 (1,2) - You need to switch new combo here because new rhythm section is starting on 00:11:516. According to this adding new combo on 00:11:688 would be more logical.
5. 00:22:206 (1) - Forgot finish on slider's tail, add it to emphasize cymbals
6. 00:29:964 (6) - The map being a normal is already enough hard IMO. I would remove this circle. The rhythm would be easier and more enjoyable to play for a normal diff
7. 00:33:240 (1,2) - Still here you need to switch new combo. New vocal section is starting on that downbeat
8. 00:56:344 (1,2) - ^
9. 01:13:930 (4,1,2,3) - Why so hard >.< What about: http://puu.sh/1FuM0

1. 00:05:137 (2) - I think finishes would fit better than whistles since you used finishes on the previous sliders
2. 00:13:757 (6) - You must set N hitsound settings for that clap
3. 00:18:757 (7) - There should be a N clap on this slider head
4. 00:19:447 (9) - You know, same of 00:13:757 (6) about N set
5. 00:45:654 (3) - This is almost off screen ._. Move it some grid up.
6. 00:58:240 (7) - This circle touches HP bar. Still because of that huge bar ç_ç Move it else where
7. 01:15:482 (2) - Still HP bar .w. Same for 01:23:240 (1) and 01:26:688 (3,4) orz

1. 00:13:413 (2) - Move to x:256 y:272 to make a consistent jump/spacing together with 00:13:240 (1,3,4,5)
2. 00:25:999 (3) - x:256 y:156 for the same reason
3. 00:51:861 (5,6) - Why this anti-jump?
4. 01:14:964 (4) - New combo?

1. 00:02:033 (4) - 0.50x timing like you did for 00:07:550 (4)
2. 00:31:344 (2,3) - Still HP bar :\ Move them some grid down
3. 01:03:930 (3) - ^
4. 01:22:378 (6) - This sudden 0.50x is pretty confusing. You need to remove it to keep consistency with first part.

Do not make any essential gameplay elements larger than template skin dimensions (especially for combobursts). Larger elements may effect gameplay performance, and thus should be avoided. However, any elements that do not directly effect gameplay (e.g. pause-back, play-skip, etc.) may be slightly larger if a legitimate reason is given.

Chewin wrote:

Hi. Come promesso.

~Maya's Beginner~

1. 00:38:413 (1,2) - A me sembra che il il verso inizi qui ( "to change(1) after wha~(2)" )
2. 00:49:275 (2) - Sto seguendo la batteria ( o meglio, sta seguendo la batteria ) ( la guest mapper ha lasciato osu!)
3. 01:17:550 (1) - Reducing this spinner by 1/1 would fit this vocal part best
4. 01:23:240 (1) - Finish on the slider's head

~Easy~

1. 00:11:516 (1) - Sto seguendo la batteria maggiormente
2. 00:16:171 (4,5) - Ha un buon flow, inoltre ho stackato solo alcuni 1/1 (invece di stackare ad 1/2)
3. 00:20:654 (3) - Se stessi seguendo la chitarra, avevi ragione, ma qui seguo la batteria. Se seguissi la chitarra ci sarebbero più note.
4. 01:15:826 (1,2) - Oltre a motivi di simmetria e pattern, qui seguo il cambio tra Yumi e Shihoko

~Normal~

1. 00:29:964 (6) - Qui seguo molto di più la voce ma, essendo che molti potrebbero pensare stia seguendo la batteria non posso cancellare il (5). Inoltre giustifica l'utilizzo del blue tick dopo, senza sembrerebbe strano.
2. 01:13:930 (4,1,2,3) - Il flow è migliore di molto al momento. Oltre a ripetere il pattern di 1/2.

~Niva's Hard~

1. 00:05:137 (2) - L'ha fatto per il modo in cui ha ripetuto 00:03:240 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1).
2. 00:13:757 (6) - Ancora la parte Normal non è iniziata in questo caso
3. 00:18:757 (7) - ^
4. 00:19:447 (9) - ^
5. 01:15:482 (2) - (questo sarebbe stato sotto l'HP Bar comunque)

~Haku No Okami~

1. 00:02:033 (4) - Ho fatto al contrario.
2. 01:03:930 (3) - micrometrica ._.
3. 01:22:378 (6) - nope.avi , la chitarra, la chitarra, oppovera chitarra che nessuno sente.

Chewin wrote:

Hi. Come promesso.

~Lily Petals~

1. 00:25:999 (3) - quel salto ci può stare, penso l'intonazione aumenti di due note
2. 00:51:861 (5,6) - è lo spacing normale (guarda dopo)

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Haku No Ogami]
00:32:723 (8,1) - changed the pattern with a better flowing one
00:43:757 (3) - Ctrl+G'ed (4) and used a stream following a certain instrument I'm not remembering the name >.<
01:22:378 (6) - a NC here don't feel so good and I directly dropped symmetry
01:26:516 (1) - 01:27:206 (1) - fixed the patterns and using jumps in 01:25:999 (1,2,3) - 01:26:516 (1,2,3) - and 01:27:206 (1,2,3,4) - too (normal spacing or stack in between)
same thing.