Sea of Dreams
00:21:035 (4,5) - I think it would look aesthetically better if these notes we're blanketed with 00:21:598 (1)
00:40:348 (4,5,6,7) - These jumps seem a bit too big for this slower part of the song. Decrease the DS a bit
00:47:098 (1,2,3,4) - Why change the DS here? I suggest making the DS between these sliders the same as 00:45:598 (1,2,3) to keep a somewhat consistent pattern
00:48:973 (2,3) - These bigger jumps don't quite make sense in this slow part. Try bringing 2 and 3 closer together
00:52:160 (2,3) - Blanket these with 1?
01:19:348 (1) - Why is this slider shape way differently than the others
01:56:473 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is a bit awkward as the DS decreases. Try increasing it a bit
02:03:973 (2) - Blanket?
02:11:660 (3,4,5) - 4 should be closer to 3 since rhythmically, the notes are closer together, and 5 should be farther away from 4 since rhythmically, the notes are farther away
02:45:035 (6) - I think a slider would be more fitting. The space in between these notes seems very empty
03:18:223 (6) - I think this slider is snapped incorrectly. It should be 1/4, not 1/6
03:30:598 (1,2,3,4) - You seem to change the pattern between here and 03:32:098 (1,2,3,4) by switching from sliders to circles, making this part inconsistent.
04:28:723 (2,3) - I suggest that these notes should be their own combo. The gap between 1 an 2 is too big and the continuation of the combo is kinda awkward
Hope this helps! ^3^
00:21:035 (4,5) - I think it would look aesthetically better if these notes we're blanketed with 00:21:598 (1)
00:40:348 (4,5,6,7) - These jumps seem a bit too big for this slower part of the song. Decrease the DS a bit
00:47:098 (1,2,3,4) - Why change the DS here? I suggest making the DS between these sliders the same as 00:45:598 (1,2,3) to keep a somewhat consistent pattern
00:48:973 (2,3) - These bigger jumps don't quite make sense in this slow part. Try bringing 2 and 3 closer together
00:52:160 (2,3) - Blanket these with 1?
01:19:348 (1) - Why is this slider shape way differently than the others
01:56:473 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is a bit awkward as the DS decreases. Try increasing it a bit
02:03:973 (2) - Blanket?
02:11:660 (3,4,5) - 4 should be closer to 3 since rhythmically, the notes are closer together, and 5 should be farther away from 4 since rhythmically, the notes are farther away
02:45:035 (6) - I think a slider would be more fitting. The space in between these notes seems very empty
03:18:223 (6) - I think this slider is snapped incorrectly. It should be 1/4, not 1/6
03:30:598 (1,2,3,4) - You seem to change the pattern between here and 03:32:098 (1,2,3,4) by switching from sliders to circles, making this part inconsistent.
04:28:723 (2,3) - I suggest that these notes should be their own combo. The gap between 1 an 2 is too big and the continuation of the combo is kinda awkward
Hope this helps! ^3^