ykcarrot wrote:

[swish's Normal]
00:41:643 (4) - I suggest extend its length to 00:42:931 and add finish at the end of slider
01:52:134 (x) - add note with finish?
02:38:330 (1) - this slider really doesn't fit at music
02:41:275 (4) - ^
02:42:747 (5) - ^
03:09:987 (3) - end at 03:10:171 and add finish at the end of slider
03:33:729 (1) - doesn't fit at music

All fixed~

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there hi>_<

[General]
- Delete useless file "ELISA - (S o r d a).osb" and full submit.
Fixed

[Collab]
00:55:631 (5) - new combo
00:56:735 (8,9,10) - weird spacing
01:17:349 (1) - remove new combo
01:18:453 (6) - new combo
03:40:723 (1,2,3) - Jumps?
01:27:287 (x) - add a note with finish?
01:43:484 (7) - new combo
01:46:612 (1) - remove new combo
01:47:901 (4) - new combo
01:50:662 (1) - start from 01:50:846

All Fixed
thx mod yk~>w<


Good luck. thx~

lkp wrote:

swish's Normal
*01:42:563 (4,5) - I suggest you change this partten or sound set,since this diff is Normal
*01:46:981 (4,5) - Same^
01:50:293 (x) - Fit the singer,may be you should add note here?
02:41:275 (5) - New combo? Fixed
*03:35:017 (3,4) - I suggest you should follow the sound of the 03:33:729 (1,2),if you move the (4) in 03:35:201 and add a note in 03:36:502,sound would be better.
*03:36:490 (6) - Same^

spec.C
***No kiai?? yep>_< Not Fixed

funny<3

Collab
03:36:490 (6) - Spacing,too far.
03:36:490 (6) - ^
00:53:790 (6) - New combo?Fix the spacing.
00:55:263 (3) - ^
All Fixed
I see this map have Shinxyn jumps

Nice

Apricot wrote:

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Krisom wrote:

General-
· I'd remove the kiai from 03:16:244 - to 03:27:839 - , and make it start at 03:27:839. This is to add emphasis to that point (and also because it doesnt makes much sense to add a kiai on a slow and soft section of a song) hmm,okey fix
· You have a thumbs.db in the lyrics folder. You might want to delete it and fullsubmit.Maybe Fixed Deleted

Collab-
(On green, Sorda's parts. On blue, rorry's parts. On orange, goww's parts)
00:02:993 (5,6,7) - Feels very artificial for such a slow part on the music. Might want to delete the 1/4 note.Changed slider
00:09:250 (1) - Same as avobe, Why don't you use a long slider?Fixed
00:15:324 (1,2) - Expected a jump here.Add jump?
03:42:747 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The overlapping here (and the timing of the stream pause) feels odd, might Changed maybe fix

Krisom wrote:

Spec.C-
Sliders feel liveless, maybe use tickrate 2? not mandatory at all though.
Spec.C's what? It's not a big issue, but add the difficulty level to the name?
Add the kiai like in the other diffs if possible.
01:25:815 (1) - Either make this end at 01:27:287 - or add a circle there. The beat fits perfectly!
03:42:747 (1) - Either make this end at 03:44:220 - or add a circle there. The beat fits perfectly!
Good map!

Krisom wrote:

swish's Normal-
00:03:361 (3) - Remove the finish at the end (it doesn't fits at all) fixed
00:06:674 (7) - ^ ^
00:11:827 (4) - Remove the finish ^
00:12:563 (6) - Remove the finsih at the start ^
00:15:324 (1,2) - Delete 2 and make (1) look like this? If you do this, you can add finishes at every repeat of (1) and it'll sound very cool. ^
01:12:195 (4,5) - This spacing is def. not right for a normal (or any diff), fix it please. ^
02:46:428 - Delay this break and make it start at 02:46:796 - ?
03:40:539 (1,2) - Ugh,I strongly advise you against using this pattern. On for a normal it might be hard to tell when will the repeat end, and that (2) is hinting that it's just 1 repeat (when it's actually 2) fixed

Joshua Lost wrote:

Graz~