General-
· I'd remove the kiai from 03:16:244 - to 03:27:839 - , and make it start at 03:27:839. This is to add emphasis to that point (and also because it doesnt makes much sense to add a kiai on a slow and soft section of a song)
· You have a thumbs.db in the lyrics folder. You might want to delete it and fullsubmit.
· Asked around for some opinions, you'll either have to make the white pulses softer or add an epilepsy warning· Name's glows on the SB are all cut, fix that image and fullsubmit!swish's Normal-
00:03:361 (3) - Remove the finish at the end (it doesn't fits at all)
00:06:674 (7) - ^
00:11:827 (4) - Remove the finish
00:12:563 (6) - Remove the finsih at the start
00:15:324 (1,2) - Delete 2 and make (1) look
like this? If you do this, you can add finishes at every repeat of (1) and it'll sound very cool.
01:12:195 (4,5) - This spacing is def. not right for a normal (or any diff), fix it please.02:46:428 - Delay this break and make it start at 02:46:796 - ?
03:40:539 (1,2) - Ugh,I strongly advise you against using this pattern. On for a normal it might be hard to tell when will the repeat end, and that (2) is hinting that it's just 1 repeat (when it's actually 2)
Spec.C-
Sliders feel liveless, maybe use tickrate 2? not mandatory at all though.
Spec.C's what? It's not a big issue, but add the difficulty level to the name?
Add the kiai like in the other diffs if possible.
01:25:815 (1) - Either make this end at 01:27:287 - or add a circle there. The beat fits perfectly!
03:42:747 (1) - Either make this end at 03:44:220 - or add a circle there. The beat fits perfectly!
Good map!
Collab-
(On green, Sorda's parts. On blue, rorry's parts. On orange, goww's parts)
00:02:993 (5,6,7) - Feels very artificial for such a slow part on the music. Might want to delete the 1/4 note.
00:09:250 (1) - Same as avobe, Why don't you use a long slider?
00:15:324 (1,2) - Expected a jump here.
01:13:115 (6,7,1) - I'd move (1) further away. (I actually would make it a part of the previous jumpy pattern, removing the new combo, seems to fit the music better that way)
01:25:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Add timing sections here to make the volume increase with the music? That'd make this sound cooler imo.
02:26:919 (8,9) - Caught me off guard, you might want to make this a repeat slider OR just 3 notes?
02:46:428 - Delay this break and make it start at 02:46:796 - ?
03:42:747 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The overlapping here (and the timing of the stream pause) feels odd, might want to play with the pattern to make it more intuitive.
Rorry's parts were awesome!
Popped over bolded stuff, but the rest of the modpost is still as useful