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ELISA - Wonder Wind

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Krisom wrote:

General-
· I'd remove the kiai from 03:16:244 - to 03:27:839 - , and make it start at 03:27:839. This is to add emphasis to that point (and also because it doesnt makes much sense to add a kiai on a slow and soft section of a song) hmm,okey fix
· You have a thumbs.db in the lyrics folder. You might want to delete it and fullsubmit.Maybe Fixed Deleted

Collab-
(On green, Sorda's parts. On blue, rorry's parts. On orange, goww's parts)
00:02:993 (5,6,7) - Feels very artificial for such a slow part on the music. Might want to delete the 1/4 note.Changed slider
00:09:250 (1) - Same as avobe, Why don't you use a long slider?Fixed
00:15:324 (1,2) - Expected a jump here.Add jump?
03:42:747 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The overlapping here (and the timing of the stream pause) feels odd, might Changed maybe fix
thanks mod Krisom~

Edit:02:46:428 - Delay this break and make it start at 02:46:796 - ?
Break Time not fixed

Edit2:SB Name Plate changed Please ReDownload
added Warning and added AudioLeadIn- 2500
Rorry
ccbp

Krisom wrote:

Spec.C-
Sliders feel liveless, maybe use tickrate 2? not mandatory at all though.
Spec.C's what? It's not a big issue, but add the difficulty level to the name?
Add the kiai like in the other diffs if possible.
01:25:815 (1) - Either make this end at 01:27:287 - or add a circle there. The beat fits perfectly!
03:42:747 (1) - Either make this end at 03:44:220 - or add a circle there. The beat fits perfectly!
Good map!
Sliders are fine, after finished the map I feel that the velocity is a bit of high though.
Spec.C = Type.C
Kiai is bad for eyes, so I don't like it.
Your spinner ending point is fine, but mine is fine as well.
swish

Krisom wrote:

swish's Normal-
00:03:361 (3) - Remove the finish at the end (it doesn't fits at all) fixed
00:06:674 (7) - ^ ^
00:11:827 (4) - Remove the finish ^
00:12:563 (6) - Remove the finsih at the start ^
00:15:324 (1,2) - Delete 2 and make (1) look like this? If you do this, you can add finishes at every repeat of (1) and it'll sound very cool. ^
01:12:195 (4,5) - This spacing is def. not right for a normal (or any diff), fix it please. ^
02:46:428 - Delay this break and make it start at 02:46:796 - ?
03:40:539 (1,2) - Ugh,I strongly advise you against using this pattern. On for a normal it might be hard to tell when will the repeat end, and that (2) is hinting that it's just 1 repeat (when it's actually 2) fixed
thx mod Krisom~ :)

Download: ELISA - Wonder Wind (S o r d a) [swish's Normal].osu
PSPDS Eddie
;)
Topic Starter
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>>swish,Rorry
Update~

>>PSPDS Eddie
thanks star :3
Krisom
Collab-
00:44:220 - This timing section is way too soft, make it at least 40% volume
01:53:422 - ^

That'd be all! Let me know when you're ready to go and I'll come here and bubble. The new SB names look awesome btw.

hello there bubble
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>>Krisom
thanks bubbleヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛
-Moccha_chii-
:D
YuZuKi Kenny
It is good.

But why not Rank?
Ruria_old
ranked最後の追い上げえええ 8-)
minyeob
Ok then Ranked~
RainForce
Awesome map.
Awesome song.
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>>miny
thanks Ranked>~</
>>RainForce
thank you~~
JoJo
Graz~ 8-)
kanpakyin

Joshua Lost wrote:

Graz~ 8-)
Jau
Yay was looking for this song a month ago, now someone made it =D
FutakiKanata
おめ!!!!

みんな仕事早すぎww
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>>Joshua,KPY
thankssss~
>>rawrjau
DD:
>>Kanata
ありがとうー!
Nymph
I love this song and map~ good job~
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>>Nymph_
thanks>~</
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