Sonnyc wrote:

Easy.
-- I'd like you to highly consider setting approach rate 2. 3 is too high compared to your wide spacings, and requires too much reaction level for beginners imo. ok!
00:48:125 (3) - No. Why no?

Normal.
00:46:956 - Sampleset-normal missing. oki
00:14:229 (1) - 01:10:333 (3) - Check if you want some consistent combo setting. well, i didn't color hax at all

Hard.
00:58:645 - Sampleset-normal missing. oki
00:41:307 (2) - Imo the spaced that got larger relying on the symmetry could be more balanced with other spacings. A change from a followpoint lean back spacing (1.7x) to a followpoint lean front spacing (2.2x) felt too much. i decreased it. however, a slight stress remains because of the vocals.
00:14:229 (1) - 01:10:333 (3) - Check if you want some consistent combo setting. as aove
01:04:878 (3,4) - 01:06:437 (3,4) - Other 1/4 spacings seem to be around 0.6x. Mind increasing for consistency? yea

Insane.
00:04:099 (1) - Seeming from your combo cycle, this feels inconsistent to be added. yeaaaa
01:03:320 (5) - Add a new combo since most combos in the kiai feels short. yeaaaa

Extra.
00:04:781 (8,1) - 00:05:171 (2,3) - 00:11:015 (8,1) - I see most 1/4 usage to be around 0.4x. I hope these to be consistent with that.
00:04:099 (5) - 00:05:658 (5) - 00:08:774 (5) - 00:10:333 (5) - 00:11:891 (5) - I strongly recommend adding new combo according to other diffs. Or if you want that combo setting, you can at least remove 00:02:541 (1) for consistency.
00:32:054 (1,2,3) - The rhythms here didn't felt to be reflecting the song properly. A major drum beat appears starting 00:32:443, but the pattern changed at 00:32:151 already. Making the rhythm like 00:31:664 (1,2,1) would've reflected the drum beats better than now.
00:51:047 (4,5,6) - The beats are pretty consistent enough. Having such inconsistent spacing felt highly inappropriate.

Extreme.
00:13:839 (3,4,5) - The flow is super werid. It formed a redundant cursor movement that isn't really supported by the music. A ctrl+G form of (4,5) would be much more smoother than this.
00:29:813 (1) - Is this single combo really necessary? no
01:01:762 (1) - Mind dividing into a circle and a 1/4 slider to fit the vocals better?
01:09:261 (4,5,1) - I hope a lot more spacing was placed between (5,1). The rhythms are clearly different as 1/2 and 1/4, but it isn't expressed in the spacing design which can cause confusion.

Ultra.
00:02:930 (3,4,5,6) - (Not a mod) This kind of a zigzag was quite a noticable pattern and this only appearing once while there was a similar music part didn't felt really nice in structures.
00:28:255 - 00:31:372 - 00:32:833 (8) - 00:34:489 - 00:36:437 - 00:46:956 - Normal-sampleset missing.
01:00:495 (1) - Having a note here really weakened the drum emphasis of 01:00:593 (2,3,4,5) nor did it felt nice along the song. Removing this and reworking your patterns is highly recommended.

Dude!
-- Hope something can be done with the diff name? We talked about it, but cowabunga just looks weird to me. It's a form of expressing happyness, and in german it's actually written kawabunga, so both works imo!
I think I've got something to say in game.

Insane, Extra, Kawabunga contains an unsnapped sliderend. fixed

1. 00:29:813 (1) - How about you make the transition between notes less dramatic? I think something like *THIS* would work better for newer players.
2. 00:36:047 (3) - That would also work nicer if you placed it boldly on X256 or if you placed it on the very sliderhead of the first note of this combo.
3. 01:10:333 - Don't you think the very end of the map deserves a rather normal finish to emphasize how terminal the moment is? This suggestion would be applied in the whole set, obviously. >:3

1. Believe me but the pace of the sliders and the spacing is quite hard to read with only AR4.5, especially when the SB is put on. Could you, please, use plain AR5 setting or even AR5.3? ;3;

1. 00:26:891 (2) - Irru o3o, my blonde friend >3<, why don't you make this slider 1/4 so it actually stresses the sounds in the whole music? Now it's only about the rather less important sounds like the simplified percussion samples when the vocal is the main instrument now. It is not favourable during the gameplay and it will troll people, especially when the sliders go sooo slowly after rather faster sliders in the previous timing section. ;3; Same goes to 00:33:125 (2) -
2. 00:59:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Believe me, this is too cancerous to read with spacing like this after such a regular Normal like in this set and with only AR7.5. I am more than sure you can provide a benefitial constructions like here: 01:07:216 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - as they are readable and fun to play and readable and non-cancerous at all. :3

1. 01:01:762 (1) - You simply couldn't make it less noticeable, could you?
2. 00:57:476 (3,4) - Actually, same as above.

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

Totally accurate eng sub

quaternary wrote:

Here are some thoughts I had on the highest difficulty. Not a mod, just things I felt while playing

00:57:865 (1,2,3,4) - The two purple sliders right after it have way less spacing, but the song intensity is the same imo, it's kind of weird I am aware of that, but unfortunately I don't really know how to fix it at this point. I feel like I need to lower down the intensity slightly by the two sliders, so the player can speed up again 00:58:644 (1,2,3) - . I need to keep 00:58:644 (1,2,3) - circles, because the intensity is way higher. If you can come up with a valid suggestion, then I might reconsider it. I just found a solution which increased the spacing, but i will keep the sliders.

00:59:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - WAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY too fuckin big lmao, especially when 01:00:106 (6,1,2) - is pretty much the exact same pattern in the music but it's mapped a lot smaller I think the spacing is fine considering how intense the song is. I increased the spacing of the sliders however.

01:00:788 (2,1) - Mmmmm this kinda plays antijump-y, that might just be my preference though. Good catch though, fixed.

01:02:541 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Not sure about this pattern, maybe some kind of hanzer stream would work better, or sliders. It just seems weird to suddenly pull a Beach Side Bunny here when the music only kind of supports such a high intensity pattern, and when a similar (arguably higher intensity) pattern in the music (the beginning of the kiai) was mapped a lot easier. Well, but the begin part didn't have vocals.

Krfawy wrote:

OMG I want to write my real important and comprehensive mod before it goes ranked so you can be helped by the real good modder and human being called Krfawy. L69L

Add Damnae to the tags. They contributed to the mapset with their amazing storyboard. Yea

EZ

1. 00:29:813 (1) - How about you make the transition between notes less dramatic? I think something like *THIS* would work better for newer players. no, tf is this XD
2. 00:36:047 (3) - That would also work nicer if you placed it boldly on X256 or if you placed it on the very sliderhead of the first note of this combo.
3. 01:10:333 - Don't you think the very end of the map deserves a rather normal finish to emphasize how terminal the moment is? This suggestion would be applied in the whole set, obviously. >:3 fixed both!

NM

1. Believe me but the pace of the sliders and the spacing is quite hard to read with only AR4.5, especially when the SB is put on. Could you, please, use plain AR5 setting or even AR5.3? ;3; Increased to 4.8

HD

1. 00:26:891 (2) - Irru o3o, my blonde friend >3<, why don't you make this slider 1/4 so it actually stresses the sounds in the whole music? Now it's only about the rather less important sounds like the simplified percussion samples when the vocal is the main instrument now. It is not favourable during the gameplay and it will troll people, especially when the sliders go sooo slowly after rather faster sliders in the previous timing section. ;3; Same goes to 00:33:125 (2) -
2. 00:59:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Believe me, this is too cancerous to read with spacing like this after such a regular Normal like in this set and with only AR7.5. I am more than sure you can provide a benefitial constructions like here: 01:07:216 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - as they are readable and fun to play and readable and non-cancerous at all. :3 yeah.. good concerns. fixed

KSHVRSBL MX

1. 01:01:762 (1) - You simply couldn't make it less noticeable, could you?
2. 00:57:476 (3,4) - Actually, same as above. XD fixed

BTW I would remove most of the highest difficulties as we rather need Cookiezi, rrtyui and Rafis in the QAT so they can actually moderate and nominate the set themselves. *Krfawy runs

LVU o3o

1. "麹町養蚕館" is a circle name. If you want to use it in Artist, You should use "Koujimachi Yousankan" in Romanised.
   or If you use "paraoka feat. haru*nya" , You should use "paraoka feat. haru*nya" in Romanised too.
   Both name are official, it's up to you.
   http://soundwing.com/review/doujincd/material.html
   http://curse-words.com/

1. How about setting Preview point to 00:54:262 - or 00:54:359 - ?

1. Approach Rate +1 or +0.5, Approach Rate 2 makes all objects appear less cramped.

1. 00:57:086 (3) - try to add a normal sound to slider repeat on Sampleset

1. 01:01:372 (2) - I feel it's too difficult for hard difficulty level, try to reduce spacing
2. 01:03:125 (4) - missing a normal sound on Sampleset

1. 00:28:255 (1) - missing a normal sound to slider head on Sampleset

1. 01:00:008 (1,2) - It's better to follow the vocal sound like your previous part 00:59:424 (1,2,3) - How about this?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:14:034 (4) - try to add a new combo for 1/4 jumps ? It would be better to reading.
2. 00:39:749 (2) - missing a whistle ? You added it around here 00:40:138 - ,00:40:528 -
3. 00:57:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This part is harded than Ultra diff, Please make another pattern

1. 01:00:982 (1,2,3,4,1) - I feel this part is not natural for flow, I prefet to make another jumps like your pattern at here 01:02:541 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -

alacat wrote:

[Metadata]

1. "麹町養蚕館" is a circle name. If you want to use it in Artist, You should use "Koujimachi Yousankan" in Romanised.
   or If you use "paraoka feat. haru*nya" , You should use "paraoka feat. haru*nya" in Romanised too.
   Both name are official, it's up to you.
   http://soundwing.com/review/doujincd/material.html
   http://curse-words.com/

Fixed, I decided for paraoka feat. haru*nya!

[General]

1. How about setting Preview point to 00:54:262 - or 00:54:359 - ?

[Easy]

1. Approach Rate +1 or +0.5, Approach Rate 2 makes all objects appear less cramped.

[Normal]

1. 00:57:086 (3) - try to add a normal sound to slider repeat on Sampleset

[Hard]

1. 01:01:372 (2) - I feel it's too difficult for hard difficulty level, try to reduce spacing
2. 01:03:125 (4) - missing a normal sound on Sampleset

[Kyversible's Insane]

1. 00:28:255 (1) - missing a normal sound to slider head on Sampleset

[Another]

1. 01:00:008 (1,2) - It's better to follow the vocal sound like your previous part 00:59:424 (1,2,3) - How about this?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Kyversible's Extra]

1. 00:14:034 (4) - try to add a new combo for 1/4 jumps ? It would be better to reading.
2. 00:39:749 (2) - missing a whistle ? You added it around here 00:40:138 - ,00:40:528 - Fixed all until here
3. 00:57:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This part is harded than Ultra diff, Please make another pattern Hmm, I feel like this is easier

[Kawabunga!]

1. 01:00:982 (1,2,3,4,1) - I feel this part is not natural for flow, I prefet to make another jumps like your pattern at here 01:02:541 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Hmm.. I don't know how this pattern can fit >_<

Ultra diff is good! Call me back~