1. Hard (4,65 stars, 454 notes)
2. Lunatic (4,98 stars, 562 notes)
3. Normal (2,84 stars, 237 notes)

Magicphoenix wrote:

first hoho~
mod coming soon =w= yeah, thanks for some suggestions on IRC. :D

Teta wrote:

Add "TH06 Beloved Tomboyish Daughter" to tags. if you insist this much...well, added.

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.

[Lunatic]
...Nice, imo a bit easy to be [Lunatic] though, even a bad player like me could FC with 98%+acc in first try >.> it wasn't supposed to be something really challenging, just so you know. :)
I think Circle size 5 is not as visually appealing as Circle size 4, but that's just personal. large circles? meh.
00:10:563 (5,6,7,8) - maybe make a back-and-forth pattern? yep
00:18:063 (8) - slider end is not perfectly hidden under 00:16:563 (3) yep, fixed
00:22:349 (8) - move to 00:22:242 ? it sounds better to me nah
01:08:206 (3,4,5) - imperfect triangle 0.0 fixed
01:10:563 (1) - not properly stacked fixed
01:37:671 - add a circle here connecting the streams? it sounds better and plays better imo not really u.u
...well just picking insignificant stuff /me runs nono, stuff like this is really significant :>

[Hard]
00:03:492 (6) - spacing yep, fixed
00:17:421 (5,6) - a bit out of place, when all other sliders are bezier, and the music doesn't provide a noticeable "turning point", which makes linear sliders better then bezier. nah, i think they're fine
03:32:849 (7) - new combo? yep

Map is quite good >.> Nothing much to say and star~ thank you :D/

swish wrote:

little things..
maybe.. Title: Snow Style i think i'll stay with katakana title since it's on the CD cover, unless some people might say that i really should change it u.u

storyboard:ab.png
きっと　少しずつ溶かせるように i think not...click. anyway, are you really sure about this? there might be some error on that cover too

good map~~ :) thank you, thanks for trying too~

karenying wrote:

I guess title is 'Snow Style' too
http://vgmdb.net/album/14633 oh, completely forgot about checking this album on vgmdb ._. so, i think i'll go with Snow Style. :)

ab.png
きっと　少しずつ溶かせるように
ad-0-0.png
恋を]教えてあげるわ
bc.png
頑張り過ぎたら　ここにおいで
df.png
全部で凍らせる

(not sure of all,lol) click, there you go. it's taken from the original cover o.o i've translated this to hiragana, readed it with the music...and it was good ._. really, no idea u.u

01:40:992 - 'cc-1-0.png' should at 01:39:278 - that here yuki sing '少し' ahh, right...i just made myself to put them like this just because they were splitted on the text, without reading it at all =w=
03:28:992 - ^ ^
sorry for my bad english&japanese i don't mind it :) thank you so much ></

Leorda wrote:

General
* Inside the subfolder, I found Thumbs.db, remove it http://puu.sh/1ynf deleted
* Some SB elements have an unnecessary transparent space ...you're not serious, are you? ._.
* Remove the countdown, since it's not appear fixed
* Offset : -1.428? nah, i think this one's fine

Normal
* There is 237 unsnapped notes in this diff fixed

00:22:564 (8) - Inconsistent spacing ...huh?
00:56:849 (1) - ^ ^
01:23:849 (4) - New combo nope, i like it the way it is
01:24:278 (1) - Remove new combo ^
02:16:778 (2) - Inconsistent spacing ...
02:46:135 (4) - New combo just like before
02:46:564 (1) - Remove new combo ^
02:54:706 (2) - Move to X:264 and Y:184 to make a nice flow(look upper-right beside "Insert Break Time"!) yeah, that works quite better

Hard
01:03:698 (3,4) - Ugly overlap yeah, overlap, but not ugly =w= it was placed on purpose
01:05:413 (6,7) - ^ ^
01:08:627 (4) - Inconsistent spacing no
01:13:555 (7) - New combo yep
01:13:770 (1) - Remove new combo ^
01:23:841 (7) - New combo no
02:27:698 (5,6) - Ugly overlap on purpose
02:46:127 (7) - New combo no

Lunatic
01:23:841 (7) - New combo nope
02:46:127 (7) - ^ nope

I'm sleepy~ you know, i kinda can see that =w= thanks for modding, though!

wmfchris wrote:

Add tag "baka9" added :D/

Agreed with Leorda, offset + 17ms aaalright.

[Lunatic]
00:16:341 (2) - stack with (7)? yeah
01:22:341 (5) - right a bit yup
01:43:984 (2,3,5,1) - (3) remove finish, (2,5), (1) beginning + finish? yeah, works a lot better
02:21:270 (7) - left a bit yep
02:51:698 (1,2,3) - It seems that o ooo pattern is better than ooo o? nah, i like it that way

[Hard]
00:01:770 (3) - about x:163, y:213 yep
00:17:198 (4) - down a bit (may 3 pixel? yeah

Just thought that though this is mapped without grid snapping, the spacing is still unstable ._. while mapping this, i was learning to map without it, so it's...KINDA unsnapped. =w=
try to snap them a bit? yeah, i've went through all the difficulties and snapped them where i could see it was needed to

thanks for modding!

Kurosanyan wrote:

Best mod ever

[General]

1. Just in case you forget: Remove game from tags and it's Beloved Tomboyish Girl, not daughter. yepyep
2. HpDrain shouldn't be the same on Normal and Hard. -1 for the Normal? sure
3. Offset 287, no needs to put a negative offset here :/ (The big white tick will still be the same and the offset is before the first note) oh, thanks for pointing that out

[Normal]

1. 00:05:430 (1,2) - Fix the spacing :< fixed :<
2. 00:22:573 (8,1) - ^ (but more nazi :3 ) ^
3. 00:50:644 (2,3) - ^ it's fine
4. 00:54:072 (2,3) - ^ fixed
5. 01:03:501 (5,1) - ^ ^
6. 01:36:287 (3,4) - ^ it's fine
7. 01:37:572 (5,1) - ^ ^
8. 01:41:001 (4,1) - ^ ^
9. 01:41:430 (1,2) - ^ fixed =w=
10. 01:45:715 (1,2) - ^ ^
11. 02:07:144 (3,4) - ^ it's fine
12. 02:12:287 (1,2) - ^^ ^^
13. 02:14:644 (4,1) - ^^^ fixed
14. 02:44:858 (3,4) - ^^^^ it's fine =w=
15. 02:46:573 (1,2) - ^^^^^ fixed
16. 03:21:287 (1,2) - ^^^^^^ ^^^^^^
17. 03:21:715 (2,3) - ^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^
18. 03:22:144 (3,4) - ^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^
19. 03:32:858 - Remove finish? no
20. 03:32:430 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's too much for the easier map Because AIMod said it! blame AIMod, it's fine, also i'm a hard-moment supporter

[Hard]

1. 01:44:215 (4,5,6) - Fix the spacing. Fixed the spacing.
2. 02:59:751 (9,10) - Fix the spacing. Fixed the spacing.
3. 03:33:930 (4,5,6) - Fix the spacing. Fixed the spacing.

[Lunatic]

1. 01:05:001 - Add a circle or I kill you. If you don't care about it then at least unstack the note, I'll just kill you gently then. No seriously, add a circle. oh, cool idea
2. 01:06:930 - You can add one here too if you want. To follow the previous pattern. nah, i think it's not really necessary at this point. :P
3. 02:39:287 (10,1) - This jump surprised me, but I think it's just me :|
4. 03:14:965 (6,10) - Totally looks like overmapping, those two notes shouldn't exist :( Listen carefully there's no real beat at those two points. yeah, i've just waited for someone to complain on it :P fixed
5. 03:28:680 (5,9) - Same here. Totally overmapped. Anyway what would be the point to make big streams while the 3 first minutes haven't got any? as i said before, i'm a hard-moment supporter. too bad most of the people are not orz

By the way I only nazi check the spacing of Easy and Normal diffs :3

Great map <3 Have a star~ thanks a lot <3

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]
Change the Audio Lead-In on every difficulty through the file .osu to 2000.

[Hard]
01:37:358 (9) - New combo.
01:38:001 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:59:644 (8) - New combo.
03:00:287 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:27:073 (7) - New combo.
03:27:715 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]
01:37:358 (9) - New combo.
01:38:001 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:59:644 (9) - New combo.
03:00:287 (1) - Remove new combo.

abalee wrote:

A hidden slider scorepoint? I thought it was an unranked element.

whymeman wrote:

Umm....

1.) Don't use invisible play field elements that you MUST clearly see on the map. This also includes slider ticks. Try to use a different tick rate that is still balanced with the map and your needs. Invisible slider ticks is going to freak people out and think there's s bug in the game when they miss something they cannot see.

2.) Don't wait to fix a serious problem that was pointed out when you have a bubble. There was times where maps waiting like this gets deranked later after just getting ranked with the know problem. Its better to just fix the issue now while you have the time.

Edit: Seeing as the issue is fixed now, i'll give you the bubble back.