Shiirn wrote:

mods for ranking, just consider them if they're not in red. if they're in red you -need- to fix before ranking

folder check OK

General
It's very hard to hear your notes since the song is so loud. Raise to 80-90%? the slider ticks are also inaudible as-is.
0% volume timing sections are not allowed as they now require .osu editting (unless this hasn't been fortified as a rule?)
// Whistle was annoyed on over 80% audio volume, so it was decreased.
02:25:698 - Mute slider tick is used only at this part. Because tick rate 2 doesn't fit at this part. Others are fine.
I have made Insane diff since Sep 2010. Setting 0% volume timing was possible in editor at that time.
By the way 0% never works as mute. So I think it's an insignificant problem.

easy
normal
hard
ok
insane
01:12:698 (10) - new combo? // nope
02:29:698 (1,18) - find some way to newcombo this? // Hmm, I set new comboing pattern to time length.
02:42:031 (2) - using crumpled nodes to change the speed of the slider is unrankable now iirc // Think about its shape. Feel the electric guitar! I really don't see why you thought it's an unrakable slider.
02:47:531 (10) - ^ also, these aren't using rednodes so they are clearly linear, but you can't use linear anymore without .osu editting... might just wanna change em // Making linear slider was possible when I started mapping Insane diff. If there is differece between linear and red dots, I'll fix. But they are same. Yeah, I'm lazy.
03:33:364 (5) - i fucking love you

taiko
>lepidon
i don't need to check it


epic map

James2250 wrote:

(Btw I can tell the future and this map will be approved by Garven)

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:48:698 (1) - Kind of iffy on how soon this is after a spinner for an easy. Perhaps a simpler rhythm like this? // Previous spinner is long enough, players can clear the spinner easily if they don't spin until the end of the spinner. Also next note isn't far from center. I think it's fine. // EDIT : OK, fixed appropriately. There is no spinner now.

01:06:864 (5) - End this at 01:08:198 - // Fixed
01:55:364 (1) - Same thing going on here as earlier
02:06:364 (2) - This flows better if h-flipped (of course, h-flip a bunch of the later stuff too if you do this) // Fixed
02:13:531 (5) - End this at 02:14:864 - // Fixed
03:10:031 (1) - Same as earlier
03:17:031 (3) - Poking into HP bar if you care // Fixed
03:28:198 (5) - End at 03:29:531 - // Fixed

[Normal]
Yeesh, I had to set stack leniency all the way down so that 00:03:031 (1,2,1) - wouldn't stack. Bleh. // I don't care. They are not ugly.
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 - // Fixed
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 - // ^
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 - // ^

[Hard]
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 - // ^
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 - // ^
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 - // ^

[Insane]
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 - // ^
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 - // ^
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 - // ^

Let me know what you think of these suggestions~

James2250 wrote:

(Btw I can tell the future and this map will be approved by Garven)