Lizbeth wrote:

Easy
00:45:364 (2) - This was hard to hit, maybe you can add slider from here: 00:44:364 to here: 00:45:364 // As you told, a slider will be fine. Fixed
01:52:031 (2) - same~

that's it, awesome map set <3<3

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
slider tick rate: 1 for the first 3 diffs plz. you muted the slidertick, and there's no speed change or nearly no speed change (only a 0.75x timing section in Hard), so the only thing slidertick to do is increase the score, but this is just stupid. especially for Hard, 16M 1-PC-FC score is not a good thing either. // I didn't use slidertick rate 2 for increasing score.

[Easy]
02:12:198 (3) - there is a drum voice in the music at about 02:12:781, 1/4 before the slider's end, so it sounds really weird when playing (it's a Easy anyway), could you try someway to rearrange this part? // I can't find drums in that blue tick.
02:58:864 (1) - sounds strange.
03:27:531 (3) - same problem with 02:12:198 (3)

[Normal]
02:58:864 (1) - i don't understand why you suddenly change beatplacements at this part (maily follow the vocal for the other part, but i could only conclude this part as "original") also the beat placements sounds not so good to me (i've noticed you use nearly the same beats in Hard but i'll keep my opinion) // It is hard to ignore bass drum sound in this part. So I didn't follow vocal.
03:19:531 - add a note to fit the drum?

[Hard]
01:38:031 (4) - stack with 6? // OK. Also I fixed 01:35:531 (4)
02:32:364 (1,2,3) - it's highly recommended not to stack these notes, also you could find some better placements for 4-8. this part is still "moving" // Fixed
02:47:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a little harsh in this hard? // Replaced by a spinner

[Insane]
01:11:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - would be cool i guess...? // Sorry, I hate overlapping.
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NatsumeRin wrote:

[Taiko]
00:15:364 (29,30) - k
00:30:031 (22) - k
01:22:031 (29,30) - k

Shiirn wrote:

mods for ranking, just consider them if they're not in red. if they're in red you -need- to fix before ranking

folder check OK

General
It's very hard to hear your notes since the song is so loud. Raise to 80-90%? the slider ticks are also inaudible as-is.
0% volume timing sections are not allowed as they now require .osu editting (unless this hasn't been fortified as a rule?)
// Whistle was annoyed on over 80% audio volume, so it was decreased.
02:25:698 - Mute slider tick is used only at this part. Because tick rate 2 doesn't fit at this part. Others are fine.
I have made Insane diff since Sep 2010. Setting 0% volume timing was possible in editor at that time.
By the way 0% never works as mute. So I think it's an insignificant problem.

easy
normal
hard
ok
insane
01:12:698 (10) - new combo? // nope
02:29:698 (1,18) - find some way to newcombo this? // Hmm, I set new comboing pattern to time length.
02:42:031 (2) - using crumpled nodes to change the speed of the slider is unrankable now iirc // Think about its shape. Feel the electric guitar! I really don't see why you thought it's an unrakable slider.
02:47:531 (10) - ^ also, these aren't using rednodes so they are clearly linear, but you can't use linear anymore without .osu editting... might just wanna change em // Making linear slider was possible when I started mapping Insane diff. If there is differece between linear and red dots, I'll fix. But they are same. Yeah, I'm lazy.
03:33:364 (5) - i fucking love you

taiko
>lepidon
i don't need to check it


epic map

James2250 wrote:

(Btw I can tell the future and this map will be approved by Garven)

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:48:698 (1) - Kind of iffy on how soon this is after a spinner for an easy. Perhaps a simpler rhythm like this? // Previous spinner is long enough, players can clear the spinner easily if they don't spin until the end of the spinner. Also next note isn't far from center. I think it's fine. // EDIT : OK, fixed appropriately. There is no spinner now.

01:06:864 (5) - End this at 01:08:198 - // Fixed
01:55:364 (1) - Same thing going on here as earlier
02:06:364 (2) - This flows better if h-flipped (of course, h-flip a bunch of the later stuff too if you do this) // Fixed
02:13:531 (5) - End this at 02:14:864 - // Fixed
03:10:031 (1) - Same as earlier
03:17:031 (3) - Poking into HP bar if you care // Fixed
03:28:198 (5) - End at 03:29:531 - // Fixed

[Normal]
Yeesh, I had to set stack leniency all the way down so that 00:03:031 (1,2,1) - wouldn't stack. Bleh. // I don't care. They are not ugly.
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 - // Fixed
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 - // ^
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 - // ^

[Hard]
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 - // ^
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 - // ^
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 - // ^

[Insane]
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 - // ^
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 - // ^
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 - // ^

Let me know what you think of these suggestions~

James2250 wrote:

(Btw I can tell the future and this map will be approved by Garven)