testplay

1. osz file size:
   this map seems don't have storyboard. then, try to keep osz files under 10MB.
   

   Ranking Criteria Guidelines wrote:

   Try to keep osz files under 10MB, or 30MB if you include a video/storyboard. Videos and storyboards can generally be decreased in size by lowering the quality of the video or trimming/resizing storyboard elements.

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2. Unused hitsounds:
   normal-sliderslide2.wav
   normal-sliderslide3.wav
   normal-slidertick2.wav
   normal-slidertick3.wav
   please check the hitsounds

1. 00:56:093 (1,2) - 01:05:324 (3,4) - 01:07:302 (2,3,4) - and many more... please remove whistle of slider body. I think it's mistake hitsounding. seriously not fit at all and quite weird IMO. but... It's your own map so up to you.
2. 01:25:104 - ~ 01:27:412 - questionable rhythm. I really don't recommend current rhythm. especially 01:25:763 (2) - I don't know what you want for this slider. it's unreasonable and should be fix I guess. you can try it enough
3. 01:36:972 (3) - x251 y320 for more good flow.
4. 02:08:621 (2,3) - seems messy. I'm not good at English so I can't explanation well. so... I hope that you can understand this picture...
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:17:851 (1) - 02:19:170 (3) - this isn't good overlap. I recommend replace them. (ofc avoid overlap)
6. 02:31:038 (1) - x121 y102 for good flow. (don't forget 02:32:357 (2) - distance snap)
   It would be better if you applied all mods, I guess.

1. 00:43:566 (2) - current flow seems a little bit off. try to more natural flow like
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:58:071 (5,6) - I recommend change to slider or consistency with 01:07:961 (3,4,5,6) - . seems linear and four singletap(?) It's obviously hard to new players.
3. 01:19:665 (5) - I think stacking is not good way in easier difficulties.
4. 02:25:434 (6,1) - same as above
5. 01:22:302 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - too many circles xd can you change to sliders?
6. 02:11:258 (4) - 02:11:917 (5) - Earnestly IT'S DANGEROUS. don't use 3 reverse slider in easier difficulties please.

1. 00:37:137 (3,4,5,6,1) - linear(?) pattern seems really hard to play. I recommend angled pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6083023
2. 00:40:187 (4) - same distance please
3. 01:42:082 (3) - seems using 1.3x snap but It's 1.4x (very off)
4. 01:43:236 (4) - I recommend https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6083045 this. current one also.... fine. but not neat tho
5. 02:34:994 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think... inapposite in Hard diff. seems really charge and hard to play. can you change it? (mix slider) I really hope so
6. 02:35:983 (1) - um... change to 1/2? why using 1/4 slider lol
7. 02:44:720 (2,3) - 02:47:357 (2) - 02:49:994 (2) - 02:51:313 (2) - It'll be important issue. the reason is really simple. cuz inconsistency with distance of other parts. (01:25:599 (2) - etc)

1. 00:40:269 (1) - okay it's not easier diff but... stack isn't good way I guess xd maybe https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6049281
2. 00:50:736 (5,1) - plz check same things too!
3. 00:46:862 (1) - why using 1/4 reverse slider? 00:46:945 - I can't hear any sound at here. It can be different in some cases like 00:48:016 (10,11,1) -
4. 01:25:104 (1) - head finish
5. 01:35:654 (1) - same
6. 02:15:214 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 02:20:489 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Both of these should be hitsounded in the same way.
7. 02:41:588 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - remove finish.... quite weird
8. 02:46:862 (1) - finish
9. 03:09:774 (4,5,6,7,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - uadhadhaudhusdhu I want to tell some another way. since current one seems really not good. but.... I think I like it(?) you should ask about it to someone else.
10. 03:39:025 (1) - nice dude

Lavender wrote:

随便看看, 几亿年没摸图, 要生锈了我靠爷爷来了，先跪一个
[Aoi]

1. 00:26:320 (1) - 你在前面用的都是0.75x, 这里为了拉这个滑条改成了1.64x, 让人打起来很违和. 这里比较普遍的做法是用一个比前面sv低的减速滑条, 个人认为这里形状没必要强求 ......有道理，换成了0.6
2. 01:02:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里两个两个一组NC比较好, 就像你01:19:829 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 做的一样ok
3. 01:22:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 个人感觉这里的音效比较软, 不过不是什么大问题, 可以忽略可能本身hitsound就比较软，这里音量整体上调了10%
4. 01:24:444 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里是确定无疑的snare, 应该加clap而不是whistle......改了，特地去查了下什么是snare
5. 01:56:752 (1) - 这里应该是finish较好ok
6. 01:59:390 (1,2,3,4) - 变sv最好nc, 不然被搞事......好
7. 02:36:148 (8) - 听听原曲, 这里是没有鼓的, 建议删去ok
8. 02:41:588 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这个音效有点吵, 听原曲, 镲音是泛音, 而kick才是有节奏感的主音, 这里下whistle较好, 如果你不愿意改的话, 最好也能将这里的音量调低一点换成whistle了
9. 03:01:038 (5,6,7) - 这个三连有点莫名了, 曲子里并没有这样的三连音, 况且这里忽然出现一个这种音效的三连很听起来很突兀改成滑条了
10. 03:10:561 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - .......十分不建议这么放, 这样大概会有一半的人直接quit, 因为打起来实在是太违和而且难打了并且如果你红线offset听错了, 别人很容易感觉出来这里我建议直接用一个03:07:961 - 到 03:14:241 - 的转盘或者长滑条替代ok，直接放转盘了
11. 03:15:625 (1) - 最后一段的NC没有规律, 要么就全按梗NC, 那么03:18:825 (3) - 等等应该加上; 要么就按小节NC, 03:19:025 (4) - 这里加上03:20:625 (1) - 这里取消...等等依此类推改成按小节来了

不说排列了, 如果一年前还会说说看, 不过现在看起来什么排列的图都能rank, 这图好像还行, 懒得说了

Good Luck~

Wishkey wrote:

Heyo! From my queue
Digging the bell hitsounds!

General

You've got some unused hitsounds here:
normal-sliderslide2.wav
normal-sliderslide3.wav
normal-slidertick2.wav
normal-slidertick3.wavok deleted them

Starting from 03:07:961 (1) - the timing sounds a little off, its ends a bit too early/too late with the drum sometimes. Might want to try these timing points from there on out
03:07:961 - 180 BPM
03:09:961 - 144 BPM
03:10:377 - 136 BPM
03:11:259 - 132 BPM
03:11:713 - 144 BPM
03:12:129 - 136BPM
03:12:570 - 126 BPM
03:13:046 - 122 BPM
03:14:250 - 116 BPM
03:15:801 - 74.90 BPM
03:15:801 - 56.75 BPM
just added/changed 03:07:961 - 180 BPM, 03:09:961 - 144 BPM and put 74.9 on a different time line cuz i decided to delete all those 1 circles at the end and changed them into a spinner anyway thx for timing!

Easy

1. 00:26:520 (5) - Feels kinda empty with the vocals and the fade out still going on, I think a long slider((-art) would fit really nice here until 00:28:920 - to fill that emptyness (also NC judging by your NC pattern)right, added
2. 00:29:720 (1) - could use a hitsound for the end here like a drum clap or something since its a really unique drum hereused finish like insane
3. 00:40:269 (3,4) - The turn sharp turn seems a bit random here I think you could reshape this a little to emphasize the stronger beats your skipping in the slider aswell like something like this for example so you have the turns on the strong skipped beats since I saw you did this after this a lot aswell
   
   quite a cool idea!
4. 00:40:269 (3) - the standard soft finishes would sound a lot better here to respresent the cymbals would consider changing to the defaults for the finishes instead of using the customs/normals or just use a whistle soft finishes sounds a little bit weird for me so i just use whistle+finish as i want to emphasize those 2 beats at the beginning of the sliders
5. 00:45:544 (3) - NC here, really long combo and new vocal sentence starts in the middle here k
6. 01:02:687 (3) - bit up right to avoid the overlap while playing basicly the same k
7. 01:13:895 (3) - only bell sound that isn't clickable, would consider changing this into a a 1/1 slider + circle instead since the last drums are weaker aswell k
8. 01:23:785 (1) - NC for some impact for the end of this section and new sentence k
9. 02:00:709 (4) - 2/1 slider + circle instead so make the end clickable since its the intro to a new secton in the songk
10. 02:45:544 (1) - bell sound here, might consider adding that bell hitsound aswell i think normal clap fit the song well and bell sound here would be weird imo
11. 02:56:093 (5) - would reduce the volume back to 80% like last kiai so the kiai sounds a bit more powerfull k
12. 03:00:049 (1) - drum missing for bell?the bell sound is extremely low here so id prefer to use the whistle-clap-whistle-clap rhythm here

Normal

1. 00:18:520 (5,6) - change into 2/1 slider like earlier would play a lot better for normal diffs since you have constant 1/1 gaps for the introk
2. 00:26:120 (5) - kinda similar as ^ and you've never mapped the vocal on the blue tick before and its still a normal diff so its a bit confusing, could make a long slider starting on the white tick instead to fill the space like suggested in easyk do something like in easy
3. 00:32:687 - since its a normal diff you can already start here with a beat if you want since its 1/2 measures recovery time i prefer to start after 2 white lines from a spinner
4. 00:40:269 (1) - missing whistleoops
5. 01:14:390 - put a note here to start the introduction of the 1/2 here instead of 01:17:027 (5) - just deleted 01:17:027 (5) cuz i want to keep that long slider to follow the vocal
6. 01:36:148 (2,3) - 182 BPM song with stacking in normal diff might cause probs for the target audience, you rarely see stacks in normals and if they are its basicly only on lower bpm songs since they have more time to react, might wanna just keep doing the 1.0 ds thing instead since the note under it is pretty powerfull aswell so it deserves some movement imok removed 1 and 2 a little bit down
7. 01:40:104 (2,3) - didn't really play that well with the sudden stop of (2) would consider changing these into a 1/1 return slider instead
8. 01:41:588 (2) - shorten by 1/2 and put a circle on 01:42:247 - , makes the downbeat clickable and its a better lead in to this rythm 01:42:906 (1,2) - k
9. 01:45:379 (1,2) - start NC on (1) instead ? there is just 1 slider with nc
10. 02:49:170 (3) - vs 02:48:016 - density change here while the music remains the same, I'd make 02:49:170 (3) - into just a circle instead for consistency remaped some parts to avoid many unnecessary overlaps and stay in same rhythm
11. 02:52:137 (4) - start NC here instead of 02:52:796 (1) - k
12. 02:52:796 (1) - snapped to blue tickk

Hard

1. 00:20:120 (1) - whistle on the sliderbody doenst really fit here deleted
2. 00:21:720 (2) - ^ ^
3. 00:26:320 (6) - Same as easy/normal oh I just saw you did something really cool on insane with it! Maybe a tuned down version of that for this diff? sure
4. 00:45:873 (2,3,4) - swap rythms heres sounds a lot better like you did with 00:46:862 (1,2,3,4) - since its musicaly identical k
5. 00:58:401 (5) - maybe make this 2 circles aswell since you the drums going up at 00:57:412 (1,2) - and down at here since only these 00:57:412 (1,2) - having 2 circles kinda sounds a bit random in this section imok
6. 01:04:004 (1,2,3,4) - ,01:06:643 (1,2,3,4) - ,01:09:280 (1,2,3,4) - 01:11:917 (1,2,3,4) - pattern wise its fine here but the spacing is a bit odd since these are essentianally almost the same music wise yet you start at 1.7 in to 1.0 into 1.3 into 1.2. It seems a bit random like it the intensity of the drums are building up gradually so why not represent that with building up ds instead while keeping the patterns? k
7. 01:39:610 (1,2,3) - pretty harsh flow mainly bc of (2) could maybe move the curve inwards instead changed the shape
8. 01:58:401 (3) - Would try chaning these into 2 circles instead so the end is clickable since its really strong for this section, might consider a rythm like this maybe to have a 1/1 gap between (1,2,3,4) aswell for playability
   
   k but do something different
9. 02:11:917 (3) - could soft sample set these for the piano if you want, same for 02:30:379 (3,4) - + whisles if you wanna do it id like to keep them cuz 2 reverse sliders have different hitsound effects with 2 sliders which i also want to mainly emphasize the guitar
10. 02:15:214 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the first 2 and last pair are identical in the music while the 3rd pair is different so why not put the direction change on that pair instead of the 4th pair, would make more sense imo id like to make each 1 lower than the previous 2 so if i use ctrl+g on the 3rd pair the flow will become a little weird
11. 02:44:225 (1,2,3) - this will currently be really hard to read that (2) is 1/2 as its the same spacing as your 1/1s in your previous section, would indicate it a bit better maybe a bit smaller spacing k
12. 02:44:225 (1,2,3) - inconsisent hitsounding with other diffs that all used whistles here fixed
13. 02:49:170 (4,1) - only time you stack slider ends like this, would just unstack them since it might be confusing k fixed
14. 03:09:774 (6,7) - euh snapped to blue new timing hopefully fixes that sure
15. 03:15:825 (1) - extend to the red tick aswell for consistency with the next patterns like 03:22:225 (1,2) - since now its the only one with a beat left open in the ending i turned it into a 1/1 slider, cuz i want to use a note sto start the vocal
16. 03:39:025 (1) - you used 5% vollume in easy/normals around here somewhere I think might be earlier fixed
    

Insane

• 00:26:320 (1) - 0.75 sv to 1.64 sv for the song actually fading out is a bit overdone if anyhing I'd keep the same low sv changed to 0.6

1. 00:31:945 - no sound on here, just extend slider to the red tick and delete this note just deleted notes but not extend slider as i want to start as the first beat
2. 00:41:917 (2,3,4) - same visual difference for 1/1 and 1/2 gaps makes this really hard to play, would indicate it a bit better changed 3 into a note
3. 01:11:752 (5) - bit weird to map the 1/2 here instead of the previous red tick that has a change in guitar where here the music doesnt really change on the red tick (blue tick tho) i dont follow the guitar in this part and as i have used 4 1/1 sliders before, i used 5 here to make a transition to the next part
4. 01:23:785 (1) - NC here k
5. 01:28:730 (4,5,1) - doesn't flow that smooth with the correction you have to make on 01:29:060 (1) - would curve that a bit more do something different
6. 01:32:687 (3,4,1) - the straight flow here kinda makes you lose the impact of (1) would make an angle on that true, fixed
7. 02:31:038 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - would mape the beats in between here, this kinda completely loses the buildup you have going on in the song the density of strong beats isnt the same in this part, the strong beat in 02:31:038 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) occurs every 2 white lines but like the part of 02:28:401 - 02:30:873 here it occurs every 1 white line so i used a different rhythm there
8. 03:10:561 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - yeah even with the new timing your still gonna have some BPM changes through this section, currently its unreadable since you have some noticable changes so would check new timing and see if something fits better like the last 5 I think were the same so you could add circles or smething but for the rest maybe just use sliders if possible since they have more leniency i changed it just into a spinner as i mentioned at the very first...... many people pointed out it lol
9. 03:20:625 (1,2) - 03:20:625 (1,2) - missing vocals/piano beats here i used soft finish rhythmed so put another hitsound here isnt suitable imo
10. 03:39:025 (1) - on some diffs you didnt put 10% but 30% or nothing instead so double check these are the same ok changed

Thats about it GL with the map! really nice song

Beomsan wrote:

sorry for late. m4m from my queue
my english isn't good. plz understand me :<

testplay

nvm! thanks for testplay!

[General]

1. osz file size:
   this map seems don't have storyboard. then, try to keep osz files under 10MB.
   

   Ranking Criteria Guidelines wrote:

   Try to keep osz files under 10MB, or 30MB if you include a video/storyboard. Videos and storyboards can generally be decreased in size by lowering the quality of the video or trimming/resizing storyboard elements.

   https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Guidelines
   k, just use 1 bg for now
2. Unused hitsounds:
   normal-sliderslide2.wav
   normal-sliderslide3.wav
   normal-slidertick2.wav
   normal-slidertick3.wav
   please check the hitsounds deleted

[Easy]

1. 00:56:093 (1,2) - 01:05:324 (3,4) - 01:07:302 (2,3,4) - and many more... please remove whistle of slider body. I think it's mistake hitsounding. seriously not fit at all and quite weird IMO. but... It's your own map so up to you. maybe i just forgot to check them as i sometimes put whistle to a whole slider... fixed
2. 01:25:104 - ~ 01:27:412 - questionable rhythm. I really don't recommend current rhythm. especially 01:25:763 (2) - I don't know what you want for this slider. it's unreasonable and should be fix I guess. you can try it enough true, and remap some parts to keep the same rhythm
3. 01:36:972 (3) - x251 y320 for more good flow. fixed
4. 02:08:621 (2,3) - seems messy. I'm not good at English so I can't explanation well. so... I hope that you can understand this picture...
   SPOILER

   
   u mean those 2 visual distances are not equal? true, changed rhythm and shapes here
5. 02:17:851 (1) - 02:19:170 (3) - this isn't good overlap. I recommend replace them. (ofc avoid overlap) k
6. 02:31:038 (1) - x121 y102 for good flow. (don't forget 02:32:357 (2) - distance snap) k
   It would be better if you applied all mods, I guess.

[Normal]

1. 00:43:566 (2) - current flow seems a little bit off. try to more natural flow like
   
   SPOILER

   
   k
2. 00:58:071 (5,6) - I recommend change to slider or consistency with 01:07:961 (3,4,5,6) - . seems linear and four singletap(?) It's obviously hard to new players. k
3. 01:19:665 (5) - I think stacking is not good way in easier difficulties. deleted
4. 02:25:434 (6,1) - same as above deleted and rearrange objects
5. 01:22:302 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - too many circles xd can you change to sliders? i want to make this part one of the most difficult part of the song so id like to keep them
6. 02:11:258 (4) - 02:11:917 (5) - Earnestly IT'S DANGEROUS. don't use 3 reverse slider in easier difficulties please. deleted and put a spinner here

[Hard]

1. 00:37:137 (3,4,5,6,1) - linear(?) pattern seems really hard to play. I recommend angled pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6083023 k
2. 00:40:187 (4) - same distance please oops i forgot it lol
3. 01:42:082 (3) - seems using 1.3x snap but It's 1.4x (very off) k fixed
4. 01:43:236 (4) - I recommend https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6083045 this. current one also.... fine. but not neat tho k
5. 02:34:994 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think... inapposite in Hard diff. seems really charge and hard to play. can you change it? (mix slider) I really hope so changed first 1,2 and last 1,2 into sliders, and keep the middle 1,2 cuz i want to emphasize this part so id prefer to put something different from 3 sliders
6. 02:35:983 (1) - um... change to 1/2? why using 1/4 slider lol cuz here has a tremolo on 02:36:066 - so i use a 1/4 reverse slider to show it
7. 02:44:720 (2,3) - 02:47:357 (2) - 02:49:994 (2) - 02:51:313 (2) - It'll be important issue. the reason is really simple. cuz inconsistency with distance of other parts. (01:25:599 (2) - etc) do a little remap to avoid those overlap

[Aoi]

1. 00:40:269 (1) - okay it's not easier diff but... stack isn't good way I guess xd maybe [url]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6049281 true, seems better now[/url]
2. 00:50:736 (5,1) - plz check same things too!^
3. 00:46:862 (1) - why using 1/4 reverse slider? 00:46:945 - I can't hear any sound at here. It can be different in some cases like 00:48:016 (10,11,1) - right...... changed to 1/2 slider
4. 01:25:104 (1) - head finishk
5. 01:35:654 (1) - samek
6. 02:15:214 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 02:20:489 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Both of these should be hitsounded in the same way. k
7. 02:41:588 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - remove finish.... quite weirdchanged to whistle
8. 02:46:862 (1) - finish k
9. 03:09:774 (4,5,6,7,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - uadhadhaudhusdhu I want to tell some another way. since current one seems really not good. but.... I think I like it(?) you should ask about it to someone else. yeah i know before u many people point out that auduaduaduaduau so i changed them just into a spinner xd
10. 03:39:025 (1) - nice dude thanks!

overall nice. but this map have many questionable(unreasonable? idk english word :p) things. please make sure them!
hope it helps. gl

Beomsan wrote:

this map can be great enough
keep going please
take my star

KuroNeko1509 wrote:

Hiiii~ M4M from the queue~
song to M4M -> Little Non-Hanamaru Sensation ( TV Edit )


[Aoi]

1. (00:04:120 (3) - ) ( 00:10:520 (3) - ) ( 00:16:920 (3) - ) ( 00:23:320 (3) - ) - add NC :^) i think its unnecessary cuz nc here is regular enough
   
   
2. 01:02:687 (1,2,1,2,1) - I really like this element in maps <3 thanks!
   
   
3. 01:27:659 (5) - I feel like this note doesnt fit quiet well, I'd suggest deleting it and then making slider 4 before that a bit longer so that it ends on this blue tic where note 5 is currently i used 5 here for a transition between 2 sections of the song, and if i deleted 5 here then u need to push ur index twice in about 0.1ms, which imo is quite uncomfortable fot single-tap players
   
   
4. 01:28:978 (5) - same here ^ ^
   
   
5. 02:49:417 (5) - ^ ^
   
   
6. 02:50:736 (5) - ^ ^
   
   
7. 01:37:302 (2,3,4,5) - I feel like this pattern is a bit confusing maybe you should place jump notes a little differently? in textplay mode this pattern will not be extremely overlapped as in editor and imo such a overlap is just well in a 4.6* map
   
   
8. 01:42:906 (3) - I suggest making this slider a little shorter so that it can be a reverse slider, I think being a reverse slider will emphasize her sing "nande" or something like that. So make this slider go until ( 01:43:730 - ) and reverse until ( 01:43:895 - ) id like to keep 01:42:906 (3) cuz here is a symmetry slider structure: 01:42:082 (4,1,2,3), i want to keep it just like in 01:40:928 (1,2,3); and one the other hand that "nande" isnt quite strong as it's in the middle of the lyric so i think its ok here
   
   
9. 02:31:038 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Dont you think adding one more note in this patter will be better? I feel like you should add a note here ( 02:31:533 - ) ( 02:32:192 - ) ( 02:32:851 - ) ( 02:33:511 - ) i think this way player will recognize that music is getting more intense, so you should make it a little more intense~

   Neanmoins wrote:

   the density of strong beats isnt the same in this part, the strong guitar sound in 02:31:038 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) occurs every 2 white lines but like the part of 02:28:401 - 02:30:873 here it occurs every 1 white line so i used a different rhythm there

10. 03:01:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You hear how first 2-3 notes have sort of a weak sound and then it becomes larger? I think what you could do is try to make notes 4 and up a little harder, place them sort of more and more apart as you're getting to note 7 because you can clearly hear how music is becoming more intense with each jump :^) good idea!
    
    
11. 03:09:794 (4,5,6,7) - The ending feels a little weird to me, like music was coming to an end but the mapping looked like there are still many notes ahead, I think you should tone down the end and make it a bit slow to show that song is coming to an end
    
12. OH WAIT NVM ITS NOT THE END LOL BUT I MEAN IT LOOKED LIKE THE END XD . In this case I think you should remove this spinner ( 03:10:586 (1) - ) and make it into something else lol, like this spinner is covering so many large drum sounds that are just too loud to be ignored... at the very first time i also follow those drum sounds but as many other modders pointed out that those drum sounds are too random and quite hard to catch the regulation and click, so i remove them and just use a spinner here to let my map become more friendly. tbh id like to map them too but most of the players maybe not
    
13. Wouldn't the time between this ( 03:33:925 (5) - ) and this ( 03:39:031 (1) - ) kill the player? The HP drain... i mean, plus the last slider is so long and slow that it makes me think that it really would kill the player lol, but idk ~ i tested with hr and the last 6 seconds of blank will just reduce about 40% hp so i think its okit looks really good, gj on that slider ! thanks!

[Hard]

1. 00:13:120 - shouldn't you add another note on this tic? i dont want to make calm part in hard that dense and this part is the same rhythm with 00:00:920 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - so id like to keep it
   
   
2. 00:40:187 (4,1) - are they placed like this on purpose? It looks a bit messy to me mmm i think it's just ok in hard diff
   
   
3. 02:10:269 (3,1,2,3,4) - I feel like this is too hard for hard difficulty, like the notes on jump are bit too hard imo true, reduced 1~4 to 1.3x
   
   
4. 03:10:586 (1) - I feel like you should remove this slider and map that section because it covers a lot of sounds... and feels off to me the same reason in insane
   
   
5. 03:39:031 (1) - This is a good spinner~ Good end to the map~thanks lol

lol sorry I can't mod Normal and Easy diffs~

Blitzfrog wrote:

From my queue, m4m

Ehh, didn't really do much, was nicely mapped

General:
Why do you have countdown enabled?? oops lol
Tags: Mahoutsukai no Yoru, Witch on the Holy Night, ending theme (maybe) k

Easy

00:32:357 - Seriously need a slider here id like to but it seems in easy diff we should put objects after at least 4 white lines from a spinner
01:02:687 (3) - Could have a linear curve at about 01:03:099, looks better k
01:24:445 (1) - Confused me quite a bit, would remove k

Normal

00:32:357 - Slider here would fill the gapid like to but it seems in nm diff we should put objects after at least 2 white lines from a spinner ;w;

Nhawak wrote:

00:32:027 - The necessary distancy that a normal difficulty must have between a spinner~clickable object is 2 beats, so we have a unrankable stuff here.

01:26:423 (3) - Extend this slider till 01:26:917 (4) instead as u can see i put this 1/2 overlap when there is hearable vocal(like in 01:29:720 (4,5,1) - and 01:32:357 (4,5,1) - and...... so id like to keep that rhythm
01:42:906 (1) - Still think this slider would fit better ending 01:43:236 - true... adjusted and reset the nc here

Hard

I like this diff alot thanks!
00:26:320 (1) - Slider really should end 00:28:720, even though it messes with the pattern, it sounds REALLY forced otherwise imo the vocal completely disappeared at 00:28:920 so i draw a slider until there. is the finish sound makes u feel forced? i just add a green line with 5% volume at the end of the slider(to each diff ofc) so i think its fine now xd
NC:
02:09:280 (3) (It makes sense to me to NC here, following the previous pattern and emphasising 2 strong notes) just like 01:21:807 (3,4) i dont set nc here just because that isnt the same structure with 02:07:302 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - (one slider+one note) so if i set nc here it will be a little weird imo

Aoi

Ok so I FC'ed this song in the first go so there shouldn't be many problems, just gonna point out some of the ones that stopped me from SSing it lol

01:04:335 (1) - Could be spaced further id like to keep the stack here with 01:03:016 (2) - or it will looks a little bit messed
01:45:379 (2,3,4) - ^ i want to follow the vocal here and as 2 and 3 just have ~0.2ms time distance so i think to stack 2 and 3, make 1 (23) 4 equal distance is better
01:55:104 - Really feel like you could use the electric guitar here as a build up i think its unnecessary as i want to follow the strong beat (where the song exactly start again) so i skip this part
01:59:390 (1,1,1,1) - Why not just one zigzag slider art? Fits the music better and slows down the pace for a tone down i want to make each vocal here (strong enough imo) more clickable so i think use 5 sliders here with a descending sv fit the song better
02:36:148 (8) - Feels like missing a clap here the original song contains (guitar+drum beat) in 1 and 7 but just (guitar) in 8 so i dont use clap here to separate 8 from 1 to 7
02:42:906 (1,2,1,2) - These 2 could possible be "jumpy" but not jumps for a bit of build up true, raised distances
03:09:961 (6) - (This part doesn't follow the rhythm and disrupts flow imo) I would say to end this slider at 03:10:169 and make the spinner start at 03:10:794 then adding a hit circle 03:10:586 k, also add a note at 03:10:377
03:31:822 (4) - This slider really should end at 03:33:424 move the end to 03:33:724.... as i want to keep each time distancy enter 2 objects is 1 red line
03:38:831 - I would add a note here, fits better but perhaps you just want simplicity at the end of a song k

NC:
00:46:862 (6) 01:21:807 (3) (to continue with flow) added the first, the second has the same reason in hard:structure isnt the same with 01:19:829 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2).

GL on ranking

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

General

1. Nothing

Aoi

1. 00:17:720 (4,5) - You could make the blanket better imo k
2. 00:19:320 (6,7) - Make them a bit less curvy, they look a bit weird right now imochanged to straight sliders
3. 00:32:027 (1,1,2,3,4) - This part seems a bit weird flow wise and the structure here isn't really clear compared to the rest of the map imo, I'd suggest moving the sliders around and making a cool structure :dmmm try to spread them out
4. 00:35:654 (3,4) - Exchange their position in the timeline for better flow ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6077965 ) k
5. 00:41:258 (4,3) - Too close imo, move 3 a bit to the right k
6. 01:08:456 (2,3) - Fix blanket k
7. 01:15:873 (3) - NC + 01:15:214 (2,3) - maybe blanket i think nc here has no problem:1~7 to each 2 sliders+5 notes blanket ok
8. 01:28:730 (4,5,1) - Looks a bit weird,move 5 a bit to the left k
9. 01:58:401 (2) - Stack with 01:56:752 (1) - 's end k but seems the stack here isnt quite visible cuz between them there is 3 white lines
10. 02:08:126 (2,1) - Why no stack like you did before? cuz i want to make 02:08:785 (1) lower than 02:08:291 (1) - so if i stack here the pattern will break
11. 02:08:621 (2,1) - Blanket? here is not a blanket cuz i keep 02:07:632 (2,2,2) - like a straight line
12. 02:58:071 (3,4) - Not sure about this flow tbh changed 02:58:401 (4) - a little bit, hope now its better

Damn, pretty good map for a beginner lol you surprised me :d take a star for that and also because you have a french name
lol thanks!
Good luck!

Beomsan wrote:

added hard diff mod

1. Disable the Widescreen Storyboard.
2. Normal-Hitclap is too loud. Lower it by ~8dB.

1. 00:12:920 - / 00:24:120 - the player just moves counter-clockwise for 12 seconds here, make the direction very for gameplay.
2. 00:45:214 (4,1,2) - The direction change should be (4) -> (1) because of the more fluent sound from (1) -> (2).
   
   ~

   
3. 01:02:357 - / 01:13:895 - similar to 00:12:920 - / 00:24:120 - here
4. 00:54:774 (3,1) - make the turn slightly less sharp
5. 02:21:807 (2,3) - Separate these sliders a bit more. The current seems a little inconsistent with you style.
   
   ~

   
6. 03:22:209 (1) - This shape could be more attractive, 3 right angles almost never looks nice >>

1. Fix blankets as you see fit.
2. 00:00:920 (1,2) - The overlap could potentially make the spacing 00:02:520 (2,3) - here more confusing. I recommend using 1.00x between 00:00:920 (1,2) - these.
3. 03:15:801 (1) - 3 45 degreee angles places like that doesn't look nice imo.

1. Lower the SL to 4 so things like 02:59:720 (4,1) - this don't stack. When they stack, it can be confused for 1/2.
2. 01:15:873 (3,4,5,6) - This plays too linear, and it doesn't look nice either.
3. 01:27:412 (4,1) - Blanket? It looks a little unclean without it.
4. 01:46:450 - The break drag is inconsistent.
5. 03:01:368 (1) - I think this is missing a clap on its head.

sahuang wrote:

M4M
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/505415

[Easy]

1. 03:15:801 - 红绿线使用相同音效组+音量，不然unrankable，其他diff也一样。嗨呀我忘记改前两个的设置了
2. 00:02:520 (2,4) - stack 好
3. 00:11:320 (4,1) - 这个形状实在是太难看。。改，改了
4. 01:02:687 (3) - 对称好
5. 03:31:822 (2) - 莫名其妙的折返滑条后面折返以后一直到尾巴都没音，silent并没有什么用...这里是我想后面还有个逐渐减弱的音乐所以才用的折返滑条+最后silent避免太吵，这是主要原因，次要原因是不用的话后面要出一个break，我觉得那样不好
   排版明显可以再加强，很多地方滑条拉的太随意了，然后缺乏美感，节奏还不错。
   比如01:40:928 (1,2) - 就显得很难看，不是对称而且那个红点弄的2的形状很怪异。

[Normal]

1. 00:00:920 (1,2) - DS什么回事........大意了，改了
2. 01:34:994 (4,1,2) - DS乱了 ^
3. 01:24:445 (3) - normal不建议用这样短的1/4折返 好
4. 01:25:763 (2) - 这种东西红点可以删了，并没有什么用，还显得难看，不如和01:25:104 (1) - 一样
5. 02:07:302 (1) - 也一样，类似的地方就不提了

[Hard]

1. 01:15:873 (3,4,5,6) - 摆的太随机，建议有个形状好，改成直线了
2. 01:34:994 (1,2,1) - 距离相同但是时间间隔差了好几倍，会造成读图问题。。别这么摆把1和2移下去了
3. 02:15:214 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 四组的间距建议调一下，中间太近了好
4. 03:08:461 - 03:09:127 - 为什么空节奏，加圈map了吧好

[Insane]

1. 00:41:588 (1,2,3,4) - 重新考虑下节奏，这边突然从滑条变成单点反而变慢了，但是音乐没变慢，所以现在不妥 改了下把红线都塞满了
2. 00:51:148 (2,3) - 和1/4一样的感觉，加大DS 好
3. 01:24:444 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建议把01:24:115 (2,3) - 的ds搞得和后面五个一样好
4. 01:38:950 (3,4,5,6) - 这边属于略有些无脑的放4个对称滑条。。明显01:39:610 (5) - 开始和前面是分开的两组，这边NC也是，你需要01:39:610 (5,1) - 交换NC滑条和nc都改了下
   后面的问题也就比较重复了。。我觉得这个图的梗太频繁出现，01:26:423 (1,2,3) - 01:43:566 (1,2,3) - etc就几乎一模一样。。。可以多一点variety

基本上把ez和nm里所有带红点不对称的滑条全部改掉了，然后把你提到的那个地方和几个平行滑条改了下摆法
总之结构上可以提高，你需要多摸图多做图，加油吧 好，谢谢撒谎老爷指点

Jonawaga wrote:

NM from the queue

[General]

1. Disable the Widescreen Storyboard. k
2. Normal-Hitclap is too loud. Lower it by ~8dB. reduce 4db since -8db will make it nearly disappear

[Easy]

1. 00:12:920 - / 00:24:120 - the player just moves counter-clockwise for 12 seconds here, make the direction very for gameplay. mmm changed but just cuz its a bit ugly
2. 00:45:214 (4,1,2) - The direction change should be (4) -> (1) because of the more fluent sound from (1) -> (2).
   
   ~

   
   k
3. 01:02:357 - / 01:13:895 - similar to 00:12:920 - / 00:24:120 - here so here i think its not a big problem cuz i dont want to make easy everywhere as simple head-to-tail shape, and the pattern here looks good to me
4. 00:54:774 (3,1) - make the turn slightly less sharpk
5. 02:21:807 (2,3) - Separate these sliders a bit more. The current seems a little inconsistent with you style. k
   
   ~

   
6. 03:22:209 (1) - This shape could be more attractive, 3 right angles almost never looks nice true, changed

[Normal]

1. Fix blankets as you see fit. ok hope now it will be better!
2. 00:00:920 (1,2) - The overlap could potentially make the spacing 00:02:520 (2,3) - here more confusing. I recommend using 1.00x between 00:00:920 (1,2) - these.right i forgot to check ds......
3. 03:15:801 (1) - 3 45 degreee angles places like that doesn't look nice imo. mmm but this shape seems good for me

[Hard]

1. Lower the SL to 4 so things like 02:59:720 (4,1) - this don't stack. When they stack, it can be confused for 1/2. i think that hard players should be able/learn to read this kind of stack and imo i have no reason to change sl just for 2 objects
2. 01:15:873 (3,4,5,6) - This plays too linear, and it doesn't look nice either. i think a linear shape fix the song quite well here
3. 01:27:412 (4,1) - Blanket? It looks a little unclean without it. if i blanket then the visual ds will be broken...... but also moved 4 a little bit out
4. 01:46:450 - The break drag is inconsistent. u mean the break isnt the same with other diff? but they are all start from 01:46:203 - and end at 01:56:752 - . maybe i dont understand what's your meaning here
5. 03:01:368 (1) - I think this is missing a clap on its head. 1 doesnt have a crescendo beat so i dont emphasize 1, and as i arrange my hitsound like whistle-clap-whistle it will be quite weird if a put a clap here

Good Luck with the ranking~!!

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

[Easy]
00:04:120 (3) - 下一点 touch bar了 k
00:29:720 (1) - 我个人可能更喜欢压在后面的finish音上 压后边的话我觉得节奏会变得有点奇怪
00:33:676 (1) - 你这边跟钢琴的话直接用default音效加whistle啊 default的whistle那个哨声我觉得配钢琴太违和了
01:59:390 (3) - NC k
02:15:214 (1) - 挺突兀的 滑条中间音效没处理好......删了
02:36:313 - 把break拉到这里 好
02:45:544 (1) - 删NC 好
02:55:434 (4) - 4加NC 这里我觉得没必要，音乐和前面还是一体的没必要特意分开
03:31:822 (2) - 这里不适合slider 我觉得挺好的啊，刚好随人声

[Normal]
02:07:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 虽然normal这样也是可以的但是以你前面的密度来说可能就不太合适了 这块跟01:19:829 (1,2,3,4,5) - 一样都是想强调那些鼓点
02:34:335 (2,3,4,5,6) - 不如五角星 我把5和6转上去了90度......这里要是放五角星就一直在左边转了有点挤
02:41:588 (1) - whistle不好听 依然是忘记删滑条中间的音效了......
02:44:225 (5) - NC应该在这里k
02:52:796 (3) - 手滑了吧 啊 移上去了
03:05:983 (2) - spacing有问题 改了
03:09:961 (4,5) - slider尾感觉没有什么很强的音 而且3/4也不是很适合normal 改成1/1了
结尾这段我觉得可以加难一点 鼓点太不规律了，要加难节奏会变得很奇怪也不方便打，就直接一个转盘带过了

[Hard]
00:19:720 (6) - spacing改了
01:15:214 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:19:829 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 按节奏来说1和2之间不是很跳 2和1之间是跳，可以修一下 ok
01:33:511 (2,3) - 其实flow不太顺 不过没有大碍 这里我是为了做01:32:687 (3,1,2,3) - 稍微放弃了一下flow
01:33:676 (3,4,1) - 一样的问题 这里不应该有跳 缩了点距离
01:57:247 (2) - spacing
01:58:236 (2,3,4) - 我觉得挺误导的 这里 改了下拉开了
01:59:390 (1,1,1,1) - 这里也是 不应该overlap...你slider慢了DS应该对应加大点 好
02:07:302 (1,2) - 上面一样 这里我觉得没必要，因为这两个单点的时候背景音乐很轻，距离近点没关系
02:16:698 (1,2) - 虽然这样打也没有问题但是还是不是很理解这里为什么变方向了 只是觉得这样好玩
02:35:983 (1) - 其实真正的三联在后面。。这里我没听出1/4 这里音乐有个颤音所以我才用了个1/4折返
02:46:862 (1) - 这段是不是突然跳大了点 ......是，改了
03:09:961 (6) - 同 还是不懂这个压的什么音 也改了
还是最后这段对于hard来说可能太简单了点 理由还是跟normal一样

[Aoi]
01:04:665 (2,3,1) - 排个直线更好吧 既然nc了我觉得拐个角好点
01:19:829 (1,2) - hard一样的问题。。为什么选了比较弱的那个音跳了呢 改了下
01:37:632 (3,4) - 这两个ctrl+g一下可能flow更好些 ok
02:34:665 (1) - 这里3/4感觉不是很好 有点误导 我觉得这里快的滑条用个3/4比用1/2衔接要好，不然显得有点空
02:36:148 (8) - 这个不如删掉然后把7变成slider 因为我比较想保持这里是连续跳所以就直接把8删了，7没改为了保证breaktime一致加成了9连跳.....

整体没什么大问题但是细节感觉做的不够好，比如slider的形状以及部分地方的flow..insane看起来就比较杂乱没什么规律 我觉得没什么规律比较好吧，不过形状和flow我之后会注意

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi m4m from my queue

easy :

01:17:192 (2) - nc here as there is only 2 notes so id like to make those 2 vocals as an ensemble
01:22:467 (4) - nc stay consistent with nc k
01:43:566 (3) - nc k
02:02:027 (3,4,1) - not consistent spacing it goes from 1.00 to 0.45 this can be confusing for new players k fixed
02:02:027 (3) - nc every 2 downbeats k
02:09:939 (4) - ok i wont point nc again xd i know...;w;
03:15:803 - maybe lower more the volume k reduced to 17% for all diff
03:39:031 (1) - can end spinner here 03:44:639 - true, make them stop at 03:43:838 -

normal :

make consistent nc deleted two "5" hope now its better xd
00:26:520 (1) - maybe make a slider art with less sharped angles its rly soft sound i think wavy slider may give a better flow imo that slider is wavy enough
01:22:467 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - avoid these in normal specialy at high bpm also doesnt look clean k changed second 1~2 to slider
02:11:258 (1) - maybe remove the spinner in little to short also the recovery time doesnt seem enough in this bpm
if u remove it start mapping here 02:12:577 - with a 1/1 slider but it seems that in normal there must have >=2 white line enter a spinner and next object...... anyway thx for reminding me
03:08:627 (2,3,4) - not consistent ds from 1.0 to 1.20 and then 0.9 fix consistency fixed
03:39:031 (1) - same for easy the spinner can stop lot sooner same as easy

hard :

01:19:500 (6,1) - the bigger spacing should be between these to emphasize the strong beat her 01:19:829 (1) - not between these changed01:19:170 (5,6) -
02:10:600 (1,2,3,4) - imo this seem incomfortable to read maybe change to two 1/2 sliders or maybe just me not used to fast songs xdi think this part is ok for hard players as the ds is constantly arranged so the 4 1/2 notes here will not be quite difficult
02:11:258 (1,2) - i dont hear any 1/16 idk where that revers is snapped xd i hear this there isnt 1/16 u can here 4 groups of 1/6 drum beats here so i use 4/6 reverse here
also this 02:11:258 (1,2) - sound differnt than this 02:11:917 (3,4) - so maybe mapping them differntly flow better i think it's ok for now and i dont want to use 1/6 notes in a hard diff
03:31:822 (1) - maybe remove the repeat i use a reverse here to show a increasing/decreasing vocal here so i think its ok
03:39:031 (1) - spinner ^ if u changed on other diff change all yea

im sorry cant mod insanes specialy and this high bpm but solid set xd I hope i helped Good luck!
nvm and thx for mod and star!!!

my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/496096
u can mod as much i did x)

Nickelony wrote:

Hi! M4M here!

[Easy]

00:42:906 (1) - maybe flip this slider like this: https://puu.sh/reAyU.png good idea
01:04:005 (1) - the 2nd curve doesn't look good. maybe do this: https://puu.sh/reAIB.png or just a simple round slider. mmm changed it to a v-shape slider
02:43:566 (4,1) - blanket maybe? theres not a blanket just a head-to-tail arrangement xd
03:07:961 (1,2) - ^ somehow? cuz this doesn't look that good i think its ok
Amazing diff!

[Normal]

02:23:785 (3) - curve is waaay too soft, make it sharper: https://puu.sh/reBak.png k
03:05:324 (1) - looks like a broken slider, do it like this: https://puu.sh/reBeC.pngk
03:09:961 (4) - blanket to this: 03:09:294 (3) k why not xd

I have no words. Ultra amazing diff!

[Hard]

00:08:920 (2) - the 2nd curve is useless imo. true lol
02:54:115 (2) - ^ ^
00:38:291 (3) - slightly softer curve here. k
00:42:906 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:19:829 (1) - ^^
00:49:500 (1) - sharper curve here? imo that is fine
01:43:566 (1) - ^ ^
01:44:225 (3) - ^ ^
02:44:225 (1) - ^ not sure about that. well make a blanket here lol
02:47:522 (3,4) - don't you think those curves are too sharp? maybe make them soft like this one: 02:48:840 (3) k
03:02:687 (1) - the 2nd curve looks just bad, do it like this: https://puu.sh/reBPY.png 2nd good idea!

damn, it's getting even better from diff to diff

[Aoi]

00:36:643 (2) - this circle is too far off the grid k moved down a little bit

I can't really find any problems in this diff

That's all.

Good Luck!

Neanmoins wrote:

Ready for (much more) mod / BN check

Ayyri wrote:

Neanmoins wrote:

Ready for (much more) mod / BN check

Hmm.

I'll probably look at this later due to Noffy's request to do so.

Noffy wrote:

Hi, you asked me to mod your map, but I couldn't really find anything in it, and personally feel it is pretty high quality.

[General]

Except the background

I used tineye to perform a reverse image search on the picture used, and found a SUPER HD image, then scaled it down, and did a thing or two.

IMAGE!

It was apparently a scan of a magazine or the like, as there were clear lines of texture, which are still a bit visible. But this is overall far higher quality than the bg currently being used.
I highly reccomend changing to this k thanks!!!

I mostly am here becuase the low quality background bothered me a lot so no kds please

[Easy]
03:10:377 (1) - Would be better if it ended on the same place the red timing point is at, as that's where the drum is. oops right...... i forgot to snap it to the red timing line lol

[Normal]
02:52:796 (3) - Why is this slider extended to the blue tick when other sliders are not? I don't hear anything to justify that difference. also my bad...

[Aoi]
03:38:931 (1,1) - I can understand what this is mapped to, but at this point the song is so quiet you can hardly hear it without tripling the volume that was comfortable for listening to the rest of the song to. Please consider removing. The same goes for the spinners at this time in the other difficulties. sry but since i reduced the volume to 10% here so i think the slider fix the song well and will give it a nice end, better to the spinners. i want to use at least 1 pattern in this song at the end so i choose the highest diff and draw a star here. anyway, "draw a star" itself a more comfortable way to enjoy the end then a long spinner imo.ok i deleted it as many people pointed out thats not a good choice lol

• [Easy]

1. 00:32:357 - 加個3/1滑條八
2. 01:23:785 (3,1) - 應該要是x1.0 ds
3. 02:16:533 (2,3) - 建議改得跟02:15:214 (1) - 一樣 因為音樂是相同的 用同樣結構比較合
4. 03:06:313 (2,1) - 應該要是x1.0 ds, easy diff 的 ds 要固定
5. 03:09:961 - 少whistle

• [Normal]

1. 00:32:357 - 加個滑條八..
2. 00:41:588 (1) - 不用nc
3. 00:54:774 (3,1) - ds修一下
4. 01:34:335 (3) - 建議nc 畢竟有特別的音
5. 01:43:566 (1,2,3,4) - 這邊的音應該是這樣
6. 02:02:027 (1,2,1) - 這邊也要保持X1.0ds
7. 02:12:577 - 加個1/1
8. 02:23:621 (2,3) - 沒stack好
9. 02:54:774 (2) - 應該nc在這而不是02:54:115 (1) -
10. 03:00:544 (2,3) - 我建議這邊也stack起來, 跟其他一樣 比較整合

• [Hard]

1. 00:40:269 - 這邊1/1的spacing拉開一點 很容易誤讀成1/2
2. 01:04:005 (2) - 應該nc在這而不是01:04:335 (1) -
3. 01:04:005 - 1/1一樣拉開一點
4. 02:04:994 (2,3,4) - finish很吵=w= 而且不必要
5. 02:11:093 (4,1) - ds也改成x1.3八

• [Aoi]

1. 01:04:994 (3,1) - consist the spacing
2. 01:44:884 (4) - 02:56:093 (5) - 應該要nc
3. 03:08:294 (2,3) - spacing條一下 這邊太小了
4. 03:09:961 (6) - 應該要nc在這 不是03:10:377 (1) -

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M

• [Easy]

1. 00:32:357 - 加個3/1滑條八 easy不是滑条物件之间要隔4根白线吗
2. 01:23:785 (3,1) - 應該要是x1.0 ds 我怎么记得这种隔了3根白线的ds没有硬性要求.....之前好像也没人提出来，我看看后面要是还有人说我就改吧
3. 02:16:533 (2,3) - 建議改得跟02:15:214 (1) - 一樣 因為音樂是相同的 用同樣結構比較合 好，改了下排版
4. 03:06:313 (2,1) - 應該要是x1.0 ds, easy diff 的 ds 要固定 跟上面那里一样
5. 03:09:961 - 少whistle 加上了

• [Normal]

1. 00:32:357 - 加個滑條八.. normal不是滑条物件之间要隔俩白线吗
2. 00:41:588 (1) - 不用nc ok
3. 00:54:774 (3,1) - ds修一下 ok
4. 01:34:335 (3) - 建議nc 畢竟有特別的音 NM里我还是想尽量保证nc在每个小节都是一样的，而且我个人觉得改不改没有什么差别
5. 01:43:566 (1,2,3,4) - 這邊的音應該是這樣 true, 改了
6. 02:02:027 (1,2,1) - 這邊也要保持X1.0ds 就还是保留nm里的观点......
7. 02:12:577 - 加個1/1 就还是跟一开始那里一样的理由
8. 02:23:621 (2,3) - 沒stack好 改了
9. 02:54:774 (2) - 應該nc在這而不是02:54:115 (1) - true
10. 03:00:544 (2,3) - 我建議這邊也stack起來, 跟其他一樣 比較整合 好

• [Hard]

1. 00:40:269 - 這邊1/1的spacing拉開一點 很容易誤讀成1/2 好
2. 01:04:005 (2) - 應該nc在這而不是01:04:335 (1) - 这里我是想保持那个相同结构都1-2-1-2所以才这么设的，我最高难度里相同部分也是这么处理的
3. 01:04:005 - 1/1一樣拉開一點 稍微变了下，我觉得这地方间距还好
4. 02:04:994 (2,3,4) - finish很吵=w= 而且不必要 改成了普通的设法
5. 02:11:093 (4,1) - ds也改成x1.3八 因为这里有nc所以我觉得还好

• [Aoi]

1. 01:04:994 (3,1) - consist the spacing 这里我是刻意拐开的，想让下面那仨滑条和之后的123的位置对一下
2. 01:44:884 (4) - 02:56:093 (5) - 應該要nc ok
3. 03:08:294 (2,3) - spacing條一下 這邊太小了 3和4稍微拉开了点，但是滑条方向我想保持就现在这样
4. 03:09:961 (6) - 應該要nc在這 不是03:10:377 (1) - 改了

gl

Sotarks wrote:

Aoi
- 00:26:320 (1) - I really expected a better slider art for this than a lame "m" form xd for me now i cant make any more incredible pattern than a lame M ;w;
- 01:28:401 (3) - If it was me i wouldn't overlap like that, really visible in game.. i think its just ok and have no influence on the flow
- 01:30:379 (1) - really bad anti-flow and emphasis here, i would change the shape of this slider. do something different (not on the slider 1 but 3 and 4)
- 02:07:137 (4) - Hitsound missing ? nope cuz the guitar is just on 02:05:983 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - but not 4
- 02:36:313 (1) - reduce spacing for this one, that note doesn't need so much emphasis imo. try to put it 312|160 ok
- 03:39:031 (1) - really hard to follow that shape lol ok just changed it to a spinner

sorry couldn't find much, 'cause i don't really agree with your mapping style here but it's okay so w/e
gl with this~

Yohanes wrote:

Hi! m4m from my Q

Aoi
For me personally, I think the slider velocity is too low, but whatever i like to use 1.6x xd
- 00:34:665 (3,4,5,1) - How about something like this for better flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6146203 ok
- 00:42:906 (1) - Move it around 248|48 for better emphasis the cymbal ok
- 00:43:401 (3,4) - This doesn't flow very well to be honest. By the way the slider curved, player are expecting to have a downwards movement onto the next note instead of upward movement. This will possibly break the flow. Simplest fix is reversing the slider's curve orientation like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6146279 ok
- 00:47:192 (1,2) -, 00:53:456 (1,2) - same problem ^ ^
- 00:47:522 (2,3) - This one in particular, you can try to Ctrl+G it? It will flows better that way ok and do some other changes
- 00:53:126 (4) - Break this into two circle and put jumps between them will emphasise the music better http://puu.sh/rj1fe/d2f69ab021.jpg there is just one strong beat at 00:53:126 - so i think just make there clickable is ok and also as 00:53:291 - has nearly no sounds so i prefer to not put anything here
- 01:04:005 (2,1) - Antijumps between these feels a little awkward. I perosnally would stack all of 01:04:335 (1,2,3) - and put it further from previous note https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6146331 good idea
- 01:08:456 (2) - I find it a little bit weird that you suddenly following vocal, and ignore the beat on 01:08:621 - that you've always mapped previously. I suggest you to change it into circle + 1/2 slider instead http://puu.sh/rj1yw/82583751f7.jpg ok
- You're following guitar the entire 01:14:555 (1,2,3,4,5) -, but suddenly switch to following vocal on 01:16:862 (6,7,1) - which may threw player off. I would highly recommend you to change 01:16:862 (6,7) - into 1/2 slider instead http://puu.sh/rj1H0/f8be4813e5.jpgi think here is just ok cuz that kind of reading should have no problem with a insane player and as the music is quiet enough, i want to make those vocal both clickable here
- 01:19:500 (6,7) - same, even though it's not as bad as before because the vocal is really strong on this one^
- 01:24:445 (3,4,5,6,7) - too cramped imo LOL try to space them alittle bit more if you feel like it nooooooo i just put them like it i think its just interesting and i think that part is not quite hard cuz the ds is so slow that we can ignore them
- 01:43:566 (1,1,1) - rotate the first two little bit more for smoother flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6146434i just decided to make something different here ;w; but anyway thx for advice
- 01:44:884 (1) - put it around 405|235 for cleaner looks ^ also thx for advice xd
- 02:08:126 (2) - why don't you put it on 02:08:785 (1) - tail? like you did on all other here id like to put 02:08:126 (2,2,2) - on a line so i didnt stack here
- 02:34:005 (1,1,1) - the spacing difference is so big while there're no significant difference on the music, try to make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6146485i want to make those sliders' tail on a straight line so no change (also i think now they look better)
- 03:00:049 (1,2) - same problem with what I mentioned before
- Wow, the timing difference is too sudden on 03:09:961 -. That will make 03:10:377 (2,3) - really hard to hit correctly. I know this was a sloppy solution, but I would rather put two reverses on 03:09:961 (1) - and delete 03:10:377 (2,3) - just changed 2 into sliders and delete 3
That star on the end lol i deleted it now as many people pointed out that is not a good choice lol

Hard
Nice diff! Even though this is more like a light insane instead of hard lol
- 01:16:862 (6,7) - same thing as Aoi diff so same reason here
- 01:57:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - try this rhythm instead, it will fits the drum sound better. Remember, it's gennereally better to map the head of a slider on a stronger sound (usually white tick) http://puu.sh/rj3ct/6f8bd92a3d.jpg do sth different
- Because 02:16:698 (1,2) - has different direction compared to others, better ctrl+g 02:15:709 (1,2) - for consistency here i want to arrange 02:15:214 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - each 1 is lower then the previous 2 since imo this flow is better so id like to keep that

I did take a look at Easy and Normal diff, and I think they're alright
The difference between Normal and Hard is quite big though, I think you'll need 1 more difficulty to close the gap between Normal and Hard mmm i think its ok cuz hard does have a hard icon but i will be awared next time xd

Thats all from me, Good Luck!

kanor wrote:

[Normal]
02:57:906 (2,3) - DS 问题 ......好的

[Hard]
01:13:895 (3,4,1) - 这个小跳有点突然，在hard里有点难 把1移上去了
01:15:873 (3,4,5,6) - 这一段移动要求有点太高了，而且这里曲子也不是特别激昂的部分，突然这么大的位移感觉有点不合曲 改成跟后面那一块差不多了
02:16:698 (1,2) - 这里ctrl+G更舒服，而且你和下一个NOTE隔了1/1，反选一下DS更合理一点 ok
02:47:522 (3,4,1) - flow不好，ctrl+G一下，然后顺时针转30°左右更顺手 ok
03:01:203 - 这里这个音不要漏比较好 这里我想跟前面保持相同的节奏，就不动了
03:28:618 (1,2,1) - 这里DS突然拉得这么大，不舒服 把2删了
没什么大问题，挺好的，就是01:25:763 (3,4) - 这种逆flow的最好不要滥用，偶尔用一下可以有奇效，但是用多了总感觉打起来不顺手......好，我看看后面能不能再改一下
[Aoi]
00:42:906 (1,2,3,4,5) - 123是逆时针的flow，345却变成了顺时针，同一个NC里面最好就尽量保持同一个趋势的flow比较好，频繁地变会觉得很卡手 删了2把1改折返了
01:04:665 (2,2) - 如果你要叠，可以叠得更好一点 。大意了
01:08:456 (2,3) - 这里的跳不合适，相比于之前这里的曲子不算激昂，这个跳太突然了，3反选一下舒服很多ok
01:22:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 最后那个1放得突然，如果你打算放跳的话可以把三角形的DS越拉越大，这样就不会特别突兀好
01:33:676 (3) - ctrl+G flow ok
01:35:654 (1,2,3) - 1和2的blanket还可以更好，3的话反选一下打起来更舒服 ok
01:56:752 (1,2,3,4,1) - flow不舒服 改了，好像是跟之前hard里一样的问题......
02:06:643 (1,2,3,4) - 可以拉大一点，比如1.1-1.3 可以，x了1.2
02:07:632 (2,2,2) - 全部放到02:09:115 (2) - 大概好点 感觉全摆到那里就太无聊了才这么玩了一下
02:09:280 (1,2) - 这种逆flow太违和了...... 这个我先保留下意见，我自己打了很多遍感觉都还好，看后面还有没有人说
02:13:236 (3,4) - 这两个分别反选一下可以得到更好的flow，但是后面那四个滑条的flow你最好再改改 好.....希望我改得没问题
02:18:181 (2,4) - 分别反选 ok
02:36:148 (8) - 这个因为没音可以不map，02:36:313 (1) - 可以半叠在02:35:983 (7) - 上 叠了，然后把7改了个1/2带过去了
02:44:884 (3,4) - 直接反选 改了
02:53:950 (2,3) - 大跳不合理 这里我和02:54:610 (4,1) - 都是一样的想法，我觉得这样分一下应该可以有
03:28:618 (2,3,4,5) - nice star>< thx xd

GL

Plaudible wrote:

NM from my queue! (^_^)/
Just doing Hard/Aoi, seems this has been modded quite a bit so I'm going to assume the previous two difficulties are fairly good to go.

Hard

• 
  00:04:120 (3,4,2) - Gonna be honest with these, hard curved anchor sliders like this never really look aesthetically pleasing. The softer ones at 00:20:120 (1,2) are a little more appropriate. k changed like 00:20:120 (1,2) - xd
  
  00:26:120 (5,1) - It'd be just fine to stack these if you'd like, the overlap doesn't feel necessary. i dont stack them just because with a stack the shape of 1 would not look quite symmetry
  
  00:57:082 (4,1) - There's a really drastic flow change here, and it's not really justified, even with the vocal change, since you don't do that in other parts of the song. true, changed
  
  01:15:214 (2,3,4,5,6) - Really inconsistent spacing? just make them visually the same ds (even not exactly) since if i keep 0.78x here that would looks quite weird
  
  01:30:379 (1,2,3,4,1) - Good structure and flow, nicely done thx xd
  
  01:43:566 (1,2,3,4,1) - From a visual perspective this looks kinda silly. Change up the sliders a bit mmm but i think those sliders are just ok for me
  
  01:45:379 (2,3,1) - Stack these so that if they were all together, they'd look like a triple (if that makes sense) sry i dont get ur point..... i do stack them
  
  02:14:884 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I personally feel that the spacing here is a bit weird to read, since they're fairly close to each other. 02:16:863 (2,1) Are spaced more appropriately, as is the next jump pattern.i think since there is an enough time space enter each jumps so that would not be quite hard to hard players
  
  I feel your slider art is a bit lackluster around the song, especially in the ending. I disagree with hard anchor point straight sliders personally, but it's your choice. Play around with them a bit more! Have some fun, do maybe things like this: http://puu.sh/rlTHb/70c678d349.jpg k looks good

Aoi

• 
  00:20:120 (1,2,3,4) - Drastically larger spacing compared to the rest of the intro, what for? reduced ds between 1 and 2
  
  00:26:120 (5,1) - If you took advice for last one, stack these~ same as before
  
  00:26:320 (1) - Also, this looks very off. Could you use grid snap and make it perfect in a straight setting, then rotate it to where you need it to be instead? k fixed!
  
  00:42:082 (3,6) - Honestly, these feel really weird without hitsounds. If the song doesn't warrant a stack, don't map one! I'd just do a slider. true... changed
  
  01:59:060 (4,5,1,1) - This is painful to look at. The overlaps are okay later on, but this just looks awful. Maybe curve 01:58:071 (1,2), straighten 01:58:730 (3,4), and angle 01:59:390 (1) further upwards. If not, just change it so they don't overlap so much, it looks really bad. changed! hope now its better
  
  02:06:313 (3,4,1) - Flow here is a bit off. I'd just change the second pattern altogether. rotated a bit but i think have a sudden change here would be better
  
  03:10:377 (2) - Space this out more. It's way too close for the song's current mood still, even if the tempo is slowing. k

Overall not a bad set! Some structural issues though IMO throughout the map, with some poor overlaps and such. I suggest changing the AR to 3 and then going through your maps to see if you can improve aesthetics. Good luck~

Mein Gauche wrote:

hi from my q.

[Aoi]
00:43:401 (2,3) - you should put circle first and then the slider. it follows the vocals and plays better. t/58959
00:45:873 (2,3) - ^
00:53:785 (2,3) - ^ it plays better.
03:00:379 (2,3,4,5) - ^ true, all changed
02:34:005 (1,1,1) - too fast. imo they are ok for emphasizing
02:34:665 (1) - this should end at 02:34:829 because of the hihat. here i think a 3/4 slider would be a better link up then a 1/2 one

[Hard]
02:52:137 - why empty? try slider to white, and hitcircle at 02:52:632. add a reverse slider

---------------------------------------

Good Luck.

1. 03:15:801 - Double timing lines while they don't share the same sampleset. Please turn the red line into S:C1 sampleset. If there is no speed change, you must remove the green line.

1. 02:16:203 (2,3) - 这个跟的是什么音轨啊？这样不会好一些吗？
2. 02:20:983 - 没音效吗，但是音乐强调感还是蛮明显的。加个whistle鼓点吧
3. 02:36:313 - 这里是不是可以来一个铃音？

1. 00:16:120 (3) - 好像前面这一缓和部分只有这里的滑条尾盖过了长白线上的重音。00:15:320 (2,3) - 这两个节奏ctrl+G吧

1. 00:26:320 (1) - 这个滑条最好结尾在00:28:720 - 蓝线处，不然蓝线和白线同时有tick声音太奇怪了
2. 00:41:588 (1,2,3,4) - 距离最好要放大一点。00:40:928 (3,4) - 00:41:258 (4,1) - 距离都比较大，所以00:41:588 (1,2) - 很容易读成1/2。
3. 01:21:313 (1,2,3) - 这个距离不要前后等距吧。01:19:829 (1,2) - 像这里一样有分段区别的就很好。
4. 02:28:071 (4,1) - 距离要拉开，容易看成跳。
5. 02:35:983 (5) - 这个音效下的奇怪，还真没见过在蓝线上下鼓红线上没音的。反正我觉得三个音要么都下，要么只下白线，没有蓝线下鼓红线空着的道理。
6. 讲道理你最后一个kiai的难度已经超过正常hard的范围了，很多跳，这也是导致你Normal->Hard之间gap较大的主要原因。是否考虑要把最后一个kiai的难度降低一点？对整个spread的完善有好处。

1. 01:12:577 (3,4,1,2) - 这一段的距离很奇怪，3->4->1的目视距离是一样的，但是节奏差了一半，不过这个也就算了。但是1->2的距离直接又翻倍了，这就真的很难读了。这个1->2很容易读成1/1，这里强烈建议要把这几个note的位置全部重新整理一遍。
2. 01:22:137 (4,1) - 这个距离不要放这么近吧，后面都是跳
3. 01:29:555 (2,3,4,5) - 这个钝角flow打起来不舒服，有没有办法换一个方法，比如：http://puu.sh/rnu83/4eeb009b67.jpg（没处理overlap的问题，算是抛砖引玉吧，具体还得你自己想）
4. 01:59:390 (1,1,1) - 这个节奏差距你怎么区分？玩家没法读啊
5. 02:34:665 (1) - 把这个滑条改出1~2个转折来。现在这样也是根本没法区分是1/2还是3/4滑条，改成转折滑条后会起到一定的提醒节奏不同程度。
6. 整个diff的flow先不说，因为大部分是滑条，不会有很大的问题。但是美观效果相当一般，比如02:10:269 (3,4,5,6,7,9) - 的弧度不自然（先做一个滑条然后Ctrl+Shift+F，做出来的可以比较自然）；02:10:763 (8,10) - 遮太少反而感觉有点乱；02:13:895 (1,3) - 不平行，看起来相当随机；然后我个人不是很赞同你的overlap的用法，比如02:44:884 (3,4,1,2) - 一是遮的有点少，二是13和24居然不是平行的，2明显要在4滑条上方而1对于3滑条来说不明显，看起来也非常随机。所以整体来讲我认为图在美观方面还可以进一步加强。

1. at first, i'm afraid to say like this but, drum-hitwhistle sound is much weird for me. just using default soft-finish sound, your hitsound will be improved much more.
2. your hitsounding is much lack of finish sound imo, considering amount of the cymbal sound on the song. check my following mod and it will improve your hitsounding.

1. 00:26:520 - try to decrease volume here~ these slider tick are capable of breaking silence of the song.
   additional : listening to the song, drum-finish at 00:32:027 - is the correct way. i think it's the best.
2. 00:32:027 - this finish is unnecessary imo. cuz this song starts at 00:32:357 - , you shouldn't emphasize here.
3. 00:36:643 (2) - finish will fit better than clap. the cymbal rings here.
4. 00:56:423 - missing whistle
5. 01:32:192 - / 01:32:522 - add whistle, it fits for the song.
6. 01:40:928 - finish sound is better imo. changes atmosphere clearly here.
7. 01:44:884 - finish will be better. same reason as above.
8. 01:46:203 (1) - nice sound :3
9. 02:04:665 - finish will be better.
10. 02:07:138 (4) - is it intentional not to put drum-clap?
11. 02:12:577 - finish
12. 02:16:863 (2) - try to change whistle to clap here~ much fit for the drum pattern of the song i feel.
13. 02:17:851 - finish
14. 02:23:126 - I think you have to put finish here. 02:23:126 - should be more emphasized than 02:22:796 -
15. 02:28:401 - try finish
16. 02:57:412 - finish
17. 03:02:687 - finish
18. 03:07:961 - finish

1. 00:26:520 - volume down here
2. 00:32:027 (1,1) - same thing as Aoi. fix finish issues and try drum-finish
3. 01:13:730 - missing clap i think
4. 01:32:851 - is it necessary to put Sampleset:Soft here? consider fixing this to Auto
5. 02:16:863 (2) - try clap
6. 02:36:066 - remove drum-clap and it'll sound natural imo.
7. 02:56:093 (4) - missing finish considering Aoi

1. 00:26:920 - volume down
2. 00:29:720 (1) - drum-finish is the best i think
3. 01:03:676 - remove finish then it'll be more natural to hear.
4. 01:12:906 (2) - missing whistle
5. 02:11:258 (1) - this is related to sound so i mention it. this spinner should be end at 02:12:577 - , then put finish. because on 02:12:577 - , there's a strong cymbal sound. if you consider recovery time, it isn't much problem to remove 02:13:236 (1) - .
6. 02:14:225 - change whistle to clap
7. 02:16:698 - try clap~
8. 02:18:181 - / 02:19:500 - change whistle to clap, will be much better sound.
9. 02:53:456 (4) - change clap to whistle. on downbeats, low sound should be there basically.
10. 02:54:774 - ^
11. 02:56:093 (3) - missing finish considering the highest one.
12. 03:02:027 - remove whistle or clap? i can't find other place you use clap and whistle on same time.

1. 00:26:720 - volume down
2. 00:29:720 (1) - re:spinner issue. I think it's much better to end this at 00:32:357 - . much weird for me to end spinner at upbeat especially on Easy diff. recovery time will be still fine.
3. 00:46:533 (2) - missing whistle
4. 01:10:269 - ^
5. 02:15:214 (1,2,3,4) - not hitsound thing. try this rhythm to follow the guitar. it'll be natural and easier to read for newbies imo.
   
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6. 02:20:983 - add whistle sounds better
7. 02:24:774 - remove whistle. maybe it's not intetional for you.
8. 03:10:377 (1) - re:re:spinner issue. spinner should not start at upbeat imo. try to start this at 03:10:794 - . then, change 03:09:294 (3) - to two 1/1 sliders.