i like how this has no mods and is already nearly SP12 lmao... well i'm here with the first mod, because i feel like it
Change OD to 9 or 9.5, since that is approximately the OD of OD6+DT, which would be more suited to a song which is mostly 300+bpm. OD8.5 is high, but still not high enough for this bpm imo, since OD9 is already accable well at 230bpm. Also it's pretty easy to notelock in those fast streams otherwise.
00:24:294 - this section is basically repeating itsself even though the music is different at parts, therefore i'd suggest adding a bit of variety
--- 00:28:981 (17) - change to d to emphasize the deeper sound than the last repetition at 00:28:794 (16) -
--- 00:31:419 - ddkkd to emphasize the high sound at 00:31:794 (26) -
--- 00:33:294 (31) - change to k, since it's the same pitch as 00:34:044 (33) -
--- that should add enough variety and make it less repetitive
02:34:068 - this section is basically the same thing that i mentioned before, it's a repeating pattern in a section where the music isn't always the same, which gets pretty stale. I'd suggest adding some more variation corresponding to the music here to still keep this slow part somewhat refreshing.
--- 02:35:423 (28,29) - ctrl G to match the high note at 02:35:616 (29) - (you can also change 02:35:810 (30) - to d in addition if you would prefer that pattern)
--- 02:38:906 (40) - change this to d, since there isn't really anything special here and it would also add variation. also the triple d adds more emphasis on 02:39:487 (42) - which is kind of a prominent sound in this repetition
--- 02:44:906 (59,60) - ctrl G to match the high sound at 02:44:906 (59) - but still keep variation to the next suggestion
--- 02:47:810 (68,69) - ctrl G to match the high sound at 02:48:003 (69) -
--- 02:54:003 (88,89) - ctrl G
--- 02:57:487 (100) - change to d to emphasize the low sound at 02:57:293 (99) - more
05:07:849 - add a d, since there is a faint sound here an the k d k d k becomes too repetitive otherwise
05:09:397 - you could also add a k here, i think it would flow well
05:39:183 (74) - maybe change to k to add extra emphasis on 05:39:355 (75) - since it is stronger than the other similar sounds in this part
05:52:802 (159) - change to k for the high sound here
05:55:469 (179) - ^
05:58:135 (200) - ^
07:28:976 (71) - change to d, since the sound here is deeper (you can also change 07:28:818 (70) - to k to emphasize this more if you want)
07:49:186 (141) - ^
07:51:397 (146) - change to k, it just fits the natural flow more imo and would emphasize the next note more too
07:53:291 (153) - you could change this to d to contrast with the last pattern, where 07:52:028 (149) - is a higher sound
For the suggestions on the repetitive parts it's also ok if you come up with your own solution, as long as it isn't as repetitive.
My main issue there is that players basically don't even have to pay attention for a long period of time there, which isn't really good.
well, that was it.... nice map and awesome song man
I didn't say much about the fast parts, since they melded with the song very well imo.