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Easy
00:00:100 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - It would be better if they're all spaced constantly. It kind of looks odd with inconsistent spacing. Case in point.
00:25:700 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm concerned about the readability of this, especially as this is an [Easy] difficulty. The 1/2's were kind of surprising, and I was expecting the vocals to be mapped here.
00:48:300 (1,2) - I was expecting (1) to follow the vocals at 00:48:100, and (2) to be at 00:49:500, but it's fine as is. Though would be less confusing if you followed the vocals.
01:03:300 (4,5) - Shouldn't the Finish be at (5) instead of the end of (4)?
01:04:500 -> 01:14:100 - This part of the chorus feels more empty than the first part. Perhaps switch them, so that the first part is the one less dense?
01:16:900 (1) - Don't anti-jump this to the previous note.
Normal
00:00:100 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Same comment on [Easy], perhaps distance snap these notes?
00:09:700 (1,1) - Ugly overlap D:
00:16:500 (1) - I think you have to make the previous slider end at the center for this note to look in-place.
00:47:900 (2,1) - Suggestion: Remove one repeat on (2). Add finish at the end then move (1) to 00:49:500. Basically the same thing I suggest in [Easy].
00:51:300 -> 01:16:100 - This part definitely lacks hitsounds other than the claps. What happened to the finishes I heard in [Easy]?
01:16:900 (1) - Don't anti-jump this.
ertyukjh010's Hard
00:00:100 -> 00:12:900 - If you include this part, then there's four different slider speeds, which is one more than the three slider speed limit. It plays fine though, so I think they're ok to keep.
00:16:100 (1) - Perhaps map this with notes and sliders instead (including the empty space after?)
00:29:300 (4) - Move 1/2 later?
00:40:900 (2) - This doesn't repeat on any beat at all. Change it?
00:47:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Whoa, I think that's overdoing it with Patternmapping and jumps. I don;t even hear anything significant to indicate a Jump.
01:23:300 (5) - New combo?
Hard
00:07:500 (3,4) - Speed-up feels sudden compared to 00:00:300 (2,3).
00:10:700 (1,2,3) - Not too sure about the spacing.
00:47:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - Accelerated Spacing doesn't fit it IMO.
00:49:100 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:10:700 (1,2,3).
00:55:300 (3) This doesn't repeat on any beat at all. The vocal is 1/4 back.
01:20:100 (1,2,3) - Not too sure about the spacing.
01:21:700 (1,2,3) - ^
KPY's
00:02:700 (2) - IMO don't jump this. At least not that far.
00:17:900 (1) - ^
00:30:000 (1) - Spinner plays oddly. Perhaps move it to 00:30:500?
00:33:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why does it jump suddenly without anything significant from the song >.>
00:36:100 (3) - This jump feels sudden.
00:42:300 (4,5,6) - Spacing change suddenly...
00:44:300 -> 00:47:300 - I suggest you tone down the jumps in this part.
Chorus jumps are fair enough, but most other jumps don't quite match the music >.>
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Easy
00:00:100 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - It would be better if they're all spaced constantly. It kind of looks odd with inconsistent spacing. Case in point.
00:25:700 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm concerned about the readability of this, especially as this is an [Easy] difficulty. The 1/2's were kind of surprising, and I was expecting the vocals to be mapped here.
00:48:300 (1,2) - I was expecting (1) to follow the vocals at 00:48:100, and (2) to be at 00:49:500, but it's fine as is. Though would be less confusing if you followed the vocals.
01:03:300 (4,5) - Shouldn't the Finish be at (5) instead of the end of (4)?
01:04:500 -> 01:14:100 - This part of the chorus feels more empty than the first part. Perhaps switch them, so that the first part is the one less dense?
01:16:900 (1) - Don't anti-jump this to the previous note.
Normal
00:00:100 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Same comment on [Easy], perhaps distance snap these notes?
00:09:700 (1,1) - Ugly overlap D:
00:16:500 (1) - I think you have to make the previous slider end at the center for this note to look in-place.
00:47:900 (2,1) - Suggestion: Remove one repeat on (2). Add finish at the end then move (1) to 00:49:500. Basically the same thing I suggest in [Easy].
00:51:300 -> 01:16:100 - This part definitely lacks hitsounds other than the claps. What happened to the finishes I heard in [Easy]?
01:16:900 (1) - Don't anti-jump this.
ertyukjh010's Hard
00:00:100 -> 00:12:900 - If you include this part, then there's four different slider speeds, which is one more than the three slider speed limit. It plays fine though, so I think they're ok to keep.
00:16:100 (1) - Perhaps map this with notes and sliders instead (including the empty space after?)
00:29:300 (4) - Move 1/2 later?
00:40:900 (2) - This doesn't repeat on any beat at all. Change it?
00:47:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Whoa, I think that's overdoing it with Patternmapping and jumps. I don;t even hear anything significant to indicate a Jump.
01:23:300 (5) - New combo?
Hard
00:07:500 (3,4) - Speed-up feels sudden compared to 00:00:300 (2,3).
00:10:700 (1,2,3) - Not too sure about the spacing.
00:47:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - Accelerated Spacing doesn't fit it IMO.
00:49:100 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:10:700 (1,2,3).
00:55:300 (3) This doesn't repeat on any beat at all. The vocal is 1/4 back.
01:20:100 (1,2,3) - Not too sure about the spacing.
01:21:700 (1,2,3) - ^
KPY's
00:02:700 (2) - IMO don't jump this. At least not that far.
00:17:900 (1) - ^
00:30:000 (1) - Spinner plays oddly. Perhaps move it to 00:30:500?
00:33:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why does it jump suddenly without anything significant from the song >.>
00:36:100 (3) - This jump feels sudden.
00:42:300 (4,5,6) - Spacing change suddenly...
00:44:300 -> 00:47:300 - I suggest you tone down the jumps in this part.
Chorus jumps are fair enough, but most other jumps don't quite match the music >.>