1. 0OoMickeyoO0's Hard (4.45 stars, 119 notes)
2. Easy (1.44 stars, 65 notes)
3. HeatKai's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 313 notes)
4. Insane (4.98 stars, 195 notes)
5. Normal (3.44 stars, 97 notes)

Beren wrote:

Hi from V.B.R's studio

[General]
cut down your mp3 file

[Easy]
01:12:795 (3) - end at 01:13:763

[Normal+]
00:18:602 (4) - cut down one turn
01:08:924 (5) - end at 01:09:892
01:14:731 (4) - end at 01:15:699

star

1. http://puu.sh/1hAl hidden ._.

1. 00:24:771 - unnecessary green line?
2. 00:25:013 - why x0.5? & unnecessary
3. 00:25:739 - ^
4. 00:25:981 - ^
5. 00:26:223 - unnecessary green line
6. 00:28:642 - ^
7. 00:28:884 - ^
8. 00:29:610 - ^
9. 00:29:852 - ^
10. 00:36:377 - ^
11. 00:36:626 - ^
12. 00:37:352 - ^
13. 00:37:594 - ^
14. 00:40:255 - ^
15. 00:41:465 - ^
16. 00:46:183 - http://puu.sh/1hzy
17. 00:50:900 - unnecessary green line
18. 00:51:142 - ^
19. 00:54:771 - ^
20. 00:55:013 - ^
21. 00:58:582 - ^
22. 00:58:703 - ^
23. 00:58:884 - ^
24. 00:59:247 (2,3) - (2) end at 00:59:973 & (3) delete
25. 01:02:513 - unnecessary green line
26. 01:03:058 - ^
27. 01:09:513 - ^
28. 01:17:634 (1,2) - (1) end at 01:18:360 , (2) delete

1. Rename to Hard.
2. Deletion of unnecessary Green Line like easy.
3. 01:10:860 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/68155

1. Rename to Insane.
2. Deletion of unnecessary Green Line like easy.

mebins wrote:

-add some tags?
-i suck at timing but heres what i got
124-bpm
4570-offset
- um the story board is a little messed up on the title part


but other then that i couldnt find that many problems

STARED FOR EPICNESS and nice map :FD

Thanks for checked timing.
Kudosu award !

Muya wrote:

-Story Board-

1. http://puu.sh/1hAl hidden ._.

-Easy-

1. 00:24:771 - unnecessary green line?
2. 00:25:013 - why x0.5? & unnecessary
3. 00:25:739 - ^
4. 00:25:981 - ^
5. 00:26:223 - unnecessary green line
6. 00:28:642 - ^
7. 00:28:884 - ^
8. 00:29:610 - ^
9. 00:29:852 - ^
10. 00:36:377 - ^
11. 00:36:626 - ^
12. 00:37:352 - ^
13. 00:37:594 - ^
14. 00:40:255 - ^
15. 00:41:465 - ^
16. 00:46:183 - http://puu.sh/1hzy
17. 00:50:900 - unnecessary green line
18. 00:51:142 - ^
19. 00:54:771 - ^
20. 00:55:013 - ^
21. 00:58:582 - ^
22. 00:58:703 - ^
23. 00:58:884 - ^
24. 00:59:247 (2,3) - (2) end at 00:59:973 & (3) delete
25. 01:02:513 - unnecessary green line
26. 01:03:058 - ^
27. 01:09:513 - ^
28. 01:17:634 (1,2) - (1) end at 01:18:360 , (2) delete

-Normal+-

1. Rename to Hard.
2. Deletion of unnecessary Green Line like easy.
3. 01:10:860 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/68155

-Hard-

1. Rename to Insane.
2. Deletion of unnecessary Green Line like easy.

All unnecessary green timing deleted.
Kudosu award !

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~ Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Everything fine here ~
- Maybe make a Normal ? I mean is not such a long song anyways ~

Skin;
- Elements you are missing (means you MUST add them)
> Score-ki, score-kidanger, score-kidanger2, I suggest a png. 1x1 transparent image for these
> Hitcircle-overlay and approach-circle
> Spinner-osu
> I fixed your hitcircle, it should look better now ~

SPOILER

[attachment=0:f7ee6]hitcircle.png[/attachment:f7ee6]

> Your hitbursts are so adorable >w< !!

Easy;
- 01:18:360 >> Kiai ends here
- Very simple and nice Easy

Hard;
- 00:28:279 >> Add whistle ?
- 00:53:440 >> All these repeats don't sound good to me, remove all of them. Then maybe add a slider that starts at 00:54:166 and ends on the white tick (00:54:408) then add a note on the next red tick and finally add a slider at 00:55:134 that ends on a red tick (00:55:618)
- 00:57:795 >> Remove a repeat and move to the next red tick

Insane;
- Umm, fine I guess ~

* Star ~

artpiggo wrote:

Can I ask for guest Diff [Normal] ?

backstep wrote:

artpiggo wrote:

Can I ask for guest Diff [Normal] ?

แล้วแต่ครับ ตอนนี้มี 4 ดิฟแล้ว -.-

backstep wrote:

artpiggo wrote:

Can I ask for guest Diff [Normal] ?

แล้วแต่ครับ ตอนนี้มี 4 ดิฟแล้ว -.-

NO KUDOSU ON THIS POST

บอกไม่เอาคุโด้ไง 5555 ม้อดโครตเกรียน

backstep wrote:
artpiggo wrote:

Can I ask for guest Diff [Normal] ?


แล้วแต่ครับ ตอนนี้มี 4 ดิฟแล้ว -.-

จะเยอะไปไหน

โดนผมแย่ง น้อยใจอะดิ พี่อาร์ท 55

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

เสียงไรอะ -0-

อ้ะนี่อัพใหม่

backstep wrote:

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

เสียงไรอะ -0-

อ้ะนี่อัพใหม่

ไม่ต้องแล้ว - -

พี่แก้ไปหมดละ 55+

General
Mickey hard set preview point to 62629

SBskin
พื้นหลังใช้ jpg ได้จะประหยัดพื้นที่กว่า แล้วก็ Pause-overlay ด้วย จะมีบางตัวที่จำเป็นต้องเป็น PNG
(ใน เพลง โชบิทก็แก้เป็น JPG ด้วย) เปลี่ยนละ

Element

ลองใช้สีอื่นที่แยกกันได้เห็นชัดเจนมากกว่า ชมพูแดง หน่อย พอเล่นทริกโน๊ตของ รูโน่แล้วมันมองยาก 4 สีไปเลย

Easy
00:18:114 (3) - เปลี่ยนเป็น สไลเดอร์ 1 โน๊ต 1
00:22:470 ลบ 2 ตัวหลังทิ้งแล้วทำ สไลเดอร์ 1 ขาวรีเทินแทน
00:24:405 (3) - ฟีนิชหัวแรก
00:28:275 (3) - เหมือนข้างบน
00:36:018 (3) - ^
00:39:888 (3) - ^
00:50:050 add note
01:17:630 (1) - ลบตัวนี้ทิ้งแล้วทำสปินตั้งแต่ 01:16:905 ยัน 01:18:599
เปลี่ยนหมด
Normal +

นอมอลก็พอมั้ง

00:08:921 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ท่อนพวกนี้ ก่อนที่จะมีคนร้องไม่ลองใช้ เสียง วิทเทิลแทนแคลปอันเดิมล่ะ

00:24:889 (2) - เปลี่ยนเป็นโน๊ตเดี่ยว 2 ตัว
00:27:067 (5) - ลบนี่ทิ้ง
00:34:809 (5) - ^
00:50:292 (4) - ^
00:57:792 (3) - เริ่มที่เดิมแต่เปลี่ยนเป็น 1/2 รีเทิน จบ 00:58:518
00:58:760 (1) - ใส่วิสเทิล
01:10:857 (1,2,3,4) - ทำให้ตั้งฉาก หน่อยเกือบละ
01:14:728 (4) - สไลเดอร์นี่จัดให้โค้งดีกว่าตรงๆนะไม่สวยเลย
แก้หมด
Insane

+1 APP 7 เล่นยาก 8 เล่นง่าย
00:22:712 (6,7,8) - ทำโค้งๆได้ไหม กดยาก
00:23:438 (1) - โค้งเหมือนกัน 3 ได้ไหม
00:26:341 (7,8,9) - พวกแบบนี้กดยากชะมัดเลย OTL
00:46:059 (3) - เลื่อนลงมาหน่อยได้ไหม
00:46:905 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - จัดให้ดูเป็น "โค้ง" มากกว่านี้
01:02:631 (2,3,4,5,1) - เออเรียงแบบนี้แจ่ม
01:10:131 (3,4,5,6,7) - เรียงให้กดง่ายๆทีพลีส ยังกะรูปหนอนด้น
01:16:180 (4,5,6,7,8) - ขอโค้งๆกว่านี้ทีเถอะ โค้งไม่ได้อ่ะ โน้ตน้อยเกิน (กะทำรูปสายฟ้า)
01:16:905 (1,2) - เปลี่ยนเป็นโน๊ต 4 ตัวตามโวคอล
เปลี่ยนหมด

ทำไมเหมือนม๊อดเพลง ยาว 8 นาทีเลยวะ

ม๊อด 5 ดิฟ เพลงแค่นาทีเดียวก็พาอาเจียนได้แล้ว -.-

regenz wrote:

Micky hard remod new post

overall hitsounds เบามาก ดังอีกสัก 5% ทุกเส้น เพิ่มเสียงธรรมดาเป็น 55% ครับ

00:14:728 (1,2,3,4) - เปลี่ยนจาก เส้น เส้น รี โน๊ต เป็น รี เส้น รี เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:47:147 (7) - ใช้เสียงนอมอล 25% แก้เสียง fin normal เป็น 25% ส่วนเสียง fin soft ใช้ 35% ครับ
01:03:357 เพิ่มโน๊ต เรียบร้อย fixed~
01:03:841 (2,3) - เปลี่ยนเป็น 1/2 รีเทิน เริ่มเลข 2 เรียบร้อย fixed~

00:16:663ฟินหัว เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:20:534 (1) - ^ เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:24:405 (1) - ^ เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:28:276 (1) - ^ เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:32:147 (1) - ^ เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:49:083 (3) - วิสหาง เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:51:502 (7) - ฟิน เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:51:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - แยกออกมาเรียงเป็นสามเหลี่ยม 2 รูป no!!
00:52:712 - เพิ่มโน๊ต ถ้าทำขอเรียงแนวๆ ! no too!
01:10:373 (8) - ฟินหาง เรียบร้อย fixed~
01:17:631 (2) - วิสเทิล เรียบร้อย fixed~

• 
  SB/Thumbs.db Delete it
  Kiai Time 01:03:115 – 01:18:599
  Combo Colour is different in [0OoMickeyoO0's Hard] and [Spirit's Love]

• 
  00:14:244 – 00:16:663 : This break feels strange. I suggest adding some notes or set a spinner here like Insane
  00:42:792 : Add a circle
  00:50:534 (5): Put the third waypoint 1 grid right
  01:03:599 : Add a circle
  01:04:083 (2): Move to 01:04:567

• 
  00:14:244 – 00:16:663 : Same as Easy
  00:35:031 (1): Put the second waypoint 1 or 2 grids up
  00:53:921 (7): Repeat + 1
  00:55:131 (8): Slider end here and add a circle at 00:55:373
  00:58:760 (1): This spinner doesn’t fit the song well
  01:08:921 (5,6): Too close
  01:15:938 (5): Repeat – 1 and start the spinner at 01:16:663

• 
  00:49:567 (3): Remove this whistle (This is the only whistle in this diff

• 
  00:58:639 (4): It’s strange to silence this circle

• 
  00:25:131 (4): I suggest using 1.0x velocity here

[General]

SB/Thumbs.db Delete it
Kiai Time 01:03:115 – 01:18:599
Combo Colour is different in [0OoMickeyoO0's Hard] and [Spirit's Love]


[Easy]

00:14:244 – 00:16:663 : This break feels strange. I suggest adding some notes or set a spinner here like Insane
00:42:792 : Add a circle
00:50:534 (5): Put the third waypoint 1 grid right
01:03:599 : Add a circle
01:04:083 (2): Move to 01:04:567


[Normal]

00:14:244 – 00:16:663 : Same as Easy
00:35:031 (1): Put the second waypoint 1 or 2 grids up
00:53:921 (7): Repeat + 1
00:55:131 (8): Slider end here and add a circle at 00:55:373
00:58:760 (1): This spinner doesn’t fit the song well
01:08:921 (5,6): Too close
01:15:938 (5): Repeat – 1 and start the spinner at 01:16:663

[Insane]

00:25:131 (4): I suggest using 1.0x velocity here

BakaHuang wrote:

~.~ sweet song~

Just go through a quick check and no main problems found.

/me shoot a star.

Suzully wrote:

Sorry for late mod

SPOILER

Easy

• 
  00:56:340 (2) - right 1 grid?
  00:59:243 (2) - end this slider at 01:00:212. I think that sounds good and go well with the music than present one.

Normal

• 
  h'm I feel there are some difficult patterns for Normal.
  But maybe it matters little whether you fix them or not.
  00:21:260 (2) - delete this note.
  00:50:534 (4,5) - I think normal players are confused by these pattern. I recommend you to make them one slider.

Insane

• fine.

Pretty sweet song and nice hitsounds.
/me shoot star!

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi~

Storyboard mod

~Thoughts and suggestions~
[*] Lovely skin <3
[*] About the flashes, I think them being completely opaque kind of ruins the soft and cute atmosphere. Maybe if you fade White to 0.5 instead of 1 (check the codes in the .osb if you don't know what I'm talking about) they look way better and softer~
^ Fixed.
~Issues and Adjustments~
[*] I wonder... The artist is "Singular" but you have "Singgular" in the texts, which one is the correct one? xP
^ "Singular" is correct I fixed SB now
General mod
- [0OoMickeyoO0's Hard] and [Spirit's Love] have a different offset, please fix this.
^ about Spirit's Love diff, If him don't edit him diff within 7 days I'll remove difficulty.
~Easy~
00:51:975 (1) - Fix spacing.
^ Fixed
~Normal~
No problems here!

~0OoMickeyoO0's Hard~
No problems here!

~Spirit's Love~
00:09:889 (x) - This custom ticksound sounds so weird =x
00:16:059 (TS) - Maybe you should increase a bit the volume of this Timing Section...
00:25:373 (3,1,2) - Add a New Combo in (3) to mark the slowdown, remove the New Combo of (1) and move it to (2).

~Insane~
No problems here!

Nice and lovely <3 Good luck! *star*
^ Thank you very much :3

-oSpiriT_Runo- wrote:

fixed

HeatKai wrote:

got request from crimmi queue
so here's the mod

[easy]
00:10:362 (2) - spacing Okay
00:14:718 (1) - too short Fixed with long slider.
01:00:443 (1) - too short Fixed with long spin.

[normal]
00:18:104 (3) - spacing Fixed

nicely done ;_;

[mickey's hard]
Lovely <3

[spirit's love]
nice

[insane]
nice too ;_;

[overall]
nice and sweet

8.9/10

go some more mods then good

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi~Nymph here

Easy:
fine~

Normal:
Sv1.4 maybe a little fast? I think it fine for me xD
others fine~

Mickey's hard:
00:44:476 (2) - 01:05:282 (4) - maybe too near the scorebar.come down a little?

Spirit's love:
00:10:605 (5,6,1) - this spacing maybe a little uncomfortable.use half spacing here maybe? put the 6 right in the middle of 5 and 1.
01:02:137 (3) - maybe finish not clap at the end of this slider.

Insane:
fine I think~

well.that is all~ nice sb and skin~ good job~

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Sorry for late mod~
Hope you don't mind~

[Overall]
I will add a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav' if I were you ;w;
I strongly urge you not to mute the slider sliding sounds with those inheriting sections
First, it's very annoying to do it on every slider and there will be still sounds on the head and end

The red boxes shows the places with sliding sounds if you make the inheriting sections like that

You know, that sliding sound ruins the song ;___;
So, change delete all those inheriting sections and add in a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav'

[Insane]
Timing Section 00:16:049 - Put to 00:16:169 instead Fixed.
00:51:492 (9) - Delete this note? no
00:58:629 - I think muting this is not needed IMO :3 Fixed

[Spirit's Love]
00:32:137 (1) - Whistle or Finish? (A little dry without hitsounds)
01:02:137 (3) - Delete Clap (Slider end)
01:02:742 (4) - Left 2 grid (Grid size 4)
01:03:589 (3) - Clap (Slider head)
01:05:040 (1) - Clap (Slider End)
01:18:347 (4) - I don't like this because it overlaps the previous slider D:

[0OoMickeyoO0's Hard]
01:17:621 (2) - Avoid overlapping with the previous slider

[Normal]
00:16:652 (1) - Too close to spinner? (Ignore this if you think this is fine :3)
00:54:637 (8) - Avoid overlapping with the previous slider ok
01:03:104 (1) - Too close to spinner? (Ignore this if you think this is fine :3)
01:06:491 (6) - x:260 y:176 ok
01:07:943 (3) - ^ ok
01:08:910 (5) - Last point: x:452 y:296 no
01:16:652 (1) - I saw you tried to mute this spinner (Volume 0%), but it doesn't seem to work OwO Fixed

[Easy]
01:03:104 (1) - Too close to spinner? (Ignore this if you think this is fine :3)
01:06:491 (5) - x:188 y:248 Fixed
01:07:459 (1) - Delete, copy 01:08:427 (2), paste and then Ctrl + H? (To make it symmetrical) Fixed
01:10:362 (4) - 1 grid up (Grid size 4) Fixed

Star~!

Thanks you "Sis" :3
P.S. about short spinner I don't fixed sorry

1. low quality on the edge of lyrics/title1/title2 elements, do the same thing you did on title.png to make them smoother.
2. spinner-background compress to JPG format.
3. hit0, hit50...should be 256x256. (this is not a must-fix but suggest you do so)
4. some black border parts of score- elements is cut. (0,6,8,9,%,X is especially obvious)
5. copy score- elements to default- elements to make your skin complete?
6. force border color since you use custom hitcircle skin, to prevent strange border color from players' custom skin unfit your custom skin.

[Colours]
SliderBorder : 238,238,238 // you can change the color yourself

1. 33,381
2. 37,702
3. 46,049
4. 51,250
5. 74,718
6. 75,202
7. 75,686

1. 58,992
2. 72,782
3. 74,718

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[General]
- there're some minor issue on your storyboard/skin:

1. low quality on the edge of lyrics/title1/title2 elements, do the same thing you did on title.png to make them smoother.
2. spinner-background compress to JPG format. Fixed.
3. hit0, hit50...should be 256x256. (this is not a must-fix but suggest you do so)
4. some black border parts of score- elements is cut. (0,6,8,9,%,X is especially obvious)
5. copy score- elements to default- elements to make your skin complete?
6. force border color since you use custom hitcircle skin, to prevent strange border color from players' custom skin unfit your custom skin.

[Colours]
SliderBorder : 238,238,238 // you can change the color yourself

- remove SkinPreference:Default code in your Insane diff Fixed
- enable "display storyboard in front of combo fire", it's blocking your lyric storyboard Fixed

[Easy]
- great

[Normal]
- remove following unused timing sections:

1. 33,381
2. 37,702
3. 46,049
4. 51,250
5. 74,718
6. 75,202
7. 75,686

<00:36:007> (2) add finish for consistent hitsound (ref. [Easy])
<00:39:879> (1) ^
- last KIAI line is not snapped.
All Fixed.

[Hard]
- remove the unused timing sections in KIAI part (there're lots of them)
<00:24:153> (4,5,1) slightly inconsistent spacing, fix it in lv4 grid
- end the KIAI section at same place as other diff

[Spirit's Love]
<00:51:008> (4) clap it
<00:55:121> (5) ^
<00:58:992> (5) ^
- end the KIAI section at same place as other diff

[Insane]
- remove following unused timing sections:

1. 58,992
2. 72,782
3. 74,718

- do this arrangement:
<00:58:024> (1) remove new combo
<00:59:234> (3) new combo
<00:59:718> (1) remove new combo
All Fixed
star, good.

Baka Backstep , fast Ranked this thing D:!

XD

the BG when want to retry so cute T.T

1. 01:04:073 - A note here would be good for me
   Really nice Easy,i like it!

1. 01:16:652 (1) - Add a whistle on this slider
   Again,I really like the Normal too!

1. 00:20:282 (6) - Well,I find this note really unnecessary,maybe remove it?

1. I think this diff is a bit overmapped,since there are a lot of useless streams,but if you don't wanto to change this,ok
2. 00:13:266 (2) - I really don't like how this note is placed...Maybe put this like i did on the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:428 (3) - Well,this shape could be done better but never mind
4. 00:26:089 - Add a note?
5. 00:56:331 (4) - (nazi) Move the 3rd waypoint 1 grid left to make the shape better?
6. 00:59:234 (1) - Well,this shape too could be done better but never mind
7. 01:18:347 (4) - I really don't like how this slader is placed,maybe move this like in the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:28:992 (4) - Aww,i think this slider is not placed very well,but if you don't want to change the position of this slider that's ok
2. 00:46:170 (4) - Make this like 00:45:686 (2) - and move this 1 grid down

-kevincela- wrote:

As requested,here's my mod!:D

[Easy]<

1. 01:04:073 - A note here would be good for me
   Really nice Easy,i like it!

[Normal]

1. 01:16:652 (1) - Add a whistle on this slider
   Again,I really like the Normal too!

Fixed

[0OoMickeyoO0's Hard]

1. 00:20:282 (6) - Well,I find this note really unnecessary,maybe remove it?

Fixed by me

[Spirit's Love]

1. I think this diff is a bit overmapped,since there are a lot of useless streams,but if you don't wanto to change this,ok
2. 00:13:266 (2) - I really don't like how this note is placed...Maybe put this like i did on the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:428 (3) - Well,this shape could be done better but never mind
4. 00:26:089 - Add a note?
5. 00:56:331 (4) - (nazi) Move the 3rd waypoint 1 grid left to make the shape better?
6. 00:59:234 (1) - Well,this shape too could be done better but never mind
7. 01:18:347 (4) - I really don't like how this slader is placed,maybe move this like in the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:28:992 (4) - Aww,i think this slider is not placed very well,but if you don't want to change the position of this slider that's ok
   I change a shape of slider a little :>
2. 00:46:170 (4) - Make this like 00:45:686 (2) - and move this 1 grid down

Fixed

Well, the diff of Spirit needs some work,but this beatmap is turning out really well!
About Spirit diff I'll remove now, because him not responsed.
My vote is 8/10

HeatKai wrote:

I hope you like it

please please.
:3


313 combo .
Taiko diff >w<
the BG support for SB >w<

Ehhh.. I don't have free time with osu now! (Hard study in university & other activities)
But in July 1st I can add your diff in my map
Kudosu for "Supporter"

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]

00:10:363 (6) - [Nazi] right 1 lv4 grid
00:13:266 (3) - [^], up 1 lv4 grid
00:16:411 - excess timing line...?
00:18:589 (7,8,9) - a bit weird when (7) covers part of (8), try to use curve slider?
00:20:524 (1) - whistle here?
00:23:186 (9) - [Nazi], down 1 lv4 grid
00:28:992 (4) - looks better when it doesn't overlaps with (3), like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105038
00:54:637 (7) - whistle here?
01:00:202 (3,5) - whistle at ending referring to a weak piano sound?
01:08:911 (1) - right 2 lv4 grid to achieve equal spacing
01:17:984 - make this timing line softer as well, like 30%?
All fixed. (PS. some place I add whistle sound already.)
[Hard]

nice!

[Normal]

00:22:460 (4,5,6,7,1) - try to make a more regular pentagon, (4) left 1 lv4 grid, (6) up 1 lv4 grid
01:18:589 (s) - for spinner, you have to mute the spinner eariler, try to put several timing line there to make it gradually softer?
Fixed.
[Easy]
OD, AR - 1?
no problem here~
Fixed.
nice, I don't spot any unrankble stuffs here, star~

arien666 wrote:

[Just a little H's Taiko]
00:20:040 (44) - don? YES
00:38:669 (121) - ^ Maybe fix ==''
00:49:073 (170) - Delete finish? YES , add kat



Actually, not much things :3
orz

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply ;_;

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
:3

[Normal]
:3

[0OoMickeyoO0's Hard]
:3

[Insane]
:3

[Just a little H's Taiko]
00:20:040 (44) - don?
00:38:669 (121) - ^
00:49:073 (170) - Delete finish?



Actually, not much things :3
orz

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply ;_;

Equivalent wrote:

Hi,
First of all, try full submit the beatmap as I have 3 difficulties available after download, "Mickey's Hard", "Normal", "Easy". I will mod only this 3 diff as that the only 3 diff I have
Hmm... When I download I have 5 difficulty.

General:
"The White Room" is album of the song? If it so, remove it from source and move it to tags
viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24765
Remove "Preferred skin : default" on all difficulty and change it to "User's Preferences" instead Fix <3

Skin/SB:
Your missing "hitcircle.png" It's have in my folder. -0-
Change: "Spinner-background.jpg" to "Spinner-background.png", "white.jpg" to "white.png" Fixed.

Mickey hard:
01:05:282 (4) touch HP bar a bit
Other than that, I have no issues

Easy:
<3

Normal:
<3

1. If the Taiko diff is a guest diff, you need to add the mapper's name in the tags. If not... I don't understand its name at all.
2. Why are the spinner-background and the fail screen from Pure Pure (tl;dr what's the link between them and the song ?)
3. For the hitbursts, I generally find it confusing not to have hitbursts that have the same colour as the standard ones. Would you mind recolouring the hearts (not the cute dog) for hit100, hit100k and hit50 ? =(

1. 00:14:718 (1) - There's no reason why you should silence this slider's end. Reducing the volume (around 30%) would be better.
2. 00:34:072 (3) - Going back to the very corner of the streams feels a bit weird, and I doubt many new players would see this note... try moving it elsewhere
3. 01:03:104 (1) - This note appears too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need a long time to readjust their aim.

1. This is rather hard for a Normal. It has too many 1/2 beats (even some 3/4 rhythms...).
2. I generally wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliderends for a Normal. Due to the stacking, it often looks bad, and the rhythm used is unclear because of the stack.
3. I find the difficulty settings to be rather high for such a calm Normal.

Odaril wrote:

As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. If the Taiko diff is a guest diff, you need to add the mapper's name in the tags. If not... I don't understand its name at all.
   His name have tag in my map already ("HeatKai") _ _"
2. Why are the spinner-background and the fail screen from Pure Pure (tl;dr what's the link between them and the song ?)
   Yeah,I think it's inconsistent with my map. But I want the picture to match the content of Thai music.
3. For the hitbursts, I generally find it confusing not to have hitbursts that have the same colour as the standard ones. Would you mind recolouring the hearts (not the cute dog) for hit100, hit100k and hit50 ? =(

Fixed with heart color. >w<"
Easy

1. 00:14:718 (1) - There's no reason why you should silence this slider's end. Reducing the volume (around 30%) would be better.
   Fixed.
2. 00:34:072 (3) - Going back to the very corner of the streams feels a bit weird, and I doubt many new players would see this note... try moving it elsewhere
   Moved it. :3
3. 01:03:104 (1) - This note appears too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need a long time to readjust their aim.

Change to slider :]
Normal

1. This is rather hard for a Normal. It has too many 1/2 beats (even some 3/4 rhythms...).
   - Fixed all difficulty with all 1/2 beat (another players easy to catch the beat)
2. I generally wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliderends for a Normal. Due to the stacking, it often looks bad, and the rhythm used is unclear because of the stack. --------- >> Fixed with all kiai use CS-2
3. I find the difficulty settings to be rather high for such a calm Normal.

^ Maybe I think it's normal+ ha^^"
0OoMickeyoO0's Hard
Sweet Hard.

Insane
Looks fine.

Just a little H's Taiko
Looks fine

Sweet mapset.

1. Remove thai from tags since it will be in the language anyway.
2. What are "sin" and "sony" doing in the tags ?
3. "music" is too generic of a tag to be put imo...
4. The cursortrail.png is too big (62x62 when the maximum size is 51x51).
5. The scorebar background is too big (112 in height when the maximum allowed is 72)
6. The scorebar-colour is too big (the maximum size is 646x13)

Odaril wrote:

Oh, I forgot that in my previous mod, sorry:

1. Remove thai from tags since it will be in the language anyway. Fixed.
2. What are "sin" and "sony" doing in the tags ? Sin is singer of this song ;_;
3. "music" is too generic of a tag to be put imo... Removed.
4. The cursortrail.png is too big (62x62 when the maximum size is 51x51).
5. The scorebar background is too big (112 in height when the maximum allowed is 72) Fixed.
6. The scorebar-colour is too big (the maximum size is 646x13)

Fixed.

Also rename the taiko diff to "HeatKai's Taiko Oni" Fixed.

don't kudosu

HeatKai wrote:

why change my taiko's name :<
just put my name in tag , okay already :<

Err.. I'm sorry about that ,but Odaril said "

HeatKai wrote:

why change my taiko's name :<
just put my name in tag , okay already :<

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

*change green line in kiai, S --> S:C2*

fixed~

Equivalent wrote:

HeatKai wrote:

why change my taiko's name :<
just put my name in tag , okay already :<

renaming to "taiko oni" is to indicate the taiko is using the instrument, muzukashi is for vocal if im not wrong

1. The scorebar-colour is still to big... Ah well. Remove the unnecessary transparency at least...
2. For all diffs including taiko: the hitsounds are quite low in the beginning, and really too low during the kiai.

1. 00:34:072 (3) - Going back to the very corner of the screen seems a bit weird to me... Try moving it elsewhere ?

1. Still hard for a Normal... There are quite a lot of 1/2, some confusing patterns as well... Ah, PM me in-game whenever you can so I can help you fix it.
2. 00:14:717 (1) - The spinner becomes abruptly silent, which sounds bad. Move the silenced timing section to the very end of the spinner.

backstep wrote:

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

*change green line in kiai, S --> S:C2*

fixed~

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