0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

เสียงไรอะ -0-

อ้ะนี่อัพใหม่

backstep wrote:

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

เสียงไรอะ -0-

อ้ะนี่อัพใหม่

ไม่ต้องแล้ว - -

พี่แก้ไปหมดละ 55+

General
Mickey hard set preview point to 62629

SBskin
พื้นหลังใช้ jpg ได้จะประหยัดพื้นที่กว่า แล้วก็ Pause-overlay ด้วย จะมีบางตัวที่จำเป็นต้องเป็น PNG
(ใน เพลง โชบิทก็แก้เป็น JPG ด้วย) เปลี่ยนละ

Element

ลองใช้สีอื่นที่แยกกันได้เห็นชัดเจนมากกว่า ชมพูแดง หน่อย พอเล่นทริกโน๊ตของ รูโน่แล้วมันมองยาก 4 สีไปเลย

Easy
00:18:114 (3) - เปลี่ยนเป็น สไลเดอร์ 1 โน๊ต 1
00:22:470 ลบ 2 ตัวหลังทิ้งแล้วทำ สไลเดอร์ 1 ขาวรีเทินแทน
00:24:405 (3) - ฟีนิชหัวแรก
00:28:275 (3) - เหมือนข้างบน
00:36:018 (3) - ^
00:39:888 (3) - ^
00:50:050 add note
01:17:630 (1) - ลบตัวนี้ทิ้งแล้วทำสปินตั้งแต่ 01:16:905 ยัน 01:18:599
เปลี่ยนหมด
Normal +

นอมอลก็พอมั้ง

00:08:921 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ท่อนพวกนี้ ก่อนที่จะมีคนร้องไม่ลองใช้ เสียง วิทเทิลแทนแคลปอันเดิมล่ะ

00:24:889 (2) - เปลี่ยนเป็นโน๊ตเดี่ยว 2 ตัว
00:27:067 (5) - ลบนี่ทิ้ง
00:34:809 (5) - ^
00:50:292 (4) - ^
00:57:792 (3) - เริ่มที่เดิมแต่เปลี่ยนเป็น 1/2 รีเทิน จบ 00:58:518
00:58:760 (1) - ใส่วิสเทิล
01:10:857 (1,2,3,4) - ทำให้ตั้งฉาก หน่อยเกือบละ
01:14:728 (4) - สไลเดอร์นี่จัดให้โค้งดีกว่าตรงๆนะไม่สวยเลย
แก้หมด
Insane

+1 APP 7 เล่นยาก 8 เล่นง่าย
00:22:712 (6,7,8) - ทำโค้งๆได้ไหม กดยาก
00:23:438 (1) - โค้งเหมือนกัน 3 ได้ไหม
00:26:341 (7,8,9) - พวกแบบนี้กดยากชะมัดเลย OTL
00:46:059 (3) - เลื่อนลงมาหน่อยได้ไหม
00:46:905 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - จัดให้ดูเป็น "โค้ง" มากกว่านี้
01:02:631 (2,3,4,5,1) - เออเรียงแบบนี้แจ่ม
01:10:131 (3,4,5,6,7) - เรียงให้กดง่ายๆทีพลีส ยังกะรูปหนอนด้น
01:16:180 (4,5,6,7,8) - ขอโค้งๆกว่านี้ทีเถอะ โค้งไม่ได้อ่ะ โน้ตน้อยเกิน (กะทำรูปสายฟ้า)
01:16:905 (1,2) - เปลี่ยนเป็นโน๊ต 4 ตัวตามโวคอล
เปลี่ยนหมด

ทำไมเหมือนม๊อดเพลง ยาว 8 นาทีเลยวะ

ม๊อด 5 ดิฟ เพลงแค่นาทีเดียวก็พาอาเจียนได้แล้ว -.-

regenz wrote:

Micky hard remod new post

overall hitsounds เบามาก ดังอีกสัก 5% ทุกเส้น เพิ่มเสียงธรรมดาเป็น 55% ครับ

00:14:728 (1,2,3,4) - เปลี่ยนจาก เส้น เส้น รี โน๊ต เป็น รี เส้น รี เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:47:147 (7) - ใช้เสียงนอมอล 25% แก้เสียง fin normal เป็น 25% ส่วนเสียง fin soft ใช้ 35% ครับ
01:03:357 เพิ่มโน๊ต เรียบร้อย fixed~
01:03:841 (2,3) - เปลี่ยนเป็น 1/2 รีเทิน เริ่มเลข 2 เรียบร้อย fixed~

00:16:663ฟินหัว เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:20:534 (1) - ^ เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:24:405 (1) - ^ เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:28:276 (1) - ^ เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:32:147 (1) - ^ เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:49:083 (3) - วิสหาง เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:51:502 (7) - ฟิน เรียบร้อย fixed~
00:51:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - แยกออกมาเรียงเป็นสามเหลี่ยม 2 รูป no!!
00:52:712 - เพิ่มโน๊ต ถ้าทำขอเรียงแนวๆ ! no too!
01:10:373 (8) - ฟินหาง เรียบร้อย fixed~
01:17:631 (2) - วิสเทิล เรียบร้อย fixed~

• 
  SB/Thumbs.db Delete it
  Kiai Time 01:03:115 – 01:18:599
  Combo Colour is different in [0OoMickeyoO0's Hard] and [Spirit's Love]

• 
  00:14:244 – 00:16:663 : This break feels strange. I suggest adding some notes or set a spinner here like Insane
  00:42:792 : Add a circle
  00:50:534 (5): Put the third waypoint 1 grid right
  01:03:599 : Add a circle
  01:04:083 (2): Move to 01:04:567

• 
  00:14:244 – 00:16:663 : Same as Easy
  00:35:031 (1): Put the second waypoint 1 or 2 grids up
  00:53:921 (7): Repeat + 1
  00:55:131 (8): Slider end here and add a circle at 00:55:373
  00:58:760 (1): This spinner doesn’t fit the song well
  01:08:921 (5,6): Too close
  01:15:938 (5): Repeat – 1 and start the spinner at 01:16:663

• 
  00:49:567 (3): Remove this whistle (This is the only whistle in this diff

• 
  00:58:639 (4): It’s strange to silence this circle

• 
  00:25:131 (4): I suggest using 1.0x velocity here

[General]

SB/Thumbs.db Delete it
Kiai Time 01:03:115 – 01:18:599
Combo Colour is different in [0OoMickeyoO0's Hard] and [Spirit's Love]


[Easy]

00:14:244 – 00:16:663 : This break feels strange. I suggest adding some notes or set a spinner here like Insane
00:42:792 : Add a circle
00:50:534 (5): Put the third waypoint 1 grid right
01:03:599 : Add a circle
01:04:083 (2): Move to 01:04:567


[Normal]

00:14:244 – 00:16:663 : Same as Easy
00:35:031 (1): Put the second waypoint 1 or 2 grids up
00:53:921 (7): Repeat + 1
00:55:131 (8): Slider end here and add a circle at 00:55:373
00:58:760 (1): This spinner doesn’t fit the song well
01:08:921 (5,6): Too close
01:15:938 (5): Repeat – 1 and start the spinner at 01:16:663

[Insane]

00:25:131 (4): I suggest using 1.0x velocity here

BakaHuang wrote:

~.~ sweet song~

Just go through a quick check and no main problems found.

/me shoot a star.

Suzully wrote:

Sorry for late mod

SPOILER

Easy

• 
  00:56:340 (2) - right 1 grid?
  00:59:243 (2) - end this slider at 01:00:212. I think that sounds good and go well with the music than present one.

Normal

• 
  h'm I feel there are some difficult patterns for Normal.
  But maybe it matters little whether you fix them or not.
  00:21:260 (2) - delete this note.
  00:50:534 (4,5) - I think normal players are confused by these pattern. I recommend you to make them one slider.

Insane

• fine.

Pretty sweet song and nice hitsounds.
/me shoot star!

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi~

Storyboard mod

~Thoughts and suggestions~
[*] Lovely skin <3
[*] About the flashes, I think them being completely opaque kind of ruins the soft and cute atmosphere. Maybe if you fade White to 0.5 instead of 1 (check the codes in the .osb if you don't know what I'm talking about) they look way better and softer~
^ Fixed.
~Issues and Adjustments~
[*] I wonder... The artist is "Singular" but you have "Singgular" in the texts, which one is the correct one? xP
^ "Singular" is correct I fixed SB now
General mod
- [0OoMickeyoO0's Hard] and [Spirit's Love] have a different offset, please fix this.
^ about Spirit's Love diff, If him don't edit him diff within 7 days I'll remove difficulty.
~Easy~
00:51:975 (1) - Fix spacing.
^ Fixed
~Normal~
No problems here!

~0OoMickeyoO0's Hard~
No problems here!

~Spirit's Love~
00:09:889 (x) - This custom ticksound sounds so weird =x
00:16:059 (TS) - Maybe you should increase a bit the volume of this Timing Section...
00:25:373 (3,1,2) - Add a New Combo in (3) to mark the slowdown, remove the New Combo of (1) and move it to (2).

~Insane~
No problems here!

Nice and lovely <3 Good luck! *star*
^ Thank you very much :3

-oSpiriT_Runo- wrote:

fixed

HeatKai wrote:

got request from crimmi queue
so here's the mod

[easy]
00:10:362 (2) - spacing Okay
00:14:718 (1) - too short Fixed with long slider.
01:00:443 (1) - too short Fixed with long spin.

[normal]
00:18:104 (3) - spacing Fixed

nicely done ;_;

[mickey's hard]
Lovely <3

[spirit's love]
nice

[insane]
nice too ;_;

[overall]
nice and sweet

8.9/10

go some more mods then good

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi~Nymph here

Easy:
fine~

Normal:
Sv1.4 maybe a little fast? I think it fine for me xD
others fine~

Mickey's hard:
00:44:476 (2) - 01:05:282 (4) - maybe too near the scorebar.come down a little?

Spirit's love:
00:10:605 (5,6,1) - this spacing maybe a little uncomfortable.use half spacing here maybe? put the 6 right in the middle of 5 and 1.
01:02:137 (3) - maybe finish not clap at the end of this slider.

Insane:
fine I think~

well.that is all~ nice sb and skin~ good job~

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Sorry for late mod~
Hope you don't mind~

[Overall]
I will add a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav' if I were you ;w;
I strongly urge you not to mute the slider sliding sounds with those inheriting sections
First, it's very annoying to do it on every slider and there will be still sounds on the head and end

The red boxes shows the places with sliding sounds if you make the inheriting sections like that

You know, that sliding sound ruins the song ;___;
So, change delete all those inheriting sections and add in a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav'

[Insane]
Timing Section 00:16:049 - Put to 00:16:169 instead Fixed.
00:51:492 (9) - Delete this note? no
00:58:629 - I think muting this is not needed IMO :3 Fixed

[Spirit's Love]
00:32:137 (1) - Whistle or Finish? (A little dry without hitsounds)
01:02:137 (3) - Delete Clap (Slider end)
01:02:742 (4) - Left 2 grid (Grid size 4)
01:03:589 (3) - Clap (Slider head)
01:05:040 (1) - Clap (Slider End)
01:18:347 (4) - I don't like this because it overlaps the previous slider D:

[0OoMickeyoO0's Hard]
01:17:621 (2) - Avoid overlapping with the previous slider

[Normal]
00:16:652 (1) - Too close to spinner? (Ignore this if you think this is fine :3)
00:54:637 (8) - Avoid overlapping with the previous slider ok
01:03:104 (1) - Too close to spinner? (Ignore this if you think this is fine :3)
01:06:491 (6) - x:260 y:176 ok
01:07:943 (3) - ^ ok
01:08:910 (5) - Last point: x:452 y:296 no
01:16:652 (1) - I saw you tried to mute this spinner (Volume 0%), but it doesn't seem to work OwO Fixed

[Easy]
01:03:104 (1) - Too close to spinner? (Ignore this if you think this is fine :3)
01:06:491 (5) - x:188 y:248 Fixed
01:07:459 (1) - Delete, copy 01:08:427 (2), paste and then Ctrl + H? (To make it symmetrical) Fixed
01:10:362 (4) - 1 grid up (Grid size 4) Fixed

Star~!

Thanks you "Sis" :3
P.S. about short spinner I don't fixed sorry

1. low quality on the edge of lyrics/title1/title2 elements, do the same thing you did on title.png to make them smoother.
2. spinner-background compress to JPG format.
3. hit0, hit50...should be 256x256. (this is not a must-fix but suggest you do so)
4. some black border parts of score- elements is cut. (0,6,8,9,%,X is especially obvious)
5. copy score- elements to default- elements to make your skin complete?
6. force border color since you use custom hitcircle skin, to prevent strange border color from players' custom skin unfit your custom skin.

[Colours]
SliderBorder : 238,238,238 // you can change the color yourself

1. 33,381
2. 37,702
3. 46,049
4. 51,250
5. 74,718
6. 75,202
7. 75,686

1. 58,992
2. 72,782
3. 74,718

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[General]
- there're some minor issue on your storyboard/skin:

1. low quality on the edge of lyrics/title1/title2 elements, do the same thing you did on title.png to make them smoother.
2. spinner-background compress to JPG format. Fixed.
3. hit0, hit50...should be 256x256. (this is not a must-fix but suggest you do so)
4. some black border parts of score- elements is cut. (0,6,8,9,%,X is especially obvious)
5. copy score- elements to default- elements to make your skin complete?
6. force border color since you use custom hitcircle skin, to prevent strange border color from players' custom skin unfit your custom skin.

[Colours]
SliderBorder : 238,238,238 // you can change the color yourself

- remove SkinPreference:Default code in your Insane diff Fixed
- enable "display storyboard in front of combo fire", it's blocking your lyric storyboard Fixed

[Easy]
- great

[Normal]
- remove following unused timing sections:

1. 33,381
2. 37,702
3. 46,049
4. 51,250
5. 74,718
6. 75,202
7. 75,686

<00:36:007> (2) add finish for consistent hitsound (ref. [Easy])
<00:39:879> (1) ^
- last KIAI line is not snapped.
All Fixed.

[Hard]
- remove the unused timing sections in KIAI part (there're lots of them)
<00:24:153> (4,5,1) slightly inconsistent spacing, fix it in lv4 grid
- end the KIAI section at same place as other diff

[Spirit's Love]
<00:51:008> (4) clap it
<00:55:121> (5) ^
<00:58:992> (5) ^
- end the KIAI section at same place as other diff

[Insane]
- remove following unused timing sections:

1. 58,992
2. 72,782
3. 74,718

- do this arrangement:
<00:58:024> (1) remove new combo
<00:59:234> (3) new combo
<00:59:718> (1) remove new combo
All Fixed
star, good.

Baka Backstep , fast Ranked this thing D:!

XD

the BG when want to retry so cute T.T

1. 01:04:073 - A note here would be good for me
   Really nice Easy,i like it!

1. 01:16:652 (1) - Add a whistle on this slider
   Again,I really like the Normal too!

1. 00:20:282 (6) - Well,I find this note really unnecessary,maybe remove it?

1. I think this diff is a bit overmapped,since there are a lot of useless streams,but if you don't wanto to change this,ok
2. 00:13:266 (2) - I really don't like how this note is placed...Maybe put this like i did on the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:428 (3) - Well,this shape could be done better but never mind
4. 00:26:089 - Add a note?
5. 00:56:331 (4) - (nazi) Move the 3rd waypoint 1 grid left to make the shape better?
6. 00:59:234 (1) - Well,this shape too could be done better but never mind
7. 01:18:347 (4) - I really don't like how this slader is placed,maybe move this like in the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:28:992 (4) - Aww,i think this slider is not placed very well,but if you don't want to change the position of this slider that's ok
2. 00:46:170 (4) - Make this like 00:45:686 (2) - and move this 1 grid down

-kevincela- wrote:

As requested,here's my mod!:D

[Easy]<

1. 01:04:073 - A note here would be good for me
   Really nice Easy,i like it!

[Normal]

1. 01:16:652 (1) - Add a whistle on this slider
   Again,I really like the Normal too!

Fixed

[0OoMickeyoO0's Hard]

1. 00:20:282 (6) - Well,I find this note really unnecessary,maybe remove it?

Fixed by me

[Spirit's Love]

1. I think this diff is a bit overmapped,since there are a lot of useless streams,but if you don't wanto to change this,ok
2. 00:13:266 (2) - I really don't like how this note is placed...Maybe put this like i did on the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:428 (3) - Well,this shape could be done better but never mind
4. 00:26:089 - Add a note?
5. 00:56:331 (4) - (nazi) Move the 3rd waypoint 1 grid left to make the shape better?
6. 00:59:234 (1) - Well,this shape too could be done better but never mind
7. 01:18:347 (4) - I really don't like how this slader is placed,maybe move this like in the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:28:992 (4) - Aww,i think this slider is not placed very well,but if you don't want to change the position of this slider that's ok
   I change a shape of slider a little :>
2. 00:46:170 (4) - Make this like 00:45:686 (2) - and move this 1 grid down

Fixed

Well, the diff of Spirit needs some work,but this beatmap is turning out really well!
About Spirit diff I'll remove now, because him not responsed.
My vote is 8/10

HeatKai wrote:

I hope you like it

please please.
:3


313 combo .
Taiko diff >w<
the BG support for SB >w<

Ehhh.. I don't have free time with osu now! (Hard study in university & other activities)
But in July 1st I can add your diff in my map
Kudosu for "Supporter"