1. Jumping through the light (7 stars, 1053 notes)

Brazilian Girl wrote:

Some mappers are helping me

Gabe- wrote:

hey

00:54:095 (1) - Maybe make it like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10281212
04:37:281 (2,3) - This 90 angle pattern feels weird compared to the others
04:47:281 (2,3,5,6) - needs more spacing

Overall
I think some jumps are kinda random in terms of angle and spacing (If u wanna rank it), it's pretty ok for loved

1. The map is not very diverse. You can think up of more beautiful patterns, i believe in you
2. Very hard for read, and overmapping jumps must be fixed.
3. 05:31:090 (1) - from this starts... nothing! If you are tired to map, it's will be better to cut out the rest of the music
4. Turn off countdown, cuz it does not work so fast
5. It's will be hard to rank, seriously. A lot of things need to be changed to do this!
6. Put to "love" category this map been easiest
   

1. 00:10:215 (1) - that these frequent spinners looks a bit strange.
2. 01:13:923 (3,1) - very unexpected jump in another direction hard to aim. I think sliders may be on this place - 01:13:256 (2) -
3. 01:14:590 (2) - this and 01:15:090 (3) - thins sliders overlapped with these 01:13:423 (3,3) - taps
4. 01:16:756 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - these triplets you can do like this 01:16:256 (2,3,1,3,1,2) - but flipped like as planned.
5. 01:17:756 (2,3,1,1) - overlap, change position last one tap
6. 01:19:090 (1,1) - ^
7. 01:34:090 (1,2,1) - i don't sure that these gaps look cool
8. 01:35:590 (4,1,2,1) - ^ (to become too easy for aim)
9. 01:38:090 (1,2,3,4) - it's different patterns (different distance snap). just delete 3, 4, copy 1, 2 and chage position to second place.
10. 01:40:256 (2,3) - i think its can be stacked
11. 01:41:590 (1,1) - ^
12. 01:43:090 (1,2,3,1) - looks overlappy
13. 01:48:090 (1,2,3) - strange distance from 2 to 3
14. 01:48:923 (3,1) - overlap
15. 01:48:590 (1,3) - ^
16. 01:52:090 (1,3) - you can do a blanket
17. 01:53:590 (3,1) - blanket looks not very good, soften the slider
18. 01:59:590 (3,4,5) - god, the pattern looks very ugly
19. 02:01:256 (2,2) - overlap
20. 02:05:590 (2,1) - ^ another one
21. 02:08:590 (1,1) - ^ and another one
22. 03:42:090 (1) - fix the base of the slider, add one point to arc of slider's sceleton
23. 03:50:090 (1,1) - very... very... VERY big break distance!
24. that's all.

PantyDev wrote:

Hello dude, nice marathon map.
Let's begin to mod.

General

1. The map is not very diverse. You can think up of more beautiful patterns, i believe in you
2. Very hard for read, and overmapping jumps must be fixed.
3. 05:31:090 (1) - from this starts... nothing! If you are tired to map, it's will be better to cut out the rest of the music only 4 seconds lefted behind...
4. Turn off countdown, cuz it does not work so fast done, was forgetting to do this
5. It's will be hard to rank, seriously. A lot of things need to be changed to do this!
6. Put to "love" category this map been easiest
   

Timing
Here is all fine!

Mapping

1. 00:10:215 (1) - that these frequent spinners looks a bit strange. I need to keep the player busy in this boring part xd
2. 01:13:923 (3,1) - very unexpected jump in another direction hard to aim. I think sliders may be on this place - 01:13:256 (2) - Actually,
   it's totally on favor of the flow... the player was just doing that moviment before going to note 1
3. 01:14:590 (2) - this and 01:15:090 (3) - thins sliders overlapped with these 01:13:423 (3,3) - taps done
4. 01:16:756 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - these triplets you can do like this 01:16:256 (2,3,1,3,1,2) - but flipped like as planned. I did a diferent modification, but thanksss~~
5. 01:17:756 (2,3,1,1) - overlap, change position last one tap
6. 01:19:090 (1,1) - ^
7. 01:34:090 (1,2,1) - i don't sure that these gaps look cool they seems fine to me ;-;
8. 01:35:590 (4,1,2,1) - ^ (to become too easy for aim)
9. 01:38:090 (1,2,3,4) - it's different patterns (different distance snap). just delete 3, 4, copy 1, 2 and chage position to second place. done
10. 01:40:256 (2,3) - i think its can be stacked nhe
11. 01:41:590 (1,1) - ^
12. 01:43:090 (1,2,3,1) - looks overlappy
13. 01:48:090 (1,2,3) - strange distance from 2 to 3 thanksss, wasnt the intention
14. 01:48:923 (3,1) - overlap
15. 01:48:590 (1,3) - ^
16. 01:52:090 (1,3) - you can do a blanket okay, done
17. 01:53:590 (3,1) - blanket looks not very good, soften the slider done
18. 01:59:590 (3,4,5) - god, the pattern looks very ugly yea i thought too. changed
19. 02:01:256 (2,2) - overlap
20. 02:05:590 (2,1) - ^ another one
21. 02:08:590 (1,1) - ^ and another one
22. 03:42:090 (1) - fix the base of the slider, add one point to arc of slider's sceleton
23. 03:50:090 (1,1) - very... very... VERY big break distance! I think its fair since the amount of circles the player already did clicked and the big jumps next
24. that's all.

heikneuter wrote:

00:34:110 (1) - Slider looks weird, try to put a circle in the middle and work the slider around the approach circle.
01:15:610 (4) - Spacing is larger than other three sliders. Try to make it more consistent
01:21:610 (1,2) - This blanket has lower spacing than other three blankets for no real reason.
01:34:110 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Why make this different, you've been following the synth the whole time so this feels a bit out of place

Well there is not a whole lot to say, mostly jumps.
There is too much change in spacing and it really doesn't fit the song that well, aside from the ending where the pitch starts to rise.
Also try to mute the ends of the spinners because there are no sounds there.
i'm tired so i'll keep it at this

Good luck with the map!

RockStyle wrote:

00:10:235 (1) - maybe do a 1/2 gab between the spinner and the slider like at the end well why not xd
00:10:235 (1) - same
00:26:235 (1) - this actually triggers me
00:30:235 (1) - ...
00:32:235 (1) - here its a bit justified because it has the same timing and the end
00:38:235 (1) - ^
00:48:276 (1) - dude wtf
00:42:110 (1) - the sliderticks dont make any sound ?
00:58:235 (1) - the usual
01:04:235 (1) - damn spinners
01:06:776 (2) - adjust this circle so that these 4 01:06:276 (2,3,1,2) - make a perfect square, i think that feels more comfortable but i am not sure if this fits into the feeling that it kinda goes down in this triangle style yea i dont think its pretty to square things in 1/3 hahaha
01:07:110 (1) - same with these 4 01:06:776 (2,3,1,2) -
01:13:110 (1) - adjust this circle so that it is in the middle of 01:12:776 (2,3) - or kinda (i am a pretty pernickety) fixed
01:13:610 (1) - same with 01:13:276 (2,3) -
01:14:110 (1) - this is nice in the middle
01:14:110 (1,2,3,4) - erange these 4 symetrically (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10291586) modified
01:18:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part is weird because you expect to go out clockwise, but in the middle it gets anti clockwise again actually the whole pattern is clockwise... i dont get it xd
01:21:610 (1,2) - sapcing between these two like the others (01:21:110 (1,2) - ) modified
01:37:610 (5) - new combo ? oh i forgot
04:53:943 (6,1,2) - i think this kinda breaks the flow of these sharp jumps yessss i agree, modified

and i am also not sure about the marathon tag but i have no idea about tags

tbh i stopped at 1/3 of the song cause im really tired and being nitpicky about the whole map would be painful :/