because daddy shiirn told me to
pls dont reject too many
transcendance
00:15:931 (4,1) - pls send fix :c http://puu.sh/r8GEZ/95a46bfe03.jpg
00:35:069 (1) - i cant tell if this is supposed to be 1/4 shorter or 1/4 longer. if its 1/2 shorter, fill in this 00:35:414 - pls. if its 1/4 longer, add a whistle to the sliderend. if it happens to be neither, delete the unused timing points.
00:58:173 (5,6) - pls blanket better ;c
01:05:242 (5) - why increase DS? keep it same ;c
01:25:759 (9,10,11,12,1) - whats with the sudden spike downwards? i dont hear anything in the song :c
01:28:518 (3) - have this face upwards? at this rate youll have me and a billion other players misreading this http://puu.sh/r8GWI/727caaf6e7.jpg
01:35:414 (7,8,1) - have (8) be closer to (7), coz emphasis is on (1), not (8).
01:50:931 (1,1) - oh damn this is some good shit. try making them align better? :/
01:53:000 - and simialr parts, why not map this one? feels empty without it :c what do you think of this? http://puu.sh/r8H8x/5b03cad2aa.jpg
02:24:035 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it might be just me, but these jumps feel random :u. well, 02:25:587 (2) - pull this one a bit closer to (1) coz of emphasis and we'll be all good. i suggest x251 y188.
02:48:862 (1,2,3,4,1) - pls fix the blanket :c http://puu.sh/r8Hqa/3c800ca039.jpg
03:04:380 (2) - if this wasnt meant to be a blanket, maybe can make it less blankettish?
03:06:621 (5) - try doing something like this, coz the distance between 03:06:449 (4,5,1) - rn is kinda wonky because of emphasis. try doing something like this? http://puu.sh/r8Hy2/770315f392.jpg
03:19:552 - well this speed spike is kinda high. mind dropping it to 0.9x? imo its less jarring than 1.1x
03:37:828 (1,1) - this greatly triggers me. pls fix :cccc
03:50:242 (3) - compared to the other parts, this one lacks punch imo. try doing this? http://puu.sh/r8HK9/c07a2e78d8.jpg
04:08:173 - probably mentioned this before, but ill say it again just in case, why not map this part? i feel like the map could be made more interestign with this in the picture http://puu.sh/r8HPh/7fc3123b35.jpg. i mean this map is super jumpy and fun ;v but when it suddenly stops, kinda ruins the mood. well thats what i think anyway.
04:25:414 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part is relatively calm compared to the other parts, so maybe wanna pipe down the jumps? :d make em smaller i mean.
05:04:035 (1) - kreygasm
00:15:931 (4,1) - pls send fix :c http://puu.sh/r8GEZ/95a46bfe03.jpg
00:35:069 (1) - i cant tell if this is supposed to be 1/4 shorter or 1/4 longer. if its 1/2 shorter, fill in this 00:35:414 - pls. if its 1/4 longer, add a whistle to the sliderend. if it happens to be neither, delete the unused timing points.
00:58:173 (5,6) - pls blanket better ;c
01:05:242 (5) - why increase DS? keep it same ;c
01:25:759 (9,10,11,12,1) - whats with the sudden spike downwards? i dont hear anything in the song :c
01:28:518 (3) - have this face upwards? at this rate youll have me and a billion other players misreading this http://puu.sh/r8GWI/727caaf6e7.jpg
01:35:414 (7,8,1) - have (8) be closer to (7), coz emphasis is on (1), not (8).
01:50:931 (1,1) - oh damn this is some good shit. try making them align better? :/
01:53:000 - and simialr parts, why not map this one? feels empty without it :c what do you think of this? http://puu.sh/r8H8x/5b03cad2aa.jpg
02:24:035 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it might be just me, but these jumps feel random :u. well, 02:25:587 (2) - pull this one a bit closer to (1) coz of emphasis and we'll be all good. i suggest x251 y188.
02:48:862 (1,2,3,4,1) - pls fix the blanket :c http://puu.sh/r8Hqa/3c800ca039.jpg
03:04:380 (2) - if this wasnt meant to be a blanket, maybe can make it less blankettish?
03:06:621 (5) - try doing something like this, coz the distance between 03:06:449 (4,5,1) - rn is kinda wonky because of emphasis. try doing something like this? http://puu.sh/r8Hy2/770315f392.jpg
03:19:552 - well this speed spike is kinda high. mind dropping it to 0.9x? imo its less jarring than 1.1x
03:37:828 (1,1) - this greatly triggers me. pls fix :cccc
03:50:242 (3) - compared to the other parts, this one lacks punch imo. try doing this? http://puu.sh/r8HK9/c07a2e78d8.jpg
04:08:173 - probably mentioned this before, but ill say it again just in case, why not map this part? i feel like the map could be made more interestign with this in the picture http://puu.sh/r8HPh/7fc3123b35.jpg. i mean this map is super jumpy and fun ;v but when it suddenly stops, kinda ruins the mood. well thats what i think anyway.
04:25:414 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part is relatively calm compared to the other parts, so maybe wanna pipe down the jumps? :d make em smaller i mean.
05:04:035 (1) - kreygasm
pls dont reject too many