00:16:449 (1,1) - Not overlapped completely on purpose?
yep on purpose00:44:035 (3) - Having this as a reverse 1/4th slider would sound pretty nice
i hear the beat but don't think it's really that worth emphasizing00:47:138 (6,7,1) - The slider at 00:47:483 (1) - has a decent amount more spacing than 00:47:138 (6,7) - and it seems like its slightly awkward to land. Maybe push 00:47:483 (1) - to the left a bit?
sure00:58:173 (5,6) - Pixel fix
https://puu.sh/r9TrS/0e41d5d147.png sure01:15:759 (3) - Perhaps overlap the sliderhead with 01:14:724 (6) - as well for more impact
sure01:31:966 (2) - Pretty close to 01:31:621 (1) - and touching 01:31:449 (7) - not sure if that's on purpose
https://puu.sh/r9TGc/22eb1daf6b.png Could be like this (Not saying to do it like this but wanted to show what I was thinking)
made to not touch for neatnessOverlap 01:36:018 (2,5) - these perhaps idk (prob not)
sureThe buzz 01:40:931 (6) - here is lost because of this 01:40:759 (4,5) - what I mean is there is no emphasis for 01:40:931 (6) - because of the triple. Compare to what you did here 01:41:966 (3,4,5) - which works nicely (you basically did it everywhere except that part)
kind of disagree here01:45:414 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Nice pattern. Took me a second to realize they play really well when you think of them as circles instead of sliders. I like it!
uguuuuuuu01:53:518 (3) - Do a ctrl + j and overlap the end with the others like this:
https://puu.sh/r9Ugf/a12297bb4d.png ?
sure01:58:173 (1) - Move this so it looks fuckin sick with 01:56:793 (2,3) - because right now 01:58:173 (1) - has less spacing than 01:56:793 (2,3) and it feels cramped or w.e.
sure01:59:724 (1) - Overlap with head of 01:59:207 (1) - ?
sure02:04:207 (1,2,3,1) -
really nice
sure02:05:931 (2) - I'm assuming because of the sound here it's not a copypaste of 02:05:759 (1) - ? But then 02:07:138 (1,2) - these are copy paste
this is due to slight musical differences, they're not paired patterns here but the second one is a pair pattern02:26:621 (2) - I feel like this should overlap 02:25:932 (4) - because you overlapped 02:26:449 (1) - with 02:26:793 (1) -
disagree, but changed the pattern a bit anyway02:29:207 (4) - Seems noticeable that it isn't perfect overlap with 02:28:518 (1) -
THIS WAS LITERALLY 1 PIXEL DUDE02:30:587 (3) - My mouse wants to move to the sliderend of 02:29:897 (3) - err... rather 02:30:242 (1,2,3,4,1) - this entire thing seems off with the hitsounds and everything. 02:30:587 (3) - Has the strong clap sound but there is no jump? 02:30:759 (4) - Is aesthetic in this 02:30:242 (1,2,3,4) - combo, but it doesn't make sense for it's actual spacing/emphasis
02:31:621 (1,2,3,4) - same as ^ Compare with 02:28:518 (1,2,3,4) - and hopefully I'll make some sense :p
stuff02:35:069 (1) - Move this here?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6085365 sure03:41:276 (1) - Why does this go to the right instead of the left lol
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6085388 nah03:46:104 (4,2) - Turn down stack leniency?
i like stacks tho03:53:949 (2) - Overlap with 03:52:828 (3) - ?
sure03:56:965 (5) - Either make this move an even distance as 03:55:587 (1,1) - are doing, or overlap with sliderend of 03:55:931 (1) -
sure04:14:724 (3,1) - hmm....
https://puu.sh/r9VKa/0d5fc03268.png hahahaha04:40:931 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It's perfectly readable, but idk...
04:48:518 (3,1) -
https://puu.sh/r9VQT/0acd5fa2d5.png lul
sure05:04:035 (1) -