need to be spaced out to:

18:29 <thepianist> : its kk, so I'm starting with Sinnoh~
18:29 <v_Enhance> : k thanks!
18:29 <thepianist> : for the beginning, consider using a rhythm that follows the bass? ie http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67579
18:31 <v_Enhance> : wait what do you mean "follows the base"?
18:31 <thepianist> : bass <-- the instrument haha
18:31 <v_Enhance> : oh
18:31 <thepianist> : mmkay then
18:32 <thepianist> : for song setup for each difficulty
18:32 <thepianist> : the source is just "pokemon", put "pearl diamond" under tags
18:33 <v_Enhance> : kk
18:33 <thepianist> : usually circle sizes are not smaller than normal, as well. Consider that for sinnoh
18:35 <thepianist> : 00:17:795 (3) - and similar: remove that extra bezier point on the slider
18:35 <v_Enhance> : hm don't I have it set to larger than normal?
18:35 <thepianist> : ?
18:35 <v_Enhance> : Sinnoh circle size
18:36 <thepianist> : yeah, it's smaller than normal right now
18:36 <thepianist> : consider pushing it to normal
18:36 <v_Enhance> : ._. okay
18:36 <v_Enhance> : It's showing as larger than normal on my machine lol
18:36 <thepianist> : did you update?
18:36 <v_Enhance> : I think I did, but guess not.
18:36 <v_Enhance> : Should I do that now?
18:36 <thepianist> : update first yeah
18:37 <v_Enhance> : okay updated.
18:38 <thepianist> : nope, it's still smaller than normal
18:38 <thepianist> : http://gyazo.com/a824a61e57245dc66f222dda1a3365c4.png > push to the left
18:38 <v_Enhance> : hm okay let me fix that
18:38 <v_Enhance> : oh derp it's from left to right
18:39 <thepianist> : for the beginning, consider using one patter, and copy paste the rhythm while varying its placement
18:42 <thepianist> : so what I have
18:42 <thepianist> : is something like
18:43 <thepianist> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67586
18:43 <thepianist> : notice the red and yellow combos have the same rhythm, but you can place them differently
18:43 <v_Enhance> : oh I see
18:43 <v_Enhance> : ok
18:44 <thepianist> : you also want to vary the rhythm - things like 00:23:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are quite dull to play
18:44 <thepianist> : since this is a hard difficulty, consider taking a bit more liberty in having fun
18:44 <thepianist> : and making the map more fun
18:45 <thepianist> : 00:27:472 (1,2,3,4) - still isn't spaced correctly - right now, you set it at 1.2, but the notes put it at 0.4x
18:46 <thepianist> : placement should be similar to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67587
18:48 <v_Enhance> : alrighty.
18:48 <thepianist> : extend 00:28:440 (4) - to the white tick, and have it start at the earlier white tick
18:49 <thepianist> : add 00:30:053 (2) -
18:49 <thepianist> : a note there, that is
18:51 <thepianist> : 00:29:730 (1) - starting here, consider this rhythm placement
18:51 <thepianist> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67591
18:52 <v_Enhance> : Darjn how do you do those screenshots so quickly?
18:52 <thepianist> : shift F12
18:52 <thepianist> : F12 for just screenshots
18:53 <v_Enhance> : oh
18:53 <thepianist> : for other uses I use gyazo or customGyazo
18:53 <thepianist> : 00:32:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is overmapped, consider another rhythm placement?
18:54 <thepianist> : 00:35:537 (2) - reduce back to white tick
18:55 <thepianist> : 00:42:956 (1,2,3,4) - spaced too close
18:55 <thepianist> : 00:45:537 (5,6,7,8) - this is so obviously copy pasted, fix that c:
18:56 <thepianist> : 00:48:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - doesn't quite fit :< it's just 1/4 beats
19:03 <thepianist> : 00:50:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - things like this at such close spacing becomes a pain to read :<
19:03 <thepianist> : the break afterwards doesn't fit, map it c:
19:05 <v_Enhance> : lol
19:05 <thepianist> : all making sense? c:
19:06 <v_Enhance> : yup
19:06 <thepianist> : cool!
19:06 <thepianist> : update plss
19:07 <v_Enhance> : and done
19:07 <v_Enhance> : Hopefully I didn't miss something, but I probably did
19:08 <v_Enhance> : oh wait yeah I did
19:08 <v_Enhance> : let me map in that break
19:08 <thepianist> : mmkayy
19:11 <v_Enhance> : hm is it bad to have like a half-second break?
19:11 <thepianist> : it's usually not done without a really good reason
19:12 <v_Enhance> : yeah ok
19:12 <thepianist> : updated?
19:12 <v_Enhance> : done.
19:13 <thepianist> : yeahh the beginning should be changed to be more consistent c:
19:13 <thepianist> : 00:24:085 (2) - move one blue tick back
19:13 <thepianist> : 00:25:537 (5,6) - same
19:14 <thepianist> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67586 please do consider this instead in the beginning
19:15 <thepianist> : 00:36:182 (3) - add a note
19:16 <thepianist> : 00:42:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider
19:17 <thepianist> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67603
19:17 <thepianist> : 00:45:537 (6) - new combo, see previous
19:17 <thepianist> : 00:50:375 (7) - add a note
19:17 <thepianist> : 00:50:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - still seems overmapped :<
19:17 <thepianist> : 00:55:537 (6) - add a note
19:18 <thepianist> : 00:59:408 (2) - remove, do the same for the next 4
19:19 <thepianist> : 01:03:601 (9) - should be more symmetric, (something like below but better)
19:19 <thepianist> : 01:03:601 (9) -
19:19 <thepianist> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67606
19:20 <thepianist> : 01:09:730 (4) - extend to white tick, add a note on next red tick
19:20 <thepianist> : 01:12:795 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds bad :<
19:20 <thepianist> : 01:17:150 (1) - map it, don't spinner this
19:20 <thepianist> : 01:24:569 (2) - starts on the white tick, ends at 4, remove 3 and 4
19:21 <thepianist> : 01:26:827 (1) - slider to 5
19:21 <thepianist> : 01:31:666 (1,1,1,1) - don't fit
19:21 <v_Enhance> : for 00:50:375
19:22 <v_Enhance> : where should I add?
19:22 <thepianist> : http://gyazo.com/aaa1756a233e3f48e3b6fa14d4be71aa.png is slightly better, but I'm sure you can come up
19:22 <thepianist> : with a better one
19:23 <thepianist> : 01:34:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - use an
19:23 <thepianist> : increasing spiral if you want this stream, make sure it is hitsounded well though!
19:24 <thepianist> : map in that break
19:24 <thepianist> : 01:44:891 (5) - new combo
19:24 <thepianist> : remove new combo after that one
19:25 <v_Enhance> : darn I need to go eat dinner
19:25 <v_Enhance> : uh
19:25 <v_Enhance> : this will still be here if I come back right?
19:25 <thepianist> : if you don't log off
19:26 <v_Enhance> : ok thanks
19:26 <thepianist> : 01:51:343 (8) - remove note
19:26 <thepianist> : I'll post a copy on the thread
19:26 <v_Enhance> : brb then