Hi
Easy
CS = 1
Other is good, starr
Easy
CS = 1
Other is good, starr
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Dreamy crown - eternal promise [Osu|Taiko]
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那就看I的音效了
00:55:141 - 这么这里突然跑出来一个o.o……第一个slider加长1/4，第二个缩短1/4，然后你就知道加到哪里了……
01:42:351 (10) - new combo 后面去掉O.o
其实如果我的话会加一点24以外的重音……比如用到3连上或者每2个小节加一点红线音。比如试试在00:23:281和00:23:746上加。00:27:467 (5,6) 加上，00:27:932 (8) 也加上。然后整体听一下这小段o.o 就是这种思路
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00:55:141 - 这么这里突然跑出来一个o.o……第一个slider加长1/4，第二个缩短1/4，然后你就知道加到哪里了……
01:42:351 (10) - new combo 后面去掉O.o
其实如果我的话会加一点24以外的重音……比如用到3连上或者每2个小节加一点红线音。比如试试在00:23:281和00:23:746上加。00:27:467 (5,6) 加上，00:27:932 (8) 也加上。然后整体听一下这小段o.o 就是这种思路
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Topic Starter
Snowy Dream wrote:
[Hard]
01:50:956 (3) - 削掉个arrow,然后接下来这样改 (明显这样好听>.>)Done
[Insane]
00:11:885 (7) - newcomboDone
Sorry..I won't to change anything :<Ayeen wrote:
From my modding queu, maybe just a minimal modding
Easy:
The last spinner move back later to red tick or remove (2)
Normal:
00:14:676 Make some hitsound soft hitclap (custom that is) for (2) and (3)
Hard:
00:34:676 move the spinner to white tick from blue tick and extend to red tick.
01:08:630 (5) the hitsound didnt clearly heard
01:22:699 again the spinner, move from blue tick to red tick (shorten it in this time)
02:07:583 same as above, move to white tick
Tako:
Uhh, I dont mod taiko
Insane:
AR move down 1 tick
00:34:560 same as hard, move to white tick from blue, then extent to red tick at end of spinner
01:03:630 Uhm, same thing again
01:22:699 heh, spinner again
That all from me, hope it help you
Vass_Bass wrote:
Hi
Easy
CS = 1 lol
Thanks >W<Sandpig wrote:
那就看I的音效了
00:55:141 - 这么这里突然跑出来一个o.o……第一个slider加长1/4，第二个缩短1/4，然后你就知道加到哪里了……
01:42:351 (10) - new combo 后面去掉O.o Done
其实如果我的话会加一点24以外的重音……比如用到3连上或者每2个小节加一点红线音。比如试试在00:23:281和00:23:746上加。00:27:467 (5,6) 加上，00:27:932 (8) 也加上。然后整体听一下这小段o.o 就是这种思路 額...簡單美= =
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对我来说已经很PERFECT的MAP了 赶紧去要泡泡吧..
扔星闪人 >.<
扔星闪人 >.<
I am so late @_@
[Easy]
01:14:677 (1) - the sliderticks should have clap hitsound!?
01:18:863 (4) - ^ this too
01:58:398 (3) - maybe you forgot a clap?
01:59:327 (1) - the first slidertick, clap?
02:04:909 (1) - slidertick claps?
02:07:467 (x) - I'd like to put a note here, maybe as a slider if you'd like.
[Normal]
00:28:165 (3) - ehh? no slidertick hitsound again?
01:19:095 (3,4,5) - feels like these could use some normal sample set hitsounds...
[Hard]
00:19:792 (3,4,5,1) - I've got a feeling that this part is too quiet... There should be a crescendo, so make hitsound volume louder gradually?
01:21:188 (4,5,6) - ^ crescendo
[Taiko Oni]
Skip~
[Insane]
00:13:513 (1) - starting from here you should increase hitsound volume. When there are jumps, audible hitsounds help a lot.
00:20:025 (6,7,8,9,10) - crescendo!
00:36:537 (2,3) - my music-sense itches so badly that these are not mapped with the vocal D:
00:51:420 (2,3) - ^ ok I know that mapping with vocal may disturb the flow... but I'd really like a beat here 00:51:769 (x).
00:57:932 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the spacing is a tiny bit large?
00:59:211 (x) - probably add a beat here?
01:42:351 (4) - IMO, a bit too far
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Good song (I really like it, I wanna long version XD)
I'd fine-tune the hitsounds, especially volume adjustments.
Also, I hear that some places can use a bit normal sample set hitsounds, for instance 01:05:723 to 01:12:351 (hear the thud?)
Star!
[Easy]
01:14:677 (1) - the sliderticks should have clap hitsound!?
01:18:863 (4) - ^ this too
01:58:398 (3) - maybe you forgot a clap?
01:59:327 (1) - the first slidertick, clap?
02:04:909 (1) - slidertick claps?
02:07:467 (x) - I'd like to put a note here, maybe as a slider if you'd like.
[Normal]
00:28:165 (3) - ehh? no slidertick hitsound again?
01:19:095 (3,4,5) - feels like these could use some normal sample set hitsounds...
[Hard]
00:19:792 (3,4,5,1) - I've got a feeling that this part is too quiet... There should be a crescendo, so make hitsound volume louder gradually?
01:21:188 (4,5,6) - ^ crescendo
[Taiko Oni]
Skip~
[Insane]
00:13:513 (1) - starting from here you should increase hitsound volume. When there are jumps, audible hitsounds help a lot.
00:20:025 (6,7,8,9,10) - crescendo!
00:36:537 (2,3) - my music-sense itches so badly that these are not mapped with the vocal D:
00:51:420 (2,3) - ^ ok I know that mapping with vocal may disturb the flow... but I'd really like a beat here 00:51:769 (x).
00:57:932 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the spacing is a tiny bit large?
00:59:211 (x) - probably add a beat here?
01:42:351 (4) - IMO, a bit too far
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Good song (I really like it, I wanna long version XD)
I'd fine-tune the hitsounds, especially volume adjustments.
Also, I hear that some places can use a bit normal sample set hitsounds, for instance 01:05:723 to 01:12:351 (hear the thud?)
Star!
Sorry for late 
Here is my mod.
The words with Red color means You must fix it.
The words with Blue color means You'd better do it.
The words with Purple color means Just suggetstion.
[Easy]
00:06:188 useless greedline?delete it.
and so many same.(我因为各种greenline被找过麻烦lol
02:08:630 use clap to instead?or muti it（各难度下略
[Normal]
00:56:420 use s-2 clap ?
AR+1 OD-1?
[Hard]
02:06:072 lol for these two sliders
AR+1 OD+1?(It's more suitable for me)
[Insane]
seems fine.
Here is a hitsound may make this map more greatful.
And good job.Star for it.
Download: hitsound.rar
Here is my mod.
The words with Red color means You must fix it.
The words with Blue color means You'd better do it.
The words with Purple color means Just suggetstion.
[Easy]
00:06:188 useless greedline?delete it.
and so many same.(我因为各种greenline被找过麻烦lol
02:08:630 use clap to instead?or muti it（各难度下略
[Normal]
00:56:420 use s-2 clap ?
AR+1 OD-1?
[Hard]
02:06:072 lol for these two sliders
AR+1 OD+1?(It's more suitable for me)
[Insane]
seems fine.
Here is a hitsound may make this map more greatful.
And good job.Star for it.
Download: hitsound.rar
Topic Starter
>yongtw123 , Mystica
Fix some >w< Thanks
Fix some >w< Thanks
都是建议啊:
[General]
Easy 用最大圈？（所有难度都用一样大圈……
☆ STAR ☆
[General]
Combo还是有点乱
Easy 用最大圈？（所有难度都用一样大圈……
01:38:863 (3): 开头+Soft Finish
02:07:234 (1): 转盘提前一下
00:09:095 (4): 感觉节奏有点奇怪 建议在这里加个Circle 然后Slider往后移半拍 后面的Slider也换成Circle
00:14:676 (2,3,1): 个人觉得这样的Combo不太好看 如果要改的话 建议在②上加New combo ①上移掉（后面的和其他难度的也是
01:37:002 (1): 这个地方加转盘好像有点不太合适
01:53:048 (5): 重复-1 然后转盘提前半拍
02:07:234 (1): 转盘提前一下
00:49:793 (5,6,7,8): 像前面的②③④一样加一点间距
00:50:491 (1): 开头+Finish
01:20:258 (1): ^
01:37:467 (1,2,3): 首先间距有点奇怪 还有前面那么大的跳 这里是不是也应该跳一下呢
01:53:048 (6): 重复+1
02:06:305 (4,5): 这两个Slider有点奇怪 建议摆放成这样：http://puu.sh/1lin
00:30:955 (1,2,3,4): 奇怪间距
01:38:862 (3): 开头+Soft Finish
02:07:583 (8): 从02:07:699开始 然后在这里加个Circle
☆ STAR ☆
Topic Starter
謝.impossiblexu wrote:
都是建议啊:
[General][Easy]
Combo还是有点乱 D:
Easy 用最大圈？（所有难度都用一样大圈…… X.[Normal]
01:38:863 (3): 开头+Soft Finish Done
02:07:234 (1): 转盘提前一下Done[Hard]
00:09:095 (4): 感觉节奏有点奇怪 建议在这里加个Circle 然后Slider往后移半拍 后面的Slider也换成CircleDone
00:14:676 (2,3,1): 个人觉得这样的Combo不太好看 如果要改的话 建议在②上加New combo ①上移掉（后面的和其他难度的也是 Done
01:37:002 (1): 这个地方加转盘好像有点不太合适 X
01:53:048 (5): 重复-1 然后转盘提前半拍 Done
02:07:234 (1): 转盘提前一下 DoneDone
00:49:793 (5,6,7,8): 像前面的②③④一样加一点间距 Done
00:50:491 (1): 开头+Finish Done
01:20:258 (1): ^ vDone
01:37:467 (1,2,3): 首先间距有点奇怪 还有前面那么大的跳 这里是不是也应该跳一下呢 Done
01:53:048 (6): 重复+1 Done
02:06:305 (4,5): 这两个Slider有点奇怪 建议摆放成这样：http://puu.sh/1lin
[Insane]
00:30:955 (1,2,3,4): 奇怪间距 X
01:38:862 (3): 开头+Soft Finish Done
02:07:583 (8): 从02:07:699开始 然后在这里加个Circle Done
☆ STAR ☆
[Insane]
00:53:281 (1) - Delete new combo.
[Hard]
00:34:212 (1) - ^
01:03:514 (5) - New combo.
[Normal]
00:50:955 (3,1) - Swap new combos.
00:54:676 (7,1) - ^
00:58:862 (5,1) - ^
01:01:653 (6) - New combo.
01:05:606 - Something is missing here I think. Maybe add a slider like next ones here 01:05:723 (without a repeat) or 1/4 slider at the next white tick.
[Easy]
Circle size +1 tick?
01:08:630 (2,3) - Sliders are off the beat. You should do something else in this part. There are plenty of possibilities.
01:14:676 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
01:18:863 (4) - This slider should be 1/2 though. Sounds weird as it is now. If you do this, add a circle on the next white tick.
01:36:537 (1) - ^ (or do something else)
01:38:863 (3) - New combo.
01:39:792 (4) - Same slider thing...
Mostly nazi stuff, but that's all I can point out.
Very good map, star.
00:53:281 (1) - Delete new combo.
[Hard]
00:34:212 (1) - ^
01:03:514 (5) - New combo.
[Normal]
00:50:955 (3,1) - Swap new combos.
00:54:676 (7,1) - ^
00:58:862 (5,1) - ^
01:01:653 (6) - New combo.
01:05:606 - Something is missing here I think. Maybe add a slider like next ones here 01:05:723 (without a repeat) or 1/4 slider at the next white tick.
[Easy]
Circle size +1 tick?
01:08:630 (2,3) - Sliders are off the beat. You should do something else in this part. There are plenty of possibilities.
01:14:676 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
01:18:863 (4) - This slider should be 1/2 though. Sounds weird as it is now. If you do this, add a circle on the next white tick.
01:36:537 (1) - ^ (or do something else)
01:38:863 (3) - New combo.
01:39:792 (4) - Same slider thing...
Mostly nazi stuff, but that's all I can point out.
Very good map, star.
Topic Starter
Thanks ::>fartownik wrote:
[Insane]
00:53:281 (1) - Delete new combo. Done
[Hard]
00:34:212 (1) - ^ Done
01:03:514 (5) - New combo. Done
[Normal]
00:50:955 (3,1) - Swap new combos. Done
00:54:676 (7,1) - ^ Done
00:58:862 (5,1) - ^ Done
01:01:653 (6) - New combo. Done
01:05:606 - Something is missing here I think. Maybe add a slider like next ones here 01:05:723 (without a repeat) or 1/4 slider at the next white tick. Done
[Easy]
Circle size +1 tick? X,IT will be weird if I change it to largest size
01:08:630 (2,3) - Sliders are off the beat. You should do something else in this part. There are plenty of possibilities. Done
01:14:676 (1,2) - Swap new combo. Done
01:18:863 (4) - This slider should be 1/2 though. Sounds weird as it is now. If you do this, add a circle on the next white tick. Done
01:36:537 (1) - ^ (or do something else) Done
01:38:863 (3) - New combo. Done
01:39:792 (4) - Same slider thing... Done
Mostly nazi stuff, but that's all I can point out.
Very good map, star.
Irc modded
>A<
Bubble 
来迟了 D: 去找蝙蝠 BAT rank了吧！
送星闪人~
Edit: System prompt me to save after resnapping notes. Check?
送星闪人~
Topic Starter
But seems Ok here D:Soul-less wrote:
来迟了 D: 去找蝙蝠BAT rank了吧！
送星闪人~
Edit: System prompt me to save after resnapping notes. Check?
meow orz
Good luck for this one ;_;
And sorry for not modding this orz
[Busy these days orz]
Good luck for this one ;_;
And sorry for not modding this orz
[Busy these days orz]
自爆吧!
說笑的.
Rank前公喜 www
說笑的.
Rank前公喜 www
Topic Starter
有排 D:KanaRin wrote:
自爆吧!
說笑的.
Rank前公喜 www
D: 忘记了...忘记了... 罪过Orz
加油！
加油！
star
lol star!!!
Pleasant and relaxing! Great work, kanpakyin.
What I really like the most about this map is how well the sliders mesh together. Their synergy flows nicely ~ Some of the jumps in [Insane] are a little weird (The circle jumps in particular), but it's nothing really of a hindrance. Jumps like this one in [Insane], for example, were a little awkward for me: 00:30:955 (1,2,3,4) - annnd maybe this one: 01:45:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - , but no worries. It might just be Old Man Kirby talking. :V
[Hard] was pretty cool too, though there were some tricky 1/4 streams in the Kiai, so I would consider it some good practice for those transitioning from [Hard] to [Insane], ya?
Anyway, enough of my little review. Congratulations. <3
What I really like the most about this map is how well the sliders mesh together. Their synergy flows nicely ~ Some of the jumps in [Insane] are a little weird (The circle jumps in particular), but it's nothing really of a hindrance. Jumps like this one in [Insane], for example, were a little awkward for me: 00:30:955 (1,2,3,4) - annnd maybe this one: 01:45:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - , but no worries. It might just be Old Man Kirby talking. :V
[Hard] was pretty cool too, though there were some tricky 1/4 streams in the Kiai, so I would consider it some good practice for those transitioning from [Hard] to [Insane], ya?
Anyway, enough of my little review. Congratulations. <3
Haha Gratz!
/me add as favourite
/me add as favourite
grats
/me runs
/me runs