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Yuuhei Satellite feat. senya - Torinokosareta Bijutsu (Arran

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Dailycare
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 11월 5일 일요일 at 오후 3:16:31

Artist: Yuuhei Satellite feat. senya
Title: Torinokosareta Bijutsu (Arranged: HiZuMi)
Source: 東方妖々夢　～ Perfect Cherry Blossom.
Tags: Cellina Reana Touhou Chen かませ虎 kamase-tora HiZuMi 遠野幻想物語 BEMANI × 東方Project Ultimate Masterpieces
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3378kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Abandoned (4.87 stars, 430 notes)
  2. Collab Lunatic (4.28 stars, 371 notes)
  3. Easy (1.37 stars, 110 notes)
  4. Hard (3.29 stars, 270 notes)
  5. Normal (2.01 stars, 185 notes)
Download: Yuuhei Satellite feat. senya - Torinokosareta Bijutsu (Arranged: HiZuMi)
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Last edited by Dailycare , edited 21 times in total.
Satellite
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where is moa
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in ur heart
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Nice map Dailylite
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M4M(?)

[(where is)Moa's Easy]
  1. 00:02:091 (3) - 이게 00:00:591 (1) - 이 슬라이더 잔상이 사라지기 전에 나오기도 하고 패턴적으로 계속 위와 아래를 향하고있어 재미를 반감시키는 것 같고, 느낌상 약간 지저분해 보이는 감이 있습니다. 저는 아예 00:00:591 (1) - 이 노트를 00:01:341 (2) - 여기 복붙해서 ctrl+hj를 사용하는 대칭패턴 자체를 수정해서 00:02:091 (3) - 여기서도 다른 모습이 나오도록 개선하면 어떨까 라는 생각이 듭니다.
  2. 00:06:591 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:12:591 (1) - 이거 00:12:216 (4) - 노트가 딱 중간에 들어가도록 위치 조정 가능하겠네요. 깔끔함을 위해서?
  4. 00:38:278 (1) - 이거 이지에서는 조금 위험하지 않을까요? 이해는 당연히 되는 위치의 박자지만 이지를 플레이하는 플레이어들을 생각하면 그냥 정박 사용하는것이 어떨까 합니다.
  5. 00:47:091 (1,2) - 우선 패턴적으로 동선이 "Easy"답다는 것은 제 생각에는 슬라이더를 사용했다면 그 슬라이더 끝을 기준으로 플로우를 잡아야 한다고 생각하기때문에... 그런 면에 있어서 수정이 필요하지 않나 생각했습니다. 00:48:216 - 이 곳에 음이 나오는 것도 명백하니 채우는걸 고려해보시는건??
[Cellina's Lunatic ft. Dailycare]
파트가 어딘지를 모르겠어서 그냥 일괄로 적겠습니다.
  1. 00:11:091 (1) - 이거랑 00:11:466 (2) - 이거 배경음 들어보니 박자 같게 써도 될 거 같네요. 음이 거의 완벽하게 같다고 할 수 있기때문에 그게 훨씬 좋아보입니다.
  2. 00:38:278 (1) - 우와... 이거는 나쁘진 않지만 리딩 방해라는 명분으로 충분히 클레임 걸릴 만 하네요. 제가 보기엔 너무 가깝습니다.
  3. 00:58:622 (4,5) - 안 좋은 플로우같아요. 00:58:716 (5) - 이거를 밖으로 빼면서 수정한다면 이렇게 하면 더 좋을 것 같아요.
  4. 01:13:622 (2) - 디스턴스 자체는 그리 멀지 않지만 느낌상 같은 디스턴스를 사용한 이 정도의 위치보다 플레이하기가 훨씬 불편해보였습니다.
  5. 01:23:091 (1,2) - 위와 비슷하지만 조금 다른 점이 위의 것은 너무 멀어보였다면 여기는 너무 가까워보입니다. 그냥 스택을 이용한 패턴 자체가 별로 어울리지 않는 구간인 거 같아요.
  6. 01:15:591 (1) - 플로우? 가 좋지 않아보입니다. 01:15:216 (5) - 여기서부터 시작되는 연타 4개를 슬라이더로 바꿔보면 대충 이렇게 돼요. 즉이아니고 말로 설명하기가 힘든데 척 봐도 의문이 생길 만 하다고 봐요. 이게 연타 후 나오는 슬라이더의 플로우로 올바른지? 그리고 제 생각에 01:15:591 - 여기는 "전환"이 필요한 스팟이라고 보는데 이처럼 한 방향으로 이어지는 패턴은 이상해보였습니다. 01:15:591 (1,2) - 한 60도를 돌려쓰거나 해도 그렇게 나쁘진 않네요.
  7. 01:15:966 (2) - 왜 이런걸 신경쓰게 되는가를 저도 잘 이해를 못하겠는데 그래도 일단 말해봅니다. 여기서는 2점 슬라이더를 사용했는데 01:16:716 (2) - 여기서는 3점슬라이더를 사용해서 야아아악간 거슬렸습니다. 물론 본인도 이럴 때가 있긴 하지만 언젠가는 신경쓰여서 수정을 하게 되더라고요.
겟난만 하셔도 된다고 하셨지만 그래도 죄송해서 필수적인걸 발견하면 적으려고 했으나 그런게 없어서 그냥 필요하실 때 부르시면 제대로 보도록 하겠습니다..
Dailycare
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@ㅂㅅ
제 파트는 다 고쳤고 특히 00:38:278 (1) - 는 그냥 스택을 시켰는데, 괜찮을진 모르겠습니다..
모딩 감사합니다!
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옐로 지브라 오렌지 디즈 ㅠㅠ
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고것이,, 무슨 말 이죠,,,?
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senya <3

Ranked go go ~
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ㅇㅎ 감사합니다 ㅠㅠㅠ
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Beomsan wrote:

M4M(?)
[Cellina's Lunatic ft. Dailycare]
파트가 어딘지를 모르겠어서 그냥 일괄로 적겠습니다.
  1. 00:11:091 (1) - 이거랑 00:11:466 (2) - 이거 배경음 들어보니 박자 같게 써도 될 거 같네요. 음이 거의 완벽하게 같다고 할 수 있기때문에 그게 훨씬 좋아보입니다. 그냥 냅두겠습니다. 그 파트에 마지막 부분이고, 그 다음에 바로 연타가 있으니 조금 색다르게 하고 싶었습니다
  2. 01:13:622 (2) - 디스턴스 자체는 그리 멀지 않지만 느낌상 같은 디스턴스를 사용한 이 정도의 위치보다 플레이하기가 훨씬 불편해보였습니다.
  3. 01:23:091 (1,2) - 위와 비슷하지만 조금 다른 점이 위의 것은 너무 멀어보였다면 여기는 너무 가까워보입니다. 그냥 스택을 이용한 패턴 자체가 별로 어울리지 않는 구간인 거 같아요.
  4. 01:15:591 (1) - 플로우? 가 좋지 않아보입니다. 01:15:216 (5) - 여기서부터 시작되는 연타 4개를 슬라이더로 바꿔보면 대충 이렇게 돼요. 즉이아니고 말로 설명하기가 힘든데 척 봐도 의문이 생길 만 하다고 봐요. 이게 연타 후 나오는 슬라이더의 플로우로 올바른지? 그리고 제 생각에 01:15:591 - 여기는 "전환"이 필요한 스팟이라고 보는데 이처럼 한 방향으로 이어지는 패턴은 이상해보였습니다. 01:15:591 (1,2) - 한 60도를 돌려쓰거나 해도 그렇게 나쁘진 않네요.
  5. 01:15:966 (2) - 왜 이런걸 신경쓰게 되는가를 저도 잘 이해를 못하겠는데 그래도 일단 말해봅니다. 여기서는 2점 슬라이더를 사용했는데 01:16:716 (2) - 여기서는 3점슬라이더를 사용해서 야아아악간 거슬렸습니다. 물론 본인도 이럴 때가 있긴 하지만 언젠가는 신경쓰여서 수정을 하게 되더라고요.
겟난만 하셔도 된다고 하셨지만 그래도 죄송해서 필수적인걸 발견하면 적으려고 했으나 그런게 없어서 그냥 필요하실 때 부르시면 제대로 보도록 하겠습니다..
@Beomsan: 01:23:091 (1,2,3) - 이부분에 관해서는 이부분만 컨쥐했습니다. 이게 더 나아보이네요.

안녕
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Title:Torinokosareta Bijutsu(Arranged: HiZuMi)
TitleUnicode:取り残された美術(Arranged：HiZuMi)
Artist:Yuuhei Satellite feat. senya
ArtistUnicode:幽閉サテライト feat. senya
Creator:Dailycare
Version:Cellina's Lunatic ft. Dailycare
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Tags:
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402,253,87966,2,0,L|398:155,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,122,88341,2,0,P|187:144|128:146,2,120,2|2|2,1:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
100,63,89091,5,0,1:0:0:0:
100,63,89466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,225,89653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,41,89841,5,4,1:3:0:0:
241,36,89934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,42,90028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,56,90122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,79,90216,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,109,90309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,140,90403,1,2,0:3:0:0:
315,170,90497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,194,90591,6,0,L|423:186,2,120,2|2|2,1:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
243,318,91341,1,0,1:0:0:0:
223,146,91528,2,0,L|219:113,3,26.6666666666667,2|0|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,283,91903,1,2,0:3:0:0:
171,264,92091,6,0,P|113:263|54:302,2,120,0|2|2,1:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
319,322,92841,2,0,L|324:263,3,40,4|4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
325,250,93216,1,10,0:3:0:0:
327,218,93309,1,4,0:3:0:0:
330,186,93403,1,10,0:3:0:0:
333,154,93497,1,4,0:3:0:0:
336,122,93591,6,0,P|288:122|237:88,1,80,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,192,93966,2,0,P|112:186|160:182,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,317,94341,2,0,L|245:181,2,120,2|2|2,1:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
203,124,95091,6,0,P|259:115|321:172,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,176,95466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
329,144,95559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,112,95653,1,2,0:3:0:0:
339,80,95747,1,2,0:3:0:0:
344,48,95841,6,0,L|403:66,3,40,4|0|2|0,1:3|0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,94,96216,2,0,L|443:106,3,40,6|0|6|0,0:3|0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,168,96591,6,0,P|381:227|390:298,1,120,6|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,316,96966,1,2,0:3:0:0:
398,316,97059,2,0,P|350:309|308:315,1,80
252,362,97341,6,0,P|232:302|264:248,1,120,2|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,232,97716,1,2,0:3:0:0:
280,232,97809,2,0,P|232:239|190:233,1,80
41,181,98091,5,6,1:2:0:0:
144,310,98278,1,0,1:0:0:0:
131,105,98466,1,8,1:2:0:0:
131,105,98559,2,0,P|138:150|144:200,1,80,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,212,98841,1,0,1:0:0:0:
59,362,99028,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,277,99216,2,0,L|267:237,1,40,8|2,1:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
18,148,99497,6,0,L|23:201,1,40,0|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
Dailycare
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Dailycare
updated all diffs and thanks for a star ashemu san~
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Cellina
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Beige
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Beige
From my Modding Queue

[General]
  1. 01:41:091 - 여기까지 스핀을 넣어줌으로써 플레이어들간의 경쟁력을 심어줄 수 있습니다 ㅋㅋ
  2. 게스트분들의 난이도에 와이드 스크린이 설정되어있습니다. 동일 시켜주세요.
  3. 처음 시작부분의 타이밍 선과 초록 선의 볼륨이 다릅니다. 같게 설정해주세요.
  4. 개인적인 추천입니다. 소프트 피니쉬 힛사같은 소리가 이 노래에서 자주 들리는데 additions에서 soft로 셋팅해서 피니쉬를 넣는 것은 어떨까요?
[Moa's Easy]
  1. 01:02:091 (1) - 어느 해상도에서도 이 부분은 오프스크린입니다. 수정 해주세요.
  2. 00:29:091 (1) - 이 것은 제안 입니다만 사람들이 많이 지적 할 것 같습니다. 위에 HP바가 닿습니다. 확인해주세요.
[Normal]
  1. 굿! 흐름이나 전체적으로 너무 좋습니다 ㅋ
[Hard]
  1. ^
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:52:153 (3) - 머리 부분에 힛사 빼먹으신거 같습니다. 넣어주시면 치는 소리가 :D
  2. 01:01:716 (2) - ^
  3. 01:13:903 (3) - 에디션보다는 셈플셋으로 설정해서 힛사 박는게 좋다고 생각합니다.
[Abandoned]
  1. 00:12:966 (2) - 요로코롬 컨털 H를 사용하여 배치하는게 어떨까요? 오른쪽으로 더 가는거 보다는 왼쪽으로 가는데 더 패턴에 좋아 보인다고 생각합니다.
  2. 00:52:153 (3) - 루나틱과 같은 의견입니다. 뭔가 힛사가 빠져있는 느낌...
  3. 01:13:903 (3) - ^
  4. 01:23:841 (1) - 뉴콤을 해서 구별시키는 것을 추천합니다.
  5. 01:37:341 (1,2,3,1) - 흐름은 아주 좋습니다. 그냥 하나의 제안입니다. 루나틱은 좀 떨어트려서 치는게 여기는 붙혀서 치는 느낌이 있어서 마지막은 루나틱에 비해 쉽다고 생각합니다. 근데 버리고 싶지 않는 패턴이네요...
모딩이 마음에 드셨다면 좋아요 꾹 ^^
Dailycare
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W h i t e wrote:

[General]
  1. 개인적인 추천입니다. 소프트 피니쉬 힛사같은 소리가 이 노래에서 자주 들리는데 additions에서 soft로 셋팅해서 피니쉬를 넣는 것은 어떨까요? 요건 어차피 S:C1으로 히트사운드를 넣었으니까 괜찮지 않을까요? 피니시가 잘 들리지 않았다면 나중에 그 부분들만 소리를 높여볼게요
sahuang
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00:37:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - in Cellina's Lunatic ft. Dailycare
DEFINITELY NO PP
0/10
Cellina
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Cellina
revived fd?
Dailycare
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그럼 fd이지 ...
Janpai
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Please send a vote on my queue to improve my modding =w=)y
DISCLAIMER:
  1. The following things will be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.
General
  1. No tags?
  2. I think it's much better if there is a color red combo color because It's the mosrt dominant color in the BG

Moa's Easy
  1. 00:11:091 (3) - Suggesting to be a 1/1 reverse instead of 2/1 slider to emphasize the build-up of the song
  2. 00:12:216 (4,2) - Stacking them wouldn't be a problem
  3. 00:32:841 (2,3) - Blanket could be improve
  4. 01:02:091 (1) - The tail is already offscreen, consider adjusting it or rotate it.
  5. It's a nice diff but you kinda being repititve in placements of objects (ex. 00:15:591 (1,2,3) - I mostly see this most of the time in the map) I hope you could avoid somehow in the future.

Normal
  1. 00:09:591 (1) - Idk but the shape could be better. I think you're capable of doing a slider art that is more attractive than this. Well it's just my perspective xD
  2. 00:12:966 (2) - Ctrl+H?
  3. 00:27:591 (3) - Move that middle node to 180|24 for better blanket
  4. 00:50:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is kinda too much to click for beginners especially with 00:51:216 (4,5) - . You could have remove 00:50:653 (2) - so they can prepare for that rhythm and that note is not really strong enough to be clickable.

Hard
  1. 00:06:591 (1) - A small jump will be good here.
  2. 00:44:091 (1,2,3) - Why did you stop the stacking like 00:41:091 (1,2,3) - . It's kinda odd when you did it in last repetition when the music doesn't differ that much. I don't think of it as a variation but an inconsistency.

Abandoned
  1. 00:03:591 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps are spaced a bit too much when the only thing that is strong enough to be spaced widely is 00:04:153 (4) - maybe you could reduce the spacings of 00:03:591 (1,2,3) - , like you did at 00:05:091 (1,2,3,4) -
  2. 00:15:591 (1,4) - Stack?
  3. 00:19:903 (5) - Could have more space because piano is not that weak
I guess that's all from me. No kd if didn't help. Goodluck!
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
General.
태그에 매퍼 이름.

Easy.
01:02:091 (1) - 오프스크린.
01:08:466 - 샘플셋 드럼 꼭 필요한가요?
01:11:091 (3,4) - 보컬이 나름 특이한 편인데 아무리 이지라고 해도 여기에 1/1 슬라 2개로 처리하는거는 너무 평범하게 느껴졌네요.

Lunatic.
00:37:997 (8,1) - 스택 때문에 연타 모양이 어긋났습니다. (1)을 매뉴얼 스택 처리하시거나, 스택 리니언시 3을 사용해주세요.
01:18:778 - 여기에 보컬음이 존재하는데 슬라이더를 다른 악기 파트처럼 3/4로 사용하시니 어색함이 크네요.
Delis
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Delis
[General]
http://www.konamistyle.jp/item/73096 I assume this is the source of the song, which means you need an space between the original title and ARRANGED thing in title.
what, which should be the source touhou or bemani? I think the real source is 東方Project since the original song is from it, bemani is just the game that includes this song.
so....... for the tags, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122416 you can steal some of them from this as the original song is the same. you can ask me later for what are necessary and what aren't. and you can put all game titles from on the SPECIAL column of the link.
bg is lovely. you could make it higher quality tho.
[Abandoned]
00:15:591 (1) - good to put a finish here since there's a cymbal sound, maybe 00:21:591 (1) - this as well as it the cybal sound has. I guess the reason you didn't put finishes on them was the symbal sounds are a bit weaker than 00:20:841 (1,2) - though the symbals are strong enough to be hitsounded so.
00:24:591 (1,3) - well whistles are kinda questionable to me, I thought you'd have put new one on 00:25:716 (4) - because it's strongest sound for sure. although I would suggest to remove them instead adding one more, as they sound out of place when the music plays only chime sounds here. might better consider somehow custom hitsound to fit better than normal whistles.
00:33:216 (4,1) - adsdf this is touching to hp bar, ouch
00:51:591 (1,2,3,1) - prefer adding some finishes
00:54:591 (1,2,3,1) - same here. btw 00:55:153 (3) - is really hard to read as 80% of the slider body has been hidden by a slider. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7274304 something like this one helps players a lot to read it easier and making the pattern itself more simple. a nc is still nice even if you wouldn't like to break your pattern here.
00:57:591 (1) - this stream jump is kinda hard plus there's no wub sound. nerfing the jump a bit would be better in the case.
01:02:091 (1,3) - same as 00:24:591 (1,3) -
01:17:841 (3) - whatever but this slider sharpe can be improved a bit, this currently looks like too fat lol.
01:36:872 - 01:37:059 - I think you could make them hitsounded for better playing wise. the hitsounding you've done here is currently weak against the song nor mapping pattern itself. I'd put normal sampleset at the first blue tick and then soft whistle at second blue tick, but since it's subjective it's up to you.
01:39:684 (1) - volume? xdd
[Cellina's Lunatic ft. jotbab]
diff name tho
I prefer having higher od EDIT:I mean HP DRAIN.
00:05:653 (4) - your current flow between 00:05:466 (3,4,5) - is kinda bad, you had any reason to make the distance between (4) and (5) closer and weird jump? it's okay to map strange jumps sometimes to make your mapping unique, but I'm not fan of this one at least. if that's me I would do another triangle-ish jump here again, which makes the flow and pattern more reasonable. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7274338
00:15:216 (2) - the current position feels out of place to me because it forces aiming a bit. I would like you to place it to be stacked on 00:13:903 (5) - or something similar with what you did for 00:14:841 (1,1) - as I don't really understand why this circle should be placed at there.
00:27:028 - I feel something strange against the soft hitsound, idk why; just mention.
01:15:403 (7) - I was expecting a drum-whistle here.
some hitsounding suggestions in ABANDONED are nice to apply for this difficulty as well, I mean for the parts made by monthlycare.
[Hard]
01:10:341 (3) - move the end point by one grid right, maybe I've not mentioned about blanket for years, and this is my last time.
01:25:341 (1,2,1,2,1) - the ncs are kinda messing up your consistency on newcombos. the song nor mapping didn't make any particular reason for ncs, like no speed changes, no comples rhythms etc. maybe remove the first one:01:26:841 (1) - and third one: 01:26:841 (1) -
01:36:028 (5) - I'd like to change the curve more soft for the flow unless it's intended to be a blanket, you failed it either lol. this currently is not the best condition for both the pattern looking and flows in playing, my result on making it better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7274409
[Normal]
00:25:341 (2) - is this intentionally placed at x1.0?
00:38:278 (1,2) - I'd conbinate the clickable objects into one 1/2 slider here, in my opinion it's nicer to emphasize the strong sounds by a 1/2 slider in normal difficulty. as it still requires moving on a slider, and your aim will stop once at the slider end which you can feel an emphasis by your cursor well.
00:59:091 (1,2) - prefer finishes not drum.
01:11:091 (5) - it looks a hard rhythm around here even though this is a special rhythm in the difficulty, maybe you can consider removing 01:10:903 (4) - this one as it's not REAL important object. so players will get some of free times to read the rhythm slightly.
01:22:903 (4,5) - saem^
[Easy]
00:24:966 (2) - maybe oppose the slider curve for better flow. or just making it straight is also good for the sound not normal.
00:29:091 (1) - avoid overlapping any objects to hp bar, or score bar in easier difficulties(I still like people to avoid it in every difficulties though.) and I'd say the flow currently isn't also best imo, I'd make it a blanket for 00:28:716 (4) - while making the flow between 00:28:716 (4) - and 00:29:091 (1) - better, maybe move the (1) up a bit while following the distance and then everything will be okay here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7274463 the (1) is at x60 y76 in the screenshot.
00:31:716 (4) - put it on the slider end of 00:32:841 (2) - for the flow. the current flow is a bit forced because of the 00:32:091 (1) - slider curve here, https://puu.sh/tV4ux/7ff8cec4e4.png this is how you made the flow, which looks already odd. make sure all flows usually should be smooth in all the way in easier difficulties. 00:33:591 (3,4,1) - this is good example by one you made.
00:51:591 (3) - the reverse point should be missing normal hitsound.
00:59:091 (1,2) - maybe sampleset normal on each sliderheads, or finishes.
01:00:591 (3) - this is off-screen besides sonnyc pointed out one.
01:26:091 (3) - add a whistle on sliderbody as following your hitsounding.
01:35:091 (3) - change the slider curve to make a circular flow from 01:34:716 (2) -
there's still flow errors, someone would point it out though. ask me in game if you want me to mention everything.

gomi
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Bluekrait
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Joined March 2014
Bluekrait
Dailycare's mod request
I don't speak korean so I tried adding pictures to assist.


[Moa's Easy]
  1. 00:12:216 (4,2) - Stack?
  2. 00:18:591 (1) - Adjust so arrow points to 00:19:716 (2) http://puu.sh/tUZ0J/df8024559d.png
  3. 00:24:966 (2) - Adjust so it blankets 00:26:091 (1) http://puu.sh/tUZgG/faf4cb7d06.png
  4. 00:29:091 (1) - Adjust so arrow points to 00:30:216 (2) http://puu.sh/tUZMs/0d0a170cff.png
  5. 00:38:278 (1) - For easy, consider moving back to 00:38:091 and extending slider length. http://puu.sh/tUZva/f6057eeb46.png
  6. 01:35:091 (3) - Adjust so arrow points to 01:36:216 (4) http://puu.sh/tV06V/2978f75468.png
  7. 01:39:778 (1) - Move spinner back to 01:39:684 and extend for tryhards xD http://puu.sh/tV0et/3b61bf4043.png
[Normal]
  1. 00:51:216 (4,5,4,5) - Consider replacing these with 1/2 sliders. http://puu.sh/tV0FU/bb814f84a5.png
  2. 01:05:841 (7) - ^
  3. 01:17:841 (7) - ^
  4. 01:07:341 (3,4,5) - Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/tV13d/495067e888.png
  5. 01:19:341 (3,4,5) - ^
  6. 01:38:466 (4,5) - Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/tV1vQ/071c8cbb92.png
  7. 01:39:778 (1) - see Moa's Easy
[Hard]
  1. 01:36:966 (2,2) - Make these reverse sliders
  2. Teach me to map hard please ;_;
[Cellina's Lunatic ft. Dailycare]
  1. 00:18:216 (1,2,3,4,1) - Increase spacing to ~.9 and/or maybe slight curve to highlight the piano. http://puu.sh/tV2Sr/ff5612a29a.png
  2. 00:24:216 (1,2,3,4,1) - Increase spacing to maybe ~.90-1.00
  3. 00:37:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider changing to 1/2 sliders. http://puu.sh/tV3cs/34c0cede02.png I always mistime 00:38:278 (1) out of habit because of the stream.
  4. 01:15:216 (5,6,7,8,1) - NC 5 and increase spacing to ~1.00 for higher piano notes.
  5. 01:30:216 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^ but this one is less important because it's off kiai and piano is overshadowed by another instrument.
  6. 01:21:216 (1) - NC not needed (no other significant instrument in this stream). Otherwise, I recommend decreasing 01:21:216 (1,2,3,4,1) spacing to ~.70
  7. 01:27:216 (1,2,3,4,1) - MAYBE increase spacing to ~1.00 for guitar.
[Abandoned]
  1. 00:18:215 (5,6,7,8,1) - see Cellina's Lunatic ft. Dailycare
  2. 00:55:153 (3) - Maybe http://puu.sh/tV4if/188b9dfd73.png
  3. 01:14:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - <3
  4. 01:15:591 (1) - Maybe http://puu.sh/tV5iw/c642a1d41e.png
Dailycare
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Dailycare
Fixed all except for the suggestion Bluekrait mentioned on the hard diff. Tags will be added after updating gds
Cellina
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Cellina
fixed all except ds increase thingy
https://puu.sh/uXCrR/48a7f557e9.zip
Dailycare
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Dailycare
Removed Moa's Easy. The mapper seems lazy and has no motivation.
Down
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Down
ㄹㅇ..
Cellina
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Cellina

Dailycare wrote:

Removed Moa's Easy. The mapper seems lazy and has no motivation.
I totally agre...... nvm lul
YooA
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YooA
EZ
irc modding :)

good f.....luck!!
Dailycare
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Dailycare
thanks for irc check xd
Delis
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Delis
u need a log to prove the irc xd

[abandoned]
00:04:341 (5,6) - the 1/2 slider can turn into a circle and the 1/6 can start at 00:04:528 - for better playability. you usually used to take the 1/6 sliders without connected slider before such as 00:13:528 (4) - hence this might work better in consistency as well.
01:05:841 (3,4,5) - the sounds are quite unclear to hear properly but I'm sure this is 1/6 due to how the another part sounds 00:03:028 - spamming 1/6 sliders too much is not really comfy so can just remove the note on blue tick 01:17:841 (3,4,5) - same goes here
01:39:684 (1) - can silence tbh apply all diffs
[hard]
00:58:997 (7) - hitsound fits here especially it's a triplet in this diff
01:31:528 (4) - sadly it must be 1/6 or just cover the sound by a 1/2 slider
[normal]
01:36:403 (7) - without this can make the stable 1/1s 01:36:591 (1,2) - stand out more
Dailycare
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Dailycare
all fixed and changed some patterns to a jump

Revia and I lost the log, so Im just gonna prove what i'd fixed. Sorry for the prank.
01:03:591 (1) - 01:13:341 (2) - Fixed unsnapped silders
01:17:841 (4) - Made this straight
01:38:841 (3) - Adjust the blanket
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Cellina's Lunatic feat. Dailycare
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hype
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Lol
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My map for mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/680195
[General]
Any metadata reference?

[Normal]
00:32:091 (1) - Uhh, I think this is a bit offscreen and hard to hit tbh 01:16:341 (3) - same
01:10:341 (3,4) - This placement is a bit questionable.

[Hard]
00:35:091 (1,2,3) - I think as to your previous pattern, this need to be "from outside to inside?"
01:04:341 (3,4) - Should be 3/4+1/2 too
01:05:841 (3,4) - According to vocal these might need to be two 1/2 sliders.
Same for the second Kiai section.
01:38:091 (1,2) - Strongly recommend to put them further. They look like 1/4 gap tbh
01:38:841 (1,2) - same

[Collab Lunatic]
00:37:903 (7,1) - Please make them further in between! It looks pretty like a 1/4 jump for now.
00:58:622 (4) - Unsnapped. No 1/4 here.

[Abandoned]
00:14:841 (1,2,1) - This antiflow plays pretty uncomfortable as 00:20:841 (1,2,1) - flows pretty nice

call me back
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http://www.konamistyle.jp/item/73096

here metadata
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seems you finished the mod, so I just fixed all other than 01:04:341 (3,4) - in the Hard. I think it will be fine. And 3/4s would make the pattern a bit monotonous

And I adjusted 01:39:028 (2,3,4,5,1) - in the highest diff.
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since some unrankable issues were pointed out, according to the rule I need to rebubble, you can ask previous BN for qualification!
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Ooooo thanks xd
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about the off-screen thing you were just using weird resolution lol
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loving both yuuhei satellite songs, please bring in more of those. gz
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I was just sleeping lul
Thanks btw
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congrats!
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dailyccare actually ggood mapper omg KEEP IT UP
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