Hi Cirno
[General]- hmm I getting 1588 as the offset
- is this really Hatsune Miku singing, it's more like Kagamine Len voice :?
- use more interesting BG, something that display the vocaloid is a good one. The current BG with only Kanji characters in it is not very interesting
[Easy]I would say this is more like a normal because of 02:36:543 (3,4,5,1,2,3) & 02:46:481 (1,2,3,4) this pattern is rather hard for novice
Rise the HP and OD by 3 or 2 ticks, using 0 for them is rather silly :o
00:03:046 (1) - move this 1/1 beat back to 00:02:678 then add 1 more repeat
01:08:567 (1) - move this to 01:09:304 so it'll sync with the vocal
01:18:874 (2) - move the repeat upward so it wont touch the next slider
02:12:616 (1,1) - the slider is too soon after the spinner for an easy
[JauiPlay's Hard]00:26:604 (1) - this is rather sudden because it only last for 1/4 beat the blank space after this make it worse I suggest to either fill the blank or extend this repeating slider 1/4 beat more
01:09:304 (1) - remove the break after this spinner, it's to short you don't need to add break
02:05:254 (1) - the repeat on 1/4 sound too awkward mostly because of the vocal, I suggest something like this
02:06:727 (4) - ^
02:11:144 (1) - ^
02:39:672 (7) - remove the clap in the end
[Insane]00:11:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - I personally don't like this kind of overlap :(
00:50:347 (4) - don't really like the anti jump
00:53:475 (2,3) - without snaking slider this is very confusing
02:27:340 (1,2,3) - ^
01:05:623 (1,2) - hmm kinda worry with how this 2 slider is very different in the speed
01:09:304 (2) - I suggest to make this a long slider like in 01:06:359 (2)
01:27:893 (x) - add a note here, a sudden 1/4 is too unexpected
01:34:518 (1) - move this 1/2 beat back then lengthen it 1/4 beat, it's obvious that the vocal is in there
01:36:543 (2) - move this 1/2 beat back
02:13:537 (2) - why anti-jump? using normal spacing is a lot better
Easy is the best in the mapset, although it's easy I have fun playing it, unfortunately not for the insane. So many overlap in it make this not very enjoyable compare to Easy. The Insane need more refining but the other 2 diff is great so have a....
~star