M4M as promised
[General]
Your mapset cannot be going to be Approved because of the length, Your map should be >5:00 and you can rank it by 1 difficulties.
[Inner Oni]
00:03:806 (2) - delete, not necessary, here is no sound but ofc 00:03:982 (3) - here is a sound like d k / k k, both are acceptable.
00:06:806 (17) - you placed a don here (dk), but you place kk before, please keep it same and same, delete 00:06:629 (16) - if you applied the issue above.
00:09:453 (34) - ^ 00:09:629 (35) - d/k?
00:12:453 (52) - ^ and this time you didn't put a notes at 00:12:276 here? it's a little bit confusing imo.
00:15:100 (70) - same as above, keep consistance.
00:17:923 (89) - ^ 00:18:100 (90) - d/k?
00:20:923 (108) - ^ d/k?
00:23:747 (127) - ^ d/K?
00:26:217 (146) - Simply delete this and you can 00:26:306 (147) - make it to a big DON
00:29:129 (165,166,167,168) - same as 00:03:806 (2) , please be same pattern :3
00:30:365 (174,175,176,177) - Misusing this 1/6 pattern (dddk) and without a acceptable reason, try to replacing in a 1/4 pattern.
00:31:423 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - ^ same as above, 1/4 obvious better than 1/6
00:32:041 (190) - This note is weird imo, it can not emphasise any sound or music, I can't understand :<
04:33:717 (2048,2049,2050,2051,2052,2053) - Check consistance with ddd kkk (you placed before at the beginning part)
There are many issue about the consistency and pattern issue, Good Luck!
[General]
Your mapset cannot be going to be Approved because of the length, Your map should be >5:00 and you can rank it by 1 difficulties.
[Inner Oni]
00:03:806 (2) - delete, not necessary, here is no sound but ofc 00:03:982 (3) - here is a sound like d k / k k, both are acceptable.
00:06:806 (17) - you placed a don here (dk), but you place kk before, please keep it same and same, delete 00:06:629 (16) - if you applied the issue above.
00:09:453 (34) - ^ 00:09:629 (35) - d/k?
00:12:453 (52) - ^ and this time you didn't put a notes at 00:12:276 here? it's a little bit confusing imo.
00:15:100 (70) - same as above, keep consistance.
00:17:923 (89) - ^ 00:18:100 (90) - d/k?
00:20:923 (108) - ^ d/k?
00:23:747 (127) - ^ d/K?
00:26:217 (146) - Simply delete this and you can 00:26:306 (147) - make it to a big DON
00:29:129 (165,166,167,168) - same as 00:03:806 (2) , please be same pattern :3
00:30:365 (174,175,176,177) - Misusing this 1/6 pattern (dddk) and without a acceptable reason, try to replacing in a 1/4 pattern.
00:31:423 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - ^ same as above, 1/4 obvious better than 1/6
00:32:041 (190) - This note is weird imo, it can not emphasise any sound or music, I can't understand :<
04:33:717 (2048,2049,2050,2051,2052,2053) - Check consistance with ddd kkk (you placed before at the beginning part)
There are many issue about the consistency and pattern issue, Good Luck!