Accepted: Ok3v227 wrote:
From my mod queue[Shadow Oni]
General:
- No HP7. HP5 or HP5.5 is good I think.
- Resnap all notes to 1/4.
- Finishers near 1/4 aren't good.
- 03:46:341 (1669) to 03:49:342 is a good example of a smooth SV increase.
- SliderMultiplier:1.40159980373383 -> 1.4
Proposals:
00:03:460 (1) - Finisher?
00:03:460 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent with 00:06:282 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) and the others like it.
00:11:930 (51) - No Finisher.
00:48:635 (304) - No Finisher.
01:19:430 to 01:22:518 - This SV change needs to be smoother/more linear; some SV increases here are too high and they look messy.
01:22:517 (539) - No Finisher.
01:33:811 (628) - No Finisher.
02:07:694 (896) - No Finisher.
02:37:959 to 02:41:577 - Same as before the 1st kiai: This SV change needs to be smoother/more linear; some SV increases here are too high and they look messy.
02:41:576 (1128) - No Finisher.
03:26:929 (1484) to 03:46:341 (1669) - This section needs x1.0SV; hard to read the stream
03:49:341 (1697) - No Finisher.
04:23:223 (1976) - No Finisher.
04:34:429 (2064) - Delete?
04:34:694 (1) + 04:45:988 (1) + 04:57:283 (1) - Delete all spinners. 30 seconds of spinners is way too much. You should consider mapping 1/2 with some 1/4 (triples and doubles), and have low SV here. SV changes: 04:34:518 and 04:45:812 and 04:57:107
Very fun map and great song
-Kev
Rejected: X
[Shadow Oni]
General:
- No HP7. HP5 or HP5.5 is good I think. O
- Resnap all notes to 1/4. O
- Finishers near 1/4 aren't good. I will wait for a comment of a BN, because... i don't see the problem with this Finishers.
- 03:46:341 (1669) to 03:49:342 is a good example of a smooth SV increase.
- SliderMultiplier:1.40159980373383 -> 1.4 O
Proposals:
00:03:460 (1) - Finisher? X
00:03:460 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent with 00:06:282 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) and the others like it. O
00:11:930 (51) - No Finisher. X
00:48:635 (304) - No Finisher. X
01:19:430 to 01:22:518 - This SV change needs to be smoother/more linear; some SV increases here are too high and they look messy. X
01:22:517 (539) - No Finisher. X
01:33:811 (628) - No Finisher. X
02:07:694 (896) - No Finisher. X
02:37:959 to 02:41:577 - Same as before the 1st kiai: This SV change needs to be smoother/more linear; some SV increases here are too high and they look messy. X
02:41:576 (1128) - No Finisher. X
03:26:929 (1484) to 03:46:341 (1669) - This section needs x1.0SV; hard to read the stream O Thanks, Fixed.
03:49:341 (1697) - No Finisher. X
04:23:223 (1976) - No Finisher. X
04:34:429 (2064) - Delete? O
04:34:694 (1) + 04:45:988 (1) + 04:57:283 (1) - Delete all spinners. 30 seconds of spinners is way too much. You should consider mapping 1/2 with some 1/4 (triples and doubles), and have low SV here. SV changes: 04:34:518 and 04:45:812 and 04:57:107 O O I'll just leave the final spin.
General:
- No HP7. HP5 or HP5.5 is good I think. O
- Resnap all notes to 1/4. O
- Finishers near 1/4 aren't good. I will wait for a comment of a BN, because... i don't see the problem with this Finishers.
- 03:46:341 (1669) to 03:49:342 is a good example of a smooth SV increase.
- SliderMultiplier:1.40159980373383 -> 1.4 O
Proposals:
00:03:460 (1) - Finisher? X
00:03:460 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent with 00:06:282 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) and the others like it. O
00:11:930 (51) - No Finisher. X
00:48:635 (304) - No Finisher. X
01:19:430 to 01:22:518 - This SV change needs to be smoother/more linear; some SV increases here are too high and they look messy. X
01:22:517 (539) - No Finisher. X
01:33:811 (628) - No Finisher. X
02:07:694 (896) - No Finisher. X
02:37:959 to 02:41:577 - Same as before the 1st kiai: This SV change needs to be smoother/more linear; some SV increases here are too high and they look messy. X
02:41:576 (1128) - No Finisher. X
03:26:929 (1484) to 03:46:341 (1669) - This section needs x1.0SV; hard to read the stream O Thanks, Fixed.
03:49:341 (1697) - No Finisher. X
04:23:223 (1976) - No Finisher. X
04:34:429 (2064) - Delete? O
04:34:694 (1) + 04:45:988 (1) + 04:57:283 (1) - Delete all spinners. 30 seconds of spinners is way too much. You should consider mapping 1/2 with some 1/4 (triples and doubles), and have low SV here. SV changes: 04:34:518 and 04:45:812 and 04:57:107 O O I'll just leave the final spin.
Very fun map and great song Thaaanks!
-Kev