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Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-04T05:48:27+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年4月19日 at 17:38:12

Artist: Touyama Nao
Title: Happy Crescent
Source: Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai
Tags: kanon kema kiminisama happy present deepsea Okamiroy
BPM: 162
Filesize: 8703kb
Play Time: 03:14
Difficulties Available:

deepsea's Easy (2.06 stars, 211 notes)
Insane (4.99 stars, 617 notes)
Normal (3.38 stars, 249 notes)
Okamiroy's Hard (4.46 stars, 369 notes)

Download: Touyama Nao - Happy Crescent
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 4th map.... I hope everyone like it
Easy : Thanks for deepsea!
Normal : Maybe it is not a good normal diff beatmap
Hard : OK~thanks Okamiroy...
Insane : I think it would pleased you..

Last edited by Sumisola 2012-07-12T17:24:10+00:00, edited 66 times in total.

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2011-03-04T11:01:56+00:00

乃的坑图终于传了，本来只想star的>.>

mod in IRC
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然后是。
star~☆

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Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-05T15:59:16+00:00

想不到第一个给星星的就立即给modding 了，我正头疼modding了！！

谢谢啊！虚幻.....不给kudosu不行啊！！这么给力

jixun66

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jixun66 2011-03-10T16:46:02+00:00

我只是来给星的。

subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2011-03-15T03:34:31+00:00

总算有这歌了~

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Megaparadox 2011-03-15T04:06:04+00:00

star

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Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-15T05:08:24+00:00

谢谢各位

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-03-15T15:22:26+00:00

Good luck

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-15T15:23:48+00:00

[Shalon] wrote:
Good luck

thanks

Kite

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Kite 2011-03-15T16:20:14+00:00

As far as I know the song title should be Happy Crescent.
Anyways, good luck!

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-16T05:23:53+00:00

Kite wrote:
As far as I know the song title should be Happy Crescent.
Anyways, good luck!

Thanks...checked

deepsea

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deepsea 2011-03-16T08:35:29+00:00

.___./

Download: Touyama Nao - Happi Kuresento (Sumisola) [deepsEZ].osu

ForGotTEn

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ForGotTEn 2011-03-16T15:14:09+00:00

空哥說的妹子.請轉帳付費~

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Lran_old 2011-03-16T15:14:47+00:00

空哥求勾引空哥求勾搭
star~

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-16T15:20:17+00:00

无视上面两层楼

CoLarbRo

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CoLarbRo 2011-03-16T15:24:44+00:00

力顶空哥——map菊花帝刚芭蕾……

Okamiroy

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Okamiroy 2011-03-16T15:24:44+00:00

star~~

sunny day

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sunny day 2011-03-16T16:39:27+00:00

~~~

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Sandpig

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Sandpig 2011-03-16T22:43:37+00:00

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

Insane

用soft的地方适当加点whistle吧，有的地方感觉太弱

00:04:974 (5) - new combo
00:05:529 (1) - new combo
02:13:122 (4,1) - 这个地方叠起来就感觉不好了，不如换个地方起下一段
02:19:604 (3) - new combo
02:26:270 (1) - 这个还是像前边那样移出去好点
03:03:678 (6) - new combo
03:09:974 (10) - ^
03:15:344 (3) - ^
03:15:900 (5) - ^

Hard

这diff节奏太乱了……

00:04:974 (9) - new combo?
00:12:381 (8) - ^
00:40:529 (8) - ^
01:00:900 (11) - ^
01:02:381 (15) - ^
01:02:567 (17) - 我觉得这货好扭曲
01:43:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 太2
03:09:974 (7) - new combo
03:23:307 (7) - new combo
03:26:455 (13) - new combo
03:29:418 (19) - new combo

Normal

这normal节奏还是hard的密度。短slider一会往返往一次一会往返两次非常烦躁。我认为normal不是把hard的circle全换成slider就完事，应该有一套更简洁的节奏。

00:09:418 (3,4,5) - 这几个是跟音乐了但是打起来感觉不够连贯
00:40:530 (3) - new combo
00:55:345 (3) - new combo
01:00:900 (3) - new combo
01:39:788 (1,2) - 这地方两个slider太偷懒，而且感觉节奏突然没了
01:45:344 (3,4,5,6) - 我觉得这在normal里就算鬼畜了……
02:07:936 (1) - 我不明白为什么会有这种不明意义的长slider（压星？）
02:32:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里可以做点变化……
02:37:567 (4) - new combo
02:47:937 (4) - ^
02:50:900 (6) - ^

Easy

应该够简单了……

normal再好好改改……

LuPiiTa

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LuPiiTa 2011-03-17T05:09:06+00:00

star~

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-18T04:18:06+00:00

Sandpig wrote:
hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

Insane

用soft的地方适当加点whistle吧，有的地方感觉太弱加是加了，可是还是太小声？

00:04:974 (5) - new combo checked
00:05:529 (1) - new combo checked
02:13:122 (4,1) - 这个地方叠起来就感觉不好了，不如换个地方起下一段本来是打算不改，还是改改试试吧
02:19:604 (3) - new combo checked
02:26:270 (1) - 这个还是像前边那样移出去好点 checked
03:03:678 (6) - new combo checked
03:09:974 (10) - ^ checked
03:15:344 (3) - ^ checked
03:15:900 (5) - ^ checked

Hard 节奏到没觉得怎么乱，可能是我听着曲子听太多了

这diff节奏太乱了……
ALL checked
00:04:974 (9) - new combo?
00:12:381 (8) - ^
00:40:529 (8) - ^
01:00:900 (11) - ^
01:02:381 (15) - ^
01:02:567 (17) - 我觉得这货好扭曲
01:43:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 太2
03:09:974 (7) - new combo
03:23:307 (7) - new combo
03:26:455 (13) - new combo
03:29:418 (19) - new combo

Normal

这normal节奏还是hard的密度。短slider一会往返往一次一会往返两次非常烦躁。我认为normal不是把hard的circle全换成slider就完事，应该有一套更简洁的节奏。我是改了，但是不知道改得怎样

00:09:418 (3,4,5) - 这几个是跟音乐了但是打起来感觉不够连贯 checked
00:40:530 (3) - new combo checked
00:55:345 (3) - new combo checked
01:00:900 (3) - new combo checked
01:39:788 (1,2) - 这地方两个slider太偷懒，而且感觉节奏突然没了 checked
01:45:344 (3,4,5,6) - 我觉得这在normal里就算鬼畜了…… checked
02:07:936 (1) - 我不明白为什么会有这种不明意义的长slider（压星？） checked
02:32:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里可以做点变化…… 不知道这算不算变化
02:37:567 (4) - new combo checked
02:47:937 (4) - ^ checked
02:50:900 (6) - ^ checked

Easy

应该够简单了…… 老手做图不解释

normal再好好改改……

谢了你的modding....希望能有recheck（不过一般都看不到吧...

kds~

wiza

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wiza 2011-03-18T08:01:35+00:00

star~

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-18T14:58:19+00:00

wiza wrote:
star~

Thanks~

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A-ojisan 2011-03-20T18:22:38+00:00

good

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paragon_old 2011-03-20T18:24:49+00:00

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Lan wings 2011-03-20T18:24:59+00:00

我推

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star~

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TAT 2011-03-20T18:25:29+00:00

砸星星。。。

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Rainny_old 2011-03-20T18:26:33+00:00

star~~

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-20T18:29:44+00:00

Thanks the people above~

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star~

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Ever 14 2011-03-20T18:33:47+00:00

射星星什么的..最讨厌了

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Nice Sora
Star☆彡

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.

Sandpig

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Sandpig 2011-03-22T01:09:28+00:00

normal感觉好点了……

但是还是觉得note有点多……节奏应该可以再简化……不过这样也可以了

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-22T10:30:04+00:00

[quote="Sandpig"]normal感觉好点了……

但是还是觉得note有点多……节奏应该可以再简化……不过这样也可以了[/quote

那好，谢谢recheck....射个kds

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2011-03-22T11:41:02+00:00

Recheck~(误)

[deepsea's Easy]
02:02:381 (x) - 和后面对称这里放个note
02:37:381 (4) - 虽然根据前面的放红线没问题。。可是还是建议往后移到白线

上
迪西好图啊:D

[Normal]
00:33:123 (1) - 建议只有1个arrow.(2个箭头有点奇怪啊>.>)然后

SPOILER

00:34:974 (2) - add a note.
00:35:159 (3) - ^
00:35:344 (4) - ^

01:03:863 (3) - 结尾的clap呢？
01:06:826 (4) - ^，感觉不要断掉一个clap比较好
01:09:975 (1) - 开头的clap有点突兀，删掉，要么不加要么来个finish
02:07:937 (5) - 明显的要newcombo
02:16:825 (6) - ^
02:24:048 (1) - 提前到02:23:678,结尾的地方不变
02:38:863 (4) - delete
02:38:492 (4) - add a slider, one arrow at 02:38:678.别忘了结尾的

finish
03:11:085 (6) - newcombo
03:14:418 (1) - 提前到03:14:048 ,结尾不变
03:25:159 (4) - 削去2个arrow, add a note at 03:26:270
其实没什么问题的。。。

[Okamiroy's Hard]
00:12:196 (8) - add a note.
00:35:715 (1) - end at 00:37:381
01:09:974 (x) - 这个小点最好来个音效。(加不来就别加了，乃应该会的)
02:39:233 (x) - 点下这个slider,这个点是不是有点问题。。明显歪了？
02:42:196 (x) - ^

[Insane]
00:13:863 (9) - newcombo
00:15:344 (1) - delete newcombo
01:24:604 (5) - spacing有小问题？(因为看上去就不准>.>)
01:58:307 (9) - newcombo
01:59:418 (2) - delete newcombo
02:04:789 (1) - delete
02:04:974 (2) - newcombo
02:26:270 (10) - ^
03:15:900 (1,2,3,4) - 坑爹的spacing spacing大就算了还做成直线。。如果

第1次我在前面MISS 第2次必须在这里miss
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神图~
之前star过了~☆

xinhe

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xinhe 2011-03-25T07:14:47+00:00

[deepsea's Easy]
没什么太有用的建议

[normal]
00:01:826 (2) - 这里感觉用红线起红线终的SL不是太好，听着不舒服
00:06:270 (1,2) - ^
01:50:158 (4,5) - 不把SPACING清掉吗
02:19:233 (9,10) - ^
00:28:678 (3) - NEW COMBO
01:07:197 (5) - ^
01:33:863 (4) - ^

[Okamiroy's Hard]
00:01:641 - 感觉缺点东西，可以试试改成oo- -oo
00:07:752 (6) - NEW COMBO
00:14:233 (2) - SPACING调一调

[insane]
00:22:752 (6,7,8,9,10) - 感觉有点违和
01:07:567 (3,5,7) -建议这三个NEW COMBO一下，更好读图
01:52:752 (1,2,3) - SPACING
02:24:789 (6) - ^
03:09:048 (7) - NEW COMBO

NICE MAP

ken710

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ken710 2011-03-25T23:14:19+00:00

好圖

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Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-27T11:03:36+00:00

有S I R I R U的星星洒家这辈子值了（出息在哪....

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射星

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-28T05:39:15+00:00

谢谢

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2011-03-28T14:37:15+00:00

spacing mod only

tag somewhat like "The world only God knows" ?

grid = lv4

[Insane]
00:55:900 (4,5,6) - (4) down 1 grid, (5) down 2, (6) left 2
01:05:900 (6) - down 1 grid
01:23:492 (1) - left 1 grid
01:24:604 (5) - ^
02:14:233 (3) - up 1 grid
02:22:937 (6,7) - right 1 grid
02:37:657 (4,5,6) - stack on previous (1)
03:00:900 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing

[Hard]
00:13:863 (1) - left 1 grid+down 2 grids
00:33:863 (3) - left 1 grid
02:09:233 (5) - (weird slider shape...
02:14:233 (2) - up 1 grid

[Normal]
00:13:863 (1) - left 1 grid

Starrodkirby86

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Starrodkirby86 2011-04-05T07:23:30+00:00

[Normal]:
03:25:159 (4) - It felt like a long repeat to me, really... xD

[Okamiroy's Hard]:
00:12:196 (8,9) - Not really an issue, since I was able to read it fine --- but I was just curious to why this was all higher than the rest of the notes. Were you planning a jump? o:
00:39:789 (6) - Remove note? It'll follow the vocals this way -- But it's OK if you keep it since it's straightforward. Only a suggestion here.

[Insane]:
00:37:381 (1) - (Storyboard) Maybe having the heart fade in would make it look nicer?

One thing I noticed with the storyboard are the flashes. I'm not sure, but are those seizure-y enough? I'm leaning on the no side since they're pretty much only 50% in opacity, but I'm being cautious...What do you think?

I think all difficulties should have a little more audio lead-in, just one second more, so it'll be 2 seconds...

Personally, these are just only just the smallest things that don't really matter so-so much, so as long as I get some input, whether it'd be an OK or a nicely reasoned no, then I'm OK with it.

Anyway, laaaa~ Such an adorable song!!

Call me back ASAP.

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2011-04-05T07:36:30+00:00

马上就能泡了~

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