Pereira006 wrote:

hey sorry later.

[Easy]

Hitsound:

1. 00:36:459 (2) - missing add whistle in begin, you have done other diff's and also other pattern on this diff, for consistency Yeah, fixed

Gameplay:

1. 01:00:319 (1) - sharpe of slider look unsymmetry, maybe make more symmetry for look nice design and in game like this https://puu.sh/sKyrL/dbf34be74f.jpg or something. Followed your suggestion more or less

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Gameplay:

1. 00:49:091 (1,2) - is not same sharpe as mirror because almost every pattern you always do it mirror example 00:27:336 (2,3), etc.... but on 00:49:091 (1,2), their sharpe are different I did copy and paste here
2. 01:08:038 (6,1) - My view that blanket is off as little Tried to fix it

[Insane]

Gameplay:

1. 00:09:091 (3) - (suggestion) you sure wanna keep slider 1/1 ? there actually high melody in red tic, if change slider to notes that make sense for follow song imo The 1/1 slider follows the song better imo
2. 00:15:757 (2,3,4,5,1) - there look unsysmentric of triangules for me maybe make more nice symentric like this https://puu.sh/sKA0x/ab4fc6b963.jpg I decided to move (5) a bit to the left instead
3. 00:59:617 (4,6) - you not going make placement of mirror as 00:59:442 (3,5)? i mean this https://puu.sh/sKA5z/02c453a837.jpg The current placement ensures better flow imo
4. 01:03:652 (2,3,4) - to make more symentric of triangules is possible IMO Current placement is fine as well
5. 01:06:986 (4) - is kindy need NC if vocal + rhythm change like other pattern Yeah, fixed
6. 01:15:582 (5) - ^ same Ok
7. 01:33:214 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - this star formation look very unsysmentric Not supposed to be a star pattern

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sorry later and good luck.

Regraz wrote:

[Easy]
00:37:863 (1) - This shape is not approved. Also the flow from 1 to 2 is poor. An example of solution: https://puu.sh/tdife/c90c8a7e9e.png Followed your suggestion
01:00:319 (1) - ^ https://puu.sh/tdijv/d60704b11d.png Tried my best to improve this
01:03:126 (1,2) - Not recommend such placement. Visual spacing will confuse new players. Changed the placement
01:05:933 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:15:757 (3) - Just use normal shapes. I don't understand what's wrong with this shape ... Changed the shape
01:29:793 (3) - JUST USE NORMAL SHAPES This one I changed a bit
01:34:003 (1,2) - No blanket. No aesthestics. This is not supposed to be a blanket. If it's not supposed to be one then it has to be aesthetically correct in a different way
01:43:828 (3) - This shape is of no use. The slider has no connection like blanket or parallel with other objects next to it. I just wanted to create an interesting shape to avoid using boring sliders the whole time.

I guess there are space for improvements in the pattern aesthetics in Easy diff. And it needs to be done before we could push it forward. You may find more modders and could poke me again in the future.

1. 00:08:389 (1) - The red anchor can be put on 00:09:091 - for emphasizing the instrument as well like how you did on 00:11:196 (4) -
   
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2. 00:13:301 (2) - maybe straight slider here works better for avoid looking miss-blanket with 00:14:705 (3) - ?
3. 00:25:933 - idk it's the only one you used normal sample on this part
4. 00:28:038 (3) - the shape can be improved i guess
5. 01:00:319 (1) - I think it will be finish on 01:01:547 -
6. 01:29:793 (3) - uhm yes I agree with Regraz, maybe blanketing with 01:28:389 (1) - will be great here
   
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7. 01:34:003 (1,2) - another suggestion, doing parallel thingy would be great as for visual flow.
   
   not rly perfect but ye like this

   
8. 01:39:617 (1,3) - idk maybe make them parallel?
9. 01:55:056 (3) - left side seems off xd

Corinn wrote:

woof
random check on easy xd

Easy

1. 00:08:389 (1) - The red anchor can be put on 00:09:091 - for emphasizing the instrument as well like how you did on 00:11:196 (4) - Done
   
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2. 00:13:301 (2) - maybe straight slider here works better for avoid looking miss-blanket with 00:14:705 (3) - ? Ok
3. 00:25:933 - idk it's the only one you used normal sample on this part It's fine
4. 00:28:038 (3) - the shape can be improved i guess Yeh, tried my best to improve it
5. 01:00:319 (1) - I think it will be finish on 01:01:547 - Already fixed that
6. 01:29:793 (3) - uhm yes I agree with Regraz, maybe blanketing with 01:28:389 (1) - will be great here Followed your suggestion
   
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7. 01:34:003 (1,2) - another suggestion, doing parallel thingy would be great as for visual flow. Followed your suggestion
   
   not rly perfect but ye like this

   
8. 01:39:617 (1,3) - idk maybe make them parallel? I think the current pattern looks fine
9. 01:55:056 (3) - left side seems off xd Yeh, tried to improve it.

goodluck

edit: lo just ignore what u fixed from Regraz's mod since I had some same points with him so yeah

Kisses wrote:

Easy

1. 00:16:635 (3,4) - personally i would prefer this to be mapped as 2 circles, not only are they very strong compared to sliders like this 00:14:705 (3) etc. but it doesn't do it just to have 00:16:986 as a passive beat (slider end), at least imo Ok, changed the (3) into two circles.
2. 00:36:459 (2) - normal sampleset on the reverse to match 00:35:056 (1) ? Yeh, you're right. I missed that one.
3. 01:26:635 (2) - I really don't like how 01:26:810 and 01:27:161 are skipped. I know it's quite tricky for an easy but consider try incorperating them in. A rhythm similar to this should be fine http://puu.sh/tfBK2/3495cdc797.jpg Followed your suggestion

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GL nya! >o</

edit: I just saw that Regraz was looking for changes in structure and design. Because Aesthetics is kinda subjective and it is an easy I just accepeted everything you, I'll try to look again later He mentioned aesthetics, so I'm not sure. I'll ask him if the diff looks much better now.

Regraz wrote:

No kds.
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01:00:319 (1) - AHHHHH the shape ;w; Use smooth ones please. It looks really weird and offplace.
01:06:986 (3,4,5,6) - Build a square with 3 4 5 and 6's head.
01:46:284 (3) - Not a good rhythm here. The downbeat is on 3's end. It should be on single circles or sldier heads.

Regraz wrote:

Good Luck!

1. 00:13:828 - add finish , sound nice imo
2. 00:32:600 - 00:32:950 - drum whistle instead ? just like 00:29:442 (1) -

1. 00:06:635 (4) - introduce 1/2 slider right away with a notes next to them like this is a bit weird and awkward for player since they can get surprised by it imo the song doesn't sound like it would need 1/2 there tho , mapping only white tick here would be enough now
2. 00:13:828 - add finish ? sound nice imo
3. 00:26:284 (6) - switching from vocal to instrument suddenly like this is not good for normal imo it can make player confused and surprised imo , delete the slider and make them a small break for player would be bette , also using only 1 circle white tick instead would also a better option too
4. 00:30:845 (4,5) - mm make them straight so it make pattern look more better in term of aesthetic
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5. 01:54:880 - finish ? sound nice there
6. 01:54:880 (3) - i think a 1/1 slider would emphasis the hold sound of the instrument here better and make rhythm flow better too
   

1. 00:41:371 (3,4,5) - i think spaced 1/4 circles after slider is a bit too hard for hard , may be should just use stack instead imo that would make it a bit more reasonable for hard
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2. 01:54:880 - add finish so it will make it consistent with 00:13:828 -

1. 00:21:371 (2) - you can move this to around x344 y184 to improve aesthetic a bit here
2. 00:13:828 - add finish ? sound nice imo
3. 01:03:652 (2,3,4) - spacing looks very similar from 1/1 to 1/2 , i think move 3 to around x260 y156 to stack with 1 and 2 would make the jumps here a bit better readability
4. 01:24:003 (5,6,1) - can move to around x272 y184 to improve aesthetic equality here 01:23:477 (3,4,5) - a bit
5. 01:27:161 (1,1) - I think spacing here is a bit too much , the beat there doesn't really need that high emphasis jumps tbh , i think lower spacing there would be better , try move 01:27:512 (1) - to around x112 y52 ?
6. 01:28:389 (1) - would be better to move this to around x512 y68 to make spacing looks more reasonable with the previous stream , the current one have sudden low spacing which doesn't make sense imo lol
7. 01:30:319 (3,4,5) - 1/4 sliders here play pretty weird the beat here don't go like fast or sudden just the normal typical beat here so using so many 1/4 sliders like that just make thing play weird imo , i think this rhythm would express the beat here better
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8. 01:44:529 (4,5,6) - same but this one not severe like above , still i think this rhythm might be a better idea
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   [img]puu.sh/trOFe/82937346b9.jpg[/img]
9. 01:53:126 (4,5,6) - same
10. 01:54:880 - finish ? sound nice there
11. 01:56:020 (5) - sound overmapped here , i think rhythm will flow better if you delete this since i think the noticeable stream should actually start at 01:56:108 -

CelsiusLK wrote:

[easy]

1. 00:13:828 - add finish , sound nice imo Yep
2. 00:32:600 - 00:32:950 - drum whistle instead ? just like 00:29:442 (1) - Fixed

[normal]

1. 00:06:635 (4) - introduce 1/2 slider right away with a notes next to them like this is a bit weird and awkward for player since they can get surprised by it imo the song doesn't sound like it would need 1/2 there tho , mapping only white tick here would be enough now Fixed, only mapped out the white tick
2. 00:13:828 - add finish ? sound nice imo Yep
3. 00:26:284 (6) - switching from vocal to instrument suddenly like this is not good for normal imo it can make player confused and surprised imo , delete the slider and make them a small break for player would be bette , also using only 1 circle white tick instead would also a better option too Yeh, only placed a note on the white tick
4. 00:30:845 (4,5) - mm make them straight so it make pattern look more better in term of aesthetic Fixed
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5. 01:54:880 - finish ? sound nice there Yep
6. 01:54:880 (3) - i think a 1/1 slider would emphasis the hold sound of the instrument here better and make rhythm flow better too Followed your suggestion
   

[insane]

1. 00:21:371 (2) - you can move this to around x344 y184 to improve aesthetic a bit here Done
2. 00:13:828 - add finish ? sound nice imo Done, added the finish in other diffs as well
3. 01:03:652 (2,3,4) - spacing looks very similar from 1/1 to 1/2 , i think move 3 to around x260 y156 to stack with 1 and 2 would make the jumps here a bit better readability Ok, fixed
4. 01:24:003 (5,6,1) - can move to around x272 y184 to improve aesthetic equality here 01:23:477 (3,4,5) - a bit Done
5. 01:27:161 (1,1) - I think spacing here is a bit too much , the beat there doesn't really need that high emphasis jumps tbh , i think lower spacing there would be better , try move 01:27:512 (1) - to around x112 y52 ? Yeh, I pushed the boundaries there a bit. Fixed
6. 01:28:389 (1) - would be better to move this to around x512 y68 to make spacing looks more reasonable with the previous stream , the current one have sudden low spacing which doesn't make sense imo lol Followed your suggestion
7. 01:30:319 (3,4,5) - 1/4 sliders here play pretty weird the beat here don't go like fast or sudden just the normal typical beat here so using so many 1/4 sliders like that just make thing play weird imo , i think this rhythm would express the beat here better [/color]
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8. 01:44:529 (4,5,6) - same but this one not severe like above , still i think this rhythm might be a better idea Well, I also want something more challenging in this diff and when listening closely you can hear a beat here: 01:44:617 - so I want to keep it
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   [img]puu.sh/trOFe/82937346b9.jpg[/img]
9. 01:53:126 (4,5,6) - same ^
10. 01:54:880 - finish ? sound nice there Done, added on all diffs
11. 01:56:020 (5) - sound overmapped here , i think rhythm will flow better if you delete this since i think the noticeable stream should actually start at 01:56:108 - Yep and made some distance fixes as well

CelsiusLK wrote:

oops looks like i forgot to say something about 01:04:003 (3) - insane
I think you should nc it too to make difference between 01:03:126 (1,2) - and 01:03:652 (2,3) - beat gap to make it easier to read lol

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